@FiendHavoc I was giving a sorta' tongue in cheek critique. Like a temperamental demanding instructor might. Thanks for taking it lightly. I play this piece as well and I have always loved it and I loved hearing you playing it. :):):):)
You played it too sweetly, Needs more spine. Utilize the lower octaves to give a rich gong sound that create a canvas for the melody. More royal pagentry and chop throughout. Especially at the beggining . Later it should be like a rushing wave and than a herd of horses running across the desert. Full of grace throughout but especially at the end. Otherwise very nice. I dare you to do it again. :D