Well, I know I’m no expert in the books, but didn’t they describe her as being grey. Her fur actually looks more blue depending on the lighting. Her eyes really were blue though. Interesting piece of trivia: her name was initially going to be Moonpool, but they changed it due to wanting a character that didn’t have moon in her name
What's wrong with blue eyes? What if the reason a character has blue eyes is because they like blue. Also Siamese cats have blue eyes and they are more than white
Well, Akira's opinions changed, it states that in the description, but Siamese cats(that pattern is actually called color point) have at least 50% white spotting on them.
Siamese, Tonkinese, and Burmese cats all have the same genetics allowing them to have blue eyes their whole life. Their bodies are also mostly white. Also, most kittens are born with blue eyes, which change depending on melanin. The amount of melanocytes there are and how much melanin they yield makes the eye color differ as they grow. Most white cats keep their blue eyes because of this.
Alexa yeah, also Russian blue are grey cats that often have blue eyes, my friend used to have one with blue eyes. Also many many grey cats in the series have blue eyes, it’s actually super common.
"You're a medicine cat." "That doesn't mean I can't fight if I need to." Good point... meds can still fight. Wasn't Leafpool / Cinderpelt part of the battle with Mudclaw's rebellion?
I think giving a cat blue eyes is perfectly fine, if you make sure its not used TOOO much. Or it could be replaced with a better looking eye color *cough* BRIGHTHEART *cough* Also using prefixes from the books is nice too, especially if they were used only once or they were a really big side character that nobody remembered. It makes the cats have a less change of sounding stupid Edit: Ew I forgot I made this comment, u dont have listen to 12 year old me just do watever you want lol. Just be ✨creative ✨
I have to agree, i have a cat with blue eyes (irl and one of my oc's ) and have seen a small handful of cats who have blue eyes! true, it is rare buuuuutttt not impossible. I honestly wish that you would take the whole no blue eyes thing out because though it is cleche it can make for a good oc
Some ppl have blues eyes for color coding, or maybe blue eyes just looked best, you never know. Besides at least blue eyes are better than purple, pink, or red eyes. and i've even seen oc's with muli colors in the SAME EYE.
i made an oc! Name: Cloverleaf Role: Warrior Backstory: a normal cat backstory but he was born with a white mark on his body that looks like a clover Colors: Black & White Gender: Tom/Male is it original?
Premise: I don't know the Warrior cats saga, or even have access to it, so I can't know a lot about it. Just saying about CATS OC -I think Black and white are dangerous color to use on an OC because, usually, after "rainbow" and "neon", there is "black"/"black & white" (tested with my youngself, regretted it). Now, it is obvious black and white cats exist, so just use this scheme of colours in a realistic way, like a "tuxedo" or "moo" pattern. [Tabby pattern (Stripes) are usually not with pure black n white, but more common with some grey gradient. But u can say it is a Silver tabby]. However I think you meant to make him ALL black with only the clover white, right? -Be carefull with the eye color, it can affect your cat. For example, a pure white cat with blue eyes has greater chance to be deaf or partially deaf in comparison to other cats. Overall, you just should do research. RESEARCH is the key of success Now, with so little information, I can't even say if it is original, not original, or marysue (we can discard this one). Do your character have friends? Do he has some kind of "quest"? Something he want to succeed on his life? Just now, he seems a background character, or a "starting" character (for slice of life stories I may add). Remember, "normal" doesnt necessarely mean "boring" or with no particoular events. In this world, nothing is "normal". But pokémons. Pokémons can be Normal types. ... Of course, not knowing in what kind of setting you are using Cloverleaf, I can't help you so much. Maybe take some serious character tests to see if it is a good character (not the ones with "aw kawaii ^^" or with obvious overused and bland mary sue questions "Has your character all the powers?") I tried my best, hopes it helps!
