A man wrote a 16 year old girl getting a boob job and that's just the least of my problems here

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Комментарии : 6 тыс.

@atree9284 4 года назад

“You’re not just like other girls, you’re also not like other heroes, because you’re a girl with a knife, and your bangs aren’t cut straight.” Is what i want on my grave

@withcindy 4 года назад

she prob cuts her bangs with a knife. she be quirky like that

@MuigetsuKirin 4 года назад

@@withcindy *Mulan has left the chat*

@AikiraBeats 4 года назад

Same here

@hsmacaraig 4 года назад

Same here

@Deoxys911 4 года назад

Why not just carve it into your bark?

@justalittleguy1000 4 года назад

The wierdest thing is there's literally no reason to make her 16. Like why. Just make a a twenty something who hasn't had sex because she's busy being a badass and life was hard or whatever, and the story is pretty much the exact same except waaay less uncomfortable...

@sakurazukamorisubaru 4 года назад

She could've been 11, because in some countries children can't go to prison or they have a less severe punishment. Also, kids are passionate and ruthless, and tend to admire people who seem "cool"\ are easily manipulated. Therefore if they grow up surrounded by criminals, they'd probably gladly do all kinds of work for them.

@valeriarossini543 4 года назад

@@sakurazukamorisubaru Mia being 11 would actually be worse. Unless you're saying to throw away all the sex scenes, in which case yeah I agree that would have been an interesting read

@sakurazukamorisubaru 4 года назад

@@valeriarossini543 no, that was my point, that it could be worse.

@kuddlecat 4 года назад

Valeria Rossini I think she means that her line of thought by being 11 (I think even at 16 it can be applied cuz when we are at that age we tend to explore our sexuality) is more conditioned to do these things. It’s wrong but adds up more to the uncomfortable factor if that was the purpose of the author, which sadly and clearly it isn’t the case here

@robertblume2951 4 года назад

She would be to old to go to assassin's Hogwarts then.

@AeriSoondingie 4 года назад

Today on "I can't believe is not Wattpad":

@lpsshiba8308 3 года назад

YES.

@bethbaxter2922 3 года назад

Yes 👍

@as-wi4yz 3 года назад

I love your profile pic :)

@aw-mr5qn 3 года назад

AHAHAHAH

@nawr494 3 года назад

I write on Wattpad 😭😂 but yeah this book had no business published, how did this happen 💀

@keira519 Год назад

I’m not like other girls…I was born with glass bones and paper skin. Every morning, I break my legs, and every afternoon, I break my arms. At night, I lie awake in agony until my heart attacks put me to sleep.

@sillysillyxinnabun Год назад

I'm very sorry to hear that very unique MC 😔, would you like some chocolate to make you feel better 🍫

@klas-6 Год назад

@@sillysillyxinnabunChocolate? I'm sorry - did you say Chocolate?? Chocolate?!! CHOCOLATEE!!! CHOCOLATEEEE!!!!

@TOTALLY.LESBIAN.SQUIRREL Год назад

Hehe. I see what you did there...

@user-ooop 11 месяцев назад

I'm to stupid to get this 😅 Nice writing

@klas-6 11 месяцев назад

@@user-ooop it's a SpongeBob ref lol

@nogaadar3622 4 года назад

I can’t comprehend how he wrote that monologue with her smoking a cigar and thought that he nailed teenage girls

@withcindy 4 года назад

LMAOOOO idk what ur talking about i regularly go into pseudo-feminist monologues when i'm 16 while smoking a cigar

@SergioLeonardoCornejo 4 года назад

That is probably one of the worst issues of that book. He's writing a 16 year old as if she was... Well... A 40 year old guy in the body of a 16 year old girl... He failed to even consider the character. I actually like age gap ships, I don't care about the age of the writer (after all most teenage romances are written by men and women past the age of 40) but the fact that the author wrote the girl as if she was a self insert just damaged the character. Also... Yeah. Despite my aforementioned views, I do find it weird, not necessarily bad, but certainly weird that most teenage romances, with particularly unhealthy relationships and love expectations by the way, are written by men and women past the age of 40. John Green is an example. This middle aged guy is basically telling teenagers how love relationships are supposed to be, and not a single example is even functional. It's like that drunken uncle who gives unsolicited relationship advice to everyone in the family, including the dog and his very own wife. "So he's always drinking and pestering people? Cheat on him!" Little did he realize it was his wife complaining about his habits.

@lunammoon8503 4 года назад

Idk about the cigar, but I can picture myself going on that kind of rant as a 16-year-old. Then again, I would've been tired, and also joking.

@mirandajones7816 4 года назад

Sergio Leonardo Cornejo Hey! I’m genuinely curious about John Green since I haven’t read how books in years so i don’t remember his portrayal of relationships. Which relationships are you talking about?

@mariebaillet9800 4 года назад

@@lunammoon8503 i mean depends. Is the cigar for the aestethic ? Anything for the aestethic.

@ciara947 4 года назад

"she joins a school for assassins" is such a Wattpad premise I can't-

@hsmacaraig 4 года назад

Ciara ikrrr aaaaaa

@rachelsyrup 4 года назад

Lol there's actually a series of books called Gallagher Girls, where they go to a spy school. It is, from what I remember, a MUCH BETTER read. I mean, its written by a woman, so we're already a step ahead of this mess.

@catcactus1234 4 года назад

It’s such an overused premise that it’s practically a cliche at this point. Several published books do the same thing. Of course there’s nothing wrong with that, but people have a hard time executing the plot well because they dwell too much on the edginess factor.

@victorialira3178 4 года назад

The sex scene also sort of screamed bad fanfiction to me too. A recurring trope on FF is "threw her gently on the bed" reminded me of the gentle assault here too LOL

@mibukdesjarlais534 4 года назад

Reminds me of this anime called Assassination Classroom. 😂😂😂

@bonegrifter4212 4 года назад

the author rly said: the instructor is a pedo but it’s ok because she’s pretty ✨

@reynhacoezy5510 4 года назад

I-

@ortezac.5339 4 года назад

*laughs in hidden* *laughs in Death In Venice* First time?

@theimplications635 3 года назад

Wow looks like you just statement ended this man's whole career

@happyjellycatsquid 2 года назад

Gotta love how men will write a whole protagonist with the intention of being a « yass badass girlboss » who beats everyone yet see women as holding so little power overall it seems impossible to them they could be the abuser in that sort of male dominated forme of abuse. Real woke of them

@roelin360 4 месяца назад

And then men will use that as an example of how society doesn't care if women are abusers, even though they created it

@abyssalnightmare551 4 года назад

I *AM* a sixteen year-old girl and I feel like I should be in jail for hearing that

@123biler 3 года назад

Nope, Cindy should be in jail for you hearing that 😏

@vronji 3 года назад

@@123biler To be fair Cindy described the entire thing in the title so you get what you get

@missilluminati3389 2 года назад

Same sis, I feel like I need to pour holy water into my ears

@KittyTrackz 2 года назад

I’ve got bleach

@Mel-mq7il 2 года назад

Same I feel like washing my brain with sulfuric acid

@luciacuevas611 4 года назад

“Power” yes, because being stared at by men totally makes women feel more powerful, totally doesn’t make them feel like a piece of meat.

@withcindy 4 года назад

every time i get catcalled i gain +10 power

@victoriaspooks1383 4 года назад

ah yes, being sexually harassed by men everywhere I go always ups my power by 110% ✨

@beardbeardedbeardsbeardedh9374 4 года назад

@@victoriaspooks1383 I mean, it sure does make me want to stab a dude so I guess that counts

@foxcheetah6035 4 года назад

I mean, like, if you're voluntarily going out looking like a bombshell and people start staring at you, or if you're a stripper and on the pole and the men are hooting and hollering but you just walk up to them like "bitch, this pussy ain't free," would that make a woman feel... powerful? Actually though, would it? I'm not exactly a woman (trans male), so I wouldn't really know, so I'm curious. Do the girls walking down the street with nothing but swagger feel powerful when a guy tries and fails to hold a normal conversation, or do they feel harassed?

