How to improve your writing | COHERENCE & COHESION | IELTS Cambridge 

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Good job! With all due respect, the question at the beginning of the video 1:21 asks: "To what extent do you agree or disagree?" This is not an advantages/disadvantages essay as shown at 2:05. This is an opinion essay. The question doesn't ask: "What are the advantages and disadvantages of increasing the cost of fuel? "So we need to give our opinion and justify it by providing reasons. Accordingly, the following outline may be better: 1. Introduction: Your thesis statement 2. BP1- the first reason why you agree or disagree 3. BP2 - the second reason why you agree or disagree 4. Conclusion: paraphrase of thesis statement+ suggestions for future improvement

I found this video helpful, thank you very much! It has certainly given me more help on how to maintain coherence/cohesion in my writing.

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Hi Teacher! It was an amazing lesson.That's because,you shared how to justify coherence and cohesion in the sentence so that it could give a paragraph beautiful structure as well as a logical beginning to end of any descriptive writing. Thanks a lot.

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Professor you have wonderful way of teaching. (New active subscriber) Suggestion for upcoming videos. Essay components such as a) Relevance b) Structure c) How to handle an argument or to be argumentative d) Counter-viewing the argument e) Avoid superfluity f) English - figurative and metaphoric g) How to pitch your bias h) How to avoid spurious ideas i) How to show difference between specific and general ideas j) Paragraph transition (most important)

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