Drobot Playz Mine: Name: Lynxclaw Gender: Tom Clan: ThunderClan Rank: Deputy Mate: Turtlestar Kits: Racepaw (she-cat) and Thornpaw (tom) Sister: Appleheart Mother: Luna Father: Titan Backstory: His father was a rogue, and his mother was a kittypet. Titan didn't like kits, so he urged Luna to give them up. When she refused, he killed her, and Titan took the kits, originally was gonna give them up to some rogues, but when her heard ThunderClan cats coming, he dropped the kits and ran off, hoping the cats would find them. The patrol did find them, and brought them back to the Clan. He was named Lynxkit after his huge paws and Lynx-like appearance. He went on with his life thinking he was born without parents, and always had a crush on Turtlekit, who's mother was from ShadowClan and father was dead. Appearance: Tan with dark dark brown stripes and amber eyes with ear tufts Personality: Oblivious, unable to stay focused for too long, playful, acts like a tiny kit, a bit dumb, shy, weak, caring
Rosebud Roses / notification squad Good OC, but You should make a non canon clan. And being a rouge is pretty overused. Other than that, your OC is pretty good
Inflen I don't know Gladepaw is a fan character, but in the video he was just a cat, not knowing he IS a fan character. I really couldn't word my response well, sorry if this doesn't make sense xD
is this good for an oc? Name: Dawnmist Gender: She-cat Age: 62 moons Clan: MeadowClan (a Clan i made up) Rank: Medicine Cat Appearance: She’s a light golden tabby, with skinny legs, small ears, a thin tail and amber eyes. Personality: She’s very quiet and anxious around cats she doesn’t know, but is loyal and sweet to them once she becomes friends with them. Backstory: She was born in the middle of new-leaf with her brother, Jaykit. Ever since she was a kit, she always had a interest in herbs and helping others, instead of playfighting with the other kits. When she became a medicine cat apprentice, she spent all of her time in the den or collecting herbs and trying to convince her mentor, Ryefoot, that she didn’t want a mate. A few moons later, she met Mossfang, an IceClan warrior who was always friendly to her. When she received her medicine cat name, Dawnmist, she was still meeting Mossfang at the middle of the forest, where they both admitted they loved each other. They had three kits, Twigkit, Stormkit, and Poppykit, but she gave her kits to her brother Jayflight and his mate Skylight. She died of old age at 107 moons, and went to StarClan to join her mate. BOOM THIS HURT TO WRITE
Okay, let me list a few things: 1. You didn’t mention the flaws 2. Dawnmist is a pretty generic name. I’ve heard at least three other OCs with that name 3. It seems like you copied the backstory from Leafpool. Maybe change it up a bit to seem more original 4. LESS TRAITS, FOR THE MOTHER OF STARCLAN, PLEASE! 5. This isn’t about your main OC, but the name ‘Skylight’ should be changed because there is already a clan called SkyClan That’s about all. I hope this helped!!
Heh I would make a blue cream tortoise shell with one gold eye and one blue eyes called Shiningmoon who can see individuals of star clan instead of silverpelt
Hawkwing Male, brown, some stripes, yellow eyes... kind of another Tigerstar clone, but he's not mean, not inspired by Hawkfrost, and I made him for a story. Generic cat who's part of a prophecy - your average Warriors main character.
No offense or anything..just advice, the ears are way too big, making the grey cat look like a mouse. You can make it slightly smaller. Yet what do i know about art XD
Dakota Goldcloud My cat ears are always big, and normally are placed on the sides of the head. (Just look at my profile pic and you'll see why. Though he's not a cat, he's actually an original species).
This is my oc :) (she's based off mothwing) Name: Cricketleap (for her ability to leap very far,) Gender: Female Mate: Tusslepelt, Kits: Echokit, Dewkit, Deerkit and Ashpaw, Pelt: She is a slightly darker brown and has dark patterns all over her like a tabby's, she has a white underbelly and fluffy fur around her face, around her body and her tail, her ears are small and her tail is just a bit longer than being docked from a dog bite. She has one small scar on her muzzle from her kit (deerkit) having a seizure. Her eyes are an emerald green and her muzzle has a faint tabby marking striped across it. Personality: Fun, playful, friendly and loyal, Flaws: Stubborn, uncertain and depressed. Rank: Warriror/queen I hope you like Cricketleap and tell me any improvements ❤️❤️❤️
First of all, really like Cricketleap's name, its unique, and simple. But I would avoid basing a character of a canon character, because you want her to unique. If your RPing or writing fanfics with her, people will find her boring if she's based on Mothwing. Just change Cricketleap up a bit and make her more unique, and she'll be fine. "Depressed" isn't a flaw, it's a mental illness, so isn't really a part of the personality. I think you should take that out. Remember, "stubborn" means that the cat will not change their mind no matter what, even when someone else is obviously rights, so stubborn cats are basically jerks. If I were you, I would take that trait out, unless you want her to be a jerky character (which is fine, btw). Also, "loyal" is something all clan cats HAVE to be, because if they're not loyal to their clan, they're going to be exiled or killed, ya know? I think you should take all those traits out, and add about four to six new positive traits, and also four to six new flaws, to balance out the positive ones. I really like the uncertain trait, though, you should keep that one. She has a nice appearance, though, I think you did a good job with that and you should keep it the way it is. Cricketleap is a great character, she just needs a little improvement and then she'll be AMAZING!!
