Why can't Brenda go to college? Higher education is always a plus, advised. What is she not academically savvy? Brenda is offered free or reduced college education by her father being a veteran.
Be honest ,truthful and sincere in all that you do ,coz you never know where or when blessings will come your way and as we know ''God , who sees everything does work in mysterious ways . ''
Another beautiful story, but if I may offer a word of constructive criticism: The climax was at 25 minutes, when Brenda and Eric met, but the story continued on for another 10 minutes. An effective conclusion should only be a few minutes long in a story of this length, not 10. You kind of lost me for a few minutes - I just kind of spaced out until the actual conclusion (the wedding and reconciliation with Aunt Jessie) came. That having been said, I love your stories, including this one. Just maybe shorten up all the details between the climax and conclusion in future stories. Keep up the great work! I've been following all of your stories since you first started, and you're one of my favorite channels.
