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@penguindp4379 4 года назад

"...gas station at the edge of town..." *Clears throat* The what?

@Breezey_Dubz 4 года назад

the kid thats working there was probably talking to a glowing mushroom in the bathroom or something 😂

@Behemoth9030 4 года назад

Breeze Warbrick or a cowboy. 🤣

@paulnattress6855 4 года назад

Jerry

@mazen6446 4 года назад

I was expecting a reference there. I mean that's already a reference but I was hoping he'd say something about the guy that worked there

@jexterftw8052 4 года назад

Does it have any bodies in the stock room?

@iancordero6320 4 года назад

Can we just talk about how relieving it is that he actually tells his wife what's going on instead of trying to hide it to "protect" her

@logandold6894 4 года назад

yes! im so tired of people not telling their partner exactly whats going on. were a team lets figure this shit out together

@McFunnyPantz 4 года назад

RIGHT? Ffs so much shit can be avoided by just telling the truth.

@gargles5270 4 года назад

yeah fr the couple here is actually like-able lol

@frankgallegos8048 4 года назад

When stuff starts to feel like you can relax that's when the s___t hits the fan

@kielbasathief9576 4 года назад

Doesn't tell kid much.

@NaughtyWeiss 3 года назад

The most unrealistic thing about this whole story is the lack of screaming kids demanding snacks and potty breaks on a road trip. Lol.

@GrymReaper19 3 года назад

Right

@asianspaghetti2844 3 года назад

That doesn't happen if you know how to educate a child, and the protagonist doesn't seem like the typical idiot

@rattina7784 3 года назад

@@asianspaghetti2844 bruh

@strawberrytiramisu 3 года назад

@@asianspaghetti2844 my nephew is like 1. He cries and stuff during road trips because he’s a baby. Idk how you’d expect a baby to be educated. I also have a niece who’s turning 3 and she’s kinda the same but she’s starting to have more of an understanding.

@DarkHowPendragon 3 года назад

My daughter is quite during road trips.. shes almost 18months.. But yeah that only last for so long... As I child I was mostly quiet all the time. Not all kids are the same

@monsterbros1882 4 года назад

This quickly went from a coronavirus story to a The Mist remix

@francoisgrobbelaar8821 4 года назад

I got the same vibe as well. Frankly, I'd rather watch a movie based on this story. The Mist was just so depressing at the end.

@themurrrr 4 года назад

Francois Grobbelaar The book’s end is different, but not much better. Most of the lead characters make it,..... but the mist remains. The new normal.

@nicholasszabo5954 3 года назад

The alternate movie ending to the mist was really creepy, the entire planet was covered.

@terrariahero4584 3 года назад

A better Netflix adaptation

@cannaisuer2091 3 года назад

Holy shit... I havent heard of this movie is years... Good film. Kinda made me scared of fog as a kid

@thecookiegirlgamer8851 3 года назад

I can just imagine this story being told by addy when she's older "when I was a kid, something was wrong outside"

@smughatkid3936 2 года назад

“And my dad had left a journal”

@lovelysunshinee6646 Год назад

It’s funny bc my name is addy so whenever he said that name I perked up lmao

@izzydarklord7927 7 месяцев назад

@@lovelysunshinee6646 lmao my name is Izzy so same

@allannapier1626 7 месяцев назад

This would make an insane film or even a series

@xxsuperstarstxx9773 4 года назад

The title: **exists** Everyone: Same

@yuhi8925 3 года назад

Lol

@NagumoHaruya 3 года назад

NOOOPE

@creepypastime1664 3 года назад

Definitely relate. And every town in my state except mine is covered in snow...and I wanted snow...bruh.

@catattack7639 2 года назад

People be writing full on novels under the creepypasta tag like bro....publish it this is good

@sethhenderson9010 Год назад

The thing is the majority or even most of all the stories all the narrators on utube aren’t telling their own stories. They’re literally telling stories that other people wrote. People who have permission for them to tell the stories. Or free for everyone but still copywrited and so they can’t publish them themselves because they don’t own the story? Why doesn’t the person who wrote it? Three reasons why. First reason they’re stupid. Second reason they may not realize that the story is blockbuster material. The final reason is that despite how good the story is the fact is it’s the narrators voice who truly makes the story great. Anyone else telling the story would suck and the story would suck. And I lied. There’s a fourth reason. That reason is well compared to all the crazy political shit and all the wars going on or about to start and men thinking they’re women and all these pronouns fuck these crazy stories actually bring some sense of normalcy to our otherwise off the fucking chain real world bullshit. So yeah that’s why they don’t publish them haha. HOWEVER some of these narrators on here do write some of their own work and I know some have even wrote a couple novels and some of those said tales and novels are also narrated by them and given to us the audience for FREE. These guys are good right now but they’re playing the long game I’d give my work away free to if it contributed to me becoming hella famous one day making millions of dollars doing whatever so yeah.

@cholericimp1358 Год назад

This is just "The Mist" but it is good.

@jamesesparza6893 Год назад

this is basically a novel, I've noticed a lot of people just use Creepypasta to make their horror stories instead of well, a creepypasta.

