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@HusnaqiamHusna
@HusnaqiamHusna 3 месяца назад
Anyone in 2024?😅
@adetayoadejoke3251
@adetayoadejoke3251 2 месяца назад
M here😅
@BisratTekeste
@BisratTekeste 2 месяца назад
Yes
@hirahussain-wq2zo
@hirahussain-wq2zo Месяц назад
Me test on 8
@maureenifeanyichukwu7368
@maureenifeanyichukwu7368 Месяц назад
September
@omolayodemilade5442
@omolayodemilade5442 Месяц назад
Am here ooo September 14th 2024
@duahamid5423
@duahamid5423 11 месяцев назад
6 years later and this video is still so helpful! You are a GREAT teacher Jay.
@xoxocharul4143
@xoxocharul4143 3 года назад
Scored a band 8 in my first attempt this channel really really helped, could have scored 8.5 if Jay wasn't this cute!
@BluyelKinder
@BluyelKinder 3 года назад
👀I mean you are not lying
@shivamthakur8148
@shivamthakur8148 3 года назад
Wow! You didn't got 8.5 because you were thinking about him all that time. You know, when I'm in the middle of an exam all I can think is a blank screen for god sake.
@manpreetkaur-cg6nt
@manpreetkaur-cg6nt 3 года назад
awwww lovely comment
@getandalezeleke8220
@getandalezeleke8220 3 года назад
@@shivamthakur8148 Correct your grammar which says "You didn't got 8.5..." to "You didn't get 8.5..." Do not use did with the past tense.
@shivamthakur8148
@shivamthakur8148 3 года назад
@@getandalezeleke8220 I dont feel changing it, I like to be wrong. Tyvm
@openmoneynetwork5631
@openmoneynetwork5631 3 года назад
Jay, I just got a 9 on my first try. Thanks to you. I found your questions at about 11pm the night before my tests and reviewed your videos for about 2 hours. Helped immensely to decode the different types of questions and structure essay. You are the real thing. Thanks. YOU HAVE MY VOTE!
@sarahmwape190
@sarahmwape190 2 года назад
Okmmknmmm mm mmmmmmmmmk Kknknmkk . lol mmk 🤔
@saydulloegamberdiyev1973
@saydulloegamberdiyev1973 2 года назад
Can you help me how to write correctly?
@sylviaho312
@sylviaho312 2 года назад
wow, that's increadibly perfect! you make it sounds like the score 9 can be achieved easily which for me it's a myth. Congrats!
@ifyclarachukwueze2929
@ifyclarachukwueze2929 2 года назад
Can you help me in learning how to write task 2
@agustimayangsari2733
@agustimayangsari2733 Год назад
hii! do you have any recommendation of book/website for bunch of ielts essay example?
@blessingoluwole2130
@blessingoluwole2130 3 года назад
Thank you so much Jay 🤗. You played a significant role in making me pass IELTS with an overall of 8.0......L 8.5, R 7.5, W 7.0 and S 8.0.... I sincerely give God all the glory 🙌. If I can do it, you can do it too. Trust me....study hard and pray harder 🙏. God will do it for you too. Amen 🙏
@Sky-kc4sx
@Sky-kc4sx 3 года назад
Any reading tricks ?
@blessingoluwole2130
@blessingoluwole2130 3 года назад
@@Sky-kc4sx I kept practicing every single moment for over 2 months till I got better, so don't stop practicing because you will keep getting better by His grace 🙌.
@cynthiaokechukwu4829
@cynthiaokechukwu4829 2 года назад
Congrats, i hope to clear mine also. The writing doesn’t seem easy.😔
@blessingoluwole2130
@blessingoluwole2130 2 года назад
@@cynthiaokechukwu4829 if I can do it, you can too dearie. Henceforth, declare that it's easy and watch how God will make it super easy for you. You got this 👍🏻. Stay strong 💪
@cynthiaokechukwu4829
@cynthiaokechukwu4829 2 года назад
@@blessingoluwole2130 Thanks alot dear. I can do it! I really appreciate.
@lakshmigumpeny3527
@lakshmigumpeny3527 4 года назад
Dear Jay, Your videos are crisp, clear and absolutely crucial for anyone taking the IELTS. I took my exam 2 weeks ago and followed all your methods for the writing tasks. Paraphrasing the question, splitting the paragraphs, using linking words, conditional sentences, examples and even the rhetorical question. I'm happy to say I scored an 8 on my writing(8.5 overall), and this was while running out of time, typing frantically on a defective keyboard. Its clear that you immerse your mind, heart and soul into making your tutorials. I want to express my appreciation and gratitude from the bottom of my heart.. Youre an amazing teacher. May you live long and prosper, and happy new year, from India.
@InnocentChikosi
@InnocentChikosi Год назад
Wish me luck lw be taking mine in august
@abhishekkhurana8717
@abhishekkhurana8717 6 лет назад
Hi Jay, I wanted to let you know that I've received my IELTS score just today and got an overall 8.5 with a 7.5 in writing. I watched each and every video of yours and strictly followed what you teach in them. I thank you for being a wonderful teacher and your videos were one of the very crucial reasons I was able to get a decent score. I wish you all the luck in life! Once again, thank you!
