Are u thinking to make yn forgive them then plz dont do this though she is kid when she needed no one was there they dont deserve her u know siblings fight with eachother yeh it is in every relationship but they dont hate each other and her brothers rather than suga no one cared when she was fainted but suga too dont dersrve forgiveness u know this thim can u make like real story because if i was there in that position i will never goona forgive them it doesnt matter of they are my own brothers or family sisters should feel safe around the brothers they should be comfortab around but what did yn got yeh reveal the truth what suga find and make yn to left the house and make her independent and they should be asking forgiveness till their last breath i am asking for sad endings because happy endings dont deserve in this story can u make it plz 🙂
actually i was little other plans for the last part.. it'll be worth it.. but as you worked hard to think and write this..! I'm actually thinking what to do now.. Should i work on my own idea..?? Well.. in that too.. There's a sad ending..!!!! welllll.!!!! I really appreciate itt !!!!! Tysmmmm I'll upload sooo sooo soon..!!! I'm motivated will your comment now.. Next part soon..
@@you_scared_pottah I am happy if u are writing with your own concept also I will appreciate your work I am sure u will try your best and while u are trying your best ofcource it will be worth I will be waiting for next part 🙂
@@you_scared_pottah Please make them punished very well, but everyone needs a second chance. Just give them a lot of punishments to make them realize her pain. And at the end she can forgive them. But if you don't want, ok. I'm saying this, because of some misunderstoondings or other things , realitionships are ruining. I don't know why, but lately whatever I found is really sad. I'm becoming emotional every time. However, whatever is sad or happy ending, I'll wait and watch next part!!! Because your writing skills are so good.👌👍✍