An epilogue for this story is now available. Check it here: ru-vid.com/video/%D0%B2%D0%B8%D0%B4%D0%B5%D0%BE-Wh-eCv8jAXY.html Fun Fact: This was actually the very first Persona fanfic I wrote almost exactly a full year ago. I wrote it in a single afternoon, and it was never meant to be seen outside of my circle of friends. The second half was completely different though. As time went on, I started to dislike the original ending, but since I thought it was going to rot in Google Docs anyway, I didn’t think much of it. Fast forward to now where I’ve found myself making these videos, I decided to revise the story and make an ending I was more satisfied with. It’s almost unbelievable this all came full circle! God works in mysterious ways.
a few thoughts on this one: 1 - I actually choked when laughing at some of the jokes here, this moght be the funniest one you've done yet! 2 - I loved the fact you used underrated social links for this one, to death and back. Ohya and Shinya are actually super good in my opinion, and for them to have a light shined on them for this story was really nice to see. I'm excited to see whst you might do with P3 and P4 social links, maybe? I think that could be a sobering experience, seeing more underrated social links get a spotlight! 3 - This is a lot less praise and more criticism, sadly. I feel the way Shinya was treated through the story was a little.. uncomfortable. I get it, some of this was apart of your first shot doing this, so I won't judge you for it - but the abuse Shinya goes through here veers off from comedic, and more into an upsetting, uncomfortable field, that isn't properly addressed or even corrected in the story. Everything was just out to get him, and ending the story on that scene made me feel really awful. Despite that, I think it's still looking up from here! I'll be happy to see what you got next!
Thanks for your feedback man! I actually agree with point 3. After rewatching this a few times, I realized I made Shinya the butt of all the jokes and gave him no compensation. So I think I’m gonna write a short little epilogue for him before I fully focus on the next story. Glad you enjoyed it nonetheless!
5:00 Not trying to nitpick, but what i thought was funny was that Futaba says that yet she tries to buy the PC version of the Constellation edition, which only has a digital code.
@@T-REXHarris oh ok then pretty cool video but felt futaba was a little more childish then normally i mean breaking into a house and stuff but did love ren getting caught by the cop only to be saved by our second greatest news lady