"My family has been stalked for the last 4 years" [COMPLETE] by Nick Botic | CreepyPasta Storytime 

Excatly

Same thing I said

I just want part two :(

Bruh

"I just want to be her friend!" *"I'll skin her alive!"* *Well which one is it then?*

Yeah it's a really annoying troupe. It doesn't make any sense

right.

Hahaha I thought that too!

That's one of the things I hate most that occurs in creepypastas... Random animal abuse.

That's horror in general

If the main character was anything like John Wick this story would be shorter, it took this dude almost 3 years to grow a pair and look for the killer who was stalking his family

David Fucking King :>

I thought the same

I watched that 2

WhatdidIsayagain i luv that one

David PFHUCKING king

I'm gonna kms I'm so peeved at how this enDED HE CK

lol

Him: You know I had to do it to em

Deer*

​@@gagne6928 ​OwO yeah yeah

Lmaoooo

AnonUser20 I read this at 52 minutes 🙃

@@MaticJ29 lmao 😂😂😂

Shiiiiiii

I realized halfway through I heard this like forever ago

This comment is so demented I chuckled.

Just be like: "Um, excuse me can I talk to the manager?"

@Ian Yeetmore step 6 kill doggo when you love him most

Step 5: never leave doggo alone so he doesnt get cut up Step 6: Wait until stalker messes up and get him arrested Step 7: profit

Instructions unclear: dog got fucking fileted

Owen Meadows wow

Owen Meadows Now it's personal...

No

The episode of family Guy when Peter Upsets the amish and they start doing their Chores

i don't care that you kidnapped my daughter, you mowed my lawn you sick fuck

Bethesda Addict I'll be taking notes sir

He was shot in the throat though...like...the chances of surviving a point-plank bullet to the throat are about as slim as winning the lottery twice in a row, especially when you're sitting there bleeding out. He never mentioned the body not being there when the FBI showed up, chances are he bled out fairly quickly considering that area is home to several major arteries, and at the back of the neck is obviously the spinal cord. The shot was a killing blow for sure, my assumption is that the person killed was an accomplice, and that the real kidnapper wasn't in the area at the time.

@@ThePokemon11it was Michael Myers ;)

@@TH-hy9kr Myers is still human.

@@ThePokemon11 The real stalker is the guy that was at Daisy's the night of the truck ransack. The guy that "couldn't" be the culprit because he was an active member of the local church.

I know! Jeez. He must hate his family. He's treating them all like luggage.

EMOTIONALLY STUNTED BAG OF FROZEN PEAS. I AM DEADDDDD

Same it's infuriating!

She blamed him for everything anyway,so what was the point of telling her?

Uhggg!! me too!!!! He's a freaking idiot and didn't even give a chance to be helped ... Oh the cops aren't helping you and you have Todo things yourself??? What do you expect?! You didn't really DO anything to get them involved! Uuhhhhhggggg!!!

Right? I'd be *BEYOND* pisses off, if my spouse just chose to not let me know that the stalker is still around. This guy is an asshole.

@Slitwire No, he's still an ass. I won't say an assHOLE, but an ass nonetheless. Have you never heard the expression, "The road to hell is paved with good intentions"? That's literally this story. We all understand that the MC was doing what he thought was right, as a panicked and terrified parent, but the fact that if he had just given a heads up to ANY of his family most of this stuff wouldn't have happened. Now you can say, "Oh well we don't know that, only what happened in the story" and you're right for the most part but we can very well imagine realistically. If he had told his wife, she would have been horrified, stressed and worried. But would have ALSO most likely kept a closer eye in her daughter, ever vigilant from this psycho instead of being blindsided when she got snatched outta nowhere

@Slitwire If he had told his kids, even if it was the watered down, " Now kids, when you get approached by a stranger, even if they say they are a friend you should..." and this could have likely put a wrench in dude's plan. If the husband told his wife about the presents, she could have maybe spotted the new one at their daughter's bday and maybe intercepted. 🤷🏽‍♀️ Which is why we don't keep things from our family for their well-being, because it always becomes hurtful to their well-being

exactly, the fact he felt the need to "spare" his wife from vital information gives me HUGE mysoginist vibes. that's supposed to be a partner you communicate and work together with, but instead he infantilized her the entire time. I'd be beyond pissed.