@armoncharm3629
@armoncharm3629 5 лет назад
Congratulations brother.....I tap into same blessing....see you at the top
@navodaharischandra6955
@navodaharischandra6955 5 лет назад
thank you ...you are the best. .
@crazypatel2814
@crazypatel2814 5 лет назад
Congratulations
@manpreetbrar4327
@manpreetbrar4327 4 года назад
while I am stuck at 6.5 in writing twice, I need 7 😔
@RNayazTalks
@RNayazTalks 4 года назад
@@manpreetbrar4327 same here :(
@amitcmehta
@amitcmehta 4 года назад
I simply enjoyed this entire session. Felt as if I was learning in a classroom environment with a bunch of classmates. Gr8 work.
@justher3991
@justher3991 2 года назад
Hi Jay!! I just got my exam results and I am really shocked! I was so tired during the exam and I just wrote a simple essay in task 2. Only followed your instructions; firstly I tried to understand the essay type, and then I made a simple plan and followed that plan. And I got 7.5. reading 7.5 writing 7.5 listening 6.5 speaking 6.5 overall 7 for reading and writing I followed you, for listening and speaking I studied according to some other teachers method. Thank you so much! these tips really work guys, don't underestimate them 😃😃 my previous exam scores was as below : reading 6 writing 5.5 listening 5.5 speaking 6.5 overall 6 I have been studying (not regularly) for three months and here is my improvement. Thanks alot!! pls like it so everyone can read my advice. ❤️🥰
@V1deos505
@V1deos505 2 года назад
can you please tell me the advices for the reading and writing. and what videos you watched. cause i got 7.5 on both speaking and listening and 5.5 on writing and 5.5 and reading. id really appreciate it if you tell me what you did cause im kinda struggling
@justher3991
@justher3991 2 года назад
@@V1deos505 yes of course! 😃 Greetings from Albania! 😊 For reading I applied the methot Jay has discovered. It is like you read a paragraph or if it is a long one you divide it into 2 parts, and as soon as you read that you check all the questions from the first group of questions to the last. Actually they are in an order according to the text. So if the first and second question doesn't contain any info about what you read, thw third and fourth question is not about that paragraph. Like this you read a paragraph or half of it and look at the questions and you don't have to turn back to what you already read. So you go like this till the end of the text. Listen to the videos of Jay regarding reading method and you will understand it better. About writing I can say that firstly you have to analyze the 7 types of essay (according to Jay). Then you will have to follow some videos from beginning to the end to comprehend the structure you need to know about each type. Then you may draw a plan for each essay type. In the exam you firstly try to understand the type of essay and then quickly make a plan about its structure and follow that structure. I gave really soooo simple ideas because I was really tired and hadn't any great idea to write about. But as far as I understand they liked my structure so they gave me a 7.5 😃
@justher3991
@justher3991 2 года назад
method***
@justher3991
@justher3991 2 года назад
@@V1deos505 ru-vid.com/video/%D0%B2%D0%B8%D0%B4%D0%B5%D0%BE-zOxP7dy6BJQ.html Watch this video and there is another video about the conclusion paragraph. Watch it carefully and take notes while watching. It looks a little bit complex but if you focus on it you will realize it's too easy and will be really confident on the exam day. Please feel free to ask me more if there is anything unclear.
@hannahobuole9701
@hannahobuole9701 2 года назад
Pls it seems am always short of words and ideals and my exam is this month.pls what do I do
@adazzsthoughts
@adazzsthoughts 2 года назад
Scored a total of 8.5 @ 1st attempt May 21st 2022. Am Nigerian. I just had to come back to say thank you to Jay and the entire E2 Language teachers. Your lessons made it happen for me!
@rubabatronkeoseni4786
@rubabatronkeoseni4786 Год назад
Did you write paper based or computer
@adelekanadebola7367
@adelekanadebola7367 Год назад
Please did you write paper based or computer
@adazzsthoughts
@adazzsthoughts Год назад
@@adelekanadebola7367 Did the computer based test.
@adazzsthoughts
@adazzsthoughts Год назад
@@rubabatronkeoseni4786 Chose the computer based test.
@adazzsthoughts
@adazzsthoughts Год назад
Computer based
@nishagoswami5991
@nishagoswami5991 6 лет назад
Today i got my ielts result .and i got 8 in writting just becoz of you sr 🙏. I gave exam last year that tym i got jst 5.5 in writting nw i get 8🤗☺
@E2IELTS
@E2IELTS 6 лет назад
Amazing!
@jasleenkaur4682
@jasleenkaur4682 5 лет назад
Hi, can you give suggestions regarding writing task 2 .
@tasnimakthar9320
@tasnimakthar9320 4 года назад
@@E2IELTS if i buy the writing pack u have on your website does that includes giving me feedbacks afterwards??
@jazz3646
@jazz3646 4 года назад
@@tasnimakthar9320 have you paid?? How are the services?
@jazz3646
@jazz3646 4 года назад
Hello @nisha goswami... U took paid classes or only RU-vid?? Would you help to evaluate my essay?
@omoadoniseun-babayemi2925
@omoadoniseun-babayemi2925 5 лет назад
Hi Jay, I just want to appreciate you. I focused on your videos mostly and I had....: 7.5 speaking, 8.5 writing, 7.5 listening and 7 in writing. This was my one and ONLY attempt and I believe it is going to give me my desired outcome. Amen. Thank you sooo much. I will surely recommend more people!!!