@Unknown0User787 Год назад

@@cholericimp1358 I wouldn’t say it’s the mist more of a spin-off/inspired by

@eddiehoplight2003 Год назад

Get the guy who did the movie version of the Mist to do a film of this, instant money👌

@patrickknowles8422 3 года назад

Flaming raccoons? correction, rocco's brood has evolved.

@jayjay-dh5ir 2 года назад

Rocco was just trying to light his cig smh

@colehuntress3900 2 года назад

Fuck why didn’t I think of that? Fucking Rocco!

@lildreadnaughtstarwar 2 года назад

Jack: Finally figured out what the weirdest thing at the gas station is. That giant behemoth

@halfwaynothin6898 2 года назад

Rocco ate the spicy peppers oh no

@nowayjose7259 2 года назад

Between the gas station on the edge of town, and the deep fog, I think the context clues are abundant. I would say Rocco's brood is a fair assessment.

@finnmcool2 2 года назад

Hands up everyone that agrees this guy is the absolute winner of the Choose Your Wife game.

@killerbouquet3220 Год назад

Fuckin tell me about it! I'm jealous of a fictional character!

@A_Stereotypical_Heretic Год назад

Ugh ikr? My wife would probably shoot me with an arrow instead of the monsters...on purpose...

@peridotgaming5894 Год назад

@@A_Stereotypical_Hereticdamn broski toxic relationship much? I mean shit if yall ain't happy js separate 🤨 or get marriage counseling

@A_Stereotypical_Heretic Год назад

@@peridotgaming5894 well it's a joke, but have you ever been married?

@ashleybell8183 Год назад

@@peridotgaming5894🤦🏾‍♀️🤦🏾‍♀️🤦🏾‍♀️ went over your head 😅😅

@lastpringle8904 3 года назад

"there I saw it, a desert eagle" Makes things infinitely less scary knowing that the next thing that pops around the corner is going to be dead instantly

@TheSpikesatterlee198 3 года назад

"My first hand gun" 😆 lol

@finlandball1939 3 года назад

*A m e r i c a F u c k Y e a*

@ryanlaney8376 3 года назад

Because it is ALWAYS a Desert Eagle. An expensive, heavy, unreliable, unwieldy POS. Anyone who has actually shot one would agree it is just a range toy. This is like the equivalent of going "oh, a Ferrari Enzo. My first car!" and then escaping town with it.

@tristanperciful6609 3 года назад

@@ryanlaney8376 yeah. I've fired both a .44 and a .50 and I'll stick to my 1911 any day. Even with my especially huge hands, i still can't reach the mag release on either without readjusting my grip on the gun. Getting a good grip on the slide is impossible and the safety is hard to move. If you don't have a good grip, that thing will fly out of your hand.

@BrainEatPenguin 2 года назад

@@ryanlaney8376 most whack part of the story is that the dude lives in a town of 800 people and doesn’t own multiple firearms and lacks knowledge of them😂

@nascraa 4 года назад

holy mother of god i fell asleep listening to this loud and the whole dream was narrated by this and i was living the story until i woke up.. scary ass dream.

@nascraa 4 года назад

it took place in my house too and mr creepypasta was basically my dad telling me the story in my dream all whilst the creatures were outside the house.

@noahbonanno6783 4 года назад

@@nascraa I can imagine how vivid that could get cause you literally have someone narrating you deam for you

@JRWells08 3 года назад

Wow

@biggmike1222 3 года назад

That actually sounds pretty fun

@NoraIconiq 3 года назад

Thats probably why people shouldnt listen to creepypastas before bed.

@theunnamed5894 4 года назад

This would make a brilliant survival horror game.

@mikoyyuy13 4 года назад

Already has. The last of us. It’s actually similar. I think this story came from the last of us

@novalaws972 4 года назад

This would make a good horror movie

@Dead_head4565 4 года назад

Yeah definitely a movie

@StephyLynn 3 года назад

Similar to Silent Hill too.

@user-ul6ec4io5i 3 года назад

I feel like it’d low key make a good horror rpg

@ZarHakkar 4 года назад

"Years of watching movies has told me nothing good comes from letting the crazy person ramble." Smart, but he still needs to learn to close doors behind him.

@michaelwolf3451 3 года назад

He did say that he watched movies, not played SCP:CB. That's where you learn to close doors behind you

@thundergaming155 3 года назад

always remove the crazy religious person ever time in a horror scenario.

@marshallzeke997 3 года назад

@@michaelwolf3451 What the hell does SCP: CB stand for

@alexbradshaw5466 3 года назад

@@marshallzeke997 scp: containment breach

@monroe776 2 года назад

I would agree with this but when entering a new place it's always smart to have an escape rout that you know is there and leaving it open is just a way to sure of a quick escape not having to fumble around with door knobs locks and what not. I do understand the something may be following but that's when you have a little trap ready something like nails though a piece of wood pointing upward. Could just be enough.

@officekevin4669 4 года назад

Oh my God. FINALLY a smart and mostly composed main character

@sephthesatanist6558 3 года назад

Honestly. You don't have to be a superhero to act with some damn common sense.

