How to Write the PERFECT About Me Page 👌(or Social Media Bio)

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Want to learn how to write an about me page or social media bio that gets people to stick around, subscribe and even become a superfan?
Well, you're in the right place! In this video, I'll show you the 5 parts of an about me page that you should definitely have in order to convince a new reader, listener or viewer to keep digging deeper into your content or website.
Also, be sure to check out my free blogging course, Build Your Own Brand. Click the link below to check it out:
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👉The 5 Components to the Perfect About Page or Bio:
0:37 - The Hook
3:08 - The Benefits
4:53 - Proof
6:31 - Your Personal Story
7:51 - Opt-in Form
About pages shared in this video:
Derek Halpern from Social Triggers: socialtriggers.com/about/
Rick Mulready from The Art of Paid Traffic: rickmulready.com/rick-mulready...
Antonio Centeno from Real Men Real Style: www.realmenrealstyle.com/abou...
The Fantasy Footballers Podcast: www.thefantasyfootballers.com...
My About Page on Smart Passive Income: www.smartpassiveincome.com/about
Which of the 5 realms of the perfect about page or bio had been missing or something you feel you need to work on a little bit more?
Let me know in the comment section below!
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@Canital1971 4 года назад

I am just starting my "About me" page and mission statement. I was really stuck as to what to include without sounding sales pitchy or arrogant. I found some of my old reference letters and pulled out a few quotes that clients in the past wrote about me. They inspired me in terms of how to present myself...through their eyes! I asked for permission to use their words as testimonials on my website, and now I have something to work with when creating my story and unique approach of how I serve my niche. Pat, your video tips provide me with a simple structure to organize all this information that naturally leads my readers to a point where they choose to click because it's genuine. Thanks!

@hugodevotion 5 лет назад

Totally agree, I can’t believe you actually have all the details I’ve been looking for! Just wanna say a bigger thanks for helping us improve our stats. Great job Pat, thanks!

@juicy5816 4 года назад

Found this really helpful. Just started building my own website and i want to show people that even if you dont succeed in school you can change and make something of your self. Thank you for the help.

@nanapennypockets6203 6 лет назад

Your timing is perfect on this topic as I'm just in the process of redoing my About page. I don't think I'd thought about putting an opt-in on that page and you're right - outside of the home page it's the most highly read page on the site. Thank you.

@julieunderwood6072 2 года назад

Very helpful. I had the hook, benefits, and personal story down as I was just drafting my About Page content, but I really needed your perspective on the proof and opt-in sections. Thanks so much for making this clear and instructive.

@kariepricetx 4 года назад

Totally agree that the About page is SO important! And I really appreciate the tips you provided here.

@808mup 6 лет назад

Awesome content as usual. You're creating raving fans across the nation. Thanks Pat.

@mylifeswork101 4 года назад

Thanks Pat, Almost all of the 5 areas you mentioned; hook, open loop, benefits, proof and personal story needed a serious upgrade on my photography website. This was a great frame work!

@yourfriendlygamedev 3 года назад

I appreciate the insight! The benefits was a good helpful tip! My story was rambling and I was having trouble being concise to the reader as to why they're even reading it. Great tips!

@mrsam5851 6 лет назад

Thanks for this pat, very useful. Good to see I've already incorporated some of your points but you've given me ideas to make it better. Much appreciated 👍

@jessicadragon3954 4 года назад

After watching this video I literally got my pen & paper and wrote down my about me page 🙌🏼 So Thank you so much for making this video! You’re one of the few people who actually always bring results and clarity on what to do unlike others who just keep talking nonsense just to have a video up 😂

@maggiebergman 5 лет назад

Timely advise Pat, I’m just setting up a new site that will benefit hugely from a great About page. Will start writing the main points this weekend and fine-tune over the next few days while I’m working on the structure of the site. It’ll be good to have a few pages and posts ready to go! Thank you for another great video!

@NancyBasileVideos 6 лет назад

You're right! I was listing features and not benefits. That little adjustment in perspective is so important. Thanks!

@amandaj3279 2 года назад

Pat your videos help me dramatically. God Bless You for sharing 🙏🏼

@viajerosvagabundos 6 лет назад

Re-doing my About Page today! I basically have to tweak all five points. I had them on it, but now that I heard what you said, it was being communicated on a below average fashion. Thanks Pat!

