Thanks Gurmeet But I want students should write better essays and please send me for correction . Definitely I am going to give feedback on every aspect
Mam I think your approach of writing second sentence of introduction is completely wrong. There should be answer to the question. While doing paraphrasing,in first sentence, you only replace the words with synonyms- it is not a good paraphrasing. We can't give our opinion without need - it should be mentioned in question first. Personal examples should not be given
Thanks for this concern But it is clearly given in the question Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. And for the paraphrasing part it s upto your writing style ,I will be showing another style in another question type of videos . There are many styles in which you can write an introduction
Thanks But for this send me the question statement of writing task 2 . If you get the essay writing task related to nuclear Please don't think they are testing your knowledge about nuclear energy . Infact what they might be asking about its consequences os benefits . So don't worry about the topic
@@ielts-9314 thank u mam for replying honestly i dont know the exact statement recently , my friend appeared for exam and he told me about the topic , so i dont have much idea regarding this essay ! so could you please explain it?
Thanks Amrit pal Paragraphs are four in my essay 1) introduction 2) body paragraph 1 3) body paragraph 2 which is longer than 1 para 4) conclusion There is no hard and fast rule for example but it's better to some common example or a research from newspapers