@JudgeNicodemus 4 года назад

Of course it gives women power! They get plus 7 on any dice roll to an attack against the offending creature!

@mayamemes4590 4 года назад

Why 16, she could've been 18 or older and went to a university ... And it would've been less creepy

@trevingrayek1671 4 года назад

A lot of YA novels would be overall less creepy if their characters were adults. But we do it anyway, because we as a culture are ok with sexualizing teenagers.

@scorpiocarnage1055 4 года назад

@@lampad4549 It's the fact that the author is an adult is the problem.

@justalostlocal 4 года назад

@@lampad4549 Uhm "no difference between 16 and 18"? From where did you pull that shi? I'm living prove that in two years late teens change a lot. It's not unhealthy to indulge in sexual fantasy and I'll go as far as to say it doesn't matter who writes it, but HOW/in what context. As far I could tell this dude writes teenage girl as if she's his idealized woman, not in the way of "this harsh world matured mia" but as if cigarette smoking while being philosophical, killing people and having sex is perfectly natural way a teen behave? It's hard to describe, in this book his writing lacks nuance and subtlety which makes teenage characters seems impossible and tacky.

@frostyclouded 4 года назад

@@lampad4549 there's literally a difference between 16 and 17, never mind 16 and 18. biologically? maybe not in girls, but potentially in boys. mentally? definitely. 18 is still pretty young, and you're not magically a perfect adult or whatever. but an 18 year old can easily have a lot more experience than a 16 year old. it also kind of depends on a more exact age - if you've just turned 16, there's definitely a big difference between that and being 18 and a half. if you're almost 17, then there's not as big of a difference between that and just having turned 18. but more importantly, a 40 year old writing sex scenes about a 16 year old is weird. especially with how it seems to be written in this book.

@stormyuwu1287 4 года назад

@@lampad4549 there is a difference between 16 and 18 biology and mentally, who dtold your brain and body development just stops for 3 whole years?

@NK-nkno 4 года назад

Repeat after me: Strong female character doesn't mean goth, ''feminist'', teenagers that punch stuff and talks in Tumblr.

@lizipearlvlogs 4 года назад

Right! I'd argue that Barbie, Disney princesses, and 21st Century Fox princesses are empowering and stereotypically girly.

@jpsings4229 4 года назад

Lizi Pearl Some yeah, others not so much.

@stormyuwu1287 4 года назад

@@lizipearlvlogs Barbie succ, Disney great doe.

@francisdeles4276 4 года назад

@@stormyuwu1287 princess and the pauper, fairytopia, mariposa, three musketeers, etc. Shouldn't be disrespected like this lol

@allyli1718 4 года назад

Stormy uwu don’t spit on Barbie when Disney does generic “girl boss” feminism. We love and respect Barbie’s fun, girly, and active protagonists who don’t need to be a girl boss to be strong characters. Well, as strong as Barbie movies can be.

@pom.bo. 4 года назад

is it weird that i got offended by the “beautiful like a fresh suicide” line??? like i was listening and laughing because of the weird ass writing and then that came up and i actually gasped. why do people romanticize suicide?? i struggle with suicidal thoughts/ideations and thats really shitty

@peccantis 4 года назад

Not weird at all, that line is shitty. My dude has obviously never even talked to anyone who has been subjected to such a sight. Even scenes of peaceful deaths from old age in one's sleep aren't beautiful, considering the things a human body is liable to do once it's no longer alive. And to imply that there is anything romantic or aesthetic in the sort of desperation and suffering that leads a person to end their life--that's not only disgustingly irresponsible, but shallow and shortsighted. The author doesn't even have the excuse of writing this line from the perspective of a profoundly disturbed character.

@epipsychidionozymandias5021 3 года назад

Not to mention the suffering of people who have to face a loved one's suicide. It's horrible and it tears you apart, and I'm despising this book with all my strenght.

@JRyan-lu5im 3 года назад

In fact nothing is uglier than suicide nor more horrific than a "fresh" one. I get the point is that it's supposed to be "the MC's mindset", and that she's 16 and engrossed with death mysticism, but someone who thinks that something so dirty is beautiful, then the author should have owned that and made her more of a psychotic serial killer.

@Alexfolledemoi 3 года назад

Offended too! I tried to kill myself as a teen, and that's just... Wrong.. Such a wrong way to describe someone 's appearance 🤢

@megadiancie751 3 года назад

Beautiful like a dead body is really just an insult.

@alaynestone6438 4 года назад

Iron or glass? I am neither. I am sand: coarse and rough and irritating.

@RF-mc8cx 4 года назад

SAME

@withcindy 4 года назад

my vag is sandpaper

@remnantsofkigol98 4 года назад

Same, i hate sand.

@ME-qf8dk 4 года назад

OooFff, I think I'm falling for you, Ani Oinkingseawalker.

@lunarhaze105 4 года назад

And it gets everywhere

@Parrot5884 4 года назад

Whyyyyyyyyy did he compare beauty to suicide? No sir, that is _not_ the vibe.

@madelainerowley8854 4 года назад

my depressed ass; no ma’am that is the *only* vibe

@musicalnerds101 4 года назад

TEAAAA

@withcindy 4 года назад

i dont like the vibes here

@mariebaillet9800 4 года назад

@@madelainerowley8854 do you Want a hug, fam ?

@oliviaocasain9980 4 года назад

Haven't you heard? Devastating illnesses are sexy now 😐

@dpathangi6691 4 года назад

Oh to be a girl with a knife whose bangs aren’t cut straight

@10feralratsinacoat76 4 года назад

Because she used her knife to cut them probably , since edgy people can’t get a proper haircut

@huhthatsinteresting1644 4 года назад

Why can't she just grow them out? Like it would be so much easier to put her hair out of her face and she would not have to worry about having to cut them every now and then so that they do not obscure her vision, like wtf

@withcindy 4 года назад

oh to be an ugly-but-not-actually-ugly girl

@damatically 4 года назад

I imagine olivia's bangs from asobi asobase

@Mochipandabear 4 года назад

That cigar monologue sounded like Jughead's weirdo monologue from Riverdale and I honestly zoned out while you read it.

@thisdudeamiright2321 3 года назад

i’m such a weirdo i wear a BEANIE 😧😦😮😦😬😳(👁👄👁)(👅👁👅)

@alabamaslammer3921 2 года назад

I'm fully convinced that singular piece of dialogue took up like 2 pages

@chandlerscigarettes Год назад

“i’m weird 😜, im a weirdo 😝. i don’t fit in ❌and i don’t want to fit in🙅🏻‍♂️. have you ever seen 👀 me without this stupid hat 🎩 on🤔? that’s weird😵‍💫.”

@kovici7226 Год назад

I'm weird. I'm a weirdo. I don't... *fit* in - I don't *want* to fit in.

@kkelseym 4 года назад

The problems start with it being an “adult fantasy” book with a main character that is 16 years old...

@withcindy 4 года назад

i think adult books can still feature main characters that are teenagers! i've liked a couple that are technically adult fiction but have a focus on teens. this one tho... iono bout dat

@15nicinho 4 года назад

Plenty of adult books have main characters that are teens. A song of ice and fire follows children 12 and younger.

@TheMorrigan31 4 года назад

That doesn't have to be bad, it's the execution that makes or breaks it. Just look at mistborn, the protagonist there is also a teenage girl and that's done pretty well

@duckielooloui 4 года назад

@@15nicinho then what makes it adult fiction/fantasy?

@Kateiswriting 4 года назад

"The problems start with it being an adult fantasy book with a SEXUALISED main character who is 16 years old" FTFY

@graca6629 4 года назад

I love how they managed to sneak "live, laugh, love" into a book about edgy assassins

@itsclemtime2357 4 года назад

Graça G. I’m laughing my ass off in class rn and I think everyone’s looking at me.. 0__0

@giovanniferesin5344 4 года назад

"I'm not like other elements of the periodic table. I'm a plastic bag, drifting through the wind, wanting to start again" -Franz Kafka, The Metamorphosis (probably)

@butteredbananas1394 4 года назад

I love Franz Katy- I mean Kafka

@CritiquingCricket 4 года назад

Oh my God XD

@withcindy 4 года назад

- Martin Luther King Jr

@lore5751 4 года назад

- Zuko from the Avatar

@leukemia6175 4 года назад

Katy perry song?