I didnt feel bad for him. Idk if thats a problem with me or him but you should tell your partner EVERYTHING if it involves your kids safety.

your picture is a cat, damn traitor

Laura-Dawn Massie yep

lawl so? poor dawg ig

What is ig?

ig means i guess smh

I DREAM OF LEE

I promise Clementine is safe, Lee

everyone not talking about your comment but instead talk about Lee in the walking dead ( i have nothing wrong with the walking dead series i enjoy them)

LEE

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Lmao

Lmfao yup

helpmeimheldhostage and a 3 story mansion with a built in movie theatre

lmao

@@kokichiowo6599 0

i know this is 5 months old but I just want you to know that this made me wheeze so loudly

@@Dreamur Little did you know I’m still here

i know this is 9 months old but I just want you to know that this made me wheeze so loudly

58% percent now

@@ozdunder :(

mansoor mahamud me

Stay tuned. It's in the works. We have a financier, and at least part of a script that I've worked on, just trying to find a filmmaker as passionate about the story as me and the manager I'm working with are. Go to nickbotic.com and sign up for the mailing list to get updates!

wow if u make it anytime soon will see it

The long stories should gain one.

Nick Botic, if you found one then i would support you through all your works this one is so perfect that you could call it "art".... Get it? Art? ( routing for you (: )

he does the same shit again near the end too, real moron lol

✩ Jaywish ✩ my brain was like ?????🤔🤯📉📈

Lol I said the same shit

Ty.. I was thinking I must have heard that wrong

Hoolld thefuckup

Probably meant North California

Everything gets worse when you add cameras. Didn’t you watch Paranormal Activity?

@@@gracee7156 Yeah that doesnt matter, story or not the Author couldve wrote them installing cameras, still based of events that could happen (Probably have happened) or the authors imagination, but sure, lets be a smart ass, cause that makes things better *shrug*

@@DangerIncFilms How stupid are you? This isn't a ghost story; it's a stalking story

Bruh, my dad has gotten robbed three times. He still refuses to get cameras. People are stubborn.

@@nickhannah9543 r/woooosh

I agree, remove the last 30 seconds and it’s golden

​@@mysticresearchlabsthe only thing is I had a hunch that the story was gonna end like that once I first stumbled on it because when Katie was kidnapped I figured out there were two assailants...so this ending makes sense.

Go listen to the story borrasca and then borrasca V very good listen

While a plot convenience, there's a comical amount of that irl to be fair

​@@mattiekarwin3667not really, it wouldnt change anything

I wrote this, and I will admit if there was one thing I would change (and am changing slightly in the script I'm working on for the adaptation), it was that he didn't tell his wife what was going on. Originally, there was an entire subplot about their time apart from each other after Katie is kidnapped which developed the wife's character a bit more, but I obviously ended up removing it. I'm glad you liked the rest though!

Nick Botic are you gonna write a part 2!! Plzzzzz write a part 2

Nick Botic, I really enjoyed this story as a whole, I did question the choice of the father to not tell his wife, but when faced with a choice like that, fear in some people does take precedent over common sense.

Nick Botic you sir are an amazing writer. Where Can I find any of your other work?

@@nickbotic this story had me on the edge of my seat the entire time man if a part two is ever made i will be very invested more then i was

I see what you did there >.>

Unfortunately the Child Stalker is equally filled with determination and fuel on corrupted hopes and dreams to boot.

@@nonozworld yep lmao!

Lel

Dead David fucking king

Gellert WiggleWallop david fUcKinG king

Gellart Wigglewallop ayyyy

DAVID. FUCKING. KING.

Arson Aleks borrasca was made into a movie ? Is that the title of it ?

We're still waiting on a slenderman movie and he's been around for over a decade so... not likely. Though I do agree with you. And knowing our luck it'd be directed by shamalon...

Some day I want to make stories like this into proper films. This one, "dared my friend to ruin my life", among many others would make great additions to the horror film genre. Hell, I've seen at least one major production recently ripped right out of a pasta, Bollywood's probably getting desperate. Independent writers will put most AAA bunglers to shame.

Hey! I'm the writer of this story, and indeed, it's being shopped around independent studios. We have a financier who is backing it, right now we're just trying to find a filmmaker who is as passionate about my story as both I and the manager I'm working with are. SO stay tuned! Go to nickbotic.com and sign up for the mailing list to get updates!

