WRickWrites: The Great Emancipators | HFY One Shot 

10,000 years a slave... That is the saddest thing I've heard today. I guess that makes freedom all then sweeter in the end.

I love Rick's stuff. That said, I wish there was another sentence or two more at the end about what happens now or what else about humans shocked them and inspired them.

Great story! "Never give up! Never surrender!"

I like it, because you can see how the slugs were able to be the masters for so long. Too many of their enemies thought in terms of armies and numbers, which works, as quantity does have a quality all its own, but in the end, it's not the best way to win a war, as any student of history will tell you. It's a great way to RAID an enemy, but conquest requires more. And thus, the humans fought by striking the heart. Chain of Command is important, and they would have seen how quickly the slugs react to things, namely not quickly at all, and from there, they learned the best way to end this was to end the masters, giving them a strategic target. Better, the slugs sound like they were in DIRECT command of their forces, individually. Works to allow you to issue orders, but like the feather on an officer's helmet, it marks you as the biggest target in the group. There's a reason officers on the field don't wear things like that anymore. And thus, did the tyrants fall, because their strength in their cruelty meant that even to themselves, they were not brothers in arms. And humanity takes the W, and starts a new era, one where, by sheer force of will, they will lead this galaxy into freedom, and they will exterminate those who threaten it.

Man, when I saw this was a Rick story I hoped it was more DDH.

Ends too abruptly. With that much buildup explanation, epilogue etc. would be much appreciated.

Great story writing.

Love WRickWrites stories. Not crazy about the AI voice on this one but I love the story!

hello there storytelling had a lot of sadness despair and a lot of Hope for your future of your people can live free and be happy live free thank you for a very good story it moved my heart...

I know this was a one shot, but I would love to see the aftermath in detail.

I really liked this one. 😊

excellent story

Time to crush the Hutts

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Don't you mean the Hutts?

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The story is good but the lack of emotion in the last words left the moment empty.

No that's not insane that's human