@rakaposhitoursandadventure5016
@rakaposhitoursandadventure5016 2 года назад
Incredible video
@HienLe-rf9ev
@HienLe-rf9ev 4 года назад
Thanks a lot, Jay. I'm watching your videos in the day that the Covid-19 is getting more and more serious. This is my essay: Some people perceive that artificially intelligent robots will increasingly substitute the majority of human occupations. Although manual labor could be easy to be overtaken by droids, it is unconvincing to say that human intelligence and creativity can be replaced. This essay will discuss why only some particular jobs will be replaced by robots. Robots may sooner or later take over simple labor that requires less complexity. Because it will not only help to lower the cost as hiring training and paying an employee but also reduce the risk of mistakes caused by humans. In addition, it’s uncomplicated to program a robot to fulfill tasks with a high ratio of repetition and time-consuming. In Japan and China, for example, many hotels have been using droids with human appearance as receptionists, which are able to work around the clock and cover almost questions as well as demands from guests. For these reasons, occupations that can be replaced by robotic intelligence will be no longer in the hand of human laborers. Conversely, there are some jobs that robots are unable to do as adequate as human beings because it might be required artistry or mutual interaction to get things done. For instance, painter, teacher, psychologist and many more to name, are unable to be replaced by robots completely. Artificial Intelligent is capable of self-learning but currently, it’s impossible to say that they will be qualified to be out skill the human brain in the future. It’s ever more believed that most of human employment will be put to an end by droids. Obviously, they can take over the role of blue-collar workers; nevertheless, human skills will be in the priority for sophisticated fields. In conclusion, despite that artificial intelligence is on the go, human role is still compulsory for a decent amount of occupations.
@jndcjdc
@jndcjdc 2 года назад
10 out of 9
@sylviaho312
@sylviaho312 2 года назад
so perfect!
@Iamopepraiz
@Iamopepraiz 2 года назад
Trust me I won’t listen if a robot is counseling me in the future. I’ll break bottle on its head. 😏
@HarpreetSingh-ly1rp
@HarpreetSingh-ly1rp 2 года назад
🤣🤣
@pratikchauhan8642
@pratikchauhan8642 2 года назад
IF you stuck at 6 or 6.5 in writing and want a minimum 7. in general writing please watch the video with the title "IELTS GENERAL WRITING: SUREST WAY TO GO FROM BAND 6 TO 7
@rajeshwarimishra4006
@rajeshwarimishra4006 3 года назад
Artificially intelligent robots have been gradually replacing the human workforce. While there is a possibility of simple jobs to be taken over by the robots, it is not really possible for these machines to take up jobs requiring human contact. This essay will discuss why a specific kind of jobs would still be done by humans only. Robots may replace the humans in all the laborious and time-consuming jobs which do not require high-level skills. Many companies would prefer robots over humans because the work could be done in much lesser expense with greater accuracy, in a short period of time, ultimately maximising their profits. In DMRC stations in India, for instance, most of the cashiers have been replaced by the ticket vending machines which are much cheaper, faster and convenient to use. For the reason stated above, humans will eventually be replaced by the robots in particular job roles.
@kawthertolba8575
@kawthertolba8575 7 лет назад
Believe me ,this is one of wonderful lessons that I have ever watched.an excellent job Jay
@bewell5503
@bewell5503 6 лет назад
Agree! :)
@nishantpatel1347
@nishantpatel1347 6 лет назад
hey jay I just wana say thank you very much coz my results are just out and I have scored 7.5 in writing .your techniques for task 2 helped me a lot ......
@vkumar13
@vkumar13 6 лет назад
hi there. can you help me.
@kadambiniarora9248
@kadambiniarora9248 3 года назад
Did u join his paid writing classes?
@AmyMakusha
@AmyMakusha 5 лет назад
Hey Jay! A colleague introduced me to E2 and it helped me immensely. I listened to over 6 hours of your tutorials covering all 4 aspects of the test and took the Academic Test on 6 July 2019 (first attempt) and scored an overall band 8.5 as follows: S - 8.5; R - 9; L - 8.5 and W - 8. Thank you so much for all the work you do. You are a life saver! 💃🏼🙌🏼
@nehagautam2672
@nehagautam2672 5 лет назад
Hii I want to know if we have agree essay n we are completely agree with statement then we have to write both the body paragraphs of our opinion?
@mr.singhdult4040
@mr.singhdult4040 4 года назад
@@nehagautam2672 same question Dear 💕
@faisofbd
@faisofbd 4 года назад
I request you to share your kind suggestion for READING and LISTENING.
@musmanpathan4956
@musmanpathan4956 Год назад
So I m not completely agree with statement ..Nodoubut robots helpfull for human life make there working easy.
@aderinsolasalau5447
@aderinsolasalau5447 2 года назад
Hello Jay, I just got my IELTS test results today, and I scored an overall of 8 with an 8 in writing. You channel was very instrumental to my IELTS success. Thank you for all you do.
@agustimayangsari2733
@agustimayangsari2733 Год назад
hii! do you have any recommendation of book/website for bunch of ielts essay example?
@allabouttravel8975
@allabouttravel8975 3 года назад
There is a belief among people that most of the jobs in future will be replaced by artificially intelligence robots. Although most of the jobs would be undertaken by robots but there would be some jobs left which will require human intervention. However, my beleif is that even the jobs that would be done by robots will still require a human to interfere at certain levels.