@txton1346 4 года назад

Im not like the other igrls, my entire BODY is made out of plastic. My beauty is unrivalled, and the other girls are QUAKING. Mia is trembling. Conventional beauty standards? Gone. I have BECOME the beauty standard.

@cassualtea2040 4 года назад

OH OH THIS REMINDS ME OF SOMETHING Namely the song "The Girl With The Prefabricated Heart" by The Real Tuesday Welds, which tells a much better story than this book does in less than 6 min.

@xXyukinashiroganeXx 4 года назад

"I have BECOME the beauty standard." I have BECOME...a Barbie girl. In a Barbie world.

@cemeterygxtes 2 года назад

i am become the beauty standard

@gregjayonnaise8314 2 года назад

I wish I had this confidence

@paigemosher8697 Год назад

So, what, like Shaye St. John?

@vanman7169 4 года назад

This book: Looks aren’t important, but Mia needs plastic surgery to unlock her full potential :/

@mariebaillet9800 4 года назад

Is this the right place to say that I would really like to see a boy femme fatale ? Like, the suprême Himbo. You can't resist his jawline and his really tight shirts and chiseled abs. Not in a "he is a mle protag so he is hot" But in a "oh, yeah, that's Chad. Fights sirtless so you Are too distracted by his 12 pack to see He has a gun to your forehead."

@jennali9800 4 года назад

@@kidawesomeness123 I hate that book

@justinyoung8212 4 года назад

@Brijae B nope

@AikiraBeats 4 года назад

Right like this just got me

@Casein_nitrat3 4 года назад

Marie Baillet ooo your comment reminds me of that big burly character from fullmetal alchemist ( something armstrong, I can't remember names for the life of me) if you've seen the show then you probably know what I'm talking about lol

@Matteus2109 4 года назад

Christ Cindy. Be careful when turning these pages you don't cut yourself on all this edge.

@flamingcourtstudios 4 года назад

Is that a doki doki literature club reference....

@rhysalex7714 4 года назад

Top assassin advice: Live, laugh, love.

@marmeykakile749 4 года назад

It should be kill, laugh, love 👁👄👁 missed opportunity

@starrynight5207 3 года назад

karens coming out

@stbananastein 3 года назад

I noticed that, too! I was waiting for the 'live' to slip in there, and the author did not disappoint.

@5isacolor213 3 года назад

gaslight, gatekeep, girlboss

@CoRLex-jh5vx 4 года назад

Assassin School: being ugly....is a 💖💗💞💓 blessing 💕💖💗💞.....you can go 💛 unnoticed 💛.... Also Assassin School: biG TiDdY LidDy

@Alexfolledemoi 3 года назад

The way i screamed 🤣🤣🤣🤣

@memetastic01 4 года назад

His descriptions are very: Hi my name is Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way and I have long ebony black hair (that's how I got my name) with purple streaks and red tips that reaches my mid-back and icy blue eyes like limpid tears and a lot of people tell me I look like Amy Lee (AN: if u don't know who she is get da hell out of here!). I'm not related to Gerard Way but I wish I was because he's a major fucking hottie. I'm a vampire but my teeth are straight and white. I have pale white skin. I'm also a witch, and I go to a magic school called Hogwarts in England where I'm in the seventh year (I'm seventeen). I'm a goth (in case you couldn't tell) and I wear mostly black. I love Hot Topic and I buy all my clothes from there. For example today I was wearing a black corset with matching lace around it and a black leather miniskirt, pink fishnets and black combat boots. I was wearing black lipstick, white foundation, black eyeliner and red eye shadow.

@withcindy 4 года назад

i hate that ur making me read this

@Okapeep 4 года назад

It's perfect 😂

@sailorcandy6633 4 года назад

Descriptions usually written by kids is being written by a 40 year old

@musicalnerds101 4 года назад

This took 5 years off my life

@ceciliacrasto4602 4 года назад

I'm CACKLING

@maxvo1675 4 года назад

that description of her sounds like male poets who say "violets are growing in the shadows under your eyes" about girls who are in toxic relationships with them

@withcindy 4 года назад

NOOOOOO I HATE THAT THIS IS TRUE

@iwakeupandboomimarat 4 года назад

DID YOU LIE THO 😭😭😭

@nomdeplume1358 4 года назад

BITCH WHAT THE FUCK? WHAT THE FUCK 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭I CAN'T 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😭

@trisarahtops6167 4 года назад

But they’re not violets, they’re skin, and they’ll always be skin :3 (I’ve heard the poem)

@marquisealexander1371 4 года назад

The apple of your eye grows admits a sea of lavender and morning glory Where once before; upon the hills, only roses did bloom Desperate pleas lie deaf upon ears of the holy As the silence blares your resounding doom Like this if you cry every time 😭

@triceratops5743 4 года назад

cindy: she's not like other girls me: *deep sigh*

@withcindy 4 года назад

here we go again

@jacklegend5798 4 года назад

I love what Jenna Moreci had to say on the subject: "How is she not like other girls; does she have a tail?"

@superswagmimi4237 4 года назад

Jack Legend when she’s your irl neko anime waifu 😍😘😚😝😋😜💖😚💞😚💗😘😍😝💞☺️💗😘💗😚💗😚💞😋😚💞😌☺️😳😍😝💖😔😳😄😳😚💖😍😚😳💖💗💞

@hsmacaraig 4 года назад

*n o o o o o o o*

@billuraral1870 4 года назад

@@withcindy mamma mia

@MinaReads 4 года назад

this author told me i make "worthless noise on the internet" and it turns out he makes worthless noise on the NYT bestseller list! who knew we had so much in common 😳

@MinaReads 4 года назад

THE OINKING SEA DKJFHSKJHF

@withcindy 4 года назад

His writing is so.... Well ... Let's just say that he's hardly worth being offended over lmao

@akhilanarayanan3270 4 года назад

"Looks don't matter, it's what's on the inside that counts." Ok... then why does your "ugly" female character need plastic surgery in order to unlock her full potential and get her man? This is literally Yennefer from the Witcher and a few other fantasy stories I can't name right now. Like, if being ugly "builds character" or some shit...Why not just... let them be ugly AND powerful. Like this is such a great opportunity to actually put that into action

@withcindy 4 года назад

LET UGLY GIRLS BE POWERFUL U COWARDS!!!!!!

@alexanderboleyn2058 4 года назад

Akhila Narayanan but at least with Yennefer she did it because of insecurities and 100 years later (lmao) realized it’s useless! This girl right here became like those Insta models saying "love yourself" after changing her whole appearance 😂😂😂

@akhilanarayanan3270 4 года назад

@@alexanderboleyn2058 yeah that's true with Yennefer. I guess alina from the grisha trilogy is a better comparison lol. "I'm not like other girls, i'm skinny and ugly and boys don't like me. but wait! now that I can use my superpowers i'm suddenly pretty and Mal notices me!" like so much for true unconditional love lmfao (yes I do realize that even after she became sickly again in book 2 he still chose her but the original point still stands. why did she need to become pretty in the first place)

@ELFNY 4 года назад

The male students also get cosmetic surgery and they all get seduction lessons. Cindy left that part out because it conflicted with her "male author gross" narrative.

@blackk_rose_ 4 года назад

@@ELFNY she mentions it with the guy with the tattoos but ok

@slimjimjr96 4 года назад

THAT PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION OF THE MAIN CHARACTER CANNOT BE REAL OHMYGOD THE FLESH OF HER EYES??? IF HER FACE WAS A PUZZLE???? DUDE

@reynhacoezy5510 4 года назад

I cannot write but it seems excessive and Weong on so many levels .

