NEW ANIMATION CHANNEL HERE! ru-vid.com/show-UC0E6hTbrK4jIFJFrZJtFrYg Theres not much on it rn but I have something planned , Since you guys have been watching these nonstop
Where they are from #1: 50 WAYS TO BREAK A TABLET #2: 50 MORE WAYS TO BREAK A PHONE #3: Things I got in trouble for at school #4: 50 WAYS TO BREAK A NINTENDO SWITCH Here are the links for the videos, (ways for 50 Ways videos), (grade for school video) #1: ru-vid.com/video/%D0%B2%D0%B8%D0%B4%D0%B5%D0%BE-Y5EnDY4IFvA.html (Way #47) #2: ru-vid.com/video/%D0%B2%D0%B8%D0%B4%D0%B5%D0%BE-pIKb1V3NXLw.html (Way #35) #3: ru-vid.com/video/%D0%B2%D0%B8%D0%B4%D0%B5%D0%BE-bX6bSj85auw.html (10th Grade, Clip #2) #4: ru-vid.com/video/%D0%B2%D0%B8%D0%B4%D0%B5%D0%BE-XnwvYiMK3ik.html (Way #4)
This is great (better than me) but I think that you could improve your drawing software. I suggest FireAlpaca or Paint.Net. I also suggest less use of the line tool to make it look more natrual. Thanks for reading this! -RootBear
I Recommend Victorian Giotto, I Haven’t Used The App Myself, But I heard it’s the closest thing to a free version of Adobe Flash and opinions are pretty positive.
Thanks for the reply I actually change my software from me paint to krita and it's going pretty well. Stay tuned for my newest animation which will be made with a better software
Really helps me I'm upon a lot of stress because of what my sister did, she just basically burnt all my memories, I don't mean like my brain memory but yo pu know what I mean right?
A nice stepping stone for your animations, you did a fine job! Pretty good for a young animator, (assuming you're a teenager.) Although, I'd like to point out some critiques that may further improve your animations. The line-art isn't very smooth, and is mostly jagged. I recon you try to make it smoother, so it could go along with the rest o the line-art. Tools in the program you use can probably help you. Circle tool for heads is what I deem sorta lazy. Seeing how the rest is hand-drawn, it doesn't really fit. Add that circles is an unnatural head-shape. I suggest you practice head-shapes, and see if you're happy with the finished product. The lip-sync isn't very accurate to the video. The only advice I can give is try to pay more attention to the mouth-movements, words, and the way they say it, and align the exact same movements into your animations. The animations isn't very interesting. It's animated scenes, without anything new. This isn't terrible, but exaggeration, unique and quirky movement or settings, or small hidden Easter-eggs may appeal to more potential audience. The video overall is pretty well-done. I look forward to the work you'll make in the future!
