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@FasTrackIELTS
@FasTrackIELTS 3 года назад
Hi guys, don't forget to DOWNLOAD the list of recent IELTS Writing & Speaking topics and the PDF with the sample answer (#FT4). Go to FasTrack IELTS on Telegram: t.me/IELTSFasTrack
@practicemakesperfect8625
@practicemakesperfect8625 3 года назад
I love you🥺
@anveshapanda5644
@anveshapanda5644 3 года назад
I am unable to access this, can someone help?
@testtastewithusshrestha270
@testtastewithusshrestha270 3 года назад
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@ranveerrandhawa6272
@ranveerrandhawa6272 3 года назад
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@Freyal_twinkle
@Freyal_twinkle 3 года назад
This essay is for academic or general ielts aspirants
@rlynstar1459
@rlynstar1459 2 года назад
Hi Asiya, I would like to thank you for your videos. I just received my academic test results - speaking 7, writing 7, listening 8.5 and reading 9. I didn’t have to attend a review class, I just followed your tips and practiced speaking with my friend. I just want you to know that you helped change my life. God bless you.
@FasTrackIELTS
@FasTrackIELTS 2 года назад
Very well done and good luck with whatever you took this exam for!
@not_jyx
@not_jyx 2 года назад
wth reading 9? how
@lally1094
@lally1094 2 года назад
Reading 9 ? This is impossible 😥
@rlynstar1459
@rlynstar1459 2 года назад
@@lally1094 it is possible. If I was able to do it, you can do it too.
@rlynstar1459
@rlynstar1459 2 года назад
@@not_jyx practice. I took the computer based exam. Asiya’s tips really helped a lot. Read and follow the instructions carefully. You can do it
@yassinkamel.
@yassinkamel. 3 года назад
your "Let's get started!" makes me feel like I already got an 8.5 !
@balogunmedinat6356
@balogunmedinat6356 3 года назад
🤣🤣🤣🤣
@bekind4137
@bekind4137 3 года назад
😀😀
@boluwatifesamueladedayo4751
@boluwatifesamueladedayo4751 3 года назад
😂😂😂
@domnicmachado
@domnicmachado 3 года назад
😀
@amanwithoutname4
@amanwithoutname4 3 года назад
😂😂
@CravingPoetry
@CravingPoetry 3 года назад
Hie Asiya, I received an overall band 7 score yesterday 30/04/2021. I am happy and wanted you to know that your videos helped me a lot. Thank you 💖
@eddiedans87
@eddiedans87 3 года назад
You're one of the channels I got inspiration from when I took my IELTS a few days ago, and it helped me tremendously! I got an 8.0 band score overall, and I can't thank you enough for all that you do for us test takers!
@rizwanziyad
@rizwanziyad 2 года назад
Can u provide me ur watsapp number please ??
@aestheticsbysimra3234
@aestheticsbysimra3234 3 года назад
Took the IELTS last week and I got an overall 8.5 and your videos helped a lot! Thank you so much ❤️
@bluesky8418
@bluesky8418 3 года назад
Hi hope you’re fine. How did you prepare mean any materials or you just followed this lady ?
@s.p.777
@s.p.777 3 года назад
Perhaps you're lying through your nose
@aestheticsbysimra3234
@aestheticsbysimra3234 3 года назад
@@bluesky8418 Hi, I also followed Edx video’s a bit, they give some practical info as well as tips. You can sign up and watch most videos for free. Next to that I watched a lot of her videos and practice!! Like a lot! Hope this helped:)
@sarahsidrah5544
@sarahsidrah5544 3 года назад
@@s.p.777 Perhaps you’ll never know.
@rishikeshsawant7322
@rishikeshsawant7322 3 года назад
@@s.p.777 😂😂😂
@explorewithfestus
@explorewithfestus 3 года назад
As non-biodegradable wastes like plastics continue to accumulate and contribute to environmental problems, ‘recycling’ has become a very important global topic. For some reasons, people have not developed the culture of promoting the re-use of materials. This essay will examine possible explanations for this and also present practical solutions to this issue
@FrangoTraidor
@FrangoTraidor 3 года назад
on the whole that's good. just do away with words such as "very" and "important", as these are strongly recommended against on the actual test
@explorewithfestus
@explorewithfestus 3 года назад
@@FrangoTraidor Thanks, got an 8 in the actual test in June though
@adukeyonwato6196
@adukeyonwato6196 2 года назад
My test is next week can you give me tips and materials pls
@isharapathmaperuma7283
@isharapathmaperuma7283 Год назад
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@sashakost2371
@sashakost2371 2 года назад
The habit of recycling waste materials is not as common around the world as it should be. People are often unenthusiastic about recycling because they find the activity tedious and they aren’t aware of its importance. I think that this can be solved by making the process of recycling easier and informing society about the severity of the problem. The main reasons for why people aren’t keen on recycling their waste are quite simple. The first is that the rules and procedures of recycling, that are often hard to follow. In theory plastic, glass, metal and paper should be separated and all recycled, but it turns out that not all types of plastic can be and it goes to landfill instead. And what about packaging that used multiple types of materials? That can’t be recycled either. When people are faced with this information, they find it overwhelming and decide to abandon recycling altogether. Another factor that plays into that is the fact that the majority of the population isn’t aware of the huge impact lack of recycling has on the environment. They know they should be recycling but don't feel obligated to because they don't see the problem as that severe. The solutions to this are almost as simple as the reasons themselves but they require joint effort from the governments as well as the civilians. First, the recycling labels should be designed to be as simple as possible and indicate clearly to the user if the material can be recycled and if so, where it should be discarded. Furthermore, there should be more recycle bins available, those placed on the streets as well as those that can be used inside, preferably already with built-in compartments so that the people don't have to buy separate bins. And secondly awareness campaigns should be advertised globally to raise the issue and its consequences. It should be done simply but impactfully so that it appeals to people of all ages. To summarize, the issue of recycling stems from the inconvenient rules and methods and the general misunderstanding of the problem. I believe that if recycling was made easy and accessible to everybody and the dangerous consequences of its omission was widespread, people would be much more inclined to do the right thing. what do you think?