@madimcclanahan3144 3 года назад

Has he even looked at a human? 😂

@snthenightvisitor245 Год назад

It's hella excessive of a description. There's poetic prose and there's 13 year old edgy Wattpad writers trying poetic prose lmao

@nanizet 4 года назад

I am absolutely losing my MIND at "oinking sea" WHERE WAS THE EDITOR?! WHO APPROVED THAT FJAKCKSKFK

@withcindy 4 года назад

it's a beautiful metaphor if u think about it

@kiera6326 4 года назад

What sea do we know that oinks?

@ivymoody4238 4 года назад

@The Fool wait, so I'm confused are you serious? Or just making a joke? Considering your name

@JudgeNicodemus 4 года назад

@@kiera6326 Clearly you use the secret Joestar family technique!

@nayanavachharajani6141 4 года назад

Right up there with barking pain

@redthunderbird7332 4 года назад

This author is like "this character is beautiful but NOT conventionally attractive" and then goes onto list conventionally attractive features that they have like being thin and pale

@barryallen2240 Год назад

They have hair, not like other girls.

@atanvardecunambiel8917 Год назад

With how many times Mia was described as thin and pale, I couldn’t help but imagine her as a skeleton.

@animeotaku307 Год назад

@@atanvardecunambiel8917That would have actually been interesting.

@unhackerthelaziestbastardo6083 Год назад

And then getting surgery to become more beautiful.

@apho-sappho Год назад

@@atanvardecunambiel8917 I'm not like other girls, I'm a literal skeleton

@karavoltron3143 4 года назад

Mia: my name is Ebony Dark’ness Dementia Raven Way

@damatically 4 года назад

Dont compare Mia to the real edge Queen you might awaken the evil from the grave

@chrispycreme69 4 года назад

Oh my god I hate that I understood that djsnsjsj

@Jogjosmowwdkfs 4 года назад

I hate I remember this

@withcindy 4 года назад

mia walked so ebony could run

@karavoltron3143 4 года назад

readwithcindy facts

@liv.s. 4 года назад

*This entire book is literally r/menwritingwomen*

@withcindy 4 года назад

yes it is

@liangcruz6543 4 года назад

like the legendary passage - she titted boobily down the stairs

@muntu1221 4 года назад

@@liangcruz6543 "She breasted boobily as she titted down the stairs." Greatest line in literature.

@5Ship_Cat_Lady2368 4 года назад

@@muntu1221 I'm cackling WHAT IS THIS FROM I NEED TO KNOW

@a2-2b-9s 4 года назад

@@muntu1221 Lmaoooo I saw this in a tumblr post, still greatest line of all time

@InsaneLaughter01 4 года назад

The bigger the Tatas, the more the female power. Hmmmm sounds like anime logic. I’m a 46 F so I must be powerful af. Lmao

@Rime_in_Retrograde 4 года назад

Well that certainly explains Tsunade.

@aaw4234 4 года назад

There's actually a anime like that. xd

@itsclemtime2357 4 года назад

CelesKyuz what anime is it?

@khatunamezvrishvili6211 4 года назад

@@aaw4234 answer

@unclewiley1986 4 года назад

@@khatunamezvrishvili6211 Jay Kristoff killed them before they could answer

@angelblades6029 4 года назад

also im wary of any “outspoken feminist” female character whos written by a man bc 90% of the time they have no clue what theyre talking about bc they have little nuanced understanding of the sexism women experience. when u read that monologue abt mia ~reclaiming gendered slurs~ and ~going off about sexism~ it just SCREAMED “im a man who thinks i know what feminists think about stuff”

@danielbroome5690 4 года назад

So by extension, you'd rather men NOT bring up sexism or feminism when writing a character at all? Or merely that they have to take a university-level course to be an expert on it?

@eczemiclinkaye9088 4 года назад

Daniel Broome They’re simply saying that if a man endeavors to write a female character in first person (or if someone wants to write a character who they can’t relate to) they should do research, it’s the same with every book. Consult people who shares a trait with the character so the writing doesn’t accidentally anger someone. The writer could just assume things from their friends or their family but piecing things together won’t work, what that person wasn’t directly announcing is unknown and the writer filling in the blanks simply doesn’t feel right. They should ask what they feel as a person who fits into the group they’re focusing on, what do most writers get wrong, what do most writers get right? Of course, sometimes they’re irrationally lackadaisical and research is not for them, that’s acceptable as long as they can acclimate to the indignation and odium they have caused that is pointed towards them. Their project that they have tended to for months or years is absolutely egregious because they didn’t want to put in the effort, that’s fine, they just have to live with it and if they can’t then they should’ve done their research.

@danielbroome5690 4 года назад

@@eczemiclinkaye9088 I know i was mostly joking with them

@justalostlocal 4 года назад

@@danielbroome5690 idk man your first comment doesn't read like a joke, it's kinda sketchy.

@justalostlocal 4 года назад

@@danielbroome5690 Alright, just wanted to let you know how it hit the ear, given the fact that someone feels the need to explain, my opinion or bias isn't unfounded. Too often on the internet they're people saying questionable things and when someone take offence they'll say "it's a joke" to avoid confrontation.

@alexiavasquez4019 4 года назад

This man is desperately trying to up his word count

@withcindy 4 года назад

but at what cost...

@melanfolly 4 года назад

The moment I saw this, I shuddered. I knew that my past was creeping up on me once more. “No,” I whispered, shaking my head frantically. It was back, haunting my dreams, leaking into reality. There was no escaping it, no running away. Here, it stood before me. Big tiddy liddy.

@guessmyname1246 4 года назад

LOL

@gabrielavo512 4 года назад

How is your paragraph better than the actual big tiddy novel???

@zyonhenderson67 4 года назад

@@melanfolly I am still mad that big titty liddy is not real.... But hey nice use of personification! "Leaking into reality" was a nice touch

@jconnor1337 4 года назад

BTL? Pssf, has noting on PTC

@nataliaalmeida-nacillustra5954 4 года назад

It's like fanfiction, but worse, because it's not.

@animeotaku307 Год назад

And because there are fanfics much better than this.

@catrocks7180 4 года назад

"she takes out a cigar and goes into a monologue" Thomas Shelby has entered the chat

@withcindy 4 года назад

Peak edginess indeed

@beetljam792 4 года назад

@@withcindy more like peaky edginess _ba dum tss_

@ambo6513 4 года назад

Blow my cooch...by ordah of the peaky fookin blindahs

@eastgapeach 4 года назад

😂😂😂

@haleywells7369 4 года назад

YESSS 😂😂

@sawrirocks 4 года назад

This book is so offensive on so many levels...it's stressing me out. Might look at some pigs in the sea to calm myself.

@yukikanegawa7470 4 года назад

Gotchu fam just pretend it's drowning or else your edgelord credentials might get revoked ru-vid.com/video/%D0%B2%D0%B8%D0%B4%D0%B5%D0%BE-2xCGUOSoIB8.html

@JudgeNicodemus 4 года назад

See the main difference between pigs in the sea and sea piglets is that the former gives me whiplash whilst the later is cute in an eldritch way.

@hsmacaraig 4 года назад

AHAH

@Thecatsworlds 4 года назад

Pigs in the sea? Do you mean fat sea otters? Or manatees?

@dreamer1-7 4 года назад

I looked up pigs in the sea and now I have a new coping ritual lol thank you

@hfollman98 4 года назад

Katara from Avatar is always the example I give of a non-"femme fatale", powerful female character

@withcindy 4 года назад

YES!!! LOVE HER

@hfollman98 4 года назад

@@withcindy Omg I love YOU 🥺

@hfollman98 4 года назад

What I mean specifically is being "strong" and being "feminine" are not mutually exclusive. Katara acts as a loving, caring, deeply emotional, mother figure for the group AND is also one of the most powerful non-Avatar waterbenders in the ATLA universe.

@EdgePatrol 4 года назад

Katara is also my go-to example of a proper strong female character who isn't a femme-fatale. I'm getting sick of the trope of a female character not being, "strong," until she's completely emotionless and merciless and most importantly, sexy.

