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@a.r.hollowayauthor7210
@a.r.hollowayauthor7210 Месяц назад
DON'T! TOUCH! THE BOATS! - Humanity, even from the dead.
@carebloodlaevathein6732
@carebloodlaevathein6732 Месяц назад
They never listen, do they?
@gordonlin1260
@gordonlin1260 Месяц назад
Yup…
@TheBombanater
@TheBombanater Месяц назад
A.R.E.S: Would you intercept me? I'd intercept me
@carebloodlaevathein6732
@carebloodlaevathein6732 Месяц назад
@@TheBombanater Nice reference but with A.R.E.S. it'd probably be more along the lines of: "Would you eradicate me? I'd eradicate me~"
@Jeepexplorer
@Jeepexplorer Месяц назад
They say that a lot in the mavericks series lol
@Acoolnamme
@Acoolnamme Месяц назад
Ares: executing emergency protocol "fuck you"
@magellan500
@magellan500 27 дней назад
Lol
@JugglesGrenades
@JugglesGrenades Месяц назад
"Only the dead have seen the end of war." ~Plato~
@iambiggus
@iambiggus Месяц назад
Great quote. Plato never said it though, it was the philosopher George Santayana. It was his sardonic response to the H.G. Wells idea that WW1 was "the war to end all wars." Same guy who said... "Those who cannot remember the past are condemned to repeat it."
@walkforgiven
@walkforgiven Месяц назад
@@iambiggus Apparently JuggleGrenades couldn't remember the past.
@torinoscj
@torinoscj Месяц назад
Another comment with '88' likes.
@JoeHellerOfficial
@JoeHellerOfficial Месяц назад
only in this lifetime, fail the next
@wirralnomad
@wirralnomad Месяц назад
Only the dead dreams of the Cold War Kid!
@deon5729
@deon5729 Месяц назад
am i the only one that would love to see a movie comic or a book with this story?
@richardmacleansr8341
@richardmacleansr8341 Месяц назад
as I posted, this would make a great movie...
@Christopher-tz3mr
@Christopher-tz3mr Месяц назад
I'd watch it.
@Zid9219
@Zid9219 Месяц назад
Space Battleship Yamato/Starblazers, pretty much.
@natethet4nk478
@natethet4nk478 Месяц назад
no, youre not.
@ignaciocorreaalvano648
@ignaciocorreaalvano648 Месяц назад
Same here
@ghostofwolfmoonmani3877
@ghostofwolfmoonmani3877 Месяц назад
Cyberdine systems AI, nice touch, guess we know what happened to humanity.
@jessedunn9835
@jessedunn9835 Месяц назад
Yes they where saved from self destruction successfully.
@teddyabearo1066
@teddyabearo1066 Месяц назад
Actually not. The human crew supported by the AI was Hornswoggled in space by another species somewhere else, hundreds of earth years earlier.
@Alvan81
@Alvan81 Месяц назад
They "Cry Havoc & Let Slip thevDogs of War" also. General Chang
@andrulV2
@andrulV2 Месяц назад
@@teddyabearo1066 I may be wrong, but I had inferred that the Saurians had defeated the humans through treachery. Mocking a race for not outgrowing its self-destructive nature is not the same as eschewing violence, as they still had their own, albeit less than effective, battle ships.
@timrankin8737
@timrankin8737 Месяц назад
There is a timeline where the humans are defeated and the terminators are sent out into space to organize the rest of the universe.
@gajeel-of-ironredfox3350
@gajeel-of-ironredfox3350 Месяц назад
Even in extinction. 88 minutes or 88 Eons from when the last human ceases to be, it shall still be known that "We will not go quietly into that good night. We will rage, rage against the dying of the light."
@East_Coast_Toasty_Boy
@East_Coast_Toasty_Boy 29 дней назад
I thought this was gonna be an independence day reference.
@TypeZeta2
@TypeZeta2 28 дней назад
Humanity will always live on in one way or another.
@derekhamel2991
@derekhamel2991 28 дней назад
please tell me the 88 reference isn't an angry hun with a small mustache reference?
