Prayer for Ukraine - Arrangement for 4 trombones 

Good work on the arrangement. I can tell you put a lot of quality time into it. A few thoughts to consider: 1: I think all the Bb's in 3 through 6 should be B naturals. 2: One of the issues with taking parts and messing with the octave is that sometimes it puts a non-melodic line into the top voice. This makes it sound like the non-melodic line is the melody, and it obscures the real melody. For example, in the last 5 bars, the 3rd part is crossing over the melody and makes it harder to hear the 1st part as the melody. A solution for this would be to transpose the entire original arrangement down a 5th from C to F. This makes the Top note a high Bb and the rest of the arrangement will fall in a good range for the trombone. This would avoid issues caused by moving some lines up or down an octave. Good luck

@@KyleStevenJohnson Yeah, I'm not quite sure about those Bb's and some of the chord choices, but certainly an interesting interpretation!

not my job to tell you what key to read it in.