Accolade 

This was really pretty. I am playing this song for (Junior high) Concert Assessment and I think that the brass was a little loud at some parts when the woodwinds had things like when we start playing at 59. Other than that it was pretty❤❤❤

Bells should have been used to make trumpets and flutes/woodwinds come out more and be more pronounced

I think trumpets should have quieted down a little bit. The flutes and other high woodwinds were barely audible, even during times when their parts are supposed be to more pronounced, such as the second part of the flute and solo alto sax “duet”.