@asimuddinwalajahi3031
@asimuddinwalajahi3031 5 лет назад
Got my result day before R-9 L-8.5 S-7.5 W-6.5
@ground_report
@ground_report 4 года назад
how u got 9 in reading
@neetisharma3768
@neetisharma3768 5 лет назад
Hi jay, Thank you so much. I got my score today, its a 7.5 yayyyyyy and this was possible only because of you. I had only 1 week to prepare for the exam and in this one week I had to go to office work for 9 hours travel for an hour back home. So you can really imagine how much time I really had to study. With all this happening i was on verge of cancelling my exam but then your video suggestion popped up on RU-vid (guess i should thank RU-vid as well :p). For the next 6 days i only watched your videos and practiced along with you. Thank you thank you thank you sir. God bless you. p.s : You are the best.
@mansipatel3864
@mansipatel3864 4 года назад
Hey neeti can u help with the other formats.... I have an exam on 11th April
@mansipatel3864
@mansipatel3864 4 года назад
Hey neeti
@mansipatel3864
@mansipatel3864 4 года назад
Can you help me with the writing... I have few queries nd have exam on 11th april
@libinmb4638
@libinmb4638 3 года назад
Hi there.
@jonasakula4279
@jonasakula4279 7 лет назад
Hi,, Just got my results: Overall Band:7.5 Listening 7.5 Writing 6.5 Speaking 8 Reading 7.0 Thank you, Jay for your videos - I did not use any other material courses or training - just selected youtube videos which included your videos as well and got my desired band.
@mahammadmammadli8263
@mahammadmammadli8263 6 лет назад
congratulations
@akerkeshakirbay1945
@akerkeshakirbay1945 6 лет назад
Congratulations! Could you please share with your experiences while taking the exam to help us? For example, what kind of questions were on speaking and writing? and what the format of listening and writing was like?
@usman1099
@usman1099 6 лет назад
All the jobs will b done by techniolgy made reboots in future
@vkumar13
@vkumar13 6 лет назад
wow. that's awesome. can you help with a few things.
@respatyadika
@respatyadika 5 лет назад
Awesome
@Ummi-s_Mom
@Ummi-s_Mom 2 года назад
Kindly check my final concluding sentence: Finally, I believe that there will be a paradigm shift in the job market due to overwhelming utility of IA and robotics; human job will suffer a clear cut decrease.
@dharshinit1830
@dharshinit1830 2 года назад
thank you Jay, I feel so much more confident appearing for my IELTS now
@naveendhunna1832
@naveendhunna1832 6 лет назад
Hi, I watched your videos today and must appreciate your efforts. The way you are teaching is excellent. Kindly accept my gratitude for being specific and detailed description of each step.
@chetanhireholi
@chetanhireholi 4 года назад
First thing to do before we start writing : 'STOP AND THINK ABOUT THE QUESTION PROMPT'
@krishnavamshi1015
@krishnavamshi1015 3 года назад
Hii chetan I have seen all of your comments on every video. I am planning to take ielts test in next month How much did you scored? In which country are you staying right now?
@sridharini
@sridharini 4 года назад
Hey Jay. I got my IELTS score with overall 7.5 and 7 in writing. Only preparation I had was to watch your videos. Thanks for detailed explanations and simple strategies. Thanks for all your help and I wish you great success in future.
@oluwaseyiolumuyiwa6730
@oluwaseyiolumuyiwa6730 2 года назад
I love your detailed explanation
@itododeborah7079
@itododeborah7079 2 года назад
Artificially intelligent Robots are believed by some people to replace humans on there job in the nearest future
@Kanze1989
@Kanze1989 2 года назад
Thank you Jay, I wanted to say thank you for your help with my test. Even though I didn’t get to read and practice much, I was able to get an overall 8 because of the tips I learned from you and E2.
@dorothykoko9473
@dorothykoko9473 3 года назад
In conclusion,robots are progressively taking.over human employment opportunities however human labour will still be a necessity in most fields.
@navneetkaur1732
@navneetkaur1732 4 года назад
Hey Jay! Greetings! I wanted to let you know that you are doing a commendable and selfless job by posting these informative videos. Today I got my IELTS GT score with overall 8 band. Listening 8.5, reading 8, speaking 7.5 and writing 7. I strictly followed all your writing task 1 and task 2 videos and what you teach in them. Credit goes to you as this was my second attempt, earlier I scored 6.5 in writing. Your teaching methodology is beyond comparison. I don't have words to express my gratitude. Massive respect! Stay blessed! 😊
@Hadehbisi
@Hadehbisi 4 года назад
Congrats dear,will come and share my testimony too
@Canadianbyheart
@Canadianbyheart 4 года назад
Well, first of all, congratulations on such a good score. I too followed the same pattern as he told and scored the same as you, but in writing, it is 6.5. I don't know what is still lacking. If you get 7 in writing then I hope his pattern is correct.
@navneetkaur1732
@navneetkaur1732 4 года назад
Abhiskek, congratulations for your score. Hopefully you will score 7 in writing soon. To be honest I focused on lexical resources, cohesive words, good vocabulary and complex sentence structure along with the pattern shown in Jay's videos. I can give you my word, I strictly followed his pattern, it works. Also, be precise in your introduction (it should be according to the type of essay given in your exam) and conclusion. Make sure not to use same word more than 2 times, use a synonym for it. These small things make huge differences.
