Rewriting Voltron - Part 1 

Shout out to Bloodrayne who wrote, edited, and directed this whole episode!! She is very thankful to all of you who watched, liked, and commented!

Honestly the galra having different physical features always stood out to me from other fictional alien species. Us, as humans, look very physically diverse despite all being 99.8% the same on the inside, so this is the first time I’ve seen a show give aliens that logic too, which I think made it more realistic. I really like the backstories you gave! They make a lot of sense!

Throughout the seasons I was like "They're gonna make Keith a galra at any moment now.... any time... any time now?" and then we reached the end of the show and I was like CRUD

Pinkie the only person brave enough to help fix problems in a show. Which everyone would nuke you for. Awesome vid!!!

I always headcanoned that the castle had a library in it and well this is somewhat Coran specific but does tie into my own ideas of Altean culture as well, but I've imagined him ranting on about old Altean plays/theatre, like imagine an Altean equivalent to Shakespeare or something. And maybe there were times the paladin lineup with Alfor and Zarkon (plus Coran and Alfor's wife) attended a few, but really the only ones who enjoyed them were Coran, Melenor, and Gyrgan (but he'd fail at pretending he wasn't crying at whatever play they were watching, meanwhile everyone else were bored or just found it cheesy). Heck, similar to the culture you laid out for the Galra and what males and females mostly did, and if Alteans are the opposite of Galra, and if we're talking Altean!Shakespeare, maybe males did play women parts but not because of prejudices or anything, maybe just a role reversal with the genders in society. Like males were more involved with the arts and theatre, and females were more involved in the sports and sciences? But of course these fields can be coed.

I NEED A PART TWO…this was so entertaining and I love your lore and ideas!!

Dude, your rewrites give me life.

My only thought from the video was that maybe blacksmithing could be more equal among male and female since the females are home for longer periods of time than males. They can still do arts and writing, but they are also capable of making stuff as well. They could also be teachers and trainers for all children and older males that retires or cannot fight anymore would be added to making stuff and/or help raise the next generation of fighters regardless if they go out or stay home.

I gave up Voltron by the end of season 6 (kinda a smart decision, looking back), but I really like what I'm seeing right here. The amount of thought put into the world building and different takes on said world building are quite fascinating (pretty reminiscent of Brandon Sanderson's works or LotR to a certain extent). The way you talked about Voltron being this ancient legend almost reminds me of what I've heard of Go-Lion (Voltron's original Japanese counterpart), and I'd be interested to see how it all turns out. Not sure if I'd be around when it comes to any ships, but best wishes to you project.

So you're telling me that the Voltron fandom is not dead at all?

Miss gurl is spitting facts and I’m so here for it. (This is literally so good that it could be canon, I love hearing your ideas 👍)

I love watching VLD rewrites they are so fun and your's is no exception. I love your writing and all of your ideas so much!

I loved this series so much I cried when it ended

I always felt like lore like this was the biggest thing missing from the series, it would have made the show so much more fleshed out and interesting. Thank you for taking the time to give the world the thought it deserved lol

AHHHH I BEEN WANTING TO DO THISSSS

As someone who hasn’t watched Voltron Legendary Defender, and knows relatively nothing about it, I thought you did an amazing job at making everything very clear and understandable! I really liked everything you added to make the lore richer and more enjoyable! Great video Bloodryane!!! 👏👏👏

Amazing! Please do a part 2! Great job on the dialogue and video quality!

This video was so magical. Thank you so much for making it. It is so fun to think about and would have been such a great plot.

17:26 - YES! the entire time i was waiting for Al teams to seems eviler, or alfor to be revealed to be NOT so incredible amazing awsome and kind! Like, I always head cannoned that the alteans always pushed for more knowledge to an extent where sometimes they would harm others- kinda like how Haggar is before her rebirth- p.s. sry I forgot her OG name 😢

4:28 so sorry for noticing only the small stuff instead of firstly addressing the theme of the video but YOU WATCHED MONKEY KID!! YAY! I also watched it and I thought it was really nice and cool

I’m literally so in love with this.

*slow clap* Bravo on this whole video, it sounds like something I would rather watch than what this Voltron series brought. Rest up and cannot wait to see the next part.

Looking forward to the next parts in the series!!

this....this is beautiful

I think we can mostly agree on that season 1 was the best season 2 was still good despite the switch up everything up till season 6 was alright Season 6 and beyond really ruined it

This is so good! 😁please make a part 2

Bro I'm in love with this world building

Hi. Wow, okay. Firstly, stellar job in this video. Everything you put up here came as interesting to me. Also i like your voice, it’s very soothing. Anyway, I might be planning a rewrite based on your rewrite. Would it be okay if I followed your concept? This worldbuilding video in particular. There isn’t a guarantee that I will publish it anywhere, but if I do I promise I’ll credit you and this video. Regardless, amazing video. Loved every second of it. I sidelined a lecture for this-it was that interesting! Looking forward to the other parts!

5:04 It would be cool if the rewrite started with *Romelle* narrating the legend of Voltron to Bandor before we meet her in season six proper. So when Keith meets her and goes says "I'm a member of Voltron!" she'll be like: "Sure you are buddy, whatever you say."

Star Wars Rebels was a huge turning point for my imagination and maybe part of my personality. It definitely made me see the world in a different view and a lot of those lessons that they learned really stuck with me.

I really miss Voltron a lot. It started out amazing. I think that when Keith left that the show started crashing. Klance also didn’t work out. I’m sad about that too.

You have my full attention.

❤️❤️❤️❤️

Cool

I love this!!!!!!

people are still rewriting vld?????? they still care??? im not alone???????????

man i loved voltron. i still do 😭

I cried when Ben you said coran was old 😂

That was a Great reinterpretation you and your writing squad made; Reay hard to come by rewrites on YouTbe. I hope you guys don't have too much issue with sequel vids; really looking for your take on the robeasts. Also, are you thinking about added elements from the other Voltron Lion show, like Golion and/or V. Force?

I might make a full eassy on this. But what the hell. Why the hell not. So...Voltron, I did watch it when it release and to be honest. To this day, the reason I watch the show is for lesson on writing. I really like writing as a hobby, so I really wish Voltron get one thing....a rewrite, fanfic or not. I don't care. But this series need a rewrite after so MANY FUCKING BAD FLAWS IT HAS! Season 1 is the best season, and otherall. I felt like they could've go bigger. But no, they didn't. In my opinion, if I ever write Voltron, I want to rewrite at least 1/4 of the plot, and do more episode. Not just for filler or anything really, but it's more on expanding the whole world of Voltron: Legendary defender. It didn't get the chance to build up the whole story as a whole, and to be honest. It sucks, 10 episode or so, bro. We need more episode to help expand the story, give character some huge depth and more. So I agree with your opinion here, and so. In the next part. I'll talk about what would I rewrite for season 1 as a whole. Until then. Continue the series, I want to see what you have plans for the story, and how to fix it.

*oh noes intensely*

Hi pinkie I got a question did you watch legends of china legos other tv show and if you did are you going to do a fanfic series about that

My fanfics make coran evil for no reason so allura can have character development

Yeah voltron can be exaggeration

Oh huh oh

Part 2 please

PART 2!?!?

Thank you for nagging Bloodrayne, Rhapsody.😁 I enjoyed it.

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