Dang brother, you are narrating so smooth these days, and becoming REAL good. Your character voices are badass. Man, keep it up, you are such a main staple in my mental diet. Thanks for doing what you do for all these years!
This was actually pretty good, but was disappointed when it ended so soon. I'd be interested in ths becoming a 2-4 parter, maybe. It just needs more somehow. I want to hear more! Who's with me?
This reminds me of a book i read in middle school called "The boy who couldn't die." It was actually a very well written book. I like this story as well
Wow. So many questions. What is he? From where did he get his powers? Is he coming for the narrator? How/Why did the narrator go to prison? Great read! Thank you. Stay well.
Hey yeah I really hope there's more to this because this was one of the most cool and interesting stories to listen to and I love the whole concept of the mafia and stuff. I hope more comes from this and the narration was great.
Title: *“The man who wouldn’t die.”* My brain: *”The Man that Death Forgot”* Insert confusion as I’ve been working on developing a character that cannot and will not die despite all the horrible accidents he’s been in and lost everything he once had and so dedicates his life to trying to solve the unexplained, supernatural, paranormal, impossible, etc. things in the world, hoping to find answers to his immortality alone the way
@@joshuaizly5502 ah, I slowly killed off his family and his one and only friend and burnt most of his house down before he even became an adult. He lost everything and anything that he held dear and close to him and is now paranoid that he is cursed and does not like to stick around in one place for too long as disaster always seems to follow him wherever he goes. Everyone that had somewhat of a significant connection to him ended up dying and he always survived when that should have been impossible. He had nothing to lose anymore so he just left to wander aimlessly for a while before deciding to give himself a new purpose, hoping to find answers to give him peace along the way
@@luciellawliet, That sounds amazing, I hope if/when you finish it you post it. I also hope it gets featured on the channel. I also have an immortal character I'm developing, who people in towns within the world dub him as the Unkillable Man. The catch being whatever kills him, he becomes immune to, so if he drowns he can't die from drowning again.
@@aaronwilder2775 Thank you! I’m a rookie writer tho (have loved reading even since I was a small child but I can’t write to save my life haha) so that might take me years but I eventually want to make it a series of some sorts documenting his encounters and discoveries, etc. That sounds really cool too, I wish you good luck on that as well!
The owner of the Chicago spirit said “magic don’t mean squat when you’re lookin’ down the barrel of a tommy”, but if you can transmute bullets at point blank range, that may not be the case
I want to monitor the two bills closely and see if they convert into new ones with unique, valid registry on each, or if they’re just identical copies.
So, as cool as that money truck was. They’re likely perfect copies of one another, someone checks that and they’re gonna be asking some questions for sure
I hope Mark eventually sees or meets up with Vinnie Tony and Carl again hope Sam doesn’t get to any of them I just realized after going I can listen to it again Tony died
Few things are annoying about this story. Even though it was good. 1) pistols don't blow peoples stomachs out, and they don't normally remove head... I mean they *CAN* , but only if you're using something like a .50AE, or .454. Heads don't go "pop" when they're shot. A small hole would be where the bullet hit them, and a larger hole would be where the bullet left them. This is from bullet deformation and/or the bullet dragging "things" with it when it leaves. People that don't know about guns should NOT use them in their stories. 2) He shot the gas tank and the car went BOOM... doesn't happen. If you were using steel core ammo and shot at the ground after you put a few holes in it... yeah... you could make a nice little fire ball, but no ' BOOM! ' ( Note: cars CAN explode, but it's SUPER rare. If we're talking about shooting it to make it go boom! we're talking odds 1/100000000 here....) 3) The main guy was 🏳🌈.... *sigh* .... pandering
Not even a .454 or action express will blow your stomach out, just becausethey are the most powerful handgun/wheel gun cartridge you can think of doesn't mean they are all that powerful, 30-06,.270, .308, 5.56 and 6.52 won't even do that, youd need to be getting into the anti material rounds to make someone's guts explode out the back of them. I know because I've seen first hand what guns do to the human body in the service. Most if not all injuries involving some poor bastards innards becoming their outards is from shrapnel from IEDS, Rocket propelled grenades, mines and frag grenades.... it's the shrapnel that tears you open......I think you should do more research before complaining about others lack of knowledge and acting like you know what your talking about. A grand total of four sentences about the main character being gay that were integral to the story isn't pandering either, and people of all backrounds deserve to have characters they have things in common with. Not every single protagonist has to be a straight white male bud, you seem like you get triggered so easily by stuff you can't even enjoy a simple creepypasta that involves a gay person and some overdone firearm action. The shit you said about ballistics wasn't even right either lmaoooo grow up kid.
I think it was because this one came back to life? If someone I knew to be dead came back like that it would fuck me up. And he was one of the ones attempting to do the killing.
