@@ikmwrime29sorryaira60 yeah, but then you have the secondary character who is the only one that respects the danger they are in, and they are often the first ones to go, and the main protagonists that are all tearful and snotty and curling up in a ball somehow survive. Its really confusing. I might do a theory of this for work. Hmm.. TO THE LAPTOP!
I live in the northwestern countryside. (Oddly covered in forests, mountains, seas and ocean side beaches,) and if we are in the forest and it starts smelling funny. Either it is a dead fox rotting, a dead duck rotting, or a victim of one of the hundreds of local legends. some of them are crap like the tixie wixies. But most of them are badass like the dragon who was friends with king arthur, thats hibernating somewhere in the mountains. There are more of these ones. Like the person that robinhood was based on lived in the forests here, there is an ancient king from 94CE who fought a valiant battle and died for his kingdom thay was then taken by the brits and the scotish. There is the family of big cats that roam somewhere in the countryside. Then there is the cumbrian beast. Bownessie. A big fog off fish, but... in.. bowness. then we have all of the prehistoric stuff, the viking stuff. The fact we are technically the last of the british viking. Then there are the witches, the werewolves, the devils dance, then there is also the caves that are supposedly filled with monsters. Local legends, some proven true, others unknown. I personally believe in most of them. Pretty cool. Look up cumbrian legends.
I'm guessing the smell is some kind of hallucinogenic. It's the only rational explanation I can think of. Like they never left the woods. Supernatural, maybe?
Very interesting, I always imagined it affects specifically the olfactory bulb in the skull probably, as you said, due to supernatural neural activation
An interesting creepypasta, but I feel like it needed a stronger central theme to tie it all together. Like an entity that doesn't like being watched, or a ghost that likes dolls? If it all came together, it would be way better!
I quite like the lack of theme, as if implying something beyond human understanding is going on, or perhaps there are multiple separate phenomena in one freaky woods.
I know it may be extra work but you don’t have to unless you want to do it. Add like the effects of crying, screaming, and of the such. If you want to have a little bit of extra fun, try to sound like you’re losing your ever-loving mind. It’s still a good reading, but it would add to the fear element.
@@RoanokeTales You added some ambience in a different video and ambience in itself is just as good if not better, I’m sorry for wasting your time with this comment. Thank you for making all these different videos during this hard year, you really are making it easy for a lot of people Ro. Have a good day and be safe!
I wish these stupid people were only in stories and movies but unfortunately they aren't. "Hey I saw something terrible but I'm not going to tell you and I'm going to run away from the group". More people need to hear " monke strong together".
I'm Canadian 🇨🇦 and love listening to Story's I could listen for hours non stop I'm a big fan of your channel ceep righting story's man. By the way you have an amazing voice. My voice sounds like I smoke 6 packs a day it's my own fault but I have never smoked once
A great story only one problem if the guy can't use his phone or go out or access his email's and his PC how did he get this story out? Is this really the story teller or someone/something else?
I should have been specific you know are not boring thank you for reading stories and your science channel I meant the idiots who think I care if they don't think I am god are boring Yay Roanoke Whoo go you
I love all your vids, particularly the doom ones you've been doing recently, but seeing you move across to creepy pastas, I do have one or two suggestions to consider. Take it with a grain of salt, I'm not a audio producer. When you read these stories, you tend to read them as though you're reading off a fact sheet. Your analysis voice from your other videos bleeds through. Maybe try speaking as though you're talking to one or two people directly. I think your high inflection on the middle of the words is your brain being very precise on pronunciation and you're adding that extra "umpf" to each word. Just remember that you're not in a crowded room, so projecting your voice may not be as necessary. Again, take this with a grain of salt, Just something I noticed.
All this stuff is just so weird yet seems so real. Like it actually could happen. We still know very little about the human brain...what if there are things that can invade the body and cause a person to go mad. Is this how it begins or ends?
It is intentionally left vague but what I do understand is that what happened to the characters had something to do with the house. And since all of them looked at the window, they suffered this kind of curse where they'd go slowly insane like some sort of psychosis.
I just 🙄🤦🏻 smh. I just can't with this guy...hes easy to listen to, but he's sorta terrible for horror....he tells every story so nonchalant it's like, "...so then my mom's head starts rotating 360° & she crawls up onto the ceiling, bleeding out of her eyes & I'm like omg mom geez don't be so dramatic!" LoL 😆 Just doesn't seem to have much emotional range imo.