@starling93
@starling93 3 года назад
I received my IELTS result today. I scored an overall 8 and I just want you to know that your videos helped me A LOT during my preparation before i take the test. So, thank you very much 🙏
@lesyafly7765
@lesyafly7765 3 года назад
Hello, what’s in writing section?
@starling93
@starling93 3 года назад
@@lesyafly7765 Sorry for late reply, for task 1 i got pie chart n a table about land degradation in 4 areas around the world, units measured in percentage. For task 2, i got why social media becoming increasingly common as source of news and is it a positive or negative development.
@lesyafly7765
@lesyafly7765 3 года назад
@@starling93 thank u, Fenny! what band in writing u scored ?
@milenamartirosyan6580
@milenamartirosyan6580 2 года назад
Reallly? with such grammar I can hardly believe you could score 8
@stepbroimhardstuckinvalorant
@stepbroimhardstuckinvalorant 2 года назад
@@milenamartirosyan6580 the youtube comment section isn't an IELTs exam. Stop being so daft.
@throughhereyes-15
@throughhereyes-15 3 года назад
Here's my intro Lately, recycling of waste materials has been a trend which has environmental benefits as well as job creation and innovation. Despite, reusing of waste has a tremendous possibility of contributing to individual, national and global economies, yet most people neglect its essence. With many reasons for failing to recycle waste products, lack of awareness raising and innovation skills on re-usable refuse are primary.
@07johnjan
@07johnjan 2 года назад
Took the computer-based exam last 11/14/21 and I got my results today. Speaking 8.5 Writing 7.5 Reading 9 Listening 9 Overall score 8.5 Your videos helped me a LOT during my preparation so THANK YOU!!!
@imperia6368
@imperia6368 9 месяцев назад
What the hell, you a machine or what? How did u get 9. In reading in Reading?🎉🎉
@joanep5961
@joanep5961 3 года назад
Just done with my exam, following were the topics- Task 1- Write an application to an international company for a job, advertised by them. •why are you interested in this job? •what makes you a suitable candidate? •ask them few questions. Task 2- Many people find giving presentations or public speaking difficult. And children should be taught this in schools. Agree or Disagree.
@ivyo1503
@ivyo1503 3 года назад
Really? I thought task 1 is always a pictorial representation of something.
@jk4301
@jk4301 3 года назад
@@ivyo1503 maybe it's for general paper. I've heard in general task1 you need to write letter...
@janethuo6437
@janethuo6437 Год назад
Thanks to your channel, I was abe to get the concept of what I needed to do in my tests. SWriting was my hardest, but managed to get a 6.5 in it. Scored 8 in listening, 7.5 in speaking, 7.5 in reading and an pverall score of 7,5. I;m so happy.
@sweetnaina1989
@sweetnaina1989 3 года назад
Hi Asiya! I have been following your videos to prepare for IELTS General Exam & have excelled with your help! My scores just came & they are: L: 9.0, R: 8.5, W: 7.0, S: 7.5 (I had seen your multiple videos on speaking!)
@amirsadeghi7809
@amirsadeghi7809 3 года назад
Hi Naina, I wanna study for IELTS and I really appreciate your help if you're okay with it🙏🏼❤️
@shiningshinin
@shiningshinin 3 года назад
Hi Naina, congratulations and may I know if you have done self -review or had a coaching?
@sweetnaina1989
@sweetnaina1989 3 года назад
@@shiningshinin thankyou 😃.. had done self review 😃
@ChauKhanhLinh
@ChauKhanhLinh 3 года назад
why there are 'firstly' but no 'secondly' ?