@@yeet8656 Late reply, but cats can have multiple litters, not just one. So Dewkit, Deerkit and Echokit could have been from a second litter, while Ashpaw was from the first litter which is why he is older.
My OC: Name: Amberflame Gender: Female Role: Warrior Appearance: Brown fur with light stripes and bright amber eyes. Smaller in stature than most cats. Personality: VERY anxious and insecure. Often a worrier who is so desperate to please that she will exhaust herself beyond her limits. Has a tendency to panic or be fearful at almost everything. The only difference is that instead of running from her panic, she instinctively confronts it no matter how scared she is in order to do right by her clan. In that sense, she could be considered very brave. A hard worker who unfortunately has a tendency to run herself ragged if left alone out of her own manic need to feel accomplished and proud of herself. She is eager to make friends and doesn't like personal conflict between fellow warriors. She'd rather keep the peace and avoid potential arguments out of her own anxiety that it will turn to her. Though she seems unconfident in her abilities, with a little encouragement she'd actually improve a good deal, if only to please her mentors and friends. Like a tiny flame, she burns brightest when supported by those dearest to her and no matter how anxious or scared she gets, she would die if it means protecting the clan and the ones she loves.
The video was a really good video on how to make a good character! But the one thing is, I don't get how blue eyes is a problem. It is true that only a few breeds of cats have blue eyes, but really, how many purebreds do you think are in the clans? Also, sure, RiverFur IS kinda basic, but at the same time, it has a nice ring to it (don't get me wrong though, I really like the name TorrentPath, but it's more realistic as a warriors OC to have one of the usual names.)
Hmm... I was expecting a teen girl to have made this, but then I listened to your voice... Your art could definitely use some improvement, mainly in the line art and textures department. Your lines look very shaky and the textures of the fur just look unrealistic. I can tell where you were going with this style, but for your benefit, I'd suggest working on anatomy and strokes. If you use paint tool SAI, there's even a tool that helps your lines become less shaky, it's called 'stabiliser'. You are, however, great at designing characters and creating backstory and such. Your characters seem to be well developed, so you did a good job there. Regardless, I'd say you could still use some practice. Remember-- there's always room for improvement. -Alpha Shei
1) Warriors is a fantasy world. You don't have to base your character on genetically accurate cat. Again Bluestar is a blue-gray shecat not just blue. And Redtail is a tortoiseshell/calico tom which isn't exactly the easiest gender to get with tortoiseshell/calico. So being different and imaginative with your characters is what makes your character different. Making them just gray and simple makes them like everything else in the warriors fandom. Originality is important. 2)Saying that blue eyes makes your character look desperate to be liked is just nonsense. Many of the warriors in the books have blue eyes...again it makes the character look different and just because their character has blue eyes? So what! They naturally go with a lot of breeds and designs for fur coats, maybe not ginger tabby but must dark hues they do. 3) Yes names need to feel original but sometimes it takes the person to figure out their style in naming. I am a former roleplayer and it took me a while to find my favorite things to name my characters off of but just upright saying it can be harsh to the person being told this. It may uninspired them more. Let them name their character what they want again it takes the person to make their oc good not someone else.
I certainly agree. I have a oc called Dusksky (Not the one in my avatar, thats Nightmare Dusksky (dont ask)) and she has blue eyes and a grey tabby coat. I don't know why she is called Dusksky but hey
You DO know these characters are often made by children who are new at the fandom and this is often their first character. It dosent hurt you if they have these characters they need time to grow and learn to be creative. Let them do it you werent "perfect when you first started making characters, Let children do what they want!
Tobi Floof He wasn't telling anybody what to do, he was simply trying to help other people's Ocs develop and become better. If a kid wanted their oc to have blue eyes, wings and powers, he wouldn't judge them because come on, they are kids.
Well, everyone has to change their characters at some point. If people don’t receive criticism, they could never change their character and stay in their comfort zone. I used to have a crappy Mary Sue OC that I thought was perfect. Until I did research and managed to change my ways and make a good balanced character.
My oc Name: coaltail/ coalpaw / coalkit / coalstar / Role: leader Used to be: a warrior Colors:black chest, back, paws, tail, ears, and muzzle, blue eyes. Flaws: is scared of badgers one killed coalstars mother. Hates adderfur. Is scared of the river almost drowned. Good at: hunting, fighting, and solving problems Is bad at: swimming, hunting birds. Personality: creative curious Tell me if it's good
Idk maybe give her more flaws like for example: reckless risky stubborn rude airhead snappy goodie goodie miss/mister know-it-all. And thats only SOME flaws you should use some of these. Other then that its good!