@Canadianbyheart
@Canadianbyheart 4 года назад
Thanks alot Navneet. It is priceless advice for me.
@simranjeetsingh5318
@simranjeetsingh5318 5 лет назад
Simply amazing ❤️. I wish I had a good English teacher like you when I was in school.
@achinisamaranayake1622
@achinisamaranayake1622 2 года назад
Hi Jay... I got a overall 8.5 for my IELTS with an 8.0 for writing. Your videos were my biggest resource for writing . Thank you so much !
@girishraju7094
@girishraju7094 2 года назад
I got my IELTS results today. LRWS 8.5, 7, 6.5, 7. Many thanks to Jay and E2 team... especially helping me in writing.... Thanks a lot
@tharangadayananda1585
@tharangadayananda1585 2 года назад
I am so glad that I came across your channel, which is giving me inspiration to face the exam confidently.
@chidinmaeze3490
@chidinmaeze3490 3 года назад
Jay, I wish u can realize how much of a tremendous help u have been to a lot of people including my humble self. Thank you 🙏
@MrRambee
@MrRambee 6 лет назад
Damn..that was a dope ass lesson. I'm taking my ielts tomorrow and am just cramming on the written task, this one video is pretty much all I needed to watch.
@E2IELTS
@E2IELTS 6 лет назад
Haha. Awesome. Just don’t say “dope ass” in your essay! ;)
@sachinkuriakose7944
@sachinkuriakose7944 3 года назад
@@E2IELTS 😄
@amitrevv514
@amitrevv514 3 года назад
@@E2IELTS lmao
@lets_do_some_shoppingmeet435
@lets_do_some_shoppingmeet435 7 лет назад
Conclusively, robotic intelligence will snatch majority of jobs from humans. Eventually robots will do menial jobs ; however, the jobs which can not be programmed according to rigid schedule will always be in the hands of humans. To end , future of humans jobs in the technological era seems bleak in competition with artificial intelligence.
@allabouttravel8975
@allabouttravel8975 3 года назад
Jobs that can only be performed through human touch can never be replaced through artificial robots. Although work done through robots are more accurate, it still cannot replace all the jobs because it will always lack flexibility that humans have. For instance, human working at banks are more flexible than automated cash dispensing machines in solving any issues faced by a person in the process. For these reasons, humans will still be required in minimum numbers for such instances.
@sylvianwankwo4646
@sylvianwankwo4646 2 года назад
Thank you Jay. I passed my ielts exam using mostly your strategies. Got 7.5 in writing. May God bless the efforts you putting into tutoring .
@NaniParlapalli
@NaniParlapalli 5 лет назад
Human intellect is rapidly progressing and the consequence of it will have a significant impact on raising automation in terms of physical workforce and logical decision making. However, there would still be a large scope for human involvement in many areas :)
@oluwabamiseagbede5389
@oluwabamiseagbede5389 Год назад
Scored a band 8 jay… thanks for your simplified methods😂😂
@fatimazar5640
@fatimazar5640 5 лет назад
You are exceptionally smart! 👍 Thank you all the way from Pakistan
@manasapittala1994
@manasapittala1994 2 года назад
Nowadays, most of the people think that all type of occupations are progressively replacing by humans in the future while it is possible when robots have more updated, However it is unlikely say that lot of jobs require human contact. This essay will discuss about why robots can't be replaced some of the jobs that are done by humans
@afsanamimi6346
@afsanamimi6346 3 года назад
My introduction - Some people believe that day by day artificially intelligent robots will take the place of human in the workfield.I believe that, it is possible for robots to perform the easy tasks while the jobs that need human contact that can not be done by robots.This essay will that in the job market, jobs that can be done by human will be few in number in future.
@CA-js5qm
@CA-js5qm 4 года назад
"In time, robots will take over most of the workforce, lessening human intervention in the process. It may be possible for them to aid in common forms of labor; however, jobs requiring an adequate professional skill set are still in need of human ingenuity. I believe that only some occupations will be replaced effectively by technological advancements."
@ground_report
@ground_report 4 года назад
wow wht a intro which is ur band score how u prepared plz tell.
@TeamMakeSure
@TeamMakeSure Год назад
This is insightful, thank you Jay. My exam is this week on Saturday, wish me well.
@BIPINRAJENDRAN
@BIPINRAJENDRAN 5 лет назад
I was scared of writing part, but now i feel confident . Thanks Jay :)
@DailyCakeTVbyRaymondCepillo
Thank you so much E2 IELTS most specially to you Jhay. I got 6 band score last month because of your relevant technique.God bless you all.. Well recommended guys❤
@marom.arch.studio
@marom.arch.studio 3 года назад
There is an increasing belief among some people that in due course of time, computers and machines will take over all human workforces. This essay will analyze why some people may strongly share this perception of future jobs while discussing why this might not be the case and that humans will always be required to perform certain tasks. With the fast paced advancements in technology, Artificial intelligence is developing at an alarming rate and it is being applied in many fields of medicine, space exploration and many more. Even the simple daily tasks such as data exploration and home appliance operations are being carried out by A.I with remarkable ease and efficiency. As a result it is quite evident that some people might start feeling that ultimately all the work will be done by computers. While it is true that A.I is growing and expanding in all spheres of workforce but the superiority of human force and nature should not be underestimated. Human creativity is very natural and that which is artificial is always secondary. However fast and efficient a computer maybe, it can never replace a human touch. For example, a human teacher or a doctor would be more spontaneous, caring and reciprocative to a student or a patient than a robot. While humans are innately equipped to make quick decisions to emergencies, a computer will only do what it is programmed to do. Therefore, with these limitations of A.i , it is unlikely computers will takeover all jobs in the future. In conclusion, while it is understandable that some people view artificial intelligence to overtake all future jobs, the reality in my opinion is that due to the superiority of human intelligence and compassion, human workforce will always be required and human efforts will always be indispensable.
