Wow! Great job making the project of coming up with ideas into something worth telling a story about. You made each one of the characters here pop in their own way and made them feel like people I would have loved to meet. They never fought but the conflict was still there with how much they all wanted this to be good. If this is based on real life (Based on the comments and description, it seems so) You really did a good job bring it all together into a story we could enjoy. Bravo, I am happier because this exists.
This was suggested to me at a weird time I have a group assignment right now and and we just had a big quarrel about a background and ended up getting the teacher to help us.
How didn’t know the hedgehog one was just the able sisters until she said it- aNd I liTerraLly hAaAve 600 hOuRs ooN aAnIimAal cRoOsIing oOon mmY sWwItch Lol