@melaniep4099 4 года назад

YES MAAM KATARA IS A QUEEN

@angelblades6029 4 года назад

15:44 “you are appealing to women who want a feminist character, but you’re not alienating the men who still ogle at all the sexiness” PERFECTLY SAID. ive been trying to explain this idea for a while but i havent been able to pin it down into words. this is the exact reason why the overuse of the femme fatale trope bothers me so much.

@KangMinseok Год назад

What's wrong with not alienating men who like sexy women...

@schnoz2372 Год назад

@@KangMinseok you're missing the point. The writing is shit. If you're writing for the sole purpose of fanservice, your writing is dogshit. Do you get it now?

@KangMinseok Год назад

@@schnoz2372 which part is fanservice, to appeal to women who want a feminist character or to not wanting to alienate men who like sexy women?

@AleksandarBell Год назад

@@KangMinseok Because appealing to men who want a sex item instead of a real person is anti feminist

@KangMinseok Год назад

@@AleksandarBell So being sexy is not feminist and being feminist is not sexy? Since being sexy always appeals to men who like/want sex... I guess it comes down to your definition of feminism; if yours is "feminist character = unattractive to men", then I get your point. I thought feminism was about equality and freedom (including the freedom to be a sex bomb, if a woman choses so). A woman that is forced to be modest and stay at home... well that sounds like the actual anti feminism to me.

@amlugonnen5106 4 года назад

Whenever I get worried about my writing and the characters in my stories, I remember these books exist and I become much more confident in everything I create.

@l.cristea9062 4 года назад

Same haha

@pakki6555 4 года назад

@Rivenlore99 4 года назад

Me too :)

@toastercat2946 4 года назад

Yo same

@khaygiel 4 года назад

Right? I have some books that really weren't worth the cost of buying them but I keep them around to remind myself when I'm in a slump that if some of those stories can get published, then my writing is probably a little better the raging dumpsterfire I think it is

@turntechgenetic 4 года назад

ah yes, the three genders: iron, glass and steel. nonbinary gang we finally got our rep !

@withcindy 4 года назад

tag urself i'm a plastic bag

@zicheng531 4 года назад

readwithcindy drifting through the wind

@sapphoslovechild 4 года назад

cillie wanting to start again

@briannaabel8854 4 года назад

@@sapphoslovechild do you ever feel

@horse_stan6007 4 года назад

@@briannaabel8854 like a plastic bag

@catrocks7180 4 года назад

"he had the kind of beauty that dimmed all the light around him" My boi is Edward Cullen in the sun.

@ce2araybara226 4 года назад

This is good

@withcindy 4 года назад

EDWARD MAKES A CAMEO?!?

@tsifirakiehl4250 Год назад

I’m so sick of female characters being written like “oh she’s so plain” *launches into description of how gorgeous she is.* Why can’t we have a leading lady who knows she’s pretty? Or-and the world might not be ready for this-one who’s legitimately unattractive? Or maybe her beauty or lack thereof isn’t relevant to the plot, so we get a neutral description of her appearance, e. g., “She was tall and light-skinned, with unevenly cut black hair and hazel eyes,” and decide for ourselves whether we find her attractive or not?

@Faceless_Cryptid Год назад

THIS. I think it's to display a sense of humility to have the character describe herself as ugly, but not truly make her "ugly" enough to be off putting to the people who only like pretty characters. But then they are never characterized properly as having low self esteem and showing the constant struggle of body dysmorphia, it's only something tacked on the end so the love interest can tell them they actually are pretty.

@mummytrolls 9 месяцев назад

There’s no need for the narrator describing the attractiveness at all. We as readers can decide for ourselves if we find them attractive. The writer can also use other characters to show attractiveness. If people are all over them and flirting frequently, we can assume they’re conventionally attractive. If they struggle to get a date we can assume there’s something unattractive/unappealing whether it be appearance or personality. We can read and judge if their behavior seems weird or offputting. It boils down to show don’t tell. I don’t wanna read “MC is the most gorgeous girl in her school.” Mention some conventionally attractive traits. I want to read about how all the guys are flirting with her, she’s super popular, she’s been spring fling queen three years in a row and she doesn’t plan on her senior year being the only exception, etc. I don’t wanna read “MC is ugly.” Mention some traits that aren’t conventionally attractive. I want to notice the lack of guys flirting with her, how she’s never had a date, a guy asked her out once but as a joke, she’s had braces since grade 7 yet it’s her senior year and everyone still calls her “braceface”. Show don’t tell.

@GoldenWreck 5 месяцев назад

@@mummytrolls Ok but idk about using braces to express someone being unconventionally attractive tho, that just seems more like a stereotype imo. It also just depends on the person, cuz one can find braces very attractive as well 🤷‍♀

@mummytrolls 5 месяцев назад

@@GoldenWreck Well duh I said conventionally attractive that’s based on stereotypes and shit idc if you find braces attractive or not most ppl don’t that’s the point

@GoldenWreck 5 месяцев назад

@@mummytrolls Well speak for yourself cuz a lotta people I know don't care if someone has braces or not 🤷‍♀ I guess they're just built different then lol

@enyahowell 4 года назад

The devil works hard and frankly Cindy would like him to stop

@withcindy 4 года назад

please make it stop

@zacharyhawley1693 4 года назад

😂

@victoriashevlin8587 4 года назад

Satan: please stop attributing shit like this to me... Satan: Has left the chat.

@nevaehlheaven 4 года назад

I do too

@atree9284 4 года назад

Can we just talk about how she probably had to google “pigs in the sea” for that one bit?

@withcindy 4 года назад

yes i did

@biazacha 4 года назад

@@withcindy we salute your dedication

@jaymesEo6 4 года назад

@@withcindy There were strangely enough so many pictures of this subject matter. I'm kind of afraid...

@wisperrose 4 года назад

It's actually a huge thing in the Bahamas

@sauletol 4 года назад

I started to laugh at that part xdd

@clarytaylor8582 4 года назад

“they can’t replace your heart” umm i sure hope my cardiologist wasn’t lying bout that one cause otherwise i’m in ~danger~

@jennali9800 4 года назад

LMAO

@brynn6349 4 года назад

@The Fool wtf

@liyan00 4 года назад

Unrelated, but the comment has 666 likes and I can't help but ruin it

@sutomuarashi 4 года назад

OOOF

@rosa-acicularis7368 4 года назад

"I don't know why he made her sixteen" We know why.

@seanderoiste4661 4 года назад

I’m not like most girls I am actually dying from malnourishment HELP!!!!

@ayeshas.3544 4 года назад

LMAOO

@prosevspoetry 4 года назад

just wondering if gays exist in these worlds like what happens when the target is a gay dude?

@rabbitrulez 4 года назад

They probably win and become the series villian only to secretly use the Female protagonists bf to get to the female character. The bf will die and let the villian become deranged leaving the female protagonist kill him only for her to date the second man in line as her bf.

@rectrixity 4 года назад

shes fucked ig, FEAR THE POWER OF THE GAYS AND ASEXUALS

@toastercat2946 4 года назад

I would read the hell out of a book like that

@magalimizuki3752 4 года назад

A Webtoon Comic depicted this in Winter Moon, where Risa seduces other players in the game to get gold and she wrongly decides her next target to seduce who is a gay mage named Florence who enslaves her for a while.

@sayismartinez7615 4 года назад

The main character is bisexual. Later on her bestfriend/girlfriend is a lesbian.

@peachprincess8486 3 года назад

I like how Mia is told its good that she isnt too beautiful so she doesn't get noticed but later on they make her undergo the operation to make her seductive. It has the same energy as when men tell women they like no makeup but expect a fully contoured dewy foundation-painted face. Either way thank you for your videos Cindy!

@queenb2450 Год назад

Idk why this reminds me of the "Uglies" series???? Did this guy just copy that lmaooo (I know this is super late)

@animeotaku307 Год назад

@@queenb2450At least Uglies was a dystopian commentary on our beauty standards. There was an excuse for surgeries to make girls more attractive.

