the video and voice themselves are fine, but i noticed 2 things you could change 1: video quality - if you want to keep the quality high(1080p is perfect), you can download the original to edit it and voice it over with a program that supports 1080p 2: directional voice - i'm not actually 100% sure how to do this as i've never worked with sound, but i believe some higher quality editing programs allow you to make directional sounds, which makes the voices and other sounds more immersive if done right
It could support 1080p, but I didn’t have enough storage space to cover it, and I don’t really have the greatest equipment for it. Thanks for the tips though, I’ll hopefully reconsider it