Maybe dont make it a leader. Maybe include flaws in the personality instead of just fears. Like she never shows it but she doesn't like her leader and wishes she were leader. It may seem selfish but it's just human. Or I guess I could say cat. It seems like you made her good at mandatory things in clan life. So maybe make her bad at hunting and good at swimming. I like the name though.
Here’s my OC Name: Hawkpaw Age: 11 moons (Almost a warrior) Rank: Apprentice Fur: Light brown, darker brown stripes, and Light pastelish brown underbelly. Eyes: Yellow Flaws: Disrespectful, and negligent Traits: Has long back legs to jump higher, tough, protective towards her clanmates (especially her older brother: Featherbird) Backstory: Hawkpaw was born from Dawnwing and Brokenshadow of Windclan. She also has a older brother named Featherkit (Featherbird). Hawkkit would constantly make fun of Mistykit, another shekit in the nursery at that time, but she only bullied her because she was jealous and secretly in love with her. (She’s lesbian btw uwu) But Mistykit was no coward. She always defended herself from Hawkits rude remarks. Meanwhile, Featherkit was always complaining that the nursery was two small for his liking. (He’s really tall! Also as tall as his mother at the time-) His complaining would bother the whole clan, so Redstar decided to make him an apprentice early to stop his whining. Hawkpaw began to kinda of get jealous of her brother, but she couldn’t help but look up to him. When Hawkpaw FINALLY was 6 moons, she was heartbroken when she had found out Mistykit had died from a Hawk attack. Hawkkit had been looking forward to starting a future with Mistykit- and especially become an apprentice with her. For almost half of Hawkpaws apprenticeship, she hated and blamed herself for Mistykit death- thinking that maybe her taunts led Mistykit to die. (Which isn’t true-) Featherpaw noticed how sad Hawkpaw was ever since the death of Mistykit, and did all he could to help her. Any free time he had he would spend with his sister. He was even fell back in his training because of it. But hawkpaw wasn’t happy with all the extra attention and one day screamed at Featherpaw to stop treating her like a kit, and that she could handle herself. And that’s all I have! I hope you enjoyed Hawkpaw! Tell me what you think of her!
If you want everything to be so realistic, then why is your own Warriors OC not realistic? Brown cats are usually tabbies, unless it's a special breed like Havanna Brown or Abyssinian. And white spotting goes by symmetry, a cat having just one white paw is very rare. Just pointing it out, to me it's a bit hypocritical.
Fritz Fliza white spotting isn't always symmetrical My new cat is going to be coming in September but we've already got a few pictures of him, he has one white paw and half his face is white with a little dot of it on the opposite side on his mouth
Bright Guardian Akira How's this for an OC? I'm only ten so please don't judge!/ Name:Smokeypelt Sex: Female Fur: A mix of black, light gray, dark gray, and white Age:25 moons Mate(Forbidden) A black and white tom named Half Moon
Back story: Born into a forgotten Clan, formerly known as Aura Clan, was raised to be a a Warrior for 3 moons after she got her name of "paw. She started to train as a medicine cat instead. She fell in love with Half Moon and had kits. The clan broke in two, one side wanting to kill the kits, and the other wanting to keep them. The clan destroyed itself but Smokeypelt and her kits hid in Starclan, where the ancestors knew they didn't belong. When her kits grew up (Girls names: Snowtail, Darksnout. Boys names: Darktail, Darkeye, and Sootstripe) they all got chucked into the forest, on Thunderclan territory.
They fight with dawn patrol (Salt/Sand storm, Firestar, Graystripe, and Cloudtail) but Snowtail and Cloud tail instantly fell in love. Firestar won and took them as their prisoners, where Smokeypelt said d everything because she spills (like me) and Firestar is in disbelief.
But Cloudtail believed them because Snow tail and Sootstripe, being narcissistic and independent as always, leaped on Graystripe. Smokeypelt pulled Sootstripe off and scratched him on the nose. The Aura clan started to build themselves in a part of the forest no cat knew about, past moonstone.(Firestar and Cloudtail come with) Sootstripe now looks for wild cats or kits to build a clan because they ain't about incest. He finds a orange one and Smokey pelt names it Flamekit, a black kit that Snowtail names Pitchkit, and a white one they name Bleachekit. Smokeypelt suckles them to health and Flame kit opens its eyes last.
One thing that annoys me is people complaining about bluestar being a russian blue. How is bluestar a russian blue? Neither of her parents where, plus she doesn't have the vivid green eyes all russian blues have. Also, no cat in warriors could possibly be a russian blue or any other breed. This is because they are wild cats, and they dont consider breeds when mating. At this generation in warriors, any pure bred blood would be mixed with tons of other cat breed bloods. Every character is a mix, like a mutt expect they are cats.