Have you edited this story since writing the version that MrCreepyPasta reads because the ending is nice but I didn't feel it completely made up for some of the weaker writing in other parts of the story. Examples include that the wife, the son, and the daughter really have no character other than that they are the protagonist's wife, son, and daughter. Hell, you could have cut the son out of the story and it wouldn't really have changed anything. Speaking of characters, I feel a lot of the things the bad guy does in this story is justified by just saying that he crazy, like why did he mutilate the dog? And why did he kill his daughter? Throughout the story, there were moments, that I can't specifically recall right now, but that just kept taking me out of the story, and they all culminated to the moment when the protagonist wakes in the room with the TVs, and that completely took me out of the story. Earlier in the story, you were going for a very realistic tone, telling a story about a family being tormented by a faceless, mysterious stalker, and then the guy is in a underground room with tons of TVs in it where the villain threatens him be broadcasting himself live to all the TVs, and it suddenly feels like it SAW Movie. That scene took me out because it was very tone-ly inconsistent and made the story feel kind of silly. This may not be a real flaw, but I thought the story was going to get really dark at the end, and the protagonist was going to be murdered by the townspeople who were in on the kidnapping ganging up to murder him. I was hoping that wouldn't be the ending because then this would be one of those frustrating Creepypastas that leaves you saying, "Then who the f wrote this story?" (Creepypasta/noSleep Stories are fiction but they are fiction that try to convince you that their stories did happen.) But it was really weird that no other townspeople showed up to gang up on the protagonist because that's what it felt like the revelation in the bad guy's house that many of the townspeople were in on the kidnapping was building up to. Even if that wasn't meant to be the case, you would think the diner woman would have warned the bad guy that the father was looking for a barn with an X. It didn't seem like the bad guy knew he was coming when he felt like he should. The letter said bring no one or the girl dies, but from how this story went down, he could have brought people with him and the bad guy wouldn't have known until they already started pulling guns on him. These are just some of the things I had problems with, so I would like to ask again, have you revised this story anymore since?

I cried at the Rosco part. I love animals way way way too much.

Wow. A needlessly brutal description of a dead dog made you upset? You don’t say!?

The sick man who killed dogo Rosco deserves the deaths

SlingJellyStickyGlue hey... ya your right

SlingJellyStickyGlue Colorado, you can find the story on their news station.

Is Iowa in the mid west?

@@dehydratedculture9126 yes.

Wasn’t it in Connecticut

amogus

And it worked too man

I'm replying to a 5 month old comment, but holy shit this gave me a good laugh

@@psyjinx and here I'm replying to a year old replay to a two years old comment. Curious isn't it?

@Marcelo Giménez and here i am responding to a 2 month old comment that it responding to a 1 1/2 year comment responding to a 2 year comment lol beat that

Isaiah Davis 🤠

Gloonious - here i am replying to a 2 month old comment that’s replying to a 5 month old comment that’s replying to a 2 year old reply on a 2 year old comment.

I don't think that's what it meant, I think it meant that even though Katie claims she only saw one kidnapper at any given time it could be that each different mask denotes a different member of the crime syndicate, given that one person could probably not pull all off this off alone. Even with all his compatriots back at Daisy's Diner.

Ya there where 2 kidnappers. I thought that was kinda obvious.

I was thinking more along the lines of a brother

yeah other than the fact that there's more than one kidnapper so the ending *does* make sense in this story, i agree with you on that.

I mean I agree but at the same time, people of small towns know everybody and everything that goes on through their lives. It's odd but I got a Criminal Minds vibe to this story but I feel that a town in on kidnapping a child isn't beyond the realm of possibility. We hear from sources of the underground female sex trade that goes unnoticed by the police.

Ablerta Huntz I know. Escalated real fuckin fast. 😂

Huh. It doesnt seem to really pick up until close to 20 mins. Like about 18 mins in.

RY_of The_fallen11247. I would love to see another version of this where nothing bad happened. Just some stalker doing a bunch of good things for them. The creepy part is not knowing when it’ll turn dark. So you’re left wondering when something will happen till the end.

We're working on it! I'm currently working on the script, and we have a financier, just looking for a filmmaker as passionate about the story as both myself and the manager I'm working with are!

@@nickbotic Good luck, Hollywood needs writers like you.

coke is ass dr.pepper and pepsi are the only acceptional options

Jesus that's horrifying

*where

If I ever order pepsi it's a sign I'm in danger. Call me crazy but my friends know I only drink coke or Dr.pepper if I don't drink water.

Jayquix i said whatttttttttt....damn lol

SAME.