@failmixer 4 года назад

"you're a girl with a knife and your bangs aren't cut straight" I choked

@withcindy 4 года назад

so different.... so unique

@ivymoody4238 4 года назад

I'm a girl with a knife, and my bangs were cut by me, so they're kinda crooked. *Le gasp* I'm so unique, so special

@M-CH_ 4 года назад

Try cutting your bangss with a knife and see if it comes out straight.

@hsmacaraig 4 года назад

HAH-

@woahthisisinteresting4369 4 года назад

@@M-CH_ mulan-

@lynmaerodriguezroman3128 4 года назад

I wish I had self esteem this man has. The way that he's able to write absolute nonsense and publish it with pride, that lack of shame. A crumb sir, I'm begging.

@withcindy 4 года назад

I wish I did too! I wanna feel good about myself lol

@parkerisles7256 4 года назад

It's more amazing this was published and he made money off of it.

@SergioLeonardoCornejo 4 года назад

@@parkerisles7256 as an indie author myself it is works like this which made me lose all respect for traditional publishing.

@snokful 4 года назад

The "grant me the confidence of a mediocre white man" kind of thing? 😅

@queerlibtardhippie9357 4 года назад

@@parkerisles7256 Well he had published before, and the book is physically attractive so I'm not surprised

@kitty-cn7mv 4 года назад

I love when author's idea of a "badass" female character is abusing their poor sidekicks, nothing screams being powerful like being a bully.

@chillitheconqueror3567 Год назад

Yeah, what's up with that? Do authors just not know how to write a cool, feminist female character without her being a bully???

@laurapinto6204 4 года назад

middle aged man writing a teen girl: okay so she smokes. not cigarettes. that’s juvenile. CIGARS. yes because teen girls just carry those around so that they can dramatically monologue. of course. idk why i don’t have a daughter, i was born to have one.

@RebaMedia 4 года назад

Every time they get tricked by their assassin teachers: Fool me once, shame on you Fool me twice, shame on me Fool me 15 times in a row and I suspect literally nothing, how am I still in this secret cutthroat assassin school???

@withcindy 4 года назад

they all need to be expelled

@mariebaillet9800 4 года назад

But I mean imagine the potential for trope subversion ! Like, Teacher : behold ! The mascarade invitations ! Every student : we all agree this Is a trap right ? And then its bonding time with the team as they prepare counter measures for what their creepy cunnilingus teacher has in store for them

@jaydenhuell9436 4 года назад

this some death note logic

@cheeto.burrito 4 года назад

I haven't even read the previous context and the second an instructor at a an assassin school said "masquerade ball" I just thought "Yeah nah they're gonna fucking die"

@oliviavaughn6160 4 года назад

"Power. I have a kind of power now." Yes. The power to never be able to run comfortably again.

@MortMe0430 4 года назад

true story

@Sandy-ep4uq 4 года назад

years and years of being laughed at during p.e. :')

@oliviavaughn6160 4 года назад

@@Sandy-ep4uq OMG YEAH. Like, sports bras? Where we're going, we can't FIND sports bras. *zips down road, has to slow down before ever reaching 88*

@nunyabusiness776 4 года назад

or walk down the stairs lmaooo

@oliviavaughn6160 4 года назад

@@nunyabusiness776 HA yessss. Stairs are a forever no.

@algonzorithm 4 года назад

Really amazed by how many of these fictional assassin girls train their bodies for years to become living weapons, but always remain bone-thin with not a drop of muscle mass. Must be a metabolic issue.

@SantosAl 4 года назад

I guess they don't eat Enough?

@isabelleward7858 4 года назад

I love Skulduggery Pleasant bc Valkyrie ends up Jacked As Fuck

@josephedwardsarena9487 4 года назад

Caelena sardothein is kinda jacked

@meganfaith4052 4 года назад

Why are there no strong muscle women? Give me those ladies you cowards

@withcindy 4 года назад

the muscle mass is in the boobie

@amonrawya3064 4 года назад

I have such a huge issue with suicide being discribed as beautiful. It is not. It is messy, painful, sad and awful. There is no beauty. That language is part of the problem in media of romanticising suicide and mental health issues. I despise it, and the instant I ever come across that in a book, I'll take it back to the shop. Its an utterly dangerous and disgusting mindset to give out to young people. I have many, many issues with this book just from watching this video, and I love how you've done it, Cindy. As someone who loves assassin stories, this disappoints me. For once, I just want to read about a female assassin who relishes the kill, and is sick in the head. Not all girls are morally good and always right. The sex part doesn't always bother me, if it makes sense to the story and the character. Like Natasha Romanoff, who was taught by the Red Room to use her sexuality as a weapon. That makes sense. But it doesn't always. To me, when a character is 'not like other girls/boys', they should be incredibly lonely. But they aren't, which makes it ridiculous. Like the Doctor, who for centuries was the last of his kind, literally not like anyone else, and was lonely, without a home. That's the proper way to deal with that, not à silly, immature 'different girl/boy'. The sex scènes sound disgusting 🤢 (Also, the surgery thing to change her appearance sounds like a rip-off of Yennefer from the Witcher)

@admiral_kono 3 года назад

Did I understand this right? You haven´t read the book yet, but the way Cindy presents it, which is clearly based on her own opinion and thoughts about this book, is enough for you to already have a full opinion about it. She presents it the way she feels about and that´s is in the case of "Nevernight" nothing more than disgusted. I have to say that I really liked this book and disagree with Cindy in most cases but this is her opinion. What surprises me is that you have built your own opinion about this book after watching a video in which the creator only illuminates negative things in a non-rational way.

@amonrawya3064 3 года назад

@@admiral_kono This isn't the only review I have read and watched about this book. This comment I left was a result of all of these, and me coming to form an opinion of my own. I do not plan on reading it, for the reasons I mentioned above. I'm allowed to formulate my own views on something from my own research. If you like this, fine, I don't have a problem with that. People like what they like. I've already said why I don't like what I've heard, and why I won't read it. I respect that you like it, but because of an assumption you've made off one comment you don't respect my opinion?

@admiral_kono 3 года назад

@@amonrawya3064 I think every opinion should be respected and so I respect your opinion. Your comment says that you came to your opinion about the book after this video so I thought you only watched this one. This was what surprised me because I think this book review is more a sarcastic one sided entertainment than a rational criticism with pros and cons.

@amonrawya3064 3 года назад

@@admiral_kono Her commentary is usually sarcastic, but I find her points to be very good. What I meant in my comment is that after watching this video, I had found out all I needed to frame my opinion. It was late at the time, so I could have been clearer about that.

@74jf92jd 3 года назад

Yes I love going into the replies of a controversial comment and seeing rational people having a respectful debate. I congratulate you two.

@denofentropy 4 года назад

Me: The clay ground was a ruddy red Kristoff: The soil was soft like skin but firm, not letting the caked, traumatized leather boots sink beneath it. The color was near the shade of blood, though slightly off, like the sangrine of a corpse several hours old. The brownish tint giving a sense of ancientness, a kind of dirtly wisdom.

@withcindy 4 года назад

i hate that u made me read this

@marggaunt1311 4 года назад

“Traumitized leather boots” IM SCREAMING

@abbemiller3085 4 года назад

Dirtly wisdom 😆😆😆

@Jackylification 4 года назад

I completely cracked up at ‘dirtly wisdom’

@Romanticoutlaw 4 года назад

lawd. I fall victim to purple prose but even I don’t write like this dude, and thank god. It’s just. Too Much.

@iminer978 4 года назад

"...So THEN you blow on it. Also, remember to compress to the rhythm of ''Stayin' Alive' by the 'Bee Gees', and remember: chicks dig slam poetry.'" -This instructor, probably, while holding back tears of laughter

@darkhearttantibus2766 4 года назад

.....taken out of context, this quote is me trying to perform a CPR, probably

@psyche5200 4 года назад

"First I was afraid, I was petrified..."

@frostpersonal3758 4 года назад

underrated comment

@coffee_person938 4 года назад

@@psyche5200 "Kept thinking i could never live without you by my side..."

