Hero of Z: GokuT23 Origin- Episode: 28 

I wonder when Abbas will get his next form

My every VA is obvious it's me, my every VA is done through a Blue Yeti Blackout microphone, the rest can't be adjusted the way we want them too because some use phones for VA... As for dialogues, you gotta ask GokuT23 to make the script less cringe and childish...

To be fair he did say every voice of vegetat23 sounds like this which I can see that he means by the robotic. Your voice does sound kinda robotic and as for dialogue you don’t follow the dialogue I sent you, you make your own and he is talking about all of your voice lines sooo…..

@@GokuT23 you told me to make my own...

You guys are both great but GokoT23 voice acting professionalism is of a bit higher level. VegetaT23 main problem is the pauses between voices imo and the audio quality seems low & the voice acting is a bit rigid. I do enjoy VegetaT23 storylines originality sometimes. It’s great that this series may merge the best of both. I think GokuT23 has a lot of things done every well. What I meant by dialogue is in VegetaT23 the characters tone often seems a bit out of place as too common and familiar with foul language and squabbles about being who the girls have hots for more etc. It’s kind of unique and cool in some ways otoh bc it makes the chars seem more like real teenagers or something. I’m just saying it has a different feel to it. There’s this concept of “suspension of disbelief” that you’re in another world that shouldn’t be broken. Some rules are made to be broken, others are there for good reason. Just some food for thought. The main problem is the voices smoothness between actors, both in terms of time delays and other factors like volume & acting style. Sometimes VegetaT23 voice seems too low pitch on purpose in a bit unnatural way and it makes it hard to hear and less natural. You can use a voice pitch lowering software if you want it to be low. Don’t overdo it. The females in VegetaT23 can try more dynamic and girly performances. Don’t be shy to not fit in a fighting anime. Take it to 11, then notch it down if needed. About time delay: the audio clips come in and out as if pasted and not flowing naturally. Have less space between character lines. They should be almost continuous the way GokuT23 does it. Using all his own voice makes it easier probably, but you can have the other actors also wait less between each others lines. I’m sure you guys hear that right? So maybe you can improve it. I know it takes effort. Thanks for your great series, both of you! VegetaT23 can train up and be as strong as Goku like IRL (of the show heehee)

What do you mean by edgy please explain that.

@@GokuT23 like sometimes it’s just cringe so I just recommend not doing voice acting very often you can do it sometimes, but I just recommend that you do a little bit less of it and more of just explaining the story and what’s happening also I believe that you’re drawing too many Islamic references in your origin story which I don’t think it’s good since even the main villan is called ibless and I don’t think a lot of people will like that so I recommend just changing the name

Ahh for this I won’t change cuz this is my back story. I thought you were talking about my what ifs. Hero of z and what if are two different things. This I do for fun and passion and it’s a backstory of not just mine but other T23 characters in there. And I’m Muslim and therefore my OC is Muslim too.

​@@adhamgr2867well that part you mentioned of just narrating that's what makes it boring I'm not trying to offend just an individual like.

@@GokuT23I am not talking much about the origin story I’m just mainly asking you to change some of your what if to become more realistic not have as much fan made transformations and characters and also change the way your storytelling works have less detail in the battles and more focus on what changes if this event really does happen I think that could really help out your channel and the tourment of goku was so cool at least the 2 first versions of it so can you begin making it again I mean it could be a good sendoff to the transformations for while if you plan on taking my advice seriously you can still make fan made forms there and there don’t make it as op because I don’t think that’s realistic at all💀