The original pinch harmonics of the Rhythm guitar are the most delicious Part of the original song and Also the bendings in the original are at the highest bending posible. Nice try buddy but you pinch harmonics are too fast and not smooth and your bendings in the Solos i miss the top high and feeling. But thanks for the try
Good job, nicely done. The only thing I would add is that Sykes plays the main (chorus) riff not as two note power chords but as triads, so you can really hear it's an E minor chord, not just the fifth. That E minor IMO adds to the sadness of the song. Good job on the solo.