@abbywolffe4114 4 года назад

I'm holding back tears of laughter reading this

@clairemarie7027 4 года назад

"oinking sea" i imagined ocean waves that oinked as they hit the beach, i couldn't help but laugh

@xRaiofSunshine 4 года назад

That’d be an improvement 😂

@sol8449 4 года назад

I hate the beach even though I live by one but I’d go everyday just to hear the waves oinking at me.

@desireeskumachan 4 года назад

God. It was so funny, I actually consider Oinking Sea legit as a genius stroke of writing as compared to all the other shitstorm

@vardell9409 4 года назад

Read this before watching the video; and I'm utterly intrigued, to say the least 😂😂

@JRyan-lu5im 3 года назад

I can just see a creepy pasta on this, "I listened to the waves, now all I hear is squealing..."

@allyssamccray7380 4 года назад

Ebony Darkness Dementia Raven Way, but Hogwarts is for assassins

@TheAdarkerglow 4 года назад

"Beautiful like a fresh suicide." CRRRRAWWWWWLLING IN MY SKIN!

@abbywolffe4114 4 года назад

I'm _crying_ that is hilarious

@StudlyFudd13 4 года назад

THESES WOOOOUNDS THEY WIIIIIL NOT HEEEAAAL

@brunoxd151 4 года назад

FEAR IS HOW I FAAAAALL

@HeliaAkbari 4 года назад

Loooool

@taehyungsstepstool6417 3 года назад

Lmao

@birdiejett3163 4 года назад

Feminist reader: Why is the female heroine so awkwardly sexualized?! Absolutely Brilliant Award-Winning Writer: You don’t understand, she uses her sexuality to trick and murder people! Reader: Wha-how is that better?!!

@rueluxprince6982 4 года назад

because weaponized femininity for the win

@abbyk2166 4 года назад

Isn’t that just The Witcher lol

@ellie7646 4 года назад

@@abbyk2166 Oh god I hated that tv show so much

@sarakhan-pk7ko 4 года назад

@@abbyk2166 can you elaborate more on this please

@gliscorpropagandaaccount1764 4 года назад

One of my favorite female characters is quite horny and one of her main physical features is giant tits, but she gets a ton of development and her defining personality trait is her kindness, which is so defining that she literally manipulates time in her favor to help her friends. Of course, she is played/written by a woman.

@rithikamadhusha1708 4 года назад

What does Jay Kristoff think steel is? "I'm not iron, I'm an iron-carbon alloy. A lot of preps stare at me. I put my middle finger up at them."

@coffee_person938 4 года назад

that my immortal reference i-

@iwakeupandboomimarat 4 года назад

MY IMMORTAL???

@user-mx7tj3jz1y 4 года назад

@@iwakeupandboomimarat i hate that I understood what you were talking about. I hate it

@pastelnova6936 4 года назад

That reference tho

@serdsouza6670 4 года назад

Everywhere I go, My Immortal follows

@lindseyspuria424 3 года назад

I…I cannot believe a grown man wrote an entire monologue where a young female character says, “the c word is empowering, actually” What the hell

@baintreachas 9 месяцев назад

Where I’m from it’s not even a particularly strong cuss, much less considered a gendered slur… and I still found that monologue painful lmao

@infinitemausoleum721 4 года назад

Only like five minutes in but like, if this guy wanted her to be 'unattractive' but have a distinct appearance, why not say that her features are sunken? So sunken you can see her skull clearly. You could even say something like "The rumors were right. She was, literally, the face of death" Also mark my words a school of assassins would have a *massive* problem with academic dishonestly.

@trevingrayek1671 4 года назад

I have been reworking an idea for a character to look a lot like this with the addition of having bone powers. Very ghoul-like.

@coffee_person938 4 года назад

@@trevingrayek1671 bone powers? can you please elaborate?

@crispyein8601 4 года назад

toaster bubblebath *_megalovania intensifies_*

@trevingrayek1671 4 года назад

toaster bubblebath Like Marrow from X-men only WAY more versatile

@coffee_person938 4 года назад

@@trevingrayek1671 hmm, that sounds pretty cool

@Sleipnirseight 4 года назад

I feel like there's a big difference between having a love for the craft, and whatever is the literary equivalent of someone who loves to hear themselves talk

@siriuslyconfused1 4 года назад

Purple prose.

@billuraral1870 4 года назад

👏👏👏👏👏

@davinat1262 4 года назад

I’m sorry but how weird is your writing for Cindy to not like the sex scene???????????

@catcher881 4 года назад

Bringing up the real issue here!

@withcindy 4 года назад

it's a damn shame... my standards are piss poor too

@biazacha 4 года назад

I had to pause the video on the sex scene cause I was laughing so damn much my eyes where teared and my stomach starting to hurt.

@xRaiofSunshine 4 года назад

That’s when you KNOW you done goofed

@thetimetravellingtailor6323 4 года назад

He said that her legs were flying into the air and that her back was arched... Our gal need an exorcism???

@AdaTheWatcher 2 года назад

He was licking out the demons lmfao

@bluefairy7653 Год назад

@@AdaTheWatcher NOT THIS SKSDJVOVVEUHF

@ZiriO 4 года назад

"An edgy sixteen year old joins an assassin school with other edgy sixteen year olds to seek vengeance on the people who killed her family" ....oh my gosh you guys he wrote an anime, there's our problem right there.

@nonsensicalabyss 4 года назад

Hey thats insulting to anime 😠

@joyc.e.7511 3 года назад

That sounds like the very edgy, generic, self-insert-y anime

@ImperialFister 3 года назад

You know, you're right. I respect that

@pianoismyeverything 3 года назад

Generic Anime plot

@aahana4931 3 года назад

lowkey sounds like a harem anime

@steg8048 4 года назад

When Cindy hates a book I love: embodies crying cat meme, feelings hurt, skin thinner than a grape When Cindy critiques a book I hate: let me get snacks

@sagetucker5558 4 года назад

Types of "Other girls" 1) She is dark, scary, deep and only speaks in riddles and questions. She only wears black. 2) she us too smart for you and doesn't care about fashion and makeup. She doesn't like parites so she stays at home studying. 3) She is too sweet, too perfect. But she doesn't see that in herself, she is constantly looking down on herself. 4) she is sooo badass that even badass couldn't explain it. She is constantly getting praised, and every fight she gets into she wins.

@abbywolffe4114 4 года назад

7) She's super plain and "not conventionally pretty" even though she's conventionally pretty, and has the personality of a baked potato yet every boy in the world covets her 8) Her only personality trait is that she reads books.

@rebeccawhittington8979 4 года назад

9)she is a bit (or very) toxic eg: Looks down on all girls who like make-up, fashion etc and sometimes calls them sluts, whores

@Olivia-wb5tt 4 года назад

11) she's so unique because she doesn't like trends. She doesn't follow what other people like because she would never be ordinary like others. She likes her own type of music and her own stuff.

@astarlitwishforyou 4 года назад

1) Manic pixie dream girl, but goth 2) Hermione 3) Cinderella without the character development 4) Katniss

@astarlitwishforyou 4 года назад

@Jessica Lynn 5) Ginny 6) Lily Potter, but completely ignoring James's character development

@zoeb3573 Год назад

r/menwritingwomen meets "I'm 14 and this is deep" Love how she gets this whole monologue about how lucky she is to be ugly, immediately followed by plastic surgery and a boob job.

@sina3602 4 года назад

Ok but the way he described the sex scene was actually very alarming. It literally sounds like what teens put out on smut wattpad for their own pleasure and the fact that a grown man did it about a teen is disturbing. Like the details were so unnecessary and weird???

@moustik31 3 года назад

Maybe Jay Kristoff is an incel. He does share a lot of their values.

@beidjishxishbsidjishdjsicw9364 2 года назад

LMAO NOT SMUT WATTPAD

@mrstrangeworld5977 2 года назад

yh that's not true

@sina3602 2 года назад

@@mrstrangeworld5977 male

@sina3602 2 года назад

@@beidjishxishbsidjishdjsicw9364 LMFAOO did i lie tho 😭

@milliaboo765 4 года назад

cindy: there is a very *long* sex scene- me: huh. i thought cindy would dig that. cindy, one second later: -normally i like these but i did not like this one. lmaoo the bar is on the ground and this author just kept digging

@withcindy 4 года назад

a shame for sure...