@FrenchForFuture
@FrenchForFuture 5 лет назад
Hi Jay. I must say that your E2 classes are really helping me preparing for my IELTS exam. Thanks a lot.
@thesmokeydogs
@thesmokeydogs 5 лет назад
Can I start like " it is often thought that artificially intelligent robots will replace humans in the workforce"
@gwengwengwenvivivi
@gwengwengwenvivivi 4 года назад
You are the best teacher, and I am so sad because I've just found you out 1 week before my IELTS exam :(
@agnesaghotsalena9993
@agnesaghotsalena9993 2 года назад
I just stumbled on this channel today. Without any doubt, you are indeed doing a great job Jay.Thank you.
@teephillips79
@teephillips79 Месяц назад
In conclusion, the advent of artificial intelligence will progressively replace physical contact in many jobs in the future. While those kinds of work with same daily content will be carried out by machines, those jobs with difficult and ever-changing requirements will need to be performed by people. Eventually, some occupations will still be handled by human beings for a long time to come.
@igahsoh76
@igahsoh76 6 лет назад
The most useful (ielts) teacher i have watched until now
@Ahtohallan.
@Ahtohallan. 2 года назад
Watched the whole stream and took notes, for my english college entrance exam. Thank you very much!
@zohraparbatani1586
@zohraparbatani1586 6 лет назад
Thank you so much Jay :-) Your videos helped me alot :) i gave ielts test and i got 7 in writing.
@islombeknematov4122
@islombeknematov4122 3 года назад
Really🤔
@teephillips79
@teephillips79 Месяц назад
Conversely, there are complex occupations with little or no tolerance for failures, breakdowns or requiring on-the-spot decision making. Such endeavours will continue to require human presence. Such may be made easy by the design of tools and machines but will still require people to perform, direct and coordinate substantial parts of the operations. For instance, complex surgeries are largely handled by humans and this I predict, will continue into the future. This is because it involves complicated read-and-react scenarios whic are difficult to build into robots. I am almost certain therefore that such intricate duties with no set rules for their execution will continue to be led by people.
@OgechiIrojiogu
@OgechiIrojiogu 9 месяцев назад
Hi Mr jay How I send my answer to you
@sawean29
@sawean29 6 лет назад
Wish me luck Jay. I’ll be sitting for my ielts for a 2nd time this coming Saturday. Once again I found your videos very helpful. Thank you.
@rajkumar-yk3qe
@rajkumar-yk3qe 6 лет назад
Firstly, I thought if I can listen for one hour, but trust me, the session was so good and it held me any distraction, wonderful session it is. Thanks very much Jay.
@isaacodeh
@isaacodeh 5 лет назад
The 21st century saw the rise in the importance of technological invention in our daily lives. One important invention of the 21st century is artificially intelligent robots which have become useful aids in many human endeavors. Despite the rise in the use of artificially intelligent robots in executing certain jobs done by a human being, I don’t believe that all jobs can be done by artificially intelligent robots. This essay will highlight the deficiencies and limitation of artificially intelligent robots in doing all jobs that are done by a human being. Firstly, despite the effectiveness of artificially intelligent robots, they, however, show deficiencies in doing some jobs. For example, because artificially intelligent robots are made from a computer algorithm, a simple mistake in the line of codes could result in poor performance and product delivery. These trends are easily seen in many factories and manufacturing industries especially automobiles. Artificially intelligent robots have shown to be highly deficient in many ways and the reliant on their productivity could prove to be a mistake. Secondly, artificially intelligent robots will have limitation in doing certain jobs done by a human being. For example, most customer services jobs in say hotels and banks are better done by a human being than being done by artificially intelligent robots. This is because these kinds of jobs are characterized by human feelings and emotions. Because these robots are void of human feelings, certain jobs like customer service cannot be done by artificially intelligent robots. To conclude, even though artificially intelligent robots could do some jobs done by a human being, artificially intelligent robots show deficiencies and limitation in doing must jobs that human being do. This essay has shown that artificially intelligent robots cannot do all the jobs done by a human being.