@officekevin4669 3 года назад

@@sephthesatanist6558 still Its so often that charactets are just straight up retarded, fells nice to have someone relatively normal for a change

@irishkat8451 3 года назад

How about the beginning where he says something like, "the neighbors were still home, why didn't they respond?"

@trevanminnig3499 3 года назад

I was gonna complain that I don’t like this story, but you’ve made me like it a little more. Thank you. (But seriously, I’m still hating looking around every time he says my name XD)

@marine8255 3 года назад

Right

@Alexandoas 4 года назад

I love how this went from being a quarantine story to just being Stephen kings’s the mist XD

@lindsaykennedy6200 3 года назад

The stand to the mist 😂

@jesushonduras 3 года назад

Bro for real

@muhai6920 3 года назад

Yeah but corona edition

@alexsalas9512 3 года назад

That's my thoughts in a nutshell lmao😂😂✌️👌

@pyro_mania67 3 года назад

Okay so I hit the part where he saw fog outside the town and was like hmm reminds me of the Mist, and 20 minutes in I was like yup time to hot the comments and see if I was the only one who had that thought. Knew I 100% wasn't the only one, 🙅🏻 nope I was right 😆 Idk I love the mist, read the book and watched the movie and tv show all several times and this is 100% going to be something I fall asleep to on the regular now because I think this is a really really good twist on the mist and anything that can originally copy the mist and make it even better is something I can easily fall asleep to :D Props to the author for writing a story that has inthrawled my entire being. I'd love to meet this author and get an autograph because this is GOLD! I want to see this author continue to write and get to the point they can sell hard copies because I would absolutely support this author and buy every single book and I honestly don't read like I use to, but I would love to sit down by a warm fire when its snowy and read this story or others by the author well drinking a nice Coffee/ green tea/Kratom tea combo and not stop reading until I read the entire book/series. This author seriously has tallent that I personally feel others who have had stories on here don't always have. Maybe the Mist makes me nostalgic but this story is perfect!

@Crimson-Hat 4 года назад

Just when you think 2020 can't get worse, here comes the eldritch monsters and the sizzling fog.

@marshaseas166 4 года назад

At this point I welcome them

@problematique9389 4 года назад

You know this is obviously inspired by The Color Out Of Space ... The movie was cool. Watched it last night. Check it out. Its exactly like this.

@jexterftw8052 4 года назад

Honestly I'd let the eldritch monsters carry me into the void

@victoriashevlin8587 4 года назад

@@problematique9389 where did you watch it?

@ThankYouVeryLittle 4 года назад

Ah Yes The Goddamn Eldrich Monsters Can Take Me At Thid Point

@Ueruchan 4 года назад

I really enjoy how realistic his inflections are. I feel like I'm actually hearing a first hand account.

@TwinTails100 4 года назад

That's why he's literally _the best_ narrator on RU-vid. It's disappointingly rare to find another Creepypasta channel like his. I've tried.

@gamingchair4678 4 года назад

@@TwinTails100 have you ever heard of the dark somnium

@MrSleepless 4 года назад

TwinTails100 check out The Dark Somnium, one of my favorites, he expresses his emotions as good as mrcreepypasta

@ben19850116 4 года назад

Mr. Sleepless agreed

@thequackhouse4658 3 года назад

I LOVE the Husband/Wife Team

@the_great_eli8644 3 года назад

Y'all could've solved this by getting a giant fan.

@YPA505 3 года назад

that's kinda facts tho

@ricardojimenez1251 3 года назад

LMAOO

@jackiemarini3203 3 года назад

😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

@danieldowns2084 3 года назад

Uhm.. like a windmill but backwards? Nah those cause cancer.

@chainlinksart6524 3 года назад

I'm tired, so if you're joking, I can't pick up on it, (complex humor blah blah) so I'm not hating or anything, but the fan thing a joke, I didn't laugh st it, but it was humor. Again, if you were joking yourself, then sorry, lmao

@terapziegames 4 года назад

This is what the TV series version of The Mist should have been.

@GR-bn3xj 3 года назад

I wanted to like that show but good Lord it was god awful. This is what happens when the show cared more about being Woke and PC than being scary or good

@malakaieaglebear3105 3 года назад

I'm done7171717171

@fortifiedphoenix1118 3 года назад

This would have been 10 times better I want to see a well made movie based from this

@AdmiralPureBlood 3 года назад

Yeah that woke garbage they called The Mist was one of the worst television shows I've ever seen and that is one of my most favorite movies at least top five they completely fucking destroyed that so by trying to be so fucking woke. But guess what everything is woke goes broke and so did the show.

@lukaeglite-shaw2937 3 года назад

I actually loved the idea of the tv series but they could’ve executed it so much better I loved the massive plot twist tho

@Breezey_Dubz 4 года назад

that dude is a fucking trooper, the sheer badassery he displays in the face of almost certain death is phenomenal

@QueenBeeDigital 2 года назад

That’s what you do when you have kids to protect.

@Orlando_Furioso 2 года назад

And he was smart

@illbeyourstumbleine 2 года назад

I like how he kept his wife in the loop and didn't treat her like a delicate flower. She is obviously bad ass too and they make a great team.