@okeleyedamilola2316
@okeleyedamilola2316 2 года назад
I just received my test results I got 7.5 learning from your videos. Thank you
@samridhimishra1946
@samridhimishra1946 2 года назад
Hey! Let me know your thoughts on this essay. Writing Task 2 (practice) The environment suffers from severe damage because of the misuse and over-exploitation of the resources on earth. This problem escalates to its peak when many people do not recycle or reuse objects. If this misconduct continues, humans will be the cause of degradation of the environment and endangerment of exotic animals’ species. In this essay, I will address some main problems that lead to environment degradation and share simple ways to solve them. The major reasons why many people do not recycle waste materials are lack of awareness and facilities. It is quite evident that this problem is mainly in third world countries or areas that authorities are unable to access. Firstly, the reason why people do not recycle is because they are not aware of the benefits of recycling. Recycling leads to less waste which naturally in turn keeps our surroundings clean. Besides, reusing materials is cost efficient and economical. One way to overcome this obstacle is to set up awareness campaigns with the help of social media or talk to people in your locality about it. Another action is to write to local newspapers and spread the word. The second challenge is the lack of governmental facilities. Sadly, sometimes many people have no choice but to throw away waste materials because of the lack of appropriate organizations that can recycle waste. However, the solution is straightforward. We can reuse waste materials at home easily. For example, use old shirt as a kitchen rag, use soda bottles and plastic bags for storage, and donate used books to charities or schools. In conclusion, the steps to solve environmental degradation are easy. I believe that it can only be solved if all of us come together and incorporate these practices in our daily life. Our small steps will create a better earth for generations to come.
@fattyfatty709
@fattyfatty709 2 года назад
superb
@mukaddastaj5223
@mukaddastaj5223 2 года назад
I read the inro only and already noticed a huge mistake you did. You're starting too far away from the topic. Here you're not supposed to talk about pollution and environment degradation, but about recycling only. What you said simply means "k, here are the ways we damage ecology" and then you can literary include like factories, cars, etc. Initially though you only needed to explore the recycling topic and nothing else.
@beautyisinmind2163
@beautyisinmind2163 7 месяцев назад
You already deviated from the original topic. The question is asking "WHY" people aren't recycling the household wastes; however, you answered the consequences that may arise when people ignore reclycling.
@jorgemotorsport4916
@jorgemotorsport4916 3 года назад
Hi Asya! I'm so grateful with you.. I've just completed one the biggest requirements for my application to a Master's Degree at a Canadian university.. It took me two months of preparation to improve my results from my fisrt test (6 Overall) to my most recent one (7,5).. Your contents in your online courses and videos are amazingly clear and deep.. Congratulations for your channel! Thank you, thank you, thank you!! =)
@anuchoubey1491
@anuchoubey1491 3 года назад
Your videos helped me a lot and i got an overall band of 7 with 7.5 in speaking. Thank you ma'am❤
@leiadava1868
@leiadava1868 2 года назад
Came back here so that i can thank Asiya, finally i was able to get the required score i need to practice my profession here in UK. Thank you for all the lessons, videos, and boosting my morale above all. Take care always ❤️
@marahchan17
@marahchan17 2 года назад
Hi Asiya! I received my IELTS results today. I scored an overall band 8 with 8.5 in Listening and Reading, 7.5 in Speaking and Writing. Your videos and the FasTrack course helped me A LOT for achieving this result! Thank you ❤️
@FasTrackIELTS
@FasTrackIELTS 2 года назад
Hi Maria! What an amazing result, congrats! And all the best with whatever you took this exam for
@dhruvparthasarathy2050
@dhruvparthasarathy2050 3 года назад
This was the essay that I was able to write along following the instructions in the video: Waste material recycling is a crucial activity that helps in maintaining a clean, safe and healthy environment. Un-recycled waste that ends up in landfills pollutes the surrounding environment in myriads of ways and this is a problem in many countries, where safe recycling practices are not followed rigorously. In this essay, we are going to discuss two reasons why this happens and also talk about what can be done to solve this problem. The following are reasons as to why waste recycling seems to not be followed rigorously in many countries. First, there is a lack of awareness amongst people. For an idea to be considered seriously, they need to be exposed to it often. When they are not educated or reminded constantly about the importance of recycling, it does not gain much importance amongst people. Secondly, it is a widely accepted fact that to establish some practice into everyday routine, it has to be strictly followed. Not having stringent rules and mechanisms to keep bad recycling practices in check is one other reason why this is still continuing in many countries. Since recycling waste requires some effort, if there are no measures to keep things in check, people will always find ways to avoid this and stick to existing ways of dumping their refuse. Now we will be discussing the various solutions that can help solve this problem. Creating awareness amongst the public can help address this issue. When people are educated about how harmful unrecycled waste is to the environment and the various advantages that waste recycling confers, this trend will change. The government and various NGOs can play a crucial role here by sending out posters, advertisements on TV, Radio, and Newspapers and also by running awareness campaigns in both residential areas and educational institutions. Thereby the community as a whole can participate in recycling waste. Alongside running educational campaigns, strict rules and regulations can be placed with respect to waste recycling. Laws can be put forth and regular checks can be conducted amongst the community to ensure people do not violate them and follow recycling practices as per standards. For example, there could be rules as simple as having two bins at home, one for dumping wet waste and one for dumping dry waste such as newspapers, cartons, and cardboard boxes. While initially, it might take some time for people to get habituated to these practices, over time this will become the default. While avoiding recycling waste is a big problem in many countries, it is not something that cannot be solved. In this essay, we saw two reasons as to why this problem exists: lack of awareness amongst people and stringent laws and measures not being present to keep this problem in check. It is proposed that the Government and various organizations should pitch in to help solve this problem through awareness campaigns and also in monitoring waste recycling practices closely. By following these measures, I believe that this problem can be alleviated to an extent, thereby leaving our surroundings cleaner, healthier and safer.