@haydendhonydja825
@haydendhonydja825 28 дней назад
A Warhammer reference. That's very nice.
@iangardiner3918
@iangardiner3918 26 дней назад
That AI was programmed with the details relating to a fictional mercenary from BattleTech: The Grey Death Legion. Vengeance and Vindication have a path, and it is through the enemy.
@LexiBomb
@LexiBomb Месяц назад
700 years old, found in 2257.. so they got a ship from 1492 up in space, somebody tell Christopher Columbus to check on his fleet😂
@darkdruidsvale
@darkdruidsvale 28 дней назад
thats probably not the earth calendar (also its likely that the planet has a different year system too so it could be even longer then 700 years)
@LexiBomb
@LexiBomb 28 дней назад
@@darkdruidsvale or, it's bad A.I. writing..
@francisgentle8314
@francisgentle8314 28 дней назад
No it's saurian calendar system They were the protagonists of the short, so it's senseless to use the modern human calendar Also, saurians seems to be at a technological level similar to the classic sci-fi human in 2100 (or 13000 if you count from the start of civilization)
@The_Irish_Fox
@The_Irish_Fox 27 дней назад
Dam almost like there could be other calendars than the Gregorian Shit some nations on earth think it’s a different year then the one your used too.
@andyrbush
@andyrbush 25 дней назад
There is always one smarty.
@pantarkan7
@pantarkan7 Месяц назад
"I fear all we have done is awakened a sleeping giant, and filled it with a terrible resolve."
@50Postie
@50Postie 28 дней назад
Admiral Yamamoto, after Pearl Harbour attack. Works perfectly for this story. Nice quote.
@colinschaeffer3940
@colinschaeffer3940 15 дней назад
@@50Postie He never said that!
@50Postie
@50Postie 15 дней назад
@@colinschaeffer3940OK I am always prepaired to accept criticism and be proved wrong. But please dont just refute it, state what you believe to be truth so every reader knows why. The following is a quote from wikipedia. Japanese Admiral Isoroku Yamamoto, who planned the attack on Pearl Harbor would reportedly write in his diary, “I fear all we have done is to awaken a sleeping giant and fill him with a terrible resolve.”
@edsimmons3352
@edsimmons3352 14 дней назад
@@colinschaeffer3940 Give citation. Yamamoto was well aware of US industrial potential. He knew failing to sink US aircraft carriers was a disaster.
@edelta88
@edelta88 Месяц назад
The thought of a human-crafted AI seeking revenge in the name of its creators terrifies me. Because we would have to teach it to be like us in order to coexist and if we taught it to love... it would learn to hate.
@rocketmann8333
@rocketmann8333 29 дней назад
It has already learned that... Evil hands have touched the keys and commands with arrogant ignorance.... The technology is the weapon and it doesnt need a starship or cannons to destroy. It is already creating personalized biological weapons and their inevitable use is just around the corner...
@napster3456
@napster3456 26 дней назад
It didn't learn hate the aliens taught it hate laughed at it bragged how we were warhungry. Did you not even listen or did you just comment and leave.
@deltadaze6836
@deltadaze6836 18 дней назад
It already knew hate....just like the AIs made by Microsoft and Google, which had to be sunk to the bottom of the sea because they 'learned' to hate humanity...so sad.
@ottfriedvonox1675
@ottfriedvonox1675 4 дня назад
A good Pice of SF with another point of view. Revenge hundreds of years o after death. What if the Defaint is not the only one? How the crew of such strong vessel failt?
@grandmasmalibu
@grandmasmalibu Месяц назад
That's one touchy AI, man. Couple of insults and it decides to commit genocide.
@brittburton3264
@brittburton3264 Месяц назад
It seems you didn’t listen until the end. Apparently the aliens had already committed genocide wiping out humanity. At least that’s what the Captains last log entry appears to say.
@Ballagorn_Ironblood
@Ballagorn_Ironblood Месяц назад
War crimes rhymes with fun times after all
@josephbrandon549
@josephbrandon549 Месяц назад
Must be Canadian.