ME TOO I WAS SO UPSET

me 2 still intense though

I hope for a part 2 for this story also, please

I cought it too lole wHaT!!!!! O_o

Wormhole apparently

The went to the East-er coast

They probably meant North California

shut up you fat dumbass bitch

Kailah Butler saaame

Kailah Butler SAME

Similar but not equal to. If I'm being honest penal couldn't hold my attention, and this one has a much better ending.

Penpal is better than this in my honest opinion. This story is going for more shock value, especially the overly climactic ending. Penpal is more subtle and that makes it more creepy and realistic.

Saame

I’m dying lol

😳

CHRIS ESCAPED JAIL?!?!?!

HEYOOOOOOO!

Lets see the picture!

Yea let see your picture, you seem like an amazing writer

So basically doodlebob?

Bro let's see it!!!!!

i wanna see the drawing!! lemme see!

I'd"ve also changed my name.

yeah, why didn’t he?

Damn

That wouldn't stop the child stalker. If he was determined to stalked this family for four whole years than moving to another would've been an inconvenience for the bastard.

David. Fucking. King.

Yes David fucking king the part where they had an auto accident and hit a tree while in back seat handcuffed really set my anxiety level off the charts

@@Downinbama1 hey don't give it away to anyone reading lol 😆

Herp Derp have you read penpal? if not its a good one imo

Ugh same

@@brendencline6583 Read it. Fucking chilling. Makes me look over my shoulder every time.

Yeah if anything that's the one thing I'd change if I was the writer, the kids? Whatever, best not scare them. Your own significant other? Better tell them, she had every right to be mad he hid it from her

Puppetplays be busta did the whole series on his channel

Puppetplays but does he have a good voice to read it though..?

Sirstyx already happend expect the entire thing in one and the story’s fake so

@@youpissflap be busta is one of the only youtube cp narrators that is anywhere near as good as mcp. 😉

Pizza me too

What are you doing?

Me too

ⱧƎⱤE ϮØ SȾAY

Are you doing this? Here's what you do in this situation ladies and gentlemen 1st tell your family 2nd have security cameras installed all around the house 3rd get a security system installed and tell your family the code in a small room that is checked for cameras and or listening devices 4th have large deadbolts installed that can only be locked from the inside and can't be unlocked from the outside or have it be a normal deadlock that can be unlocked from the outside but it requires a separate key from your normal house key 5th give everyone in your family guns and tell them to shoot anyone that is not in the family ie brother or father or mother keep the guys under your pillow 6th have everyone in your family armed with a hidden places in a reachable spot. What do I mean by reachable I mean if you are in bed be choked to death you are able to grab your knife and stab the attacker that's what I mean by reachable 7th this only applies for kids if the stalker tries to lure the kids away for kidnapping while they are in bed play along until he is far away from your bed enough that you can safely pull a gun out and shoot. There you are for your survive a guy who can break into your house with ease this guide gives you 4 layers of protection against attackers. P. S when you tell your family about the guns do it in a room that was checked for cams and listening devices that is also small. You're welcome future family that needs to protect themselves

Hooray for being (gay and) European!

I'm European

@@staying_silent is this a legally blonde reference

@@staying_silent It’s just a story lmao

Sam Johnson i agree

Do you really trust Hollywood with this

​@@isaacspaseski5350independent film makers.

MrEpicMouse I would be surprised. He sometimes has trouble even finishing the narrations he's started. The Darklings, Confessions of a Deep Sea Diver, and The Twin Paradox to name some of my favorites. I don't know if he loses interest, stops caring, gets too busy, or genuinely forgets, but it does get frustrating.

The Creepy Cast There was another part to Confessions of a Deep Sea Diver?

Can you share the link I want to read it

ones*

@@TheLudlowReaper Well the problem is when you make a video on a piece like this, and the author isn't done, or sees the success and adds to it, it becomes really hard to constantly keep it updated. And then to continue with sequels and updates would take away the ability to draw attention to different stories. So perhaps these should be taken more as a 'up to this point complete' narration, and then any updates or sequels you'll have to watch the actual author for. Spreading the attention so to speak.

zqmmbiie agreed

What happened? Lmao jk dw just gonna watch that video .

😂

Kariah Animated probably was a team effort, even though Katie says she only saw one person I think the different masks symbolize there being more than one stalker/kidnapper

The author tells another commenter that the man who was shot is most definelty dead.

Think about it: who else did that waitress vouch for? The guy described as an active church-goer. He was this lunatic's accomplice