@phucnguyenngoc9114
@phucnguyenngoc9114 3 года назад
that's a great essay but the requirement is around 250 words man
@jonibekkholmuminov290
@jonibekkholmuminov290 3 года назад
band 6
@dhruvparthasarathy2050
@dhruvparthasarathy2050 3 года назад
Thanks for the feedback! Agreed, it is a pretty long one.
@sebastianmendoza7313
@sebastianmendoza7313 2 года назад
Thanks Asiya for all of your time and effort invested in this channel! You helped me obtained an overall score of 7.5 in my first IELTS 🤗 Un abrazo!!! 🇰🇿 🇨🇴
@MilkywayDreaming
@MilkywayDreaming 2 года назад
Do you ever write in intro last line ( ..... discuss in upcoming paragraphs. ) ? Or is it ok as she mentioned?
@tejasai2795
@tejasai2795 3 года назад
I have watched your videos 3 days before my exam and got 7 band. Love the way you explain each and every aspect. Thank you soo much Asiya.
@raunakdpenha913
@raunakdpenha913 2 года назад
Recycling waste material is extremely important. It is perhaps the most effective way to protect and preserve our environment for future generations. Having said that, not all countries recycle waste equally and efficiently. In fact, in some countries, people do not recycle waste item, such as bottle and newspapers, at all. This short write up will look at some possible reasons for this, while also highlighting some easy solutions. The first reason could simply be the lack of awareness. If people are unaware of the damage these items could have on our environment, they probably won’t make the effort to have them recycled. The second reason people fail to recycle bottles and newspapers could be the lack of infrastructure. For example, if there are no special disposal units in their apartment complex, they may simply discard these items along with their everyday trash. Alternatively, if these disposal units are few and far between, people may not be willing to put in the extra effort to visit a community recycling center or something of that sort. Fortunately, the solutions to these problems are extremely straightforward. To begin with, governments should educate people about the benefits of recycling and the ill effects of avoiding it. Ideally, this should be done at a grassroot level, like schools and colleges. This ensures that the next generation grows up with the habit of recycling. The next part of the solution is the develop recycling infrastructure to ensure it is easy to dispose such items in an ecofriendly manner. Better infrastructure removes the effort barrier to recycling and ensures people do it more willingly. A third solution would be to offer some incentive for recycling such items. It doesn’t have to be a large reward, just something that will encourage people to recycle these materials, as opposed to simply discarding them. In conclusion, I would just like to say that this planet is our only home. Therefore, it is our duty to take care of it. And simple things like recycling bottles and newspapers can go a long way in this regard. It doesn’t take much effort, but it can make a huge difference.
@walterwhite5307
@walterwhite5307 3 года назад
I just want to say,i like you madam. Thanks a ton you saved my hunderds of dollars which i was going to waste in coaching far from home and you provided me better coaching in these hard times of pandemic at home and off course for free…keep going mam you deserve 10 Million subscribers.
@Gman.Official
@Gman.Official 2 года назад
Passed the Ielts test but I keep on watching because I find amusement in listening to your voice and English 😊
@shreeyashsansare7321
@shreeyashsansare7321 Год назад
Recycling materials such as glass, plastic and cartons is an important practice that helps to reduce our impact on the environment. Many people across the world, however, do not recycle their waste and send everything to landfill. This essay will discuss why this might be the case and how this problem can be alleviated / The causes of this problem seem to lie in lack of awareness and convenience; each should be addressed separately. One of the reasons why recycling is not as popular is that the people are unfamiliar with the concept altogether. The old concept of treating waste as garbage is yet to be eradicated and the idea that selected used materials can be reused by further processing is still loose at large. For instance, despite many plastic recycling machines being installed on numerous train stations in Mumbai, people still throw their bottles in the bins, since they are unaware of their purpose and locations. Another reason is that there are less provisions in place that make it easy for individuals to go out of their way and work towards recycling. A good example of this will be the unavailability of bins that say “recyclable material” in and around public places like malls and parks, that would help people to naturally start the recycling process. The authorities need to play a crucial role in presenting solutions to the above problem. Promoting ads and organizing campaigns in densely populated areas explaining the economic and environmental benefits of recycling will ensure that the idea reaches a magnitude of people in a very short time. Social media is a great medium to help promote the agenda by creating and forwarding interactive posts. Besides, the local bodies can simultaneously make provisions for infrastructure that will enable the populace to indulge in good practices. Meanwhile, imposing some rules and regulations in public places will also ensure the cooperation of people in the vicinity. In conclusion, the dilemma associated with recycling as a process is quite naïve as compared to the variety of solutions that can be implemented to uproot them. In other words, a small step from each of us can help us ensure that we as well as our future generations profit from the remunerations of recycling.