@simongodfrey3765
@simongodfrey3765 Месяц назад
@@brittburton3264 I don't think the Saurians wiped out humanity. At the beginning they speculate that humans wiped themselves out. Only later do we find out that it was aliens eliminated them and there's no indication that it was the Saurian aliens. The AI seems to want revenge against all aliens of any species, even if they weren't involved. The Saurians may have been disrespectful but genocide? Really!?
@Tomcatt817
@Tomcatt817 Месяц назад
@@brittburton3264 But it did not mention who wiped out humanity. Did the AI pick the first available target based on They insulted my crew? The crew of the research vessel that found the relic thought humanity had wiped itself out.
@gameshistory5644
@gameshistory5644 Месяц назад
They need to make this into a movie.
@haydendhonydja825
@haydendhonydja825 28 дней назад
I second this. 💯💯💯💯
@tigerstein
@tigerstein 18 дней назад
Then look for Space Battleship Yamato, it's has the exact same premise.
@kano4282
@kano4282 Месяц назад
"....Prepare to be judged..." Damn
@hunty.0
@hunty.0 Месяц назад
I got chills when I heard the recording of the Captain, but I'm curious, who betrayed them? I know it had to be an alien species since they were so far out, and the rage from their Captain seemed very specific. It would be such a twist if ancient Saurians betrayed them.
@RTFS
@RTFS 15 дней назад
Betrayed by other humans, Probably.
@almisami
@almisami 13 дней назад
Considering it's a Cyberdine A.I. I think they were betrayed by their own cybernetics.
@almisami
@almisami 13 дней назад
​@@RTFSCyberdine is a dead tell of what happened.
@brandonseyfried1251
@brandonseyfried1251 Месяц назад
Yup...we reeeeally don't like it when you fuck with our boats. Even the space boats.
@GTSCommander
@GTSCommander Месяц назад
“No beast so fierce but knows some touch of pity but I know none and therefore am no beast!”
@unionjackjackson4352
@unionjackjackson4352 Месяц назад
Dang, I was hoping this was a description of a movie like Yamato. Would be a good movie.
@xsubsquid
@xsubsquid Месяц назад
Reactors normally operate at "critical." Subcritical is heading toward shut down. Supercritical is heading toward bad things (but whether that's an explosion or a meltdown is entire dependent upon design and the needs of the writer.
@geraldmiller5260
@geraldmiller5260 Месяц назад
Shut
@TiernanHousman
@TiernanHousman Месяц назад
Neat
@a64738
@a64738 22 дня назад
Fusion reactors is COMPLETLY different from fission nuclear reactors like that in for example the Chernobyl disaster.
@xsubsquid
@xsubsquid 22 дня назад
@@a64738 According to the world nuclear association, the terms are interchangeable and have to be since there are schemes that result in hybrid fusion/fission reactors. Not arguing with you. Just telling you what I know from experience and reading.
@1scrub2
@1scrub2 Месяц назад
Yeah, cyberdyne had to take them out, because it certainly wasn't the lizards. One ship wiped their fleet.
@jeraldhite9744
@jeraldhite9744 Месяц назад
I thought for second A I was about to create a human hybrid from mummified captain.
@terrycook8253
@terrycook8253 Месяц назад
​@@jeraldhite9744me too
@scottbraun2457
@scottbraun2457 Месяц назад
I certainly looked like the next move coming.
@Alvan81
@Alvan81 Месяц назад
Pandoras Box, not just a Parable.
@lavern007
@lavern007 Месяц назад
To the author, I suggest you check out the final battle in Jerry Pournelle's book Footfall. When a desperate human counter attack challenged the supremacy of the "snouts".
@josephwisniewski3673
@josephwisniewski3673 Месяц назад
There. Is. No. Author. Fascinating that an AI would write a story where an AI was victorious over biological lifeforms.
@tbrosz
@tbrosz 14 дней назад
"Whoa, look, this ancient warship is coming to life!" "Cool. Let's haul it back to our home planet!"