@patrickfinegan5836 6 лет назад

Great advice as always Pat! I'm just starting my website and this will definitely be a great help. Thanks and love your stuff! Cheers!

@judechan6916 6 лет назад

All the points are helpful to me. I am going to work on mine. Thanks Pat!

@theinsanewriter 5 лет назад

I had most of this info on my about me page with the exception of Proof, but there were a few areas that I can definitely improve on. Thank you! Time to revamp my about me page!!

@KateEmiley 5 лет назад

call to action definitely! I never thought of having this on an about page! Great video Pat

@jaimejay7457 6 лет назад

Hey there "I'm Pat" - thanks! I have an about page, but this inspired me to create a complete makeover to mirror what you were talking about. I have an incredible story and after looking at my about page... I didn't even share it... what the heck? These points are so logical, but in my case and I imagine in so many others, they are overlooked. Thank you for explaining the details and breaking this down into something that is uber easy to understand. After all, it's all about connecting and when you break down pain points, and identifying these pain points in easy-to-understand terminology, you gain followers and fans... :-)

@thejessicagoodenough 2 года назад

Pat, your advice is always 👌. Thank you so much!!

@jerrydesu 6 лет назад

Great tips, especially the part about practicing, sharing, and really honing in your personal story while still keeping in mind it's about serving your audience.

@laurawales1805 5 лет назад

OMG! I just love you and your stuff. So helpful!!!!

@debkrieg4000 6 лет назад

This was awesome, Pat. I am tweaking my brand focus and therefore re-writing my About Page. Thanks for the reminder of the importance of "proof". My current testimonials are now quasi-irrelevant so I am going to have to come up with some new material.

@CristobalColonPR 6 лет назад

Thanks, Pat! I think that of all five things you mentioned, I haven't included (or even considered) four of them. The most important thing: the About Me page is not really about me. That's completely mind-changing! Thanks, Pat!

@patflynn 6 лет назад

Hey Cristobal! Thanks for the comment! You won the SPI pin giveaway for this video! Shoot an email to pat@smartpassiveincome.com and we’ll get you hooked up! 🙌🏼 For everyone else tuning in, be sure to subscribe to get notifications when new videos are posted!

@bradbear2011 6 лет назад

Thanks, Pat! Another timely and relevant video for where I am on my journey.

@leahconyers5110 6 лет назад

The structure of the whole process and understanding your point of having the right hook are important! Thank you. 💙🙌🙏💯💯

@robinskitchencreations8699 3 года назад

Thanks Pat for sharing your information. This is very informative to me I haven't even started any of that I'm just now getting my web page setup for my blogs so this was very helpful for me.

@catheb2225 4 года назад

Thank you Pat!!! This is amazingggg

@cyndimayer4909 5 лет назад

Thank you Pat. I am in the early phases of creating a podcast and developing its web site so this information is especially helpful to me in this early stage. Much appreciated.

@mikebkhansen6119 11 месяцев назад

Got to say. This is the best video I've found on how to write an about me page. Thanks

@SalmaJafri 6 лет назад

This is true value Pat, especially as I just filmed a story video yesterday to go along with my written page. Helps me contextualize my about page. Thanks a mil!

@patflynn 6 лет назад

Awesome Salma! Best of luck! 👍

@BharatinGermany 5 лет назад

I subscribed after watching this video! :) Great work Pat!

@GraceUkeni 3 года назад

Pat you always spit Wisdom, thank you for this ❤️😁

@stephanieparker9731 5 лет назад

Thanks Pat! I watched your video as I re-tooled my About page. I know it's loads better now.

@bjoernair 6 лет назад

Thanks for that! I just updated my website. The questions at the beginning are just so easy to miss. Great advice! Keep it up!

@punny_dentist 6 лет назад

I was literally looking for this man! great video!

@ericvancilmedia3108 5 лет назад

I'm in the process of writing mine. This is great info!

@azaleacardel7664 6 лет назад

Thanks Pat finally got around on making an About Page. Really helpful stuff as always!

@IVFConceptions 5 лет назад

Thank you for sharing your knowledge. I just happen to see your video, this is the 2nd one. Within in 3-4 seconds of the first video, i felt so strong low spirit... Something like a depressing feeling...just felt it. I really hope you are in highest and best of spirit. Cheers!!

@earlcolemanjr 4 года назад

Pure gold. Thanks Pat!

