Absolutely awesome- Love your adventures and seeing you embracing the Aussie carefree lifestyle. Sun, sand, surf, beer, cricket and Kangaroos plus camping adventures the real Aussie experience.
A couple of recommendations: 1. You should analyze your analytics and see where people are exiting the video and see if there are common eras where you lose people's attention and maybe cut or shorten those sections. 2. This travel/vlog space is EXTREMELY congested on YT, so you really gotta stand out. Consider adding more scenic shots and maybe even some food/cooking sections. 3. You cannot use one song for a 13 minute video. It's ok to have somewhat of a theme song for your channel, but one song on loop can be annoying. 4. The first minute of your video has to be really strong. 5. Watch a lot of similar content to see what you can steal from other content creators until you find your style. YT is by far the hardest social media platform, good luck!