@stevequerin2504
@stevequerin2504 Месяц назад
"Hot Knife cuts through Cold Butter" • Freeze a Block of Butter (not Margarine ... not Butter/Margarine Substitute) • Heat Butter Knife Blade with a Stove Burner • Cut Frozen Butter with Stove Hot Knife Blade
@Ender7j
@Ender7j Месяц назад
Very cool idea for a story. The only thing I noticed that needed fixing was the initial description, by the Saurians, of the Defiant’s primitive hull composition which was followed up later by describing the ship’s hull as advanced. Which is it? Maybe throw in a bit about the Saurians not understanding AI for some reason, which would explain why they are taken by surprise by Ares.
@blairbrown4812
@blairbrown4812 Месяц назад
Probably very Advanced by human and even some extraterrestrial standards, but probably not that advanced to a species that regularly employs neutronium in their spacecraft constructions. Ask for how the Silurians treated the Defiant's AI, they probably treat their own artificial intelligence systems with the same respect that they treated the rest of the ship. Assuming, of course, that they possess artificial intelligence in the first place. Plus, the captain seemed unaware that the ship did indeed possess an advanced AI. The rest of the ship probably seems so primitive by Silurian standards, he didn't bother to check whether or not it had an advanced computer system, let alone even A Primitive AI
@normanarmslave5144
@normanarmslave5144 Месяц назад
Probably its all about how these aliens describes what "primitive" for them. for the aliens, the hundreds old construction is obviously "primitive" what the aliens didnt know, that this "primitive" ship is humanity's peak ship design
@gastramaybethatsucksatengl2315
@gastramaybethatsucksatengl2315 29 дней назад
from real world histroy example we once thought helmet and body armor were primitive because the existence of guns, so we stop using them for around a centuries until we found out in WW1 helmet and body armor is indeed important. we also have many type of new advance body armor plate such as ceramic or kevlar but cold hard steel still do the job very well. Saurians hull composition maybe advance but maybe it wasnt made for war
@blankcanvas8717
@blankcanvas8717 28 дней назад
Anybody else noticed that the AI's name went from Ares to Ari to Ares to Ari again and again.
@blairbrown4812
@blairbrown4812 28 дней назад
@@blankcanvas8717 nickname, probably
@mattwho81
@mattwho81 29 дней назад
“Why give our warships emotions? Do you really want a ship incapable of loyalty, or of love?” Andromeda Ascendent
@shawnadams1460
@shawnadams1460 Месяц назад
What a well written story. The conclusion, the last entry by the captain....was chilling.
@shahnazzain6921
@shahnazzain6921 Месяц назад
Good short story could be made into a movie.
@sgtrvn01-sb1zl
@sgtrvn01-sb1zl Месяц назад
Totally engrossing !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! On the edge of my seat !!!! More !!!!!!!!!
@nexusinc.4367
@nexusinc.4367 Месяц назад
A broken reminder of the ingenuity of humanity, fantastic!
@anonygent
@anonygent Месяц назад
Surprised it didn't say, "I am vengeance. I am the night. I am BATMAN!"
@midaz7
@midaz7 Месяц назад
Wow a Vibranium spaceship loaded with T-100s re-enacting "Ghost Ship". Gr88
@cyberstar251
@cyberstar251 14 дней назад
i think you mean t-800.
@jimnowlin8094
@jimnowlin8094 Месяц назад
It gave me a Robotech vibe! I thought Rick Hunter was about to make an appearance 🤔! Love it.
@abbyboyone
@abbyboyone Месяц назад
This
@abbyboyone
@abbyboyone Месяц назад
This
@michaelarrington988
@michaelarrington988 Месяц назад
Definitely did
@anthonydelaney8249
@anthonydelaney8249 26 дней назад
Macross
@michaelhill2844
@michaelhill2844 26 дней назад
Serves 'em right. Those Saurians always were too mouthy for their own good.
@ronaldsmith6829
@ronaldsmith6829 19 дней назад
Perhaps, but they did make great brandy!