@Aknapp382 2 года назад

The second dog was a 🐐

@masonbrookfield2243 Год назад

@@Aknapp382 yeah first one got fucked cause he wasnt a smart boy

@Livinlikeaclown 4 года назад

i like this guys voice, he legit sounds like he's in the situation and not just reading a creepypasta

@papasquat123 3 года назад

34:50 "I heard an odd clicking" This man literally said the creatures made clicking noises, yet stayed oblivious

@lesliewolfe7643 2 года назад

Haha I thought that too

@jasoncarto 2 года назад

Just had to replace "an" with "that"

@LOH__ 4 года назад

I don’t like that moo moo.

@biggmike1222 3 года назад

What moo moo

@Bonked_YT 3 года назад

moo moo bad

@nate0825 3 года назад

Heh

@xenodragon77 3 года назад

Main Character: That was the shortest route towards my intended destination Ad: *FRANCE*

@gionrion8493 4 года назад

Soooo, during part three, whenever he heard the noise upstairs was anyone else ranting: NO NO NO, GET THE F*CK OUT OF THERE, OUT OUT OUT!!!

@Ksueme 4 месяца назад

Same. It's always Americans in movies. I thought this must be an American trait

@ravenlord1234 4 года назад

R.I.P May you truly were a good girl

@purplecat4977 3 года назад

Thank you. I was scanning the comments to see if the dogs or kids died. Noping right on off to a creepypasta without pets or kids.

@Nekulturny 3 года назад

Let one of those creatures try to stare down my cat Quark... That creature will lose the fight by looking into the eyes of a demon. Hes a sweetheart, but he has the most evil looking eyes I've ever seen in a cat, its unreal how much it contrasts with his personality, if only YT comments let us post pictures. Its actually a bit of a joke with my friends because of how scary he looks when he stares at you, but he loves everyone,.

@megamovieman101 2 года назад

Purple Cat Same. Glad I caught it early before I got invested. Dogs and cats dying in these stories is a really cheap tug on the emotions.

@xonarab1824 2 года назад

@@megamovieman101 I always cry when animals die in things like these

@nic233 2 года назад

May is the best girl... RIP

@DarkShadows713 3 года назад

*The family is being chased by a huge-ass monster which is gaining on them and crushed the end of the van* Addy: Yo I'm bored can I get a uhhhhh movie?

@vixxiiestixx 3 года назад

addy's a baddy

@gustavo.210 2 года назад

@@vixxiiestixx she’s a toddler...

@DuckyRubber 2 года назад

@@gustavo.210 mate it was a year ago

@gustavo.210 2 года назад

@@DuckyRubber pedophilia stops for nothing.

@dumbdrumm5631 2 года назад

@@gustavo.210 I'm going to choose to believe that by "baddie" he meant badass

@fatigued3115 4 года назад

seems like the only reason the fog is there is because the creatures need to be immersed in it to live, and can only remain outside of it for short amounts of time. pretty neat. amazing narration to a great story.

@apollyonnoctis1291 2 года назад

I don’t think these creatures were evil, they’re just strange animals that hunt to survive.

@Aftershock43 2 года назад

I assumed with there pale skin, lack of normal eyes and need to be in the fog, I think they can't stand direct sun light

@luckystar3641 3 года назад

4:28 "I live in a small, and I mean SMALL town. Total population is about 800" *Looks up population of my town* *258*

@leneerodriguez7346 3 года назад

you and him live in a Village at this point

@Animotion3D 2 года назад

@@leneerodriguez7346 why does being called a villager hurt so much?

@protisteos9778 2 года назад

800 aint even a town

@cryptopsyrin4425 4 года назад

"As I got closer it stayed in place, like some swirling cloud wall" Dark Souls PTSD kicks in

@thundergaming155 3 года назад

*proceeds to firebomb the cpara deamon from out side his arena and kill him*.

@CallMeFlawed Год назад

Smirks 😉😉🤪😉😉

@johncox9575 3 года назад

I have to say main character knows exactly what it's like having a two-year-old at the toddler the same time you really don't need alarm clocks when they can come runing in your room.

@HugoGojibiter 4 года назад

I feel like the ending of this story is the author having had more in mind for the story but getting burnt out in writing it so he made an ending to it that he could easily continue in the future if he gets back in the mood of it. At least I hope that’s what it is because I really feel like there could be more to it

@cryptic_nightmares561 4 года назад

Good news for you sir. Im about halfway through season two and will start posting the parts once the whole thing is complete.

@HugoGojibiter 4 года назад

cryptic_ nightmares that is fantastic news

@somerandomguy7235 3 года назад

@@cryptic_nightmares561 You're the author because this is amazing

@cryptic_nightmares561 3 года назад

@@somerandomguy7235 yes i am and thank you. Im pushing pretty hard to be able to start releasing season two by halloween. I have about 18k words left to go before its finished. Then a little polishing

@yt_wildash7651 3 года назад

@@cryptic_nightmares561 you can do it! I believe in you 100%. And I bet its gonna be as good, if not better than the first season!