'Cats dont have blue eyes.' Oh really? I see a Siamese, Balinese, Snowshoe and Russian Blue cats with blue eyes. I want true and helpful tips. Not this false plus not really good tips about how to make good 'original characters'. I'd rather listen to loud screaming. (Your voice isnt annoying tho) And yes I know you meant those who arent that breeds but ask what breeds their parents were before talking about it. Sure, saying those cats are mixed isnt creative but it makes way more sense than your tip. (Honestly)
One thing I like to do to come up with interesting unique names is.... well... ship it. For example let us take some decently familiar characters. Spottedleaf and... hmmm... Ashfur. Now ship it! Spottedfur or Ashleaf. Boom. Creativity at its finest. Some other examples: Tigerclaw+Willowpelt= Tigerpelt or WillowclawSorreltail+Patchpelt= Sorrelpelt or PatchtailUSUALLY they both sound pretty fitting. And if you feel like it, use some actual ships like, Thistleclaw and Snowfur! Thistlefur and Snowclaw. Huh? Huh?Firestorm SandheartYellowpelt RaggedfangOakfur BlueheartTigerflower Goldeclaw;)
I made an OC Name: Snowyheart Rank: warrior Backstory: Her father used to be a kittypet and her mother is clan leader. Snowyheart is very fast and strong but can sometimes hurt others feelings by mistake. She doesn't let things go to easily for example how she still greives for her lost bother Eaglekit. Clan: Cloudclan Appearence: Pure white with blue eyes that almost look gray.
@Kitty cat crazy Most of mine have short ones, backstories don't need to be huge as long as it's good it can be short. Sometimes short and sweet is great.
Here's my oc! Name: Mushroomglow Gender: Male Role: Medicine cat Clan: Cottonclan (my own clan, they live on a cotton farm) Personality: Arrogant, sarcastic, calm, friendly Appearence: Completely white with blue eyes (because of this they are deaf in one ear). They have a small, compact body with short legs and small ears Backstory: When Mushroomglow was only 3 moons old they had snuck out of camp, and found a group of mushrooms. He decided to try and eat one. It was poisoness. Luckily a patrol found him and brought Mushroomglow back. With his vomiting and high fever, he had to stay in the medicine den for a long while. He gained an intrest for the herbs he was constantly surrounded with, and started asking questions. The current medicine cat, Pollentail, started teaching him about the herbs and their uses. When he became an apprentice, he was renamed "Butterflykit" to "Mushroompaw", referencing the incedent. After many moons of training, he gained his full name "Mushroomglow", named that for some EDIBLE mushrooms he found that glowed and that he had a fondness for. How was that? Any critics? (sorry if my English was bad, I'm not a native speaker!)
Feather Pen I love the prefix mushroom! I think the part about finding glowing,edible mushrooms should be left out or tweaked. You should flesh out the personality too. Mushroomglow should have several positive traits,negative traits and neutral traits. The appearance is nice and possible.
I think this is very original but I haven't read all the books yet so I don't know also I think the backstory is very interesting the fir color is a very cool color too 👍
"Also blue is the most like able colour,Does that mean you are desperate to be liked?" But I have blue eyes so does that mean I'm desperate to be liked?
I'm a bit desperate for attention, but I can bare with not having attention for a long time (i'm in my room on my laptop for many hours in the day) edit: forgot to mention i have blue eyes, but they look green some days
If you want to make a realistic cat, then these points make sense. But if your aim isn't realism (even Warrior Cats isn't realistic), then I say go absolutely ham, make an OP sparkle cat with emo hair and make it as crazy as you like! Whatever makes you happy with your character. :)
Keeping these things in mind definitely matters if you are creating a character for a roleplay where your character has to interact with other people, then obviously it's not fair for you to go out of your way to make your cat "perfect" or "special." That's not fun at all for other people's character to interact with, and it won't be much fun for YOU to roleplay if your character has no believable personality. Otherwise, if the character is just for personal use, there is no wrong way to make a warrior cat oc imo. This sort of thing should be done for fun, guys. I went through a phase where i felt the need to scoff and look down on everyone who had a unrealistic sparkly warrior OC's, and man it is not worth it. I realize now how immature I was really being by going through life with that mindset. Let people have fun, if a ridiculous sparkly cat makes them happy, then it's a good OC. It's an OC for a fictional fantasy series, it's ALL the right way as far as i'm concerned so long as it's letting young people explore their creativity in their own way. Some of these are definitely good tips for basic writing, but...I wouldn't call it the definitive "right" way. That just a little restrictive. Especially that "original name" bit. That's not really fair, and seems to go against the point the rest of your tips were making? A fancy name doesn't make a character more interesting anymore than fancy fur colors. (Also side note, I mean this jokingly honestly, but isn't your own brown Warrior cat OC unrealistic? I assume that is a warrior cat OC anyway, given you use it for warrior videos. He looks to be solid brown, and a solid brown pelt would almost definitley not exist in the wild. Only very specific breeds of cats have solid brown fur. Is he meant to be a tabby? idk it's hard to tell. Not that I have any problem with unlikely pelt colors I just thought it was funny.)