@kendricka2993
@kendricka2993 5 лет назад
Well done! I heard we are to paraphrase in order to avoid repeating words. E.g robot,artificial intelligence, automaton, they,
@Orthodentpak
@Orthodentpak 10 месяцев назад
Hi Jay, Can you kindly grade this and point out the mistakes. thank you . Increasingly more jobs are being automated by artificially intelligent robots replacing humans from work force. While the most of the menial jobs eventually won’t require humans and would be largely be taken over by robots but jobs that require cognitive abilities and complex skill set are unlikely to be automated. This essay will elaborate reasons why most of the jobs will be automated except only a few. The job that doesn’t require complex skill set are eventually to be automated by Artificially intelligent robots. Most of the industries have already automated because it is more efficient, cost effective than recruiting a human for the same job. Most of fast-food chain has switched to automated stations for taking orders as it is cost effective and efficient as they can multi task, work 365 days a year and don’t require vacations. Evidently in near future all such jobs are doing to be automated by different robot thus replacing humans. On the contrary, there are certain job that can never be automated that require cognitive abilities and complex skill set as such capability can’t programmed into robot that require experience and human touch. To start with jobs like medicine, education, psychology and social networking are unlikely to be automated. Robot will never to be able to achieved required emotion and integrate mind set required for performing such tasks which are learned over time through millions of years of evolution. In conclusion, automation most of jobs by robot is highly likely ending more job opportunities for human employment. Robot are ultimately going to eradicate unskilled labours but the job that require creativity adaptability and sophisticated skills will always require humans. In the long run, artificially intelligent work force is going to dominate most of the fields except a few.
@payalkhandelwal5991
@payalkhandelwal5991 6 месяцев назад
Although there is no denying that AI is transforming the way businesses operate, it is crucial to understand that robot machines cannot entirely replace human beings. Instead, AI-powered robots will complement human intelligence and work in tandem to enhance efficiency and productivity..
@daitrangmypham3556
@daitrangmypham3556 7 лет назад
you are awesome but next time please show how those words spell, you said some rare words and didn't spell them. and i don't know why i fell asleep at the end
@sakshiwahi2025
@sakshiwahi2025 3 года назад
I got this same question for my speaking part 3 on the 2nd of February!
@bukolasolanke4627
@bukolasolanke4627 3 года назад
Thanks for sharing
@hamidatkareem3346
@hamidatkareem3346 9 месяцев назад
Hi, I wanted to come here and say thank you! I watched this video on the day of my exam and I got an 8 in my writing! I'm so proud of myself and so thankful to Jay and E2! Thank you so much !😄
@elizabethkoomson176
@elizabethkoomson176 Год назад
This is my first time listening to you, great lecture, how can I get to send you my work for you to view, I wrote IELTS in 2016 got band 5.5 in writing and been scared to write again, want to sit for it in first week in April. Am Elizabeth in Ghana
@odayhamad2848
@odayhamad2848 2 года назад
Artificially intelligent robots are increasingly taking place of human hand-work in the future at the work fields Our jobs are obviously two types: jobs that require human contact and touch, and jobs that don’t, I think the latter will be replaced by those artificially intelligent robots but the former won’t. In this essay, this faith of the jobs, that why some will be replaced by artificially intelligent robots and some can’t, will be discussed
@ejiroizeze8767
@ejiroizeze8767 5 лет назад
Thank you, Jay. I used your format and my ideas flowed seamlessly and logically.
@PstChristy
@PstChristy 3 года назад
There is a possibility for Robots to do some jobs, however, Jobs that require emotions can not be done by robots
@PstChristy
@PstChristy 3 года назад
This essay will discuss why Robots can not do all jobs especially jobs that requires emotional display
@mystkay
@mystkay 2 года назад
Hello, Jay. I scored 8.5 overall with 8.0 in writing, thanks to you! With work and family to attend to, I could only carve out a couple hours a day for the last two days before the test for practice. I watched this and a handful of your other videos (and went through the mock test too) and that was all I had the time for. I wasn't really worried about the other parts (reading, listening and speaking) because English is the official language where I am from so throughout school, it was English we learned with. But! The writing was a worry because I knew there was a 'how' to answering Tasks 1 and 2. Thank you for clearly outlining that 'how'. Thank you ever so much! Extremely appreciative, indeed!
@loversangelheaven
@loversangelheaven 4 года назад
Thank you for the wonderful class Ja y!!! I had a great time learning with you. 🙏🙏🙏 God bless you and E2🌟🌟🌟
@kamalsagar7095
@kamalsagar7095 2 года назад
You are an amzing guy speaks like michael clark 👍👍👍👍👍💐💐💐
@Protectthepeople25
@Protectthepeople25 4 месяца назад
You are very helpful Jay. Thank you. I have started to watch your videos and they are invaluable and the ideas you introduce are quite new and refreshing.
@sparshsharma5795
@sparshsharma5795 3 года назад
You explained it well. Your classes will certainly help a lot of students.
@otofori1444
@otofori1444 6 лет назад
thanks to u my result on writing was 7
@amehameh458
@amehameh458 3 года назад
In recent times,artificial intelligence is fast replacing the use of humans in the work environment.
@StorySnippets23
@StorySnippets23 10 месяцев назад
Can I write this as a general statement for the introduction? Artificially intelligent robots have progressed so significantly that it is now substituting humans in the workforce.
@varunrajpal9629
@varunrajpal9629 Год назад
Hi Jay, I would like to thank you for your efforts in making these videos especially for writing. These were super helpful to me. Scored an overall 8 : L - 8.5, R - 8.5, W - 7.5, S - 7.5.
@agustimayangsari2733
@agustimayangsari2733 Год назад
hii! do you have any recommendation of book/website for bunch of ielts essay example?
