Thats right... our soldiers are super model warrior maidens descended from Aphrodite herself. More importantly though, the blood of Ares himself runs in their veins and they will $!#@ing BURY you. Not complaining but this constant AI image of the ridiculously gorgeous human girl in scifi armor is hilarious.
While I do love the “humans come to the rescue” themed stories.. Just as an inside joke, some alien bastard named Ralph, some slightly absurd human name would be a blast..😂 🤭👍
Zorgan, Zoran,Zonian / Zargon, Zaren, Zarthon? The author is confused with the species and characters? This story should have started with the second half repeat. I wanted to like the story, too much confusion with the name(s) of the whatever species and leadership. Weapons description was also varied and confused. Try again, try proofreading next time.
You ended it too quickly. What happened to the Victor’s that the humans and the Seahawks were able to enjoy. What about an ending that didn’t just leave death and destruction but hope and optimism to the planet that was being attacked yet being rescued by the humans. I really think you need to quit leaving us just hanging as defeat is achieved. Most of your stories, and on hope. Where was the hope between the humans and the CX? Perhaps she ran out of time, it would be a filling in, as there was no end to this story .
You ended it too quickly. What happened to the Victor’s that the humans and the Cx were able to enjoy. What about an ending that didn’t just leave death and destruction but hope and optimism to the planet that was being attacked yet being rescued by the humans. I really think you need to quit leaving us just hanging as defeat is achieved. Most of your stories, end on hope. Where was the hope between the humans and the CX? Perhaps you ran out of time, it would be a fitting end to this story .