@mahyaislam4494
@mahyaislam4494 3 года назад
U r doing great 😊 💘💘 May Allah give you the reward 😇. 🇧🇩
@itsmemay-may8045
@itsmemay-may8045 3 года назад
Im having my IELTS exam in the MAY.13TH.. AFTER Ramadan . Please pray for me sister , and I hope it will be easy for me in sha Allah. ... And thank you Asian for the teachings :) bless you
@sapnamahi7293
@sapnamahi7293 2 года назад
Hi Thanks mam Got 7 band in writing by following your tips and tricks 🧡
@irfanakram3044
@irfanakram3044 2 года назад
Please share some light
@sapnamahi7293
@sapnamahi7293 2 года назад
@@irfanakram3044 overall you must follow a certain pattern of writting a bp. There must be one central topic in one bp and you must explain that idea or topic with supporting ideas as well as an example. Other thing is that you must sprinkle some attractive and unique vocab in overall writting task. For eg. Humdrum (which means getting bored)
@irfanakram3044
@irfanakram3044 2 года назад
@@sapnamahi7293 Thanks for explaining this . I’ll consider this for sure
@hiroshilanguageinstitute8668
@hiroshilanguageinstitute8668 2 года назад
You born teacher. Only need maturity! Wish every luck!
@AjayVerma-cc2no
@AjayVerma-cc2no 3 года назад
Your videos is extremely come in immensely handy for me❤️❤️
@truphata.9215
@truphata.9215 3 года назад
So I took the IELTS today and my writing topics were, write a letter to your friend who you are watching the house for while he is overseas and tell him about the storm damage, describe the damage and suggest what needs to be done, this is for task one and task 2 was about whether or not school-leavers should get a job immediately or go to universities, discuss both ideas and write your opinion. Hope this helps
@elizabethjoyce2073
@elizabethjoyce2073 3 года назад
Thanks for sharing the topics
@blissmint
@blissmint 2 года назад
Love it! Thank you so much for teaching us all these great lessons!
@MrAnupa89
@MrAnupa89 2 года назад
Hi.... This is to say thank you for your great videos. They helped me so much in achieving Overall 8 in Academic test... Keep up the good work..!!
@kamalpritkaur1153
@kamalpritkaur1153 3 года назад
Best essay i have ever seen in order to provide right guidance..
@Optimistic_Outlook
@Optimistic_Outlook 2 года назад
Your sessions were really helpful for me. I got my desired band in just two weeks. I just wanted to say thank you so much.
@sukshamjeetsingh2459
@sukshamjeetsingh2459 2 года назад
What band score you achieve ?
@Rafiquemunna
@Rafiquemunna 2 года назад
The way, you are teaching is excellent.
@ganesanaruna6437
@ganesanaruna6437 3 года назад
Really useful one. The way you are explaining makes me feel confident and learn easily.. Thank you❤️❤️
@rinslythennakoon8452
@rinslythennakoon8452 2 года назад
It's appreciated your iconic way of teaching....thanks a lot for the tricky points that you have raised nicely.....!!!!!
@Londonzthebest
@Londonzthebest 2 года назад
Hello Asiya, I am thankful for the help that i got from your videos. got 8.5 bands in speaking, an 8 band score in listening, 7 bands in reading and 7 in writing.
@aayraworld3496
@aayraworld3496 3 года назад
Truly grateful for such clear yet advanced use of writing. Learning so much from you mam🙏🏻
@karishmashah8951
@karishmashah8951 2 года назад
Just a quick question, In the second body para do we need to write an example or just an explanation to the solution will do?
@FasTrackIELTS
@FasTrackIELTS 2 года назад
There is no rule that you must have an example. Use them when you feel this is the best way to illustrate your point :)
@maiconmarcelino2123
@maiconmarcelino2123 2 года назад
Hi Asiya! How are you ? I am so thankful to your videos...my IELTS is going to be on January 22, 2022... I am training my essays according to your lessons. Would you mind to check If my structure (paraphrase + thesis statement + outlined ideas) is well located in my introduction paragraph below? Task 2: Many argue that schools are no longer necessary because children can learn so much from the internet and be educated at home. Do you agree or disagree? After centuries, the current world experiences the possibility to understand or, at least trying to figure out, what and how the knowledge about everything ever seen is comprehended by human brains. Either being a student at the school or performing teaching skills as a teacher, nowadays the method has been changed to a new fashion about learning process, which is the internet-based lessons. This essay agrees that saving time and money through not being in-person at the education settings like universities, lead learners to the success as much as if they were there.
@JasmeetKaur-cd1bt
@JasmeetKaur-cd1bt 2 года назад
Why you don’t write examples after explanation in body paragraphs?
@navneet5628
@navneet5628 3 года назад
Today's ielts writing topic for computer-delivered GT was "In some countries, teenagers are encouraged to do part-time jobs. Some people think this is good and others disagree with it. Please discuss both views and give your opinion. Support with relevant examples
@breatheandrelax1550
@breatheandrelax1550 3 года назад
Just let me know how do you find it guys, Body Part 1- Agree Learning skills Getting out of comfort zone Practical knowledge Body Part 2- Disagree Believe in knowledge through educational institutions Stereotype of working after certain age limit Conclusion- I personally agree knowledge should go hand in hand with practical skills.
@sam_belieber_army_blink_7298
@sam_belieber_army_blink_7298 3 года назад
You are so amazing ❤️ I like the way you speak English wanna speak like you ❤️❤️ lots of love from India ❤️❤️
@Mrhunish
@Mrhunish 2 года назад
Thank you Asiya!!! I prepared for my IELTS in a week by watching your videos and got an overall score of 8.
