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Lesson 3 CELPIP Writing Task 2 Masterclass 

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In this series of video lectures, you will learn everything you need to know about CELPIP writing task 2, otherwise known as the Survey task.
The course consists of a series of lessons, which should be viewed in sequence.
In this lesson, I go over the paragraph outline for survey responses, and I explain how you can divide up your ideas among your body paragraphs.
You can access full content of this course by becoming a member of the channel.
Task:
How would you organize your body paragraphs for the following prompt?
Public Transportation Survey
The city council has announced that they will be increasing bus fares in order to provide better service to commuters. A survey has been sent out to town residents asking for their opinion.
Option A:
Bus fares should be increased in order to improve the quality of services.
Option B:
Bus fares should remain the same.
Leave your answers in the comments:

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Комментарии : 28   
@samanehkhabiri-u7c
@samanehkhabiri-u7c 9 месяцев назад
Hi Sam, I want to share my answer. Option B: BP1: Affordable for more people BP2: Commuters feel better (psychological benefits)
@fasttrackesl
@fasttrackesl 9 месяцев назад
Sounds good. Remember, always go with ideas that are easier to explain and provide examples for. Keep the ideas simple and the words will keep flowing.
@szelunchan1700
@szelunchan1700 9 месяцев назад
Prefer option B Body paragraph: Increase my financial burden on daily commuting Body paragraph: more negative effects on lower-income class
@fasttrackesl
@fasttrackesl 9 месяцев назад
Makes sense. Looking forward to seeing how you’ll use these main ideas to write your topic sentences (in the next lesson).
@ankitpanseriya4490
@ankitpanseriya4490 5 месяцев назад
If I join your channel, what resources you provide for writing and speaking? I am interested to join but I need some sample answers
@fasttrackesl
@fasttrackesl 5 месяцев назад
Hi there, You can browse the catalogue of videos by reviewing the playlists below. Members gain access to complete course content, mock tests, model answers and more. Let me know if you have any questions.
@ankitpanseriya4490
@ankitpanseriya4490 5 месяцев назад
@@fasttrackesl sounds good
@ramansingh-kt4bh
@ramansingh-kt4bh Год назад
Thanks sir
@fasttrackesl
@fasttrackesl Год назад
All the best
@deborahboafoahdiaw
@deborahboafoahdiaw 7 месяцев назад
I can’t seem to access the next 2 videos even though am a member of this channel…. Can you please help me out??
@fasttrackesl
@fasttrackesl 7 месяцев назад
Hi Member, I noticed you upgraded to the Writing + Speaking bundle, so your problem must be solved; but feel free to reach out in case you have any other questions.
@MortezaNosrati-i3j
@MortezaNosrati-i3j Год назад
Hi there, I have question for you, in this apple and orange topic, the question is about changing curriculum at school and it is not about finding job after school, so, if you say by studying science courses your job can not be guarantied, would it be off-topic?
@fasttrackesl
@fasttrackesl Год назад
Hi. The prompt provided two options: - continuing to teach traditional subjects such as history, art and literature - focusing on subjects that can be helpful in finding a job. It’s not off topic as long as it‘s directly related to one of these two options.
@MortezaNosrati-i3j
@MortezaNosrati-i3j Год назад
Thanks@@fasttrackesl
@milanparekh1772
@milanparekh1772 8 месяцев назад
My question for apple and orange type question: if question is asking to only give reasons to support your choice then why should we give reason to reject the other option ? I got the point about rejecting other choice means supporting your choice but question has made it clear that explain the reasons of your choice. Please explain ?
@fasttrackesl
@fasttrackesl 8 месяцев назад
Hi there, Great question. First of all, I need to emphasize that including two reasons supporting your chosen option can also result in an acceptable response. Having said that, I often ask my students to possibly come up with a reason rejecting the alternative so that their responses address both choices (especially if you’re unable to use the contrasting strategy when supporting your main ideas). I hope this answers your question.