@d3tach3d 3 года назад

You put a lot of of emotion, intensity, life and character into story telling and reading these creepypastas which makes them much more immersive and enjoyable to listen to. Now all we need is some atmosphere, sound fx, and it would be insane! (I know that would take it 10 times the work though). Most the other channels just read with more of a boring monotone approach, which leads it to be kind of lifeless and without substance. Maybe they just cant do it, or wont put the work to practice reading/acting, etc) in order to be at the level of story telling your are. In short, I would say, "They just (read) and You Act it out". I'm glad I found this channel. Great work, Brother. Also, Bravo to the Author of this one. He writes pretty damn good. Shout out to Lighthouse Horror as well. He's great.

@gma_x4lucky91 2 года назад

I completely agree. He does an awesome job as always.

@drownedtrashrat3501 Год назад

He's practically a voice actor, the rest of em just read it off

@jessicaphillips5738 8 месяцев назад

I agree! This guy is great. That Mr. Creeps or whatever has interesting as hell stories, but reads them in a monotone and has no fuckin idea how a sentence cadence works. He reads. Like. This. My mom. Once bought a. New house. And as we lived there longer. And longer. We noticed. Many more weird. Things. DRIVES ME UP A GODDAMN WALL, I had to unsubscribe. God he sucks.

@jkamazinart4087 4 года назад

Ok, for some reason this story reminded of my dad, SO MUCH. The way my dad tells story's, the way you voiced the main charecter, the family. It is an extremely weird coincidence, but it made me think about my dad. Thanks for reminding me how much I love my dad MCP. :)

@leneerodriguez7346 3 года назад

this is so wholesome to read i think my heart stopped-

@orbitz6068 3 года назад

Or maybe this guy is just your dad

@allpowerfulmitochondria759 4 года назад

I was so into this story I nearly shit my pants when the mailman put my mail through the slot.

@jackscrap5249 3 года назад

They still do that?

@A_Stereotypical_Heretic Год назад

Bro, you had already shit your pants.

@BitchyBubblez 2 года назад

This is the one story where I'm actually rooting for the main dude, isn't perfect with his decisions, but it's actually realistic compared to most horror movies nowadays. They actually run away from the noises! Poor May tho :c I really hope this gets a continuation, at least a conclusion, whether bad or good.

@ferretmayn7045 3 года назад

>mysterious gas station at the edge of town >strange fog I don’t like where this is going

@mikeknight1778 3 года назад

these people need a radio stat lol

@finlandball1939 3 года назад

@@mikeknight1778 *Flashback to the fog creatures that cause chaos at the Radio Station*

@mikeknight1778 3 года назад

@@finlandball1939 honestly that story was amazing right

@finlandball1939 3 года назад

@@mikeknight1778 Yes, but this one is even better. I can’t wait for the next edition! I’m so into this!

@mikeknight1778 3 года назад

@@finlandball1939 cool

@shawnpeacock6377 4 года назад

Humvees don’t have keys. He could have just turned them on and moved them and left town lol.

@vladmorozov6120 4 года назад

I'm thinking the same thing through the whole video and didn't he say they had 50 cals on them

@cryptic_nightmares561 4 года назад

Yes thats true but it would have made for a pretty boring story if it had been that easy. .

@Name-yv2zq 4 года назад

I'm just gonna assume he didn't know that

@funnatopia704 4 года назад

the doors are usually locked and the steering wheel is locked in place when there isn't military personnel in them. this prevents people, especially during civilian lock-downs and martial law, from stealing them since these vehicles can be very dangerous when handled by someone who doesn't realize they are inside an armored 2 1/2 ton war machine.

@NotQuiteSteele 4 года назад

They also don't have door locks, really should have been simple to solve that problem.

@emilyprovance7413 4 года назад

Grace is a badass.

@Hunter_Stonestreet 3 года назад

@Crotchwhistle Purple a badass mom

@tyrus71 4 года назад

Can you please read the sequel to "I dared my best friend to ruin my life"? It's called "I dared my best friend to end my life"

@johnnytay74 4 года назад

That was my favorite story he’s narrated. I know everyone, including me, really loves the Gas Station stories but something about that story just made it my favorite. Really well written

@lulette14 4 года назад

I remember listening to this one to work, two summers ago, and oh lord i got so into it! It was an experience to isolate myself with that, while there were many people around

@alexkinder5621 4 года назад

God bless you for helping me find it

@tyrus71 4 года назад

@@johnnytay74 my favorite story is either I dared my best friend or Borrasca

@CaptainCreepypasta 4 года назад

@@tyrus71 borrasca hits different

@antonandersson7295 4 года назад

This pasta was awsome but the ending left me hanging

@Yume10605 4 года назад

Thankfully the writer has said they are working on a second season

@The_Masked_Man_ 4 года назад

Really that's dope I just like to listen to the stories I usually don't pay attention that kind stuff So it is good to know that the story will continue

@bsbznumber1fan 4 года назад

I was just thinking the same thing lol i was like don't leave me hanging like that. A purple a grey fog emerged ok and then what? I saw someone comment they are working on a second season for this? God i hope so i was like the story can't end like that i want more 😀

@TheAthens619 4 года назад

I mean the OG goes to Steven King.