@vaibhavwisdomtv
@vaibhavwisdomtv 2 года назад
Recycling waste material is considered to be one of the most important missions to prevent the environment from deterioration. Till date, tons of plastic decompose from bottles and dumps of newspaper do not reach the recycle stage across the globe, even in the most developed nations. This essay shall enlighten the reasons and provide a plausible solution. Ignorance is bliss. However, ignorance of potential disaster could only cause havoc. People in general are unaware about where the plastic waste material ends up at the end of it’s cycle. Not being aware leads to prevention of the right action steps. The solution to this is bringing awareness by showcasing the polluted water bodies, filled with plastic bottles and newspaper which could have been recycled and the repercussions of it, if left in that state. In continuation, running away from the responsibility is another big reason for material not being recycled. Accountability is tough and it is always easier to blame others than being on the other side. The answer lies in incentivizing, by either morally or monetarily. Making people feel good about recycling by rewarding their work on a national level or by providing monetary benefits for the same. In conclusion, spreading awareness on the recycling mission and incentivizing the recycling process can eventually lead people to recycle the dangerous material which is burdening the mother earth and its various life forms.
@dhimoberati8382
@dhimoberati8382 3 года назад
First of all you are stunning , today it was my first day I have watched you , I wish I found you earlier , anyway you make the IELTS test exam so easy and you are so punctual on any word you say , in my opinion You are the best of all, Regards Dimitri
@Robash1991
@Robash1991 2 года назад
Thank you so much because of your amazing tips I was able to get a band of 8
@АйгераСейтжан
@АйгераСейтжан 3 года назад
so clear explanation! thanks you a lot, I'll certainly practice taking all things you've mentioned into account
@shafaqzehra8651
@shafaqzehra8651 3 года назад
Hey Asya... Thankyou very much for your super amazing tips... I have recently given my Ielts and achieved a great score following only your coop tips. The only thing that makes me sad is my writing score.. Here is my band score : Listening : 8 Speaking : 7.5 Reading : 7 Writing : 6.5
@koji2107
@koji2107 3 года назад
man, you are an angel!!!
@faizahmadcheema5274
@faizahmadcheema5274 2 года назад
You are just awesome. Love to watch your videos. Keep it up, keep shining.
@chintan12386
@chintan12386 3 года назад
Hi..thanks for the video, it was very informative. I just had a doubt and wanted some clarification. In the first body paragraph of the essay, two reasons were provided. The first reason was highlighted using discourse marker "Firstly", but for the second reason you didn't use discourse marker " Secondly". So just wanted to check if this is correct from IELTS examination point of view.
@khushleenchauhan578
@khushleenchauhan578 3 года назад
Thanks alot ....your way of demonstrate, clear the doubts is brilliant ... This help me improve my writing task 2.
@maxliyosobirova9358
@maxliyosobirova9358 3 года назад
Hey Asia. Your videos , all of them are super beneficial, they are helping me to boost my score🤩Good luck in your work❤
@jyotisheemar5345
@jyotisheemar5345 3 года назад
I subscribe you but i see your video today . Now i got hope from your videos in your way of teaching may i got 7 band .😊
@realknowledge110
@realknowledge110 Год назад
Hi Asiya, thank you for your amazing work, I just wanted to say that you are doing super fantastic, please keep it up.
@hsks4980
@hsks4980 3 года назад
OMG ! Total time for essay is 40 min.. she did it in 20min with its explanation🤝.. നമിച്ചു
@arogundadeomotayo5201
@arogundadeomotayo5201 4 месяца назад
Hi Asiya, I think it should be 'inconvenient themselves' in the later part of the second paragraph.
@vallybaskar
@vallybaskar 3 года назад
I had always thought my English was kinda good, the way you write about a topic makes me question that now, it’s so clear , concise with no attempts whatsoever to show off your language , you do your writing do that for you instead , I’m in awe 🤓 PS. Can’t take my eyes off your outfit ! I want that too cos it is so me 😢
@FasTrackIELTS
@FasTrackIELTS 3 года назад
Thank you so much! My writing skills have improved a lot over the years but I must admit that this essay took more than 40 minutes to write. It takes time to make it concise :))) All the best!
@vallybaskar
@vallybaskar 3 года назад
@@FasTrackIELTS Thanks Asiya, my IELTS exam starts today , will let you know how it goes ☺️
@kunicapadhiyar3153
@kunicapadhiyar3153 3 года назад
How was your exam?
@vallybaskar
@vallybaskar 3 года назад
@@kunicapadhiyar3153 honestly I’m not sure , will let you know my scores when I get it , the reading part was the toughest , the second passage was so dry and consumed most o my time, so had to rush through the rest , also for the writing I felt I dint get enough points to cover and not enough time to finish it well too so 😔
@kunicapadhiyar3153
@kunicapadhiyar3153 3 года назад
@@vallybaskar hope for the best..