@nidheshperumal-kk3iz
@nidheshperumal-kk3iz Год назад
Can you please share your views on the following Survey Tasks: 1. Apples vs Apples Topic - Option Selected A There are two primary reasons that I prefer management should consider providing pre-packaged meals to all the employees: budget-friendly and saving a lot of time. The company is losing multiple clients in the APAC region and cannot allocate more cash for the employee meal plan. In order to cut costs, we should opt for a budget-friendly offering to compensate for the ongoing losses. In contrast, providing a greater variety of dishes can lead to food wastage and may require more human labor to manage the entire process. The second primary reason that I prefer pre-packaged meal is that it helps in saving a lot of time. Employees no longer need to spend extra time deciding what they want to eat, placing their orders, and waiting for their lunch to be prepared. Instead, they can quickly collect their meal and take it to their desks to simultaneously work while eating. Finally, I would hope that - should the management institute the pre-packaged meal plan - they will ensure error-free packing of the meals and the food will be served hot and fresh. 2. Apples vs Oranges Topic - Option Selected A There are two primary reasons that I prefer traditional subjects should be focused on at school: overall personal development and a broader set of subjects help to build a strong foundational knowledge. Students attend school not just to enhance their knowledge or be job-ready but, to interact with teachers and peers to learn essential skills and understand the true meaning of life. Schools help build the overall personality of students by teaching them stories of great leaders and understand and appreciate art and literature. In contrast, if the schools purely focused on job-ready skills, they may be financially secure, but they may lack peace and struggle to deal with day-to-day life problems. The second primary reason I prefer traditional subjects to be focused on by the schools is that it helps build strong foundational knowledge. Traditional subjects expose students to a diverse set of areas to specialize thereby allowing them to analyze their interests further and contribute to society effectively. Finally, I would hope that - should the school continue traditional subjects - they will incorporate digital technology as this would aid in retaining the concepts and learning to apply them to real-world applications easily.
@fasttrackesl
@fasttrackesl Год назад
Thanks for sharing your response. Your essays are pretty well-structured and your paragraph outline also looks good (but try to refute the other option in the second body paragraph of Apples/Oranges topics). It’s best if you provide some context in your introduction before stating your choice. I’ll be explaining how to do so in an upcoming lesson. Your body paragraphs would also be more coherent if you start each one with a topic sentence that summarizes the main idea. There are some lexico-grammatical issues in your writing (e.g., awkward phrasing), so proofread your work to spot and correct some of these mistakes.
@bharatraiyani6747
@bharatraiyani6747 Год назад
Please make master class video for speaking as such as possible
@fasttrackesl
@fasttrackesl Год назад
The CELPIP SPEAKINV Masterclass is already available on the channel: m.ru-vid.com/video/%D0%B2%D0%B8%D0%B4%D0%B5%D0%BE-0FIglQCiqks.html
@bharatraiyani6747
@bharatraiyani6747 Год назад
​@@fasttrackesl it's only speaking part 1 so please all speaking parts video
@fasttrackesl
@fasttrackesl Год назад
No, members have access to a complete speaking tutorial including lessons on all 8 parts of the speaking test.
@bharatraiyani6747
@bharatraiyani6747 Год назад
@@fasttrackesl how to get for this video?
@fasttrackesl
@fasttrackesl Год назад
@@bharatraiyani6747 To access the complete tutorial series, you can become a member of this channel: It's simple. Click on the "join" button (next to the subscribe button) on the channel homepage. Good luck.
@gurpreetubhu3834
@gurpreetubhu3834 Год назад
Here is how i would organise the essay, my choice will be option A. The main ideas to support my choice will be that increased fares will bring more revenue for better technological improvements. second idea will be that more service can be added to existing routes to bring down wait times.
@fasttrackesl
@fasttrackesl Год назад
Thanks for sharing. Well done on the planning. Just one thing to keep in mind: try to keep your main ideas (the same ones you’ll later be including in your topic sentence) brief and exclude supporting ideas. For example, limit the main idea to: “because it generates more revenue.” You can then explain how this additional income could be spent on technological upgrades in the supporting ideas. Separating these will make your main ideas clearer for readers and the examiner. Keep up the good work!
@anjalipatel3119
@anjalipatel3119 8 месяцев назад
Option A: Increased Bus frequency Improved bus stop conditions Option B Bus useful for Students Government liable for bus service improvement through taxes
@fasttrackesl
@fasttrackesl 8 месяцев назад
Now go whichever side can be explained more easily and with better examples!
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