@varunrajpal9629
@varunrajpal9629 Год назад
I went through magoosh essay topics
@pravithrav7596
@pravithrav7596 3 года назад
Jay, you are such a great teacher!! One of a reason for us to achieve our dream.. THANKS a lot!!
@anupapasindu7629
@anupapasindu7629 2 года назад
This helped me a lot even tough it was done 5 years ago! Thank you fabulous job JAY!
@SaraAli-qz9ii
@SaraAli-qz9ii 2 года назад
Even if Iam taking a course in itles, the teacher who is teaching me, I can't understand a lot from him. But, when I started watching this channel especially this teacher. I 've understood so much... He' s profressional. Thank you for your efforts.
@FatmataSulaimanBah
@FatmataSulaimanBah Год назад
Most job will be eventually replaced by artificially robot than human being in the work force.
@patiencelavu-chiswe899
@patiencelavu-chiswe899 Год назад
With the technology advancing drastically it is likely that most jobs will be done by artificial robots.
@boscolai9056
@boscolai9056 Год назад
Dear Jay, Your videos are crisp, clear and absolutely crucial for anyone taking the IELTS. I took my exam 2 weeks ago and followed all your methods for the writing tasks. Paraphrasing the question, splitting the paragraphs, using linking words, conditional sentences, examples and even the rhetorical question. I'm happy to say I scored an 8 on my writing(8.5 overall), and this was while running out of time, typing frantically on a defective keyboard. Its clear that you immerse your mind, heart and soul into making your tutorials. I want to express my appreciation and gratitude from the bottom of my heart.. Youre an amazing teacher. May you live long and prosper, and happy new year, from Hong Kong.
@mohammadkhanlaiq43
@mohammadkhanlaiq43 2 года назад
Hi sir! I hope your fine and happy. It is really nice of you that you are helping us. We have been learning a great deal of things from you. Thanks so much.
@hayatmuhammad6709
@hayatmuhammad6709 7 лет назад
Well done, you are doing the tremendous job, in other sense you are educating the whole world....keep up the great work and upload many videos that people can get benefits who can't afford the paid classes. ...God bless you and your whole team.
@salwanaif2547
@salwanaif2547 6 лет назад
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@askonburmue1808
@askonburmue1808 10 месяцев назад
Am overwhelmed to be part of your lesson. Am planning to write in January
@debapriyakanjilal5870
@debapriyakanjilal5870 3 года назад
Thank you Jay Sir. I have a question however. Shouldn’t this structure be for a partial agreement/disagreement answer? I mean giving both the sides in the essay kind of feels like we are partially agreeing/disapproving the scenario.
@soniagandhi4913
@soniagandhi4913 5 лет назад
Well done. I must say , the way you explained landed in my brain perfectly and I am sure I can retail it till exam day. God bless you!
@shawn2476pudlian
@shawn2476pudlian 4 года назад
Thanks Jay for this wonderful lesson. It has evoked a new passion for writing in me. Kudos!
@mahamousa2223
@mahamousa2223 6 лет назад
Amazing lesson, the best I've seen so far. I got very high marks on all IELTS areas except for writing. Honestly speaking, up until I watched your video, I had no clue whatsoever as to why I keep scoring low on writing because I actually like to write and don't find it difficult! Now I know. My essays lacked that clear structure, as well as good reasons and examples. I just went on talking about my opinion but not in this clear, organsised and logical structure. Thank you. I think I will register with you for practice, I wonder if you perform the service of grading essays. That would be helpful!.
@azizurrahmanaziz204
@azizurrahmanaziz204 2 года назад
Hello Jay, I am from Bangladesh, it is nice to have Task 2 full idea from your informative video, Thankful to you Sir💕
@luzern187
@luzern187 3 года назад
Got 7.5 thanks to Jay
@adeniranabiodun3729
@adeniranabiodun3729 Год назад
Thank you so much jay… your videos really help me to pass my test. Pls keep up the good job👍🏽🙏🏽
@shynujeemon7193
@shynujeemon7193 6 лет назад
Watching this video in the early hours of morning before my exam! Glad I did. Very helpful. Thank you! 👍🙏☺️
@PraveenKumar-zi4vc
@PraveenKumar-zi4vc 5 лет назад
Sarah Elizabeth how much u got sarah
@dhillondhillon8001
@dhillondhillon8001 3 года назад
How much
@meethumathew7643
@meethumathew7643 7 лет назад
my ielts test date on july 29th .kindly help me.
@JuandershareTV
@JuandershareTV 7 лет назад
where you will take ur exam my friend Meethu? me, I'm planning after my vacation.
@Potatochiips_
@Potatochiips_ 7 лет назад
Oh my gosh Same here!
@brijika
@brijika 7 лет назад
meethu mathew i am also going to give my ielts test on 29th july 😱
@brijika
@brijika 7 лет назад
Finding it really really helpful. Thank you so much 😊
@105aoquangkhanh3
@105aoquangkhanh3 7 лет назад
meethu mathew why are you guys so nervous and worried? Just learn until you feel you are ready to make the test
@briglittledragon8850
@briglittledragon8850 2 года назад
Tank you so much jay. With your guidance, I scored 8 band in IELTS GT. L.8.5, R.8.5, S.7.5 AND W7.0
@StefanieSotoProjects
@StefanieSotoProjects 2 года назад
Thanks!