(that second part was part-way directed at some of the attitudes i'm seeing in the comment section rather than the video itself, if it sounded harsher than I intended it to)
Tbh your warrior cat OC doesn't have to be totally realistic. I mean look at Blackstar. The only ways a white cat could have black paws would be if Blackstar was a black cat originally and then either became a white cat with black paws due to vitiligo OR he had the white spotting genetic trait. The only problem is that both of those traits would have made Blackstar totally white eventually. And in the books Blackstar was basically an old man with how long he lived. Whether you adhere to genetics or not is up to your tastes. I do agree with most of the stuff here with how you should follow the rules the book gives you, but it doesn't mean you have to make the most boring looking character in the world.
@@dragonsforlif5404 Where? Because even searching for a cat like that only brings up photoshopped pictures FOR WARRIOR CATS, if you've seen "plenty" then there would be evidence of them existing and there just isn't. A completely white cat with black paws is genetically impossible
I made a warrior cat cuz everyone else is Name: Bearpaw Clan: Wind Clan Rank: apprentice Appearance: Mostly brown fur, has a black tuft of hair on its head, has short tail, round ears,and amber eyes, small, Gender: Male Reason of name: looks much like a bear cub Flaws: bad fighter, can't see very well, believes other cats too easily Traits: Friendly, great swimmer, ok hunter, Backstory: Bearpaw is not very different from other apprentices so he's often ignored by other Clan mates.
I personally don't know about using prefixes/suffixes used outside of what's used in the series. I mean, some are okay, but keep in mind that there are some words that cats probably shouldn't know (especially words for twoleg things) such as "ink", "emerald", "horse", "angel", and "spirit" (though the series itself cheats and uses a name like "Needletail" even though cats don't know what needles are). I'd also suggest refraining from using prefixes such as "star" "sun" or "moon" in names since these are sacred things to the cats. Also, most names are used to describe the cat's appearance. A queen won't know what her kit's personality is when she names them (being that there is a time limit, she won't have forever to find out). Examples: *Blue*star. She looks blue in the sun. *Fire*star. His orange pelt makes him look like fire in the sun. *Cloud*tail. He's white and fluffy like a cloud. *White*storm. He's white. *Crow*feather. He's black, like a crow. *Ash*fur. He's gray, like ash. *Silver*stream. She's silver/gray. *Gray*stripe. He's gray. *Mouse*fur. She's brown, like a mouse. Etcetera, etcetera.
What cats know also depends on if it's in the original series clans or in a fan clan setting. Like with the warrior cats website I run the setting is a high fantasy world.
My OC^^ Lynx/Heart She cat Role: Warrior Green eyes Grey stripes Flaws: sometimes to harsh, naive, weird. Backround story: her father was from Wind/Clan and her mother was from Thunder/clan DO NOT STEAL
Lynxie Pretzel This could use some work,is their name lynx,heart,or lynxheart?What are the character traits?The backstory isn't really a backstory as well.Lastly,what are the colors of her fur?
Bright is kinda such a hypocrite in the funniest way. "Blue eyes, impossible." OC has blue eyes "No complex markings." Has complex markings for OC. "Needs flaws." Bright is freaking FLAWLESS. 👌👌👌
Kitzicat my first of was a MARY SUEEE She was WillowLeaf And she rescued rogues and all the clans and was beautiful and her leader was absolutely okay with making her own clan of rouges and named her Destiny and her friend in the clan was a messenger who went back and forth to send messages which was not useful the clan of rouges could’ve just came and left.. Also they named themselves lightclan which doesn’t make sense
My first OC was such a Mary Sue, Heatherfrost and her mate was a Gary Stu. At least her sister was a little relatable. Now I’ve got Leaffall, who had bad traits like stubbornness, easily irritated, and... introverted? I dunno. Still figuring her out.
dont make the mistake i made of using very ADVANCED prefixes for my characters like 'helix' it made no sense in the warriors universe, it was admittably my worst name.