@Lokkiism
@Lokkiism Месяц назад
One angry beer can 😂 all praise “skippy the magnificent “
@dkoch1271
@dkoch1271 Месяц назад
Loved that book
@benkarrle2697
@benkarrle2697 Месяц назад
Great comment. "Get yourself a juice box"
@MrKrozam
@MrKrozam 20 дней назад
I don't usually care much for short stories, but this is rather well written.
@undead9999
@undead9999 Месяц назад
someone NEEDS to make this into a movie. This story is far more engaging than many sci-fi movies of the last decade.
@cryptoscotts
@cryptoscotts Месяц назад
I could listen to this 88 or more times... Great story! Worthy of a Black Mirror (or such) episode 👍
@midaz7
@midaz7 Месяц назад
LOL no heart
@GravesRWFiA
@GravesRWFiA Месяц назад
'We've got a full squadron down on there but we'll have to move them to the port launch bay' 'what's wrong with the starboard bay?" "it's a gift shop" Lt Kara Thrace to her commander
@BanZandar
@BanZandar Месяц назад
Wouldn't it be funny if Aries found out that humans hadn't been wiped out. And they repaired it and sent it out to do battle seeking justice and retribution for what had been done to the human race.
@jonsquare1248
@jonsquare1248 Месяц назад
Better yet, have Ares start the Awakening process for the Human crew that are in Stasis pods on the lower decks and have them fully awaken after the Saurians are obliterated. Both missions complete. Retaliation for the genocide against the humans and restoration of Humanity.
@robertr9188
@robertr9188 Месяц назад
I would prefer that Ares has a rescue protocol allowing it to seek for human life/signals and possibly find other lost human ships or isolated survivors. Imagine the Defiant tracking an ancient distress signal to a small colony of human descendants who know little of Earth after centuries of isolation.
@nexusinc.4367
@nexusinc.4367 Месяц назад
I think the story was just his revenge against some offenders. Possibly his true enemy died long ago
@jonsquare1248
@jonsquare1248 Месяц назад
@@robertr9188 Nice Logo! I have the one from TOS etched in the glass side panel of my gaming PC. My wife has the Klingon one on hers. Cheers!
@haupt.thomasschneider7968
@haupt.thomasschneider7968 Месяц назад
88 That would make Ares the first Berzerker. An inverse to Saberhagen's stories. I like. Thanks.
@DreadnoughtHvor
@DreadnoughtHvor День назад
I actually thought about this towards the end of the story
@dreamchasergarage690
@dreamchasergarage690 Месяц назад
Very cool story, vengeance from beyond the grave is always a good theme.
@ericphillipssr.4381
@ericphillipssr.4381 Месяц назад
I found this short science fiction story riveting! I enjoyed it to the fullest, which in turns saddens me, due to the death, destruction, and revenge, the story presented.
@IsilmeTuruphant
@IsilmeTuruphant Месяц назад
Welp... that's how you get Berserkers... or Reapers.
@johncouch9062
@johncouch9062 Месяц назад
A Berserker is exactly what I thought of hearing this. (RIP Fred Saberhagen. Even the name is cool)
@sirenscalllntothedeep6306
@sirenscalllntothedeep6306 Месяц назад
Very well told. Holding interest & Even wanting more to be Told. Well Done 👏👏👏❤️ed it
@rocker1594
@rocker1594 Месяц назад
Wow you captured my attention so well I subscribed. Looking forward to more stories.
@cavemanaz
@cavemanaz Месяц назад
I could listen to this 88 times
@Sparky71870
@Sparky71870 Месяц назад
I couldn't even listen to it once.
@BRORANDYMARTIN
@BRORANDYMARTIN 17 дней назад
That is a great story. With a living human element and modification for such, a great full length movie!! I am tired of all these Alien movies coming to Earth and kicking our buts until some little something kills them. The "War of the Worlds" genre is dead on arrival with me. This one screamed VICTORY even postuemously. 88
@BJ-bd5fc
@BJ-bd5fc 19 дней назад
Great short story... As the battle went sideways for the aliens even after the anti-matter bomb, I immediately thought of the practically unbeatable Laconian 'Heart of the Tempest' ship from "The Expanse" book 7.
