My ex-girlfriend was raised in a Christian cult kind of like the one in this story- her parents sent her to a religious boarding school that abused the girls there and she has lots of mental scars because of it. Religion hurts just as many people as it helps. That’s one of the cruel realities of this world- no matter how good someone thinks something is, there’s always an equal amount of bad to balance it out. This was a great story- thank you for reading this.
"...Involved in a religious movement called the followers of the way" Me: *pauses and scrolls down to the comments to see how many ugandan knuckles refferences there are*
So I just bawled my eyes out. I don't know who wrote the story but the writing is incredible. I was hooked from the first sentence. You narrated this story exceptionally well. Shook me to my core. Loved this and I believe in God.
Lord Beerus exactly. To each their own but this. This made me become that character and feel his pain. In my eyes hate is learned...love is natural. Stories like this though help me see perspective sometimes...breaks my heart.
Sometimes the worst monsters are not the demons and ghouls that stalk our nightmarse. Rather it is the evil and wickedness of humans that can the most horrifying.
If you look past the typo in the title... this is actually a really sad story. The kids couldn’t have changed it yet they were put through that. I listen to these stories so that I can scare myself but this one really hit me hard in the feels. It’s an unusual feeling because it makes me sick although I know that it wasn’t real. The whole experience is described in such detail that I was on the verge of tears. I can speak from experience that being pressured into something because ‘god will reward you and you will be free of sin’ is nothing short of hell. I was raised in a strict Christian household. I would be shunned or shouted at if I said anything to question god, I can just remember my parents saying “go to sleep now, kiddo. God will make sure to rinse and cleanse you of all evil, if he discovers that you are too far gone then he will push you into the depths of purgatory where you shall rest for millions of years. Sweet dreams”. This whole story reminded me of some twisted shit and I can say for sure that religion, faith. They are all pure excuses for others to manipulate people who believe.
It always pisses me off to heads about parents abandoning their kids for a cult. I admit, I'm not a parent, but I don't think it takes being one to know that as a parent you are always supposed to be their for them and give them love and understanding. And these parents who throw their children away like the father did in this story are really just very weak-minded when it really comes down to it. ANYWAYS, off of my soapbox, lol, this was really good. One of the that made it good was how realistic this story is, because shit like this happens all the time.
I as a young gay listening at midnight, this made me cry holy shit I'm admitting that on the internet oof yea there are fresh tears on my face still. Brad I'm so sorry I know you arent real but holy shit
Seriously, like, I'm a huge animal lover, more than a lot of people I know, but god, the Brad sacrifice thing hits me a little harder than the Bear thing. Like, jesus, that's, agh, as someone who is LGBTQ+ it's like, wow, I, no words, that poor poor kid...
MrCreepyPasta I am in love with your channel, I also make creepy videos so there is a lot to take from your videos. The setting, the vibes, the stories, your narration, its just amazing. Keep up the good work. Ciao
Psyjinx I'm not a huge fan of long stories. I was starting to get sleepy and disinterested by the middle of the story. I still listened to it though. I wanted to know how it ended.
Normal creepypasta fandom go-ers: "Yes, i enjoy a little bit of creepypasta. I enjoy Candle Cove, and some of the better Pokemon ones." The *other* ones: "Oh my god!! I want Jeff The Killer to inseminate me!! 👅"
This had to have been one of the best pastas I have heard in a long time. I enjoy your readings every time I tune in but when you get stories like these, they stand out so much. Your style of narrations and your vernacular are enthralling, engaging and entertains with a dash of class....with a touch of cheese at certain points. It really helps that these sound like the old radio shows from the forties. Brother, you have a talent for this. Keep up the great work.
I can tell on every video you take your time to perfect it and I really enjoy all of your videos! You deserve all your subs and even some more!!! You are doing great keep it going!!!'
AwesomeSpider4 dude same I never really followed much religion, but after actually reading the bible it was the trippiest shit I've ever set my eyes on It's so many levels of fucked up it's ridiculous
God created Adam and eve. They bore two sons, Cain and able. Cain slew able and was banished to a far away land, where he took a wife.....where tf did she come from?
Yeah I started doubting when I convinced my parents to skip the preaching to spend my time in the church library and read. I realized I was gradually starting to read it with the same mindset as I get when I sit down and read a fiction book like harry potter. It actually surprised me when my siblings told me the stuff actually happened.
AwesomeSpider4 you're taking a verse out of context. the next verse says: 17 If her father utterly refuses to give her to him, he shall pay money equal to the bride-price for virgins. the woman does NOT have to marry a rapist, she must only do what her father says. Now in the culture 3500 years ago, virginity was highly prized. It would have been very difficult for a woman who was not a virgin, and especially a woman who had been raped, to find a man to marry her. a woman without a husband would have a very difficult time providing for herself. This is why the passage leaves marriage to the discretion of the father, because every situation is different, and it is better to be flexible than have a blanket rule. In case you didn't know, these were laws given to the people of Israël 3500 years ago that dont apply anymore today: Romans 6:14 For sin will have no dominion over you, since you are not under law but under grace. any other objections?
