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Yesterday on 22 July same Task 2 type question came to my exam, but the topic was " Some people think the schools should invest in equipment and other says that they should invest in Hiring Teachers" Discuss both points and give your own opinion.
I think that before focusing on IELTS writing, we should strengthen our vocabulary and grammar. If you provide some good material related to it, it would be appreciated.
I agree that improving your vocabulary is important, as it is a criterion for Writing Task 2. However, using correct grammar, making meaningful and well-connected sentences, and providing relevant and well-developed ideas are also important. Regarding your point on vocabulary, I believe the best sources are Cambridge reading past papers. You can find a playlist on my channel focusing on some useful words: ru-vid.com/video/%D0%B2%D0%B8%D0%B4%D0%B5%D0%BE-3mR1BldorMQ.html&pp=gAQBiAQB ru-vid.com/video/%D0%B2%D0%B8%D0%B4%D0%B5%D0%BE-VAo11lKuz2k.html ru-vid.com/video/%D0%B2%D0%B8%D0%B4%D0%B5%D0%BE-_KtGvcfSjjI.html
First of all, thanks alot for the video. However, I am soooo lack of confident in the writing task, I would appreciate any feedback or tips so I can know what and how to improve. This is my essay: In this modern society, it is important for us to develop knowledge in different aspects. I totally agree with the view for university students to learn the subjects other to their main subjects. This is because in order to emerge better in the society, we might need to have a certain level of knowledge in other field. In contrast, if they spend all their time in studying for a certificate, it may results in getting a good result, but caused them to have weak interpersonal skills. When they step out from university, it will be the time for them to apply what they learnt to the modernisation society or workplace. At the moment, skills other than their main subjects become essential. When they go to work, it does not only requires the knowledge in their field, but also other skills that may help them to assist and perform better in their job. For example, if they are majoring in international business, learning public speaking, or sociology may have a positive effect when combine with their major. The another view claimed that study for qualification is more important rather than learning about other subjects. The bright side of this point is the students may have higher score in their study and expertise in their field, but it may also lead them to have weak interpersonal skills. In conclusion, I am agree with the statement for university students to learn the subjects other than their major. The knowledge they gained in their field may not be the only standard to evaluate their personal strength and ability. As such, the interpersonal skills they developed through the minor subjects may also be crucial in the future.
Well done! You have written a complete essay. Here are some suggestions: 1- Make sure you write clear topic sentences that are independent. 2- Proofread your work to avoid errors such as 'I am agree'-instead, use 'I agree.' 3- Provide more support for the second view in the second body paragraph for a more balanced argument. You need more explanation for the second view. 4- Pay attention to pronoun usage. Start by clearly mentioning the subject before introducing related pronouns. In your first body paragraph, there is no clear subject and you only used pronouns.
It is just one of the many ways to write a response to this question. I am not a certified examiner and cannot provide an actual band score for this, but I would say it is a good sample. Samples like this can help you understand what to write and how to express it. Keep practicing and reviewing various samples to improve your writing skills!
Thank you for sharing your experience with the Task 2 type question from your exam! I'll definitely add this topic to my content list for future videos.
No. It is important to answer the question clearly and develop that sufficiently. In other words, you should answer the question and provide relevant support.
What is the purpose of 'Moreover '?? For adding another idea?? However, according to band descriptor, every paragraph shoul have one main idea for a 7. Could u plz make it clear??
Sure. 'Moreover,’ 'Furthermore,' or similar linking words help you connect your thoughts and create a more coherent and organized writing. It is true that each paragraph should have a clear topic sentence, but this doesn't mean that you can't use transitional words like "Moreover." For example, consider the following topic sentences about the advantages of studying abroad: Topic sentence 1: Studying abroad can help students to broaden their horizons. I use ' moreover ' to start my second body paragraph and introduce my second topic sentence. Topic sentence 2: Moreover, students who apply for a scholarship to study overseas can get quality education.
@@rakibhasan4328 Let me clarify. The focus of the first body paragraph is to discuss view one, and the second paragraph focuses on view two. You can write as many ideas as you want to discuss the view as long as you develop them and avoid listing ideas. However, it is better to mention two ideas only and fully develop each one. In the example I mentioned earlier about the advantages of studying abroad with the following topic sentence: ‘studying abroad has many advantages,’ you can mention two or three ideas to support it, such as 'students will make international friends, they will gain more experience, ...' and connect them with 'moreover.' So, one topic sentence, different reasons to support that with linking words like 'furthermore.'