@yZEEHC1 4 года назад

I cant wait to see if theres gonna be more to this 10 part series

@MothmanLee 4 года назад

I enjoy the spin this story had from ACTUALLY telling his wife what's going down to the into the mist vibe and the fog coming back leaving the listener raising questions and coming up with ideas

@warrior2112 4 года назад

I knew at least one of the doggos were gonna die the moment I heard there were dogs but still.. the poor puppy

@amandafrantz7737 3 года назад

Did they die if yes leave the timestamp

@thecookiegirlgamer8851 3 года назад

Ohh nooo I'm not there yetttt ;(

@chamacreator 2 года назад

@@amandafrantz7737 One one did, but I don't know the timestamp for it.

@buzzpus7407 3 года назад

Neighbor dies: ok Dog dies: Goku scream

@paulsmart4672 3 года назад

yes

@MrNote-lz7lh 2 года назад

As it should be.

@lesliewolfe7643 2 года назад

They have the quietest, most well-behaved children that ever existed. Barely a peep out of either one of them. 😂

@TheLegend-jp1vg 4 года назад

Now i shall actually listen instead of just fall asleep to this story :)

@michaelwinborne4113 4 года назад

RELATABLE

@rabies5179 4 года назад

I said that to myself many times, still trying to get through all of it

@Behemoth9030 4 года назад

So goddamn difficult, wish you guys the best of luck haha.

@yt_wildash7651 3 года назад

'The legend27' Now that's a name I haven't heard in a long time.

@creepypastime1664 3 года назад

Wife: *relieved children are okay* Husband: *relieved dog is okay* Not that he didn't care -trust me, the guy really loves his family- I just thought it was hilarious to hear that he was so happy over his dog.

@meganbrann7252 9 месяцев назад

The husband is me

@sonicfangal2000 3 года назад

Anyone thinks this story has a good relationship between 2 people and a loving family, I swear this story has got me feeling all kinds of emotions. One of his best narrations in my opinion. And I love how him and his wife are communicating instead one of them constantly hiding something from the other. Truly goals, of course, you wouldn't want the flame spiders, the lurkers, you know, the Red Mist....but seriously, couldn't have picked a better story to get me through school today!

@christalellard5059 3 года назад

Listening to this on a cold dark foggy night in the middle of the country with the only sound being my pigs, is freaky AF

@marfnation7287 2 года назад

Honestly one of the best stories I’ve ever heard. I would love to see this as a movie or video game

@themonarchof3231 Год назад

I LOVE the way this is written because it's mixed with both like ur just reading a story from a book or smth and also someone telling you a story from the top of their head and its amazing

@Clockz 4 года назад

The whole time the daughter is like seems ok to me

@caitlins504 3 года назад

Fr they seen scary ass things and cried about wanting to watch a movie

@johncox9575 3 года назад

@@caitlins504 i have a 2 year old. Can confirm this is what happens.

@calikocat7014 3 года назад

“I wanna watch frozen” *almost gets crushed by a giant demon that you dad shot from a moving mini van* okay chill

@cryptic_nightmares561 3 года назад

Almost every line that Addie has in this story was taken from things she has said to me in real life and how she actually acts.

@matthewmorrison9932 4 года назад

So the gas station on the edge of town is how I found your channel. Absolutely love the longer compilations to leisurely drive the miles o get paid to run. Great work and keep up the excellent work

@TheVividKiWi 4 года назад

I’ve been watching/listening to your channel on and off for the past 6-7 years now. I rarely comment, but keep up the good work. I wish I could thumbs up this video twice, so to someone who hasn’t liked the video yet, like it for me.

@Mgrom-r7c 2 года назад

I liked it for you, kind soul.

@isaiahsalek2527 2 года назад

And me too, now you've basically given 3!

@v4axis267 2 года назад

Make that 4

@A_Stereotypical_Heretic Год назад

Go ahead and hit the like button twice

@clargonaut6015 3 года назад

It's a good thing that I'm learning Blacksmithing because you don't need to reload a sword (Except in Attack On Titan).

@thundergaming155 3 года назад

And a gun blade from ff8.

@dorothyaebutcher7103 4 года назад

Have to brag. For the first time EVER I have been able to not watch a single second of a series until all of it dropped. IKR? Just me? Thx, MCP. ;)

@Scags 4 года назад

I always do it. I find it easier to listen all at once on runs or bike rides than switch from video to video

@Behemoth9030 4 года назад

Same here. Same reason why I’ve not listened to any of the Lily Madwhip series yet. Don’t feel like I can until the second season of it is all in one video.

@GageMason 4 года назад

Yea I always have to wait because I can't keep up with the multiple videos. I listen to these while delivering pizzas, so having one full video is alot nicer.

@slamminsalmon_ 3 года назад

you're telling me the 2 year old didn't ever react at all to a 12 gauge slug going off right next to her?

@thatoneguy9666 3 года назад

Day in the life of an American

@slamminsalmon_ 3 года назад

@Crotchwhistle Purple nope not at all. My family and I shoot a lot of guns. I was just pointing out the fact that even at the age I am today, if I shoot a 12 gauge without any ear protection my ears are going to ring. if I remember correctly, he shoots the gun while in a car with a 2 y/o in it. The child would most definitely be crying. I don’t know why you think I’m trying to sound “intelligent” but for someone who has L as their pfp I’m surprised that you aren’t trying to ask smart.

