I can see/hear that you play bass well. I can also tell that there's a part that you didn't learn/hear and I don't blame you, it's kinda hard to hear. 0:18 you stop, then pick it up at the E, this isn't right, I don't play it exactly right either, but the way I like to play it is, everyhting until 0:18, then D, A, G, Gb, then B sliding into that E.Another part, is right before that, instead of D, D, Gb, G, A, A , D, it's D, A, Gb, G, Ab, A, D. The whole line (as I play it) would be, D, A, Gb, G, Ab, A, D, A, D, A, G, Gb, B immediately sliding to E and then you know the rest. If you prefer the number system, let me know, or if you want tabs, this video is very helpful: ru-vid.com/video/%D0%B2%D0%B8%D0%B4%D0%B5%D0%BE-PQfY3cpsxjw.html