4 Ways to Ruin Your College Essay 

1. dont be too arrogant/snobby (be kind/thoughtful while mentioning things such as awards and achievements) 2. mentioning wrong school/getting facts wrong about school (make sure you are accurate) 3. being too negative (you should be inspirational and fuzzy) 4. make sure your story tells about who you are (like your personality, how you act, etc.)

Someone: I have written the best possible essay ever Brooke: I'm going to end this man's career

If you want to get rejected, write an Essay about how your Grandmother used to fight with your grandfather as you feel that the Mountains of California are the worst part of MIT and you are the perfect student for NYU because you are the only person in this world who can shout loudly while grandparents are fighting.

When you postpone submitting your college essays so that you can get more advice from SupertutorTV’s new videos

Now do a 4 ways to do great in your College Essay

10:53 Some questionable physics there.

Thanks for the tips, now I know how to ruin my essay like a pro 👍

She is saying, Don’t be the 3rd derivatives!

I might write about how being deaf affected my life but also made me a stronger person.

Your videos are so helpful!!! I’m in the summer after sophomore year and I’ve been watching several of these videos a day as I prepare for the SATs, starting a mock trial team at my school, getting great grades and writing a great essay.

Can you please make a video on teacher recommendation letters? Thank you!💜

I got my college essay checked by my English teacher, helped me so much

I love this! ❤️ thank you

I absolutely love your videos and your personality! Your videos are so helpful and interesting. I’m here watching videos to show my son who’s a jr in high school

Great video! You are very knowledgable about the college application process, unlike others I know

Thank you for your videos. I show them to my students and use them in my lessons! Keep them coming!!!! Also, I write decent letters of recommendations but would love you to create a video helping teachers write better recommendations!

Thanks for the tips of what to do on my essay. Will definitely do all the things you mentioned

Yes I love the college essay roasting videos!!!! Can’t stop binge watching them on your channel, please make more they’re really interesting and helpful :)

ive seen hours upon hours of videos on the college essay. this is by far the most helpful, because it teaches me how to fix the things in my essay, rather than just avoiding them

could you please make some videos about questbridge/questbridge essays?

Thank you so much for your videos. Is there a way I could email you with more specific questions?? I'd really appreciate it.

I think for point 2, you should be stressing the fact that we shouldn’t duplicate the “why us” essays in the first place

Got the notification as I wrote my common app essay for the fifth time. This video came at an ironically perfect time:)

Thank god you posted this before ed and rd. I only ever get your videos after the fact

Hi Brooke, I have an an essay that I'm worried might start out too sad. (just first paragraph really). I do end on a positive note, but my counselor said it could be seen as too sad because "I don't come back to it." Would you be willing to read this briefly? I could comment the intro below. PLEASE LET ME KNOW EITHER WAY. If that's not something you do, I totally understand, but please let me know if this is something you'd be willing to do. Much Appreciated, Charlotte

Idk why im watching this when im already in college

So I recent lost eyesight in my left eye it was very hard for me to sorta heal from that mentally . Should I not write about that?

Brooke seems to be so so smart and cool.

Can you please make a video on how to manage college app stress? Thank you!

really i'm feeling nervous.