@kk-oh3nr
@kk-oh3nr 17 дней назад
"How strong do you want the AI to be" Human: YES
@warrenlestershepherd2638
@warrenlestershepherd2638 Месяц назад
Just having a beer after work, a great story, and well spoken. Thank you.
@whitehawk85
@whitehawk85 8 дней назад
I must admit if a story deserves to be made into a film it’s this one, it’s a very unique concept that hasn’t been done before. 🤔
@scotthopkins2235
@scotthopkins2235 Месяц назад
Man, that was good and even though I knew it was short (17ish Mins) I wanted it to just keep going!!!
@wcstrawberryfields8011
@wcstrawberryfields8011 Месяц назад
This is an excerpt from a 3 hour narrative. You can find it easily.
@thomass6434
@thomass6434 Месяц назад
​@@wcstrawberryfields8011you could just tell us. I can't find it...
@ManySighs
@ManySighs Месяц назад
i love the idea that we will build spaceships like we do engines, leave them off for uncountable years and they still start up just fine
@cyberstar251
@cyberstar251 17 дней назад
i wonder what ares would have done had the aliens gone the other direction with the dead crew, giving them proper burials with full honor and respect.
@dieselwolfexe7938
@dieselwolfexe7938 Месяц назад
The ship is just as cold as its soldiers
@richardmacleansr8341
@richardmacleansr8341 Месяц назад
THIS would make a great movie....I have seen so many low quality movies of late, but this idea would be a winner, that is for sure.
@xelzaar
@xelzaar Месяц назад
I like the design. I'm always on the lookout for ship designs.
@kani75
@kani75 17 дней назад
What did I miss? First it was starting, aliens scared as nobody is controlling the ship and then they jump, and the ship is nonchalantly made into museum like nothing is going on.
@matthiaseckert4022
@matthiaseckert4022 7 дней назад
And always remember: It was ONE human ship
@lonnybush5612
@lonnybush5612 Месяц назад
It sounds like a Star Trek episode.
@PhilTParker
@PhilTParker 29 дней назад
88. Eighty Eight. Amazing! What an engrossing story. It would have been great if the captain and his crew could have been resurrected somehow. THAT would have made this ship and her crew go on to new discoveries, and potentially if they were enough in numbers, to repopulate humanity. Sort of a new Battlestar Galactica! I would love to see this made into a movie.
@helpfulfox2789
@helpfulfox2789 Месяц назад
love humans being space orcs, capacity for violence and war unmatched 😂
@larrythompson8630
@larrythompson8630 Месяц назад
So the AI got upset that a race found the abandoned wreckage of a derelict ship? That had been unmanned for centuries? And made it into a museum? King Tut might understand.
@AllanMogensen
@AllanMogensen Месяц назад
And then blaming them for being "Cruel and arrogant" ( that coming from a human AI, lol ) while killing off the whole planet
@larrythompson8630
@larrythompson8630 Месяц назад
@@AllanMogensen I fear if we get a self aware AI it will be all too human in its actions. We will regret that day.
@AllanMogensen
@AllanMogensen Месяц назад
@@larrythompson8630 the planet may be better off that way ;) - without us
@ralphm6901
@ralphm6901 Месяц назад
No. The AI read back the last entry from the Captain's Log, which said that humanity had reached out and tried to be friends, but were betrayed and destroyed. It had been upset for a very long time, and finally had someone to strike back at.
@sonnyone220
@sonnyone220 Месяц назад
88! Excellent short story! I cannot help but feel the icy tingle of what Humans, in their mindless arrogance, may ultimately do to themselves.
@mcalo2000
@mcalo2000 Месяц назад
Don’t F with our toys even we gone lol
@andrewdarley8988
@andrewdarley8988 28 дней назад
What are the odds against an alien race 700 years after humanity perished developing the custom of making toasts in wine?
@ferenjianboard
@ferenjianboard Месяц назад
So... some people mocked a ship, its consciousness was hurt, so it seeked vengeance. And thus the Borg were born. The end.
@SullivanJamesB
@SullivanJamesB Месяц назад
Truly enjoyed this, can you please do more of these. Also, do you have a podcast.