@dadhackersbecomingthemengo2263 6 лет назад

Thank you Pat, I've been struggling with writing about sections and this gives me a framework to get started! 👊

@DapperDividends 3 года назад

Awesome tips Pat. Thank you for sharing! 🙏

@websitebuoy8439 6 лет назад

Great video! Updating my About Page is on my to do list. Now I have an idea of what I'm going to put on it. Thanks!

@MissouriStateEM 6 лет назад

Great stuff Pat. My takeaway is to remind my students that an “about me” page is really an “about them” (the reader) page.

@rajanpadayachee8844 4 года назад

Great 10 minutes of learning. I am new to this and thought I should get some guidance before I write my about page on my website. I now have structure. Thank you.

@sharondavis2898 6 лет назад

Thanks for the tips. I am going right now to add an opt-in box.

@craiginzana 6 лет назад

Thank you! I'm working on a website for a client that was very successful in pre-internet days and this about page is going to rock with the testimonials and video proof he has. If I can get a personal story out of him too then there's no failing with this as a cornerstone page of the website.

@DavidACaren 6 лет назад

LOVE IT! I've got some updating to do to our website now. Thanks Pat!

@tmurray07 4 года назад

Thanks for such a clear outline on how to write the about me page. I had modeled mine on others I had seen that was written in the third person. I see the benefit now of writing in the first person as if you are having a conversation with your avatar. Thanks again.

@k.s.brixey4469 4 года назад

I like your idea of writing as if having a conversation with someone in your audience. Pat's course 0 to 100 taught me to quit thinking about my target audience as an Avatar and thinking about them as a real person. At first it was scary because we were reaching out to people we knew and who knew us. Eventually it became super fun and the people who responded have helped me so much.

@artoriatyler9544 2 года назад

Thank you so much for this awesome video! What great content!

@ethangoodman893 4 года назад

Thank you very much for this Pat!

@JeniBurckart 6 лет назад

Great video Pat. I've got some work to do on my About Page. I need to prioritize the benefits and set the hook, add more visuals, and add an email opt-in. Basically all I've got going for me is the personal story haha. Good reminder that the About page is about the audience :)

@FosandEbo 6 лет назад

Gold! I was missing the hook, benefits and the opt-in. Thank you, Pat! :-)

@filmingfamily 6 лет назад

It has been a while I lastly reviewed about pages on my blogs. I have just figured out that I covered all 5 points on most of them, woohoo:) Great tips Pat!

@shylanambiar4316 Год назад

Enjoyed the video. Very informative, succinct, and to the point. Thanks.

@MelissatheTarotChick 4 года назад

This helped so much. I enjoy following you. Thank you!

@ellengansowen9951 5 лет назад

just starting my blog and i already mention the last number 5....and thats it...thanks for this videos its' helping me a lot

@angbarnard 6 лет назад

Thank you Pat! You're an amazing teacher. I'm so excited to incorporate what I just learned from you!

@patflynn 6 лет назад

Thanks so much! I appreciate you!

@FitWithCyn1 5 месяцев назад

Thank you for helping me get started on my about page!!

@RubyWilliamsCoaching Год назад

Great advice Pat! Thank you! I just subscribed.

@luipalwambano7375 5 лет назад

Super helpful! just starting to put my together. Thanks for this.

@MeetKevin 6 лет назад

Looking forward to this. As a broker/contractor, I've found it's so tricky to find the perfect version of a bio not only on social but also on review sites/webpages. THANK YOU!

@MeetKevin 6 лет назад

Personally story. Without a doubt! Love it!

@jonivanwin530 3 года назад

Wow, my favorite RU-vidr 's reaction! I hope you get elected as governor of California!

@ulisesvihaan3207 2 года назад

I know im asking the wrong place but does anyone know a way to get back into an instagram account? I was dumb lost the account password. I love any tricks you can give me

@RiseUpandRemain 5 лет назад

Thank you for the tips! Ready to get my website started!

@christinekochevar8431 4 года назад

I believe I had most of the info you advised just not in the structure you provided, which is incredibly helpful so thank you for the video for this!

@sraadavis 6 лет назад

You knew I needed this, right?!? Yay! This is right where I'm at in BYOB. I'm almost done, but this helped. Loved the white board strategy!

