Thank you so much ma'am!! This saved my grade on my final exam! I can't thank you enough for this. God bless you in a way of making your hearts desires come true! Amen!! You are one best and gifted instructor.
Raquel ~ thank you for your thoughtful comment! I am so happy to hear that this video helped you. We truly appreciate that you chose to learn with us. 😃
THANK YOU SO MUCH TEACHER WENDY! GOD GIVE YOU THE TALENT A HAERT OF TEACHING, KEEP IT GOING GOD WILL BLESS YOU MORE BUT IT IS BETTER IF THAT GIFT YOU HAVE IT WILL YOU USE TO THE GLORY OF GOD LIKE A TEACHER OF THE WORD OF GOD. USE YOUR LIFE, OFFER YOUR LIFE TO GOD!
This is AMAZING. Thank you for the simplicity of the topic. Now I know why I failed my last paper and now I am equipped for the other papers and dissertation and writing.
Miss Wendy, I only just came across your video, as i was searching for guidelines, on how to write a thesis for beginners, MISS WENDY, I LOVE LOVE LOVE YOU, THANK YOU EVER SO MUCH for posting and for educating this beginner, with your great video. From SYD AUSTRALIA XOXOX
Madam, Superb explanation. The way/method you adopted is that even a lower class student can understand very easily provided that the student has rudimental standard vocabulary and organisational structure of English language with good rational skills. Your lecture itself tells your matured expertise in referring many books and teaching experience.On the whole a difficult matter in simpler terms. Any way your contribution is highly laudable.Thank you, Madam
This is only acceptable in high school. There should not be a "because" in any thesis statement. You should not give your reasons in the thesis. The reasons form the body and should not appear in the thesis. In college, a thesis like the one in this video is just wrong.
Thank you for your kind words. You can write a thesis statement. Remember it is the point you are trying to make. It tells the reader what the purpose is of your paper. You've got this!
Wendy, I was little bit confused abt The Topic of sentence & Thesis statement , 1. topic of sentence = Topic (subject, who/what )+ controlling idea (describe the subject) where as 2.Thesis statement = Sepcifc Topic + idea/opinion + supporting details / evidence , however can a topic of sentence can have a supporting /reasons /evidence ? in that case how can we identify them ?
Hopefully this will help me with the English Composition class I am currently taking. I do not do well with Composition courses. I usually eek by with a mid C at best. Yet I do well writing essays for other classes.
You made me understand how to simply craft one of my worse aspect of writing, thank you. In return, I have liked the video, subscribed to the channel and commented the video. I hope that could at least be an iota of what you did for me.
Thank you so much for your thoughtful feedback. I am so happy to hear that this video helped you. Also, we are grateful that you chose to learn with us! 😃
Thank You for your explanation. It was fantastic. May I clarify to you what is the difference between the Thesis statement and the main claim? Appreciate much for your help
Thank you for your thoughtful comment 😃. As for the thesis and the main claim - I believe they are the same thing - just different terminology. But, I am not certain as to the context you are using "main claim". Is this a term your teacher uses or did you read it somewhere? If you would clarify that, then I may be able to give you a more informed answer. Hope this helps! We truly appreciate that you have chosen to learn with us.
so, does the reasons that I mansion here supposed to be the only ones my whole essay will be baked about or I'm I allowed to add more reasons as I proceed to the other paragraphs?
So that is where the phrase ‘it’s debatable’ comes from. I always hear people categorizing other’s statements as ‘debatable’ but I didn’t know what it meant. What i learned from you, the dichotomy between debatable and not debatable can be represented by the following statements: “The telluride ski resort is fun” This statement is not debatable because it’s your opinion. “The telluride ski resort is a unique experience” This statement is debatable because we can argue whether a unique experience is or isn’t unique.
A relaxing vacation at Tarout Island is a refreshing experience because of its blue beach, quiet atmosphere, and exquisite places for spa and massage. How is my thesis statement?
I am not sure that I understand your question correctly. Would you try to ask it another way? If you are asking if you have an "opinion" about what you are writing - I would say "yes". Any time you write you typically have an "opinion" about what you write but it may not be an official Opinion Paper. For example, if you thought smoking was bad for your health - you may choose to write a Cause/Effect paper that focuses on the negative aspects of smoking. I hope this helps. If not, let me know!
Thank you for your unique way of transferring knowledge. This piece is very helpful. Please, how can I reach you? I have an easy to write but I need a review.
Thank you for your question. I am not certain how to do that on this platform. You may need to stop the video and write down the steps one at a time. Best to you and your English language learning journey 😃!
You could write a simple thesis telling the reader that there are some similarities and/or some differences between these two countries. Hope this helps!
@@WorldwideSpeak Writing in your personal daily journal. Allow yourself to write in a structured format. I’m trying to prepare myself for a written essay in approximately six months from now.