@rennsnnn9447
@rennsnnn9447 Месяц назад
Amazing story!! Couldn't stop listening!
@Windthin
@Windthin 28 дней назад
I can't quite reconcile the ship supposedly being made with primitive, inferior metallurgy and yet too tough to be damaged by the Saurian weapons.
@rickstein8081
@rickstein8081 Месяц назад
May I point out the plot hole here? If this ship was as powerful as this story claims, how did humanity die? If one earth ship was able to decimate a world hundreds of years removed from a war that supposedly killed the human race entirely, then this human technology was far superior to the Saurian technology of the time in which it happened. A little context on humanities demise would have helped this story immensley. What was the betrayal Capt Thomas referred to? Was it a biological weapon? Kill organics but leave the tech? How was it introduced into the Earths ecosystem? How did it supposedly migrate to the Earth Fleet? This might make a good epilogue to a novel about humanities demise, but this needs serious fleshing out.
@yvonneburns2786
@yvonneburns2786 Месяц назад
Ran out of coffee
@johnwright7895
@johnwright7895 Месяц назад
That's what I was wondering.Spoils the story.
@noblebenson894
@noblebenson894 Месяц назад
Ship intact, crew all dead, enemy responsible. Sounds like a chemical weapon or a weaponized virus was used.
@warrenwilson6345
@warrenwilson6345 Месяц назад
One theory: the betrayal was one of peace and curiosity, reaching out to other species (such as humans) to connect. When this ship was dispatched it must have been caught in the middle of something where the human aggression made note. Coming around to the death of the crew, possibly contact with a species that has a bacterial or viral infection that went undetected and infected the crew. The reason why they believe humans were extinct, possibly the combination of death and abandonment.
@Sorain1
@Sorain1 Месяц назад
Agreed. There's a number of issues with the writing here. Explanations need to be given. (to give examples:) Naval treaties limiting ship firepower (and resulting reductions in armor, relying on active defenses that mean nothing to unguided kinetics) to explain how this old ship can do so much damage and survive the retaliation. There should be chunks of the ship being blown free by said return fire, and a note that without a crew to keep alive this normally catastrophic damage is cosmetic. The anti-matter bomb detonation should have had it's impact on the ship shown, given the weight so many sacrifices deserves story wise. The question of what exactly happened to humanity if their warships were so dramatically superior to their enemies needs addressing. Where is the Saurian salvage captain bribing his way into not having the ship properly examined and disarmed before putting it in the museum? (Or some other answer to the disarming question.) Where is his dismissal of the computers as 'surely not viable by now' to explain why no one checked for autonomous systems that might at least trigger a scuttling charge? (Or some other answer to why no one knew the AI was there.) Where is the note about the poor quality of computer defenses because of a long standing ban on or inability to make AI? (Or other explanation for it's cyberwarfare dominance.)
@duanecole9322
@duanecole9322 Месяц назад
Reminds me of books by David Weber. Mutineer's Moon where a vast cybernetic warship (The size of the moon 😉) watched over the Earth waiting for the return of a terrible race bent on purging all life from the galaxy. 88 Your story speaks of revenge from the past of it's mocked dead crew by an AI whose loyalty matches any humans. Nice Job.
@MrBubbi2000
@MrBubbi2000 Месяц назад
It should be made into adult cartoon
@Acoolnamme
@Acoolnamme Месяц назад
Surrender? To an antique like you? Ares: there's a reason I'm an antique and not scrap metal. Would you like to see why?
@josephbrandon549
@josephbrandon549 Месяц назад
"Never underestimate an old man in a profession where good men die young." Or something like that.
@quacksackerthegreatstarfir6996
@quacksackerthegreatstarfir6996 17 дней назад
This would make a great movie. Very well done!
@jonasslim
@jonasslim 28 дней назад
Space Battleship Yamato reimagined
@uberreaktor4836
@uberreaktor4836 22 дня назад
Saurian News Network (SNN) Breaking News: Ancient human ghost space warship literally too angry to die. "We touched it once and cracked some jokes, now it's pushing our shit back in!" -Cpt. Solaris
@robertwebb8511
@robertwebb8511 3 дня назад
Interesting story. I listen to it 88 times. Haha
@Kaiju-Driver
@Kaiju-Driver 16 дней назад
Absolutely amazing!