@kushpatel629
@kushpatel629 2 года назад
In today’s world recycling has been a major problem in many countries such as daily journals, bottles etc. people should take part in recycling these products to help the environment. This essay will depict why this can be a problem and how we can eliminate it. The reason for lack of recycling is quite simple. Firstly, in many country people are not aware about recycling products like glass, papers, and plastics; and they dump all those garbage into just one garbage which can hard the environment very badly. Seeing one person doing these kind of activities other people starts to follow the same practices and it will make the situation works. Secondly, lack of inconvenience can be a problem for people without even putting their thought into it they mix all types of rubbish together and it makes it hard for garbage pickers to separate the garbage. In order for people to be more aware I believe that public campaign can be a good start for government to spread some awareness to people to follow recycling practices at home, such as using two different dustbins as a separate dustbin for recycling materials and a different garbage container for food related waste; leading party can also send flyers to every one and educate people how to segregate these materials, which can help the environment keep it clean. Having less of inconvenience people tent to avoid separating garbage, ruling party should provide a public recycling contain in each area so people can use those containers to throw those in their respected place and it will be easier for garbage picker to differentiate. To conclude, I believe that products like glass, papers, and other recycling materials are not disposed in the way they should be due to not having proper education and lack of accessibility to the general public, can hinder this situation more; however, providing more sources and educating people can help to reduce this problem.
@ensaftaha1805
@ensaftaha1805 2 года назад
Excellent explanation and clear instructions .Thanks Miss Asyia
@Okiinumy0814
@Okiinumy0814 Год назад
Seeing how all the people got 8 overalls I’m here who is stuck on 5.5 I need help
@omki28787
@omki28787 3 года назад
Thank u Asiya for ur brilliant videos. They helped me a lot in my preparations. I got a band 8 overall score in my first attempt. Thank you again
@rizwanziyad
@rizwanziyad 2 года назад
Hey ... Can u provide me ur watsapp number please
@lgs1599
@lgs1599 3 года назад
It would be very helpful if u can also make some videos on each type of essay of task 2 . Same like this . It will help a lot Thanks
@todorokisocklol8865
@todorokisocklol8865 3 года назад
Thank you so much!!! This is exactly what I'm looking for!!! 💖
@Angle-i9e
@Angle-i9e 3 месяца назад
As a matter of fact, recycling is an important phenomenon that can mitigate the harmful effect of harmful environmental damage. Accordingly, many environmental activists have debated this issue and provided some solutions.This essay will delve into 2 main causes and a solution. To begin with, one of the primary grounds is that in some countries, individuals are unaware of the importance of separating wet from dry litter such as: vegetables, fruit peels, papers, cardboards, and coca or water bottles in the recycling bin, so they keep mixing both kinds of refuse excessively over and over. though, the dry waste will not be capable to be utilized again. Besides, inconvenience and lack of easy access to public recycling dustbins in each neighborhood is also another problem. Particularly, there might be a single huge bin in which combined garbage is taking place there that ends up going into landfill. The way that this vital subject needs to be tackled is through raising public awareness. considering that government play a huge role in educating people and even kids since early age and providing each city or even rural areas with facilities like free recycling bins that make people more comfortable to do so, But I assume that the key method is that governors should enact a strict rule that everyone must obey otherwise they will be heavily fined or may be deprived of a common service. To conclude, as I stated above, recycling can alleviate the destructive harm to nature. Hence human being alongside government can encounter this difficulty.
@natalinalabakana5185
@natalinalabakana5185 3 года назад
Thanks you Asyian you make me feel interested to join ILETS lessons so I will continue to follow one by one to enable me score the needed marks thank you again
@kas.5821
@kas.5821 Год назад
Hi, Asiya! Thank u so much for posting videos and making them free. Got my academic Ielts results, overall 8 with 9 in reading, 8.5 in listening, 8 in speaking and 6.5 in writing. Was a bit disappointed with my writing section, since i prepared for it and did my best.
@boyorgirl7915
@boyorgirl7915 3 года назад
Thanks for all the effort you put in the video, was helpful
@fabiof4946
@fabiof4946 2 года назад
Do I really need to provide two reasons when the questions ask "reasons" in the plural? I've seen some content saying that I only need to write about one problem and solution to meet the task requirements and that writing more will make me have a 350-450 words essay, which I might not have enough time to write... Is it really necessary to write two problems and two solutions?
@bikea.4873
@bikea.4873 3 года назад
Thank you Asiya for all you do. I got an 8.0 overall band score, I watched some of your videos, they were really helpful.
@tanjimomy8266
@tanjimomy8266 3 года назад
Good to see you back ❤️
@FasTrackIELTS
@FasTrackIELTS 3 года назад
Working hard to come back every Tuesday :))
@tanjimomy8266
@tanjimomy8266 3 года назад
I really appreciate all the hardworks you are doing for us
@abab-qr4ff
@abab-qr4ff 3 месяца назад
You are really awesome, It is just what I was looking for. Thank you so much.
@oNeHanDGuN
@oNeHanDGuN 3 года назад
i really have a problem with ielts writing :( my score.. Reading 7.5 Speaking 8 Listening 7.5 Writing 5.5
@nufaismohamed5734
@nufaismohamed5734 Год назад
Hi,what a wonderful explanation I really enjoy your pronounce and teaching speed are very nice It’s very useful for IELTS followers like me
@kurotunes891
@kurotunes891 2 года назад
I’m in love with that stockings
@wilhelmgardeleone1867
@wilhelmgardeleone1867 3 года назад
simply excellent.! (as always)
@shamma6466
@shamma6466 3 года назад
Hi in my conclusion, I write, In my conclusion, recycling is an important point in the life cycle, recycling bins are a great way to aware people of how much is it important to take care of the environment. this is the conclusion that I write it thank you so much for your help.