lol my early action is due tmrw and i left everything to the last minute cuz i truly was just in writers block, if anyone even sees this and gives me some sort of feedback that would be great lol. Basically rn im not sure if i should keep on writing this but, my essay is about the time where i was in this stage at a modelling competition in a local mall at Jakarta my home city.i talked about my nerves, how the audience was loud, cheery, and for an introvert, this felt like the Superbowl. i also talked about how the building up of how i didnt feel like i could win amongst all these other talented girls. but i talked about at the crowd there was my parents watching me with a smile, my dad mouthing the words “thats our girl” and then after my short anecdote I jumped to talking about growing up in Jakarta i struggled with my self identity of being a mix kid (i know vey cliché) but long story short i wanted to highlight how growing up, my self worth was so small and i didnt have much friends but that small moment where i won the competition made me feel at total shock, i couldnt believe my ears when they called out my name. By then my confidence grown and moving to a new school opened so many doors for me, i was able to grow, my first language was english so a lot of kids used to make fun of me but growing older i was able to speak indonesian better, and talk to more ppl and make genuine relationships. Take up leadership roles and becoming the head of arts for student council, and other cool stuff i never thought i could do before, all this happened because i truly finally believed in myself, and that whole stage moment only gave me this little push to strive to find myself and become mature as a person.. then i think i might end with after that day of winning i come home with my whole family enjoying my favorite soup noodles ever from my home town’s chinese restaurant l go a lot since i was a kid (lol maybe not add that it doesnt relate to everything im saying) but hopefully this makes sense, theres some parts i left out which is in the essay but kinda hard to put it all in this comment. If its not good enough or doesnt rlly relate to prompt one on identity, background, or talent ig im screwed lmao pls be dead honest, i know so much of these parts are cringe, i rlly dont wanna sound like a snob cuz thats just not who i am

Hey SuperTutorTV can you do the following videos in the future? - Difference between Early Decision, Early Action & Regular Decision - Letter of Recommendations - Common App vs Coalition App

Watching this video with courage

So I have a 3.44 unweighted gpa (IB). I go to the top highschool in my state. I have a weighted gpa of 3.77. I have 1D, 4 C's, and a mix of As and Bs. How do my grades look to you. I'll take any raw feedback possible.

I’m applying to Rice ED but Im not feeling good about getting in rn. They only take 15 percent Ed so I’m feeling sad rn.

Really wished you would've done this earlier

The reasons that I have for wishing to go to Harvard are several. I feel that Harvard can give me a better background and a better liberal education than any other university. I have always wanted to go there, as I have felt that it is not just another college, but is a university with something definite to offer. Then too, I would like to go to the same college as my father. To be a "Harvard man" is an enviable distinction, and one that I sincerely hope I shall attain. April 23, 1935 John F. Kennedy

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Would writing about my passion for learning a language and the hardships I faced while traveling abroad be a good essay?

9:47 😆

why Does she look like pennywise in the thumbnail

does it make a difference if the letter of recommendation is from an alumna of the school?

Please do a video on “what’s a good GPA?” Thank you 😊

Wow. I love torturing myself after submitting my application and wondering if I'll even get accepted. I just have a question, what if the essay prompt asked to talk about a personal experience and not about accomplishments or explaining why you would be a great student?

11 minutes of pain

*technically speaking here, just trying to help you be culturally correct 8:21 Yin (white part) is meant to represent the brighter side, while the Yang (black part) is meant to represent the darker side

I wish she could read my essay😅

reasons are too vague

I’m super stressed out

kinda dumb question, does my common app and coalition essay need a title?

but what if your life is straight up boring

A How-To

Brooke what’s your opinion on writing an essay on being transgender? How do you think I should use it to help me rather than use it as a cliche?

is type one diabetes a worthy enough ailment ?

Is a 88/100 gpa an automatic disqualification to colleges.

I know a few people who will have trouble with the first one.

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For my essay I'm doing something completely out of the box. How would I know it is

5th way: Suck at writing like me.

third

Fourth

Huh. I _think_ I didn't blow my essays? I wrote about country music...

im a start acting deaf and write about how I became deaf at the ages of 16 and the hardship I went through and how it made me a stronger person LMFAO. btw don't get offended its just a joke.

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Hey Brooke! I really enjoy your videos but I found the part where you talked about ailments to be problematic. I totally understand the importance of focusing on what you learned from the experience rather than the hardship itself, but the way you phrased it came across that only life-threatening illnesses are life defining, which is definitely not the case. Your tone just minimized the consequences of non life threatening illnesses which actually alter lives. I hope you don’t continue to perpetuate the idea that chronic illnesses, especially pain, are not valid. Just some food for thought! :)

Am I the only person in middle school watching this

Get on tic tok

Brag, self promote

I don’t even need to study for anything, I just find Brooke attractive.