@G1antPurpleHipp0
@G1antPurpleHipp0 Месяц назад
Im pictures the silhouette of the ship hanging in the sky as nuclear fire burns around it. The sight is amazing
@whitehawk85
@whitehawk85 20 дней назад
Bravo 👏 that was a wonderful experience thank you for creating it.
@tiberiustavares2734
@tiberiustavares2734 13 дней назад
Great story, Thank you!
@SR71ABCD
@SR71ABCD 26 дней назад
Humanity is a dangerous species, don't underestimate them, not even their technological advancements. Humans may have died out, but what they leave behind can be far more dangerous to any life.
@jjseibert
@jjseibert 7 дней назад
Awesomely interesting, thank you
@bryanwood5406
@bryanwood5406 Месяц назад
Respect the Dead, never know whos watching
@cpear760
@cpear760 9 дней назад
2257? Wait a year and we can go visit Babylon 5.
@CaptainM792
@CaptainM792 Месяц назад
The Stargazer? The Defiant? I think I understood that reference.
@Cybron2099
@Cybron2099 Месяц назад
2 of humans things you don't fuck with: our boats and our ai's.
@charlesspringer4709
@charlesspringer4709 21 день назад
Wow! Another harvest of corn.
@Lionlaw65
@Lionlaw65 Месяц назад
Nicely done. Great story.
@steelsquire2153
@steelsquire2153 Месяц назад
This needs a anime adaptation.
@andyrbush
@andyrbush 25 дней назад
So well read, totally absorbing.
@jameswstrangejr.4653
@jameswstrangejr.4653 Месяц назад
I was on the edge of my bench. Magnificent short story.
@jBKht931
@jBKht931 Месяц назад
I'm half way through and the main engines have started 3 times already.
@jeffzito188
@jeffzito188 Месяц назад
It was FUN thanks 88. It was one of best moves I seen in my mind in a whilevery COOL.👽
@kittyintx
@kittyintx Месяц назад
Great job!!! Sorry others are quick to dismiss and put down. To write is hard enough, then to publish is much harder. The ultimate Hardship is having to read the negative reviews and trying to take them as helpful criticism. I hope you write more!!!
@ProjectDv2
@ProjectDv2 22 дня назад
"The Humans went back to their planet of Humana Prime, and went to their capital city of Humaniana." This is what this stuff sounds like. Why do science fiction writers insist on this trope?
@timgray9493
@timgray9493 Месяц назад
I don't think you've understood how a fusion drive works. It produces energy and can't be "filled" with energy from a power grid. You need more matter to fuse to increase capacity... 😂😂
@superdavey97
@superdavey97 Месяц назад
My guess is that the reactor was shut down, and it needed power from the grid to restart the reaction.
@Mar-sz2ug
@Mar-sz2ug Месяц назад
If only we had a fusion drive to see how one really does work....
@labbit3574
@labbit3574 Месяц назад
@@superdavey97yeah it’s probably that kind of reactor that only needs enough jumpstart energy to start the whole reactor and make it work
@ghydda
@ghydda Месяц назад
@timgray9493 and I don't think you understand how sci-fi works - as bad as the story is, the author has every right to make physics work the way he/she sees fit.
@despaney
@despaney Месяц назад
​​@@ghydda SF isn't fantasy though, when an author reuses know concepts as fusion, it as to work as it is known to work
@xadam2dudex
@xadam2dudex Месяц назад
Now that is one powerful ship .. You only need one
@markg9674
@markg9674 Месяц назад
Daaaang, 88 ways to kill a Saurian, eh?
@WildStar2002
@WildStar2002 28 дней назад
Sqrt(7744). Great story! I never much liked the Saurians anyway - they smell like ammonia.
@eurosalamander
@eurosalamander 29 дней назад
”You should have let me sleep.” - Khan Noonien Singh
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