Is this a good oc? I use her in roblox Warrior cat games Name:GingerPelt Gender: She-Cat Rank:Med cat Look: A ginger tabby,Her main pelt color is light and her stripes are more of a dark orange brownish color, and she has green eyes. Personality:Kind,Weak,Smart,Skittish Clan:TC Background: GingerPelt was once owned by two legs, Her name was 'Ginger' ,Which is partly where she got her name from,but she mostly is GingerPelt in honor of her ginger color base pelt.
- Background should add why she is not with twolegs anymore - The trait WEAK should be more specified: Is it as in personality (can't stand for herself, can be used/manipulated) or constitution (can't fight, can get hurt easily) - When writing the personality, try to articulate more. Simple traits are okay for roblox roleplays, because usually there is no character sheet. However out of there you should be more esaustive. -Also, before writing all the flaws and qualities in the same line, try to write those two separated and ask yourself if "yyy flaw" really is a negative trait or just a quality in disguise. (Saying so because this is a common mistake people do, like myself). After writing them, try to balance them. Too many good traits should be avoided as much as too many BAD traits. Not being able to read Warrior Cats (very rare in my country), I can't help you more then common OC review. Hope this is enough and that some Warrior Cat expert shows up to give you more advice!
XxDarling WolfxX Try adding more depth into her personality as well; a character should have atleast 3-5 positive traits, 2-4 neutral traits, then 3-5 negative traits.
I don't agree with this video because fan made cats are supposed to be creative because their fan made and people should be aloud to make their dream cat. Adding rainbow colors and head fur and magic powers is totally fine because that's what the person who made the cat likes and that person is letting their creativity flow. Plus this video goes over genetics that not even normal warrior cats would care about witch goes beyond the point of even making a oc in the first place. And blue eyes are actually an eye color in real life and in warrior cats search up Siamese cats and most of them have blue eyes and in warrior cats CloudTail, BrightHeart, SnowFur, BlueStar and much more cats have blue eyes. So I think that when your making an oc fans should be aloud to let there imagination flow, yes maybe try keeping it a bit realistic but what you added in this video is going a bit to far in making your oc realistic. Other than that good video!
Here's my oc: Name:Moldstar Rank:leader Mother: leopard fur Father: owlfur Brother: whitestorm Mate:orangeear Son: whisperkin Daughters: poppyleaf lovestain Pelt: mostly gray with small orange spots Eyes: blue Backstory: moldstar started as moldkit, when moldkit was just born she had no idea that she had a brother because she was deaf. When she opened her eyes her brother was playing outside so she still didn't know about her brother. she looked at her mother and father. She was finally had the courage to go outside. She padded around camp seeing all the cats but it was so quiet............ she had wondered out of camp and accidently got close to a thunder path. A monster game raging through and stopped to turn out to have a twoleg inside. The twoleg grabbed her and put her in the monster. She had become a KITTYPET. The Twoleg took her to this place to heal her loss of hearing. after about two weeks she wandered outside to be surprised to see a thunder clan cat jump out at her. He took her back to camp since she is a kit. The cat that grabbed e explained everything. They suddenly knew who I was. They thought the best home for me would be riverclan so I was in riverclan! Soon I met orange kit and we became best friends. After a long time she became leader. Orange ear died and love stain (her kit) died as well. New leaf left the clan to met a kittypet with her mate, cole. Whisperkin became leader and was mated with cottontail a beutiful yellow sort of like daisy she cat. They had a kit named patchkit. They lived happily ever after
-Mold is icky, not a very good prefix. Maybe Lichenstar? -it usually is kinda annoying when people insert their character as the son of two canon characters. -Newleaf is a season name and Love is a bad prefix in my opinion
My warrior oc is named flarefur, she is a shadow clan warrior with 1 Amber eye, the other one she lost to bird. She is a ginger and light yellow tabby, her name came from her backstory. She originally was a kitty pet, but her parents and old house were lost to a fire. She has a brother also, his name is oakglaze. oak a wind clan med cat, he is a Siamese cat with green/grey eyes. He has a similar backstory to flarefur.
Steller beats :Mlp and more! Her brother being a Siamese is unlikely, since she is a ginger tabby. Even if the parents were Siamese, it wouldn't work for your OC, since she is a tabby. He could be a tabby, or bicolor. Just probably not a siamese.
I make characters based off genetics. For example, my lil floof Quickbird is a goldish-tan striped lil with white paws, and abnormally large ears. Her father was russet striped, and her mother was white and gold patched. Her tiny form is because of her being born early, and not growing to the proper size of an average kit. Wren is another one of my ocs He's a white tom with dark gold and brown tabby patches. He has lavender eyes (impossible, but pretty). His father was a black tabby, and his mother was a cream molly with a stripe of brown down her back.