@iremkaraer9997
@iremkaraer9997 3 года назад
Hi Asiya! Thanks for the video. Is it OK to talk about the reasons and the solutions in a sentence in introduction part?
@antirugpull9149
@antirugpull9149 3 года назад
My writing for the topic: Recycling used materials such as glass, plastics and paper is one the most important practice in modern world to reduce the unwanted climate changes caused by massive landfills and poisonous gases emitted after burning these wasted products. However, many people across the world do not recycle their used products and instead send everything to landfills. This essay will discuss some of the major reasons why this might be the case and how this problem can be alleviated. The major reasons people do not reuse the material is the lack of the awareness and cheap availability of new materials, due to which they find recycling techniques inconvenient and boring and ultimately opting for the newer materials at much lower price. In addition, they are also uninformed about the dreadful effect caused to mother nature by these waste materials. For example, the plastic bottles and papers are either burned down or thrown away without using it for other daily means causing a massive effect on already deteriorating situation of the unwanted climate change. The solution of this problem, firstly lies in educating people about the methods and procedures of recycling and providing them with the clear steps to readopt each material type. In addition, provide them with the rewards for reusing the said materials and also propose a penalty for throwing materials without utilizing it for the second time. In conclusion, the unawareness and easy access to the brand new materials by people around the world has reduce the practice of reusing the materials. Therefore, a major campaign is utmost necessary to guide and educate the people by proposing a reward and penalty system to choose the recycling of used materials.
@itsurgirlmo5098
@itsurgirlmo5098 Месяц назад
Thank you. But what if your asked to state only the solutions? Is there a video for this. My question is , should i state the reasons also?
@arshgillarts7853
@arshgillarts7853 3 года назад
I just love the way you speak. very calm and easy to understand. thanks for this perfect guidance mam..
@petyaslavova7219
@petyaslavova7219 3 года назад
For the past 3 years task two has been opinion essays in my country
@senawirana
@senawirana 2 года назад
Your channel is wonderful. It was one of my main assets in IELTS prep. Keep going with your videos. With you and all students a great success.
@MelomaH
@MelomaH 3 месяца назад
thanks a lot, I could write essay which include 290 words 🤩🤩🤩
@shaiziskin6005
@shaiziskin6005 3 года назад
great videos. just a question- could I separate the paragraphs in the test? to make it easier to read?
@GillSaab-lt4ts
@GillSaab-lt4ts 3 года назад
Your videos are quite helpful thank you so much mam...
@piyoomeeGun
@piyoomeeGun 3 года назад
Appropriate waste disposal methods are not active around the globe where plastics, polyethene, and paper are concerned. This is identified as a global issue where the sustainability of an environment is mattered, this essay will highlight some reasons to why non-biodegradable items are not disposed and potential solutions to those problems identified. Firstly, plastic disposal projects and campaigns could be expensive where many developing countries cannot afford the machinery, manpower etc. Developing countries such as Sri Lanka and India currently suffer from economical threats where government bodies cannot actively contribute towards such programs. However, as humankind face an ecological crisis, appropriate disposal should be in place in every country by requesting for aids from developed countries to implement plans and relevant systems. If measures are set, people could adhere to them and behave accordingly. Secondly, Insufficient awareness of the crisis which has caused inadequate measures that are currently in place. Society is not aware of the damages ineffective disposal could cause, such as, threat to marine ecosystems, for instance in Sri Lanka, endangered turtles die due to plastics in the sea. Similarly, If there was a proper system, these creatures could have been saved. As per the solution, government bodies could join hands with education providers to begin campaigns that could increase awareness amongst communities. In addition, social media platforms could be utilized to promote projects and attract public attention. These solutions could possibly lower the harm. In conclusion, the global issue of discarding non-biodegradable items has put the environment in danger hence leaders around the world should try to change current systems to facilitate all countries to dispose right.
@riyarai2387
@riyarai2387 3 года назад
Hi Asiya! Your essay samples answers are extremely helpful. Could you please produce an essay structure of discuss both views and give your opinion .
@sarthakrijal6019
@sarthakrijal6019 3 года назад
What happen if i only got 4.5 in ielts writing and more than 5 in other?????
@dreamtheater2064
@dreamtheater2064 3 года назад
You're a great teacher.
@marinamusic20
@marinamusic20 2 года назад
I took the ielts exam in May and I got overall 7,5 . Thank you very much Asiya your videos and notes were very helpful .
@tarekabdelouhab4333
@tarekabdelouhab4333 2 года назад
Thank you so much for your help!
@aubaotran8263
@aubaotran8263 Месяц назад
your lesson is great. Thank you
@razmypreena9248
@razmypreena9248 2 года назад
Hi Asiya, Can we choose two reasons and describe each reason in one paragraph with the necessary solution for it? Else, is it always better to describe all reasons in one paragraph and the solutions on another? Please advice.
@guiselovebieber
@guiselovebieber 2 года назад
As far as i'm concerned, I always ave been told to use at least, conditionals, inversions, also, connectors such as ( moreover, in addition,however...) and to know how to start our introduction and the paragraphs such as... Intoduction: Nowadays, most of people.....; 1st paragraph: Firstly, On the one hand,
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