As a Christian, I feel sorry for the protagonist, even if they aren't real. No one should ever be subjected to those kind of things. Cults are always bad news. To think, if he had internet, he could've learned about some of the more infamous cults like JonesTown/PeoplesTemple or Heavens Gate. But for the sake of story, he didn't. Also, I wanna say that atheists don't get a bad rep for being nonreligious. It's because of the Militants who go around like: "HURR DURR RELIGION IS CANCER AND SHOULD BE ERADICATED AND ALL RELIGIOUS PEOPLE SHOULD BE PUT INTO MENTAL INSTITUTIONS" or something like that. As for me, I have a few atheist friends who don't really care about religion in general so they respect me and I respect them. Militants are just annoying. At this point I'm rambling so either way, good story. 7/10 would sad again
I appreciated this one. Problem with a lot of creepypasta stories is that they rely a lot on religious context and beliefs, the supernatural, mythical stories, and it often makes it seem like thats the only way someone can write a good scary story. Something like this shows that evil does exist, but not from demons or undead or nightmarish creatures, but from just mankind, from religious indoctrination, from what that mentality adults follow do to children and how it fucks them up. This was a very grounded story in that sense, no demons, no spirits, just the evils of mankind at its worst.
I believe you would enjoy the story "I dared my friend to ruin my life". It's the best Creepypasta i've listened to in the "realism" category. It's genuinely scary, not because of standard horror, or in a "i'm too afraid to go to the toilet in the dark" sense, but because it could actually happen like that in reallife and if you imagined to be in the main characters role, you'd hardly find a way out. That is really scary shit right there.
This is the second most heartbreaking creepypasta I've ever read (because Borrasca). Even down to Bradley's so called "sinful lust"... ugh, I just... ah man, I fucking can't.
I love how this author makes a statement about atheists and in immediately proves it. They get a bad rap because they actually legitimately believe that they're very existence strikes fear into the hearts of religious people.
I don't know, god in some cases sounds worse than the unknown. Are you sure it isn't more of a guess than an excuse? Because I don't believe people face their fears by trading it with another.
This was terrifying. Religions brainwashing is scarier than any ghost story. Christianity is toxic, and religion as a whole, is poison. Also, really disappointed you made the character straight. It felt like you just threw in heterosexuality in, despite the fact that he was clearly gray. It didn't fit with the story, felt ad libbed.
This is far creepier than most other creepypastas I've heard, precisely because this kind of thing very well could happen in reality, and that is disturbing to me.
This was very sad. As a mother, this makes me wanna take care of every child in the world myself. I can guarantee you I won't hurt them and will defend them against evil 😈 like this. I'm the LAST thing in the darkness an abuser wants to face.
This is by far the best short story iv heard maybe its my biased for loving cult themed stuff in general i cant believe i skipped over this one for so long. I think the biggest inspiration for this story is jim jones i just get that vibe and i love it
Thanks for the narration MCP, awesome telling of such an emotional story...well witten by the author RaydiantWon, such emotion put from pen to page. I was on the brink of tears.
So the protagonist was raised between cultists (not religious people ) , cults are mostly made by people who bend the original form of the words of God that’s why the Bible has more than 10,20,40,70 versions there all twisted words that original were meant to make people more wise, but when a word or two is changed in a single verse it could change a lot .
You dont even know what the original said. Modern bibles are just copies of translations or copies of translations of... and so on. Not to mention there are only scraps and pieces left of (what we believe to be) the original. Or that nobody can even read the language they were written in anymore. All we know is that there are lots of translation or copy mistakes in all modern versions, not to mention that the stories dont add up and there are massive amounts of inconsistencies in the bible. So yeah.. changing a word or two can change a lot - so why are you even paying the slightest bit of attention to a book that consists of more changed words than original ones, and even those were translated and potentially misinterpreted multiple times over?
Richard Hall I'm Christian. Hardcore Christian. Video actually caught my attention and curious to hear what it says! And see the comments! If you want to see something creepy, Google image search: Shroud of Turin. Image of Jesus Christ after his crucifixion 1 second before his resurrection. Quite the artifact, nothing like it in all human history.
This is one of the best Creepy Pastas which I have ever heard. It was so realistic. I really liked that it was something that could happen in the real world. And that there was an important lesson to it. But perhaps most of all, I liked the fact that it had a (mostly) happy ending. That's rare in Creepy Pasta stories. I hope that some people out there, who are in religious fundamentalist groups (or are approached by them), will hear this story, and really think about this.
I had a "similar" situation. Without the crazy cult or self mutilation but my old baby sitter when I was 7 or so was interesting. I prayed and prayed for my tooth arch to end and she made it stop with a prayer to God. She also made me memorize verses and wouldn't let me eat till I memorized it all. One day she made we watch the passion of the Christ, that old ass movie about Jesus and she wouldn't stop crying. She prayed so intently that I way her spine twist (not even joking but I was 7 years old so idk) it wasn't till I was 12 that I started having nightmares, around the time my faith starting lacking. Overall an interesting memory now that I'm older but still freaky
_That ending._ That had to be the most insane twist ever. There is no way in vagina stomping hell anyone saw that coming. I am gonna be lost in an ethereal, existential crisis of nonstop thought that will not end until everyone I have ever known has abandoned me for I have become a vegetable simply lost in thought. If I were to ever hear anything even close to that level of a twist, there is no doubt in my mind, that my ears would bleed and my eyes would explode. That twist, that twist. I can only hope to ever encounter a twist that perfect as I spend the rest of my life searching hopelessly to fill the void that every further story will surely fail to sate. That twist, that twist. Thank you. For that twist.
I have had so many emotions through this video mostly anger at the cult and I started tearing when I realised what they where going to do to bear but mostly anger. this is a very emotional story and I liked it but also hate it probably because I'm that attached to my dogs but nevertheless good story