Akira’s logic here: CATS ARE NOT BLUE, NEITHER IS BLUESTAR! The entire ‘Russian Blue’ breed of cat (aka Bluestar’s breed): *HOL’* *UP* Also for a quick thing, Akira: River’s already a name of a clan. The name is ✨unoriginal✨ Riverstar: Wut…
Seriously. The warrior cats fandom has some of the worst elitism I´ve ever seen in a fandom, it rivals the competitive pokemon community with its gatekeeping.
I always take these things into consideration: For the past times I've always given my OCs, not just Warriors OCs, I give them flaws. There is even a site with Negative & Positive char traits in which I use. www.ongoingworlds.com/blog/2014/11/a-big-long-list-of-personality-traits/
My oc is spotted star he but first let me get this out of the way having your own clans is perfectly fine I think I don't know So spotted star is the leader of fox clan his body is covered in black spots and his tail has black stripes going around it. He is scared of his friend Black claw killing him because of his mother's death which was not his fault. He continues to try to be a good leader but he can't control something's star clan does. Everything was destroyed by a two leg and his whole clan might be dead. He is very self conscious about the other clans in there Forest and saying he is weak He is a very caring cat . So that's spotted star!
My OC (Don’t bash me) Name: Darkstorm Gender: Tom Sexuality: Bisexual Clan: Shadowclan Appearance: Grey cat with dark grey and white stripes with aqua eyes Backstory Summary: He was rejected by his parents after the leader had chosen (Believed to be) murder to be his mentor, several moons later he was chosen to mentor a Apprentince, Owlpaw/wing (His future mate) and once he leaves camp to hunt his brother, Nightstone, attacks him and he became a prisoner. Darkstorm decided to leave but soon he realized that Owlpaw had followed him. He made it to the lake (future territories) and he made Owlpaw a Warrior, she confessed her love to him and he confessed too and they went back, his parents still don’t love him, but he is okay as long as he has his family. He is still currently a warrior.
Okay, so from what I gathered, Darkpaw was rejected by his parents because he was the apprentice of a suspected murderer. Moons later as Darkstorm he was given an apprentice of his own, Owlpaw. One day while hunting his brother Nightstone... imprisons him somehow? And Darkstorm decides to leave to the future lake territory and discovers Owlpaw followed him. After confessing her love to him, they both head back to the forest territories, but not before Darkstorm makes Owlpaw a warrior, Owlwing. #1: How does Nightstone imprison him in his own territory? #2: The chances of a cat traveling to the lake and finding their way back? #3: Leaders make warriors not warriors themselves. #4: Gray cats don’t have blue eyes and aqua is no exception, so you can do amber, green, or yellow. #5: I looked it up. No tabby has white stripes. That can go as well. A better backstory would be: Darkpaw was rejected by his parents and brother because of him being apprenticed to a supposed murderer (the leader let this cat stay in the Clan because there’s no confirmation they committed such a crime). He becomes Darkstorm and gets an apprentice of his own, Owlpaw. Later, a cat dies and every cat thinks Darkstorm killed them because they were with him, and he has motive ( because this isn’t Darkstorm’s favorite cat in the Forest). So he promptly gets exiled, Owlpaw confessing her love for him and going with him. They live as rogues together, and when Darkstorm is cleared of his name, they go back to being ShadowClan and Owlpaw is given her name, Owlwing. I criticize only to better others.
My OC is called Doefinch. She is 12 moons old so she is a newly made warrior. She is a brown cat with white spots running down her back and on the top half of her shoulders. She has two different eye colors one amber and one almost emerald green. Her traits are she is kind, patient, and a swift hunter. Her flaws are she is shy but very talkative, a bit naive, and not the best jumper. Haven't thought of a backstory for her yet.
Bluestar is a blue-gray cat, so does that technically mean that an O.C. can have gray fur with a blue tint? I would like to hear your opinion on this. (Also Russian Blue cat, they are gray with a blue tint, the most common eye color for these kind of cats is green.)
If it is something real, go on. Russian blue, some british shorthair... However they are not blue as pure blue, as you said. The saturation should be LOW. The blue is really cold, greyish. Some images on the internet are obviously photoshopped. However you can use a more vivid blue to show the *lighted* parts. Just don't make NEON COLORS FOR THE LOVE OF POTATOES
OMG I MADE AN OC USING ALL YOUR STEPS OKAY LETS GO Name: Glassquill Role: Deputy Backstory: She was a rogue but she found ThunderClan and they accepted her right away! Colors: White and gray. Gender: Female/She Cat ISNT SHE PERFECT OMG!!!1!! (This is a joke. I actually make pretty good characters.)