@shelbywalesby7394 3 года назад

The way the narrator reads the tense parts has me on the edge of my seat! I can feel the fear in his tone.

@Andi-jl2up 3 года назад

I love their power dynamic, like they both work together, trying hard and saving their kids n shit like It's such an important part of the story I love it sm

@jasonbernard9012 4 года назад

Also, drop-kicking a weak woman 😂😂😂😂😂 that made me laugh so hard lmao

@Homiebear1 3 года назад

TO THIS DAY I SHALL SCREAM!!! EQUAL RIGHTS EQUAL FIGHTS!!!

@admiral3075 4 года назад

This is just the mist but less crab

@NotQuiteSteele 4 года назад

🦀🦀🦀 Crabs are gone 🦀🦀🦀

@misterlamprey7777 3 года назад

This is such a classic. Genuinely peak creepypasta, a beautiful blend of scp-like concepts and creepypasta storytelling format. Combined with the great characters, it's as close to perfection iv'e ever seen.

@chuckyb3211 4 года назад

I listened to these has he uploaded them...and honestly I get a Stephen Kings The Mist vibe from this story...it reminds me of that movie every time I heard a segment lol witch I really liked the most so I def enjoyed these story’s as well..

@ThankYouVeryLittle 4 года назад

Exactly

@GR-bn3xj 3 года назад

It's more than just a vibe, it's almost a complete ripoff of it

@lazykiwi936 4 года назад

Bruh I was so sad when the first dog died 😭😭. But the story was really great and the way the reader reads it makes it feel so immersive.

@TheAthens619 4 года назад

I've been waiting for this to be a completed and put together

@lumenknotty6355 4 года назад

Same.

@cakebakernr 4 года назад

Me too

@nathanielcauldwell2181 4 года назад

Same

@asdfkTurtle 4 года назад

Same It kinda sucks to get intrested just to have to wait for another fragment and wait again I get it takes time for a good story but its worth the weight vs 16 min at a time

@MT-lw6yh 3 года назад

Damn, slaughter to prevail, video games, horror stories, and critical role. We the same person?

@kaikwon1604 4 года назад

goddamn this is so realistic, the logical thinking of the mc, the youtube medic moment, the misses and the highlights of the creatures and his understandable misses (you cant hit heads as soon as you pick it up so its good to see a little panic) and the dog... the sad moment of the dog trying to fight the spider thingy with the instinctive attack mode of most french mastiffs, and the overall sullen moment of the last few minutes... that hurts me that the dog died like that... press f to the attack dog of the century

@RingManofChaos 3 года назад

21:10 I’m only that much in but them seeing the creature on fire makes me think of the everything’s fine meme

@TheGooglu 3 года назад

ignore this it’s just a time stamp of where i’m leaving off 1:45:45

@Spawn43Things 4 года назад

Yay first comment, but I actually hope that MrCreepyPasta sees this. My good man, you have literally roped me into this huge, amazing fandom. You are probably my favorite RU-vidr at the moment, and your voice and enthusiasm when you read these stories is extremely refreshing. Thank you for your masterful work, and have a very blessed day!

@thecavalryprince8409 4 года назад

Oke what about Mr creeps

@someweirdoguy6633 4 года назад

@@thecavalryprince8409 Kingspook is much better

@someweirdoguy6633 3 года назад

@Crotchwhistle Purple never heard him, I might take a listen.

@Masked_ghsot_riley.offical Год назад

@@someweirdoguy6633 cool opinion bro

@CallMeFlawed Год назад

Finally a cast of characters that make sense..... Poor may...😭😭 Love it and wish the story didn't end I'm halfway through now. I'll update at the end..

@Theodore_LocusCh Год назад

you should probably know that season 2 has been actively releasing and is on this channel.

@risingrat5491 Год назад

@@Theodore_LocusChwhere??

@thewanderer924 3 года назад

Geez, I absolutely adored this. I literally sat and listened the whole 2 hours ♡♡♡♡

@jfranks1295 2 года назад

I’ve listened to some of the top creepypasta storytellers on RU-vid and you are far and away the finest of them all. You truly bring the stories to life, shifting your tone, speed, volume, and emotions in incredible fashion. Truly, no one comes close. You have a gift. I’ll be a patreon soon. Thanks!

@praxiseffect84 2 года назад

Best thing I've heard all year: "Demonic Flesh Straws" 😂😂

@Fafne 4 года назад

The boss fight is behind the fog wall.

@mynightmareunfolded2534 3 года назад

The boss is making the fog wall

@wicked_8193 3 года назад

the boss IS the fog wall

@thundergaming155 3 года назад

Quick find the man with the long nose and then talk to a gas station person and they will reveal them self as a god.

@illvminatvs3194 4 года назад

I dunno why but when I saw the title I immediately thought "RAM RANCH UNDER SIEGE, UNDER LOCKDOWN!".