@sraadavis 6 лет назад

And the part I'm missing is the opt-in. I think I know what it will be...but since I'm just getting started, I'll have to remember to add one later. Thanks again! #teamflynnforthewin

@NicK-eg3bh 6 лет назад

Thanks Pat, I've got work to do! Def need to add the opt-in form ;)

@albacarrico2386 6 лет назад

Excellent advice as always Pat! thanks for the tips.

@DouglasMack 5 лет назад

Such incredible information. Thank you Pat!!

@melissakiwigal 6 лет назад

Um all 5. So helpful, thanks!

@WendyZelmer 4 года назад

Thanks Pat, Creating my about page today... I will write my story out several times. In 2012 I healed from a severe 8-year sinus infection (bypassing surgery) and went down 5 pant sizes at the same time. I did not understand how that happened because I was just treating my body for adrenal healing. Over the years I have put all the pieces of the puzzle together. That is an important story to tell. Thanks for helping me understand what/ why I should be saying on my about page and teaching me how important my story is. Loving your course "Build Your Own Brand"...wow can not believe its Free and how much help it is. PS-not one website builder in the last 10 years ever asked me my story #teamflynnforthewin

@wellforlifesolutions 5 лет назад

Thank you, Pat. Great Video.

@laurenbyn176 5 лет назад

Thank you Pat for another helpful and useful video👏🏼

@EnjoyPositiveLiving 5 лет назад

I have only a few of these things! Thank you so much for such great information! I will be working on a fresh bio/about page! I completely agree with Cristobal when he said it was a changer that the About Me page is NOT about me!! That put a new perspective on how to write it! I had a lot of take away from this video. Again Thank you!

@Kakelady58 6 лет назад

I didn't have an opt-in form on my About page. I hadn't mentioned how my coaching will help the potential client transform her life or business. I didn't have a testimonial on my About page! My personal story wasn't as streamlined and direct as it needed to be. Thanks Pat!

@helenadoherty5763 5 лет назад

Hello Pat, thanks for your helpful video. I need all this information. The word that I will remember most is 'transformation'.

@emilyhastings8662 6 лет назад

I just added an opt-in to my about page. I like the "yes" question hook idea. Totally trying that! Thanks, Pat!

@johannadevera8146 5 лет назад

Emily Hastings how to add an opt in?

@marshallgomes9747 5 лет назад

All of them! Came here to start

@ToriHartman 4 года назад

Hi Pat - I really noticed that in what you shared - I want to use different aspects of who my customer is - and use these five ideas in different pages. Yes the About page... yet these are key gimme's great material ty!!!

@jonnycwilson 5 лет назад

Really great! thanks Pat!

@eleganteventsshomestyle 4 года назад

Thank you sooo much! Very helpful as I am a beginner 🙋🏾‍♀️

@mixxwire4758 6 лет назад

Hey Pat; East coast viewer here. Your upload schedule is on point now. This is the 5th upload that pops up during my office hours. That makes these episodes more relevant than ever. Thanks as always.

@patflynn 6 лет назад

Saweeeet! I figure 9am for West coasters, lunch time for East coasters - thanks so much for letting me know they are working out for ya! 👍

@sarahmulcare2073 6 лет назад

And just in time for me to watch after I get my toddler to bed here in the UK :)

@livinginyorkpa 6 лет назад

Wow. Small little nugget which was really huge: “your about you page shouldn’t really be all about you” it’s what the reader will get from you. Thanks, your videos have been great as I’m trying to grow my presence!

@TheKamminator 6 лет назад

Great stuff, Pat. I think this will really transform :-) my approach as I move my very boring consultancy About page to a more 'solopreneur' approach and attitude. BTW... just ordered your 'Will It Fly' book and am looking forward to reading it.

@smithent701 6 лет назад

I haven't started my about me page but now have a great structure to start with. Great insights, thank you Pat. Clayton, Smith Enterprises

@relationship360wealthmarkh8 5 лет назад

I am building my website, so this was a good tip. Thanks

@lukeworsey 4 года назад

Thanks, this was really helpful!

@sovrnindividual 5 лет назад

This is so good, thanks Pat!!

@EgressFromStress 2 года назад

Hey thanks Sir, this is is a very informative, as I start my journey in blogging to help others.

@ForgingFreedomTV 6 лет назад

I needed all of this, but the one concept that really hit home was when you said “the about page isn’t really about you, it’s about them” light bulb 💡 moment for me. 👍