Your music gets a little too loud when you are talking at times. Otherwise, keep at it. Always remember, some people are going to make fun of you regardless. So don't worry too much about getting every word on your script correct and never be afraid to ad-lib if it feels more natural. Like I said, keep doing these and check your audio balancing. I am curious as to how you intend to paint it.
@@DonDonP1 just some notes for your consideration. I'd also suggest on future builds record yourself building it and then speed it up. It is a bit clishe, but showing the process even at 4x speed can still be fun to watch.