@vixxiiestixx 3 года назад

18 naked cow boys at the ram range

@dalton5160 3 года назад

The fog expelled by the creature reacts to native life. That's obvious from the first part when he touched the fog. My theory is that the fogs' purpose is to help them find general places where food is and may be able to help them track prey. That's why the creatures were able to follow them over long distances.

@dianaredfern6540 3 года назад

This is going down as one of the best creepypastas I’ve listened to in awhile

@deznutznurmouth2 3 года назад

Listening to this while driving, got close to my destination and entered a very thick fog. Creepy coincidence that I'm still listening while sitting in the thick fog.🤔

@yt_wildash7651 3 года назад

Stay safe , dude. Don't get caught dead by a spider and/or fog lurker!

@chriscanfly6386 4 года назад

I like how youtube is mentioned but he never goes into anything about the comments. I assume the comment section also never loads but its just weird that all thats mentioned is RU-vid does work

@marcol1418 4 года назад

He can’t find the comments because of the new update

@chriscanfly6386 4 года назад

@@marcol1418 loooool this is the best respomse I could Have hopped for

@rocketpuppy730 4 года назад

I CAN'T ESCAPE THE FUCKING GAS STATION! I LISTENED TO IT JUST YESTERDAY AND THIS IS THE SECOND STORY AFTER IT

@gerardmourits8709 4 года назад

These kids cannot possibly be this blissfully ignorant about what is going on.

@AzeKano 4 года назад

They're 2 y.o and an infant. They probably wont remember anything when they grow up.

@chriscanfly6386 4 года назад

@@AzeKano gerard here musta missed that part seven times lol

@thatonekidbd4424 4 года назад

ye I have a feeling 2 seconds after a massive moo moo chases after your van while your dad fires multipule shotgun shells at it as your parents are screaming and the moo moo is screeching as a two year old you response would not be..."I want to watch a movie"

@russiandoggo4336 3 года назад

Yeah, I thought maybe children didn’t perceive the monsters or something

@kirstenornelas881 3 года назад

@@thatonekidbd4424 lolz right, mom why can't I watch my tablet it isn't working anymore 😑

@gregjustyello 4 года назад

lowkey highkey was hoping that the ending was them realizing that there was a mushroom cloud enlarging in the distance

@admiralrng6506 Год назад

now we are all sons of bitches

@CezaMVO 4 года назад

Finally finished this story. Made the first 2 hours of work fly by, and wow it is fantastic. It is like the last of part 2 that we should have gotten. MCP delivering another great narration.

@floridasoldat Год назад

One of the best, most intense creepypasta stories I've heard/read, and I fall asleep to them every night. Awesome

4 года назад

Gas Station... At the edge of the town...? For real?

@rickyhurtt8692 4 года назад

Never have gotten to listen to the last part of this. Really great story. One bad SOB shooting giant bulls in the eye at 100 with a 12 Guage. Thanks alot for the writing and narrating

@kellisprague7420 4 года назад

I have been wanting to listen to this story forEVER and when u released the completed story I was sooo happy!!! Thanks MCP!! U ROCK!!!

@miastockton7819 4 года назад

10/10 would sell Mr.CreepyPasta my soul.

@lucid2969 4 года назад

This was probably the best story ive heard had me on edge and hella shivers all throughout the story i just really really dont like the hecka bad cliff hanger at the end seriously needed more answers to the many questions that got left in my head without answers wish it was longer but overall it was absolutely amazing havent heard a really good lip biting edge of chair inducing story like this in awhile

@licentiousdreams 3 года назад

Came across a reply to someone else from the author saying they're half way through season 2. That was posted 4 weeks ago.

@capriceclosson4874 3 года назад

Wow I just spent the evening listening to this quite the story had me on the edge of my seat

@KellRunnrTTV 3 года назад

this guy is a surprisingly good ctor, and he doesn't even need to put that much emotion, and i am so impressed.

@drownedtrashrat3501 Год назад

Aw those fog demons are _so_ cool, beyond horrifying but _such_ a facinating concept/design

@thestarwarsfan9697 2 года назад

I love how he puts life into the story

@viewerdiscreationisadvised660 4 года назад

What's kills me is he drop-kicked the lady *holding his baby* I assume the car seat magically floated in the air during that stunt.

@Behemoth9030 4 года назад

I’m sure he caught her (the baby)

@diem1095 2 года назад

the part at 43:00 is so soft. The way it's spoken has so much love and tenderness in it. (almost made me cry)

@sadbeatboxing7618 4 года назад

1:05:32 I thought that was a new York or Boston accent and started laughing my ass off

@liLightaura 4 года назад

This is a great beginning to something that could be even greater

@Karkiit 4 года назад

MCP I absolutely love the way you bring these stories to life, thank you for introducing us to them ^^

@SolitudeXo 9 месяцев назад

This series got me through the pandemic and takes from the gas station. Thank you mcp for telling creepypastas for so long I have literally grown up listening to your narrations from being 10 to 20!

@direreaven 3 года назад

This is the first creepypasta with over an hour long which keeps me listening straight from the start to the end. It's more like a movie. Like it. Thanks for making/reading this.