@sailorcandy6633 4 года назад

I had to set that part at x2.00 speed.

@layla9167 4 года назад

cindy our god given blessing - oh wait goddess* phew almost wasnt a feminist

@withcindy 4 года назад

u better be careful!! u almost made a mistake!

@MapleDrookie 4 года назад

I don’t know why, but “oinking scene” gave me the same vibe as the “look at all those chickens” vine

@KatBlaque 4 года назад

lol. I hate this book so much I crave a bad tv show that I can also laugh at.

@julesking1303 4 года назад

love seeing my fav youtube ladies supporting each other lol

@its_just_seb 4 года назад

Didn't Piera Forde make a Nevernight TV show?

@RF-mc8cx 4 года назад

@JustSeb not low-quality enough

@Risivia 3 года назад

You and I must watch the same videos because I’ve been seeing your comments a lot.

@yayalucia7997 3 года назад

PLEASE, i want another Riverdale-style show to clown

@sena6453 4 года назад

broke: showing not telling. woke: using eighty metaphors to describe one thing.

@withcindy 4 года назад

big brain energy

@indigobeah 4 года назад

I love how Cindy knows the word ellipses exists but knows that we need the emphasis on every single period to point out just how random each excerpt is

@withcindy 4 года назад

it's for dramatic effect

@joutatheegg 4 года назад

The book: “They can give you a new face but not a new heart” Me: but they can though.... it’s called a transplant-

@KangMinseok Год назад

The fun of words that have multiple meanings.

@hanbigim Год назад

ah yes

@hanbigim Год назад

the unoriginal yet still funny enough joke

@aileencrain6558 4 года назад

“She slapped him on top his head” What? I’m picturing her reaching way up, probably jumping, cuz she’s so short, and bitchslapping his hair. How does work?

@withcindy 4 года назад

She jumped on a trampoline first

@malublue1013 4 года назад

i think they were sitting

@onibeebee 4 года назад

she did a basketball slam dunk to hit his noggin

@catrocks7180 4 года назад

He 'gently assaults' her . . Me having flashbacks to paperbackdreams' review of After.

@withcindy 4 года назад

me having flashbacks to ACOTAR

@astoldbynickgerr 4 года назад

I just got chills. The bad chills.

@ohohnenyeoo2654 4 года назад

😭😂😭

@commander31able60 4 года назад

that old man is a 16-year-old edgelord that survived into adulthood.

@reynhacoezy5510 4 года назад

How ? I thought you killed them al .

@tana4056 2 года назад

That's why I admire G.R.R. Martin. He may have not finished Winds of Winter yet but he's the only 70+ year old guy who writes 15 y. old girls so reallistically it amazes and frightenes me at the same time.

@mrstrangeworld5977 2 года назад

the context is different not ever 15 yrs old is the same

@maddieb.4282 2 года назад

@@mrstrangeworld5977 ….. are you defending the subject of this video?

@fabuloushatlady7812 4 года назад

Do..... do they think teenagers actually talk like that?

@withcindy 4 года назад

u mean YOU didnt go on edgy monologues while smoking a cigar when u were 16??

@katieclingan4995 4 года назад

when she was like “I’m not iron, I’m not glass” all I could think of was her finishing that sentence with “I’m divergent” 😂😂😂

@cee_ves 2 года назад

This guy writes like me trying to fit as many writing techniques into my essays for English as possible. I’m including 12 metaphors, 7 similes, 3 lists, 4 pieces of dialogue with abrasive tone and at least 1 description of physical setting or character a page even if it makes my blood boil like a kettle on fire in the scorching desert sun, like an erupting volcano, like the heat leaving a body after a fresh suicide

@hanbigim Год назад

omg lmao

@aries08 3 месяца назад

🎵and a partridge in a pear tree🎵

@faec.8950 23 дня назад

Lmao he really does.

@mathis3440 4 года назад

If this book was a puzzle, I’d put it back in the box

@withcindy 4 года назад

the metaphor is complete

@fivenightsatpastastuck2132 4 года назад

I FOUND FELLOW HOMEDTUCK IN THE YEAR OF OUR LORD 2020

@ashikjaman1940 4 года назад

@@fivenightsatpastastuck2132 Y'all should not read Homestuck 2 btw

@mathis3440 4 года назад

readwithcindy not until we throw that box into an oinking sea

@novirose6253 4 года назад

Cindy: This book is SO well written 🤥 Me: So it's that bad huh🤦🏾‍♀️

@withcindy 4 года назад

LMAO

@becca269 4 года назад

i’m not convinced this man has ever met a teenage girl

@glennonbell8917 4 года назад

And based on this book I don’t want him to meet one

@sailorcandy6633 4 года назад

He did research on Wattpad

@withcindy 4 года назад

let's keep it that way

@Horologica 4 года назад

That's good

@SergioLeonardoCornejo 4 года назад

Well. I don't think am edgy 40 year old dude is likely to meet a teenage girl at all. I mean. Yeah. If he was a cool 40 year old dude, rockstar level, he would have groupies ages 12 and up actively seeking him as a love interest, but edgy middle aged men are twice as unpleasant as edgy teenagers, and nobody likes edgy teenagers irl, not even other edgy teenagers.

@liannag2637 3 года назад

it terrifies me how obsessed “booktok” is with nevernight. LIKE, TEENS THINK THIS IS THE BEST LITERATURE OF THE CENTURY WHILE READING ABOUT SEXUALIZED 16 YEAR OLDS WRITTEN BY A GROWN MAN🥰

@sleepdeprived_inc. 2 года назад

Fr fr. Almost read the book bc I saw people saying it was good. So glad I didn’t have the opportunity now. Have seen better written fanfics and have clicked out for smaller. Like bro what 😭

@mistywindow16 Год назад

@@sleepdeprived_inc. Can you pass the fic recs?

@sleepdeprived_inc. Год назад

@@mistywindow16 Hell yes. (These I absolutely love btw) Fics by Killthespare on ao3 are good, their main fics being the series “Haikyuu at Hogwarts.” The first one of that series being, “Hinata and the mirror of Erised.” “The Land of His Brothers” by DOC_Holliday is good, but it hasn’t been updated in a while. “TommyInnit's Services for Villains, Vigilantes, and Various Other Vagabonds” by ScorpioNoesIt is amazing and one of my favorite fics, while being the best hero au I’ve ever read. “Whispers of Lost Reality” is a Doctor Who au done by That_One_Doc_Dragon And a good bit of the Humans Are Space Orcs fandom is fucking immaculate. I have so many good fics, but it’s been so long I can’t remember all their titles. If remember any more, I’ll be sure to link them. (Linked Universe fics are pretty damn good too btw).

@mistywindow16 Год назад

@@sleepdeprived_inc. Wow, thanks for all the recs I'll definitely check some of these out and thanks for taking some of your time to compile this list of fics!

@iclynnx Год назад

Not just s3xualized, he wrote an entire s3x scene. Couldn't the character have been at least 18? 😬

@ges4972 4 года назад

Christ. I kept waiting for you to say the seduction teacher talked about charisma. How sex wasn’t everything, how eye contact and undivided attention and confidence in speech and mannerisms could be just as effective as sexual seduction. But no. -_-

@withcindy 4 года назад

What a bad teacher lmao

@aspic5881 4 года назад

Exactly! There are so many things that can make someone eye-catching even without being traditionnally attractive.

@auggiemain 4 года назад

The author: Beautiful like a suicide Me, who was throwing up disgusting yellow bile for 23 hours after trying to commit suicide: Bish, wha? Edit: I'm okay now guys my parents are trying to find me a counselor to help me but it's been hard because of everything going on but I'm fine, or at least, will be. Thanks for the concern and I love all of you too!

@withcindy 4 года назад

ya.... iono about that

@lore5751 4 года назад

Wtf suicide isn’t beautiful