Sci-Fi Short Film "THE FOREVERMORE" 

I loved it❤ it was beautiful and poignant . The actor really captured his feelings. I'm very impressed. 👍👍

Yes I am a time traveler.

​@f1shy141 that's insane

Great Review!

A comment from the legendary CG Sensation himself🤯🙏🙏 my world will never be the same

Thank you, that means a lot and I'm elated to see you digging so deep into the intricacies of the film. I'm currently in the works to make more films (some sci-fi, some not) and I'm excited to have those come out as well!

Agreed, this was great work. I wondered about his relative experience of time as well. Would the Dr. fall into the black hole forever? Would an outside viewer see him living to infinity? Would Francis simply experience time ‘normally’ and die ‘on schedule?’ I hope his life comes to an end shortly after experiencing the beauty of the hole.

thank you I'm glad you enjoyed😊😊

But…was it a thirst for adventure? A thirst for truth? A thirst for seeing the universe from a surreal perspective? I don’t know. Is it whatever we viewers want it to be, or is Andrew going to tell us what he’s trying to say with this story? I really enjoyed this AND the thoughtful comments. And especially the positive comments congratulating Andrew on his fine work. This will touch a lot of people.

Hope so. He certainly handled his admirably.

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed! The first person perspective was invented as a factor of the constraint of the limited locations, the found footage style just seemed to make sense given how small and constrained the setting was

Wow. Honestly you pointed out some things in this that I feel like I've only thought of subconsciously. This is such an amazing analysis, thank you for this!

That is an incredible way of looking at the film that I haven't even imagined myself...

@@andrew_yuen universal implosion,...... sometimes, things don't work the way expected😊

Yes I had an amazing crew:)

No need to thank me😅. Thanks for giving it a watch! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

lmaoooo these are all really good points and I'm glad you enjoyed it:) And yes the computer was running on a forbidden version of windows 9☝️

Thanks, I do too:)

Thank you, that means a lot:) I'm currently working on some more stuff rn (some scifi, some not) and I hope to be able to put it out soon....👀

I'm currently working on more films soon (some sci-fi, some not)!! Unfortunately because of how the short film process works, a lot of the stuff I finish has to get fielded through film festivals and what not before I can put it online. It takes a while, but I'm working on some stuff that can hopefully be coming out soon>:]

thank you i love that you were immersed- and it was a great technical achievement between me and my friend/3d artist @f1shy141‬ . Up until I saw the first renders I didn't know if this was possible😅

it's a group effort😎

Thanks:)

That was one of the lines that I came up with at the very beginning of the writing process. As soon as I wrote it down, I KNEW it had to exist and it served as the basis for forming the throughline of the story

And “being alive is beautiful” was pretty poignant, too. It’s good to be reminded of that from someone with his perspective.

Girl you worked on this too😭😭

PLEASE

​@bellarayrosales Lottie Baby coming out next year?👀✨️

How many times have you made this joke?

@@andrew_yuen twice 😎

Ok!

oops😅 that's totally mb i didn't catch that in the edit-

Do you have OCD?

Thanks for your input! The decision to have the characters curse was a precise and deliberate choice on my end that 100% affects how the story is viewed. I'm sorry that you couldn't be immersed in the story as much as you would have wanted but I'm glad you enjoyed the other individual aspects nonetheless:)

@@andrew_yuen It precisely and deliberately affects how I viewed the story as well. It's just that it's such a "common" insertion. I think you can do better. Thanks for responding. And yes, I otherwise very much enjoyed the short!

@@linbat6148​​⁠​⁠I was a little surprised too, at first. But it’s real. I get the feeling Dr. Stolone seldom ever cursed throughout his life. Cursing can be a way of encapsulating frustration and anger around a simple word used with emotion, and letting the crisis diffuse after the word is spoken. He’s dying…terribly. He blames himself for not protecting his daughter; perhaps she ran away, was killed, turned her back on him. Francis is shouldering the responsibility of his loss of her, but what father wouldn’t? We don’t know the situation, but chances are the daughter was not blameless. His agonizing, painful life which would normally end in a more agonizing, painful death, his guilt, his extreme loneliness watching his loved ones flash by, watching humanity flash by, watching stars be born and others burn out…using the word ‘fuck’ can sometimes be the only way to get a handle on a situation - ‘fuck’ is a powerful word! I’m glad of your conscious decision to include the appropriate cursing, and in fact would have been disappointed if Dr. Stolone didn’t. For me it only enhanced his humanity, using the word as a tool to cope with his life’s choices and the circumstances out of his control. He has a dry sense of humor, not dark; it’s a way to hold on to his sanity. He doesn’t need to be forgiven for cursing, nor does he need to apologize for it. He said it because few words would have been real enough to rationalize his feelings of futility. Perhaps he channeled deep seated anger into the word, rather than letting himself be consumed by any anger. Or, he just swears a lot, there’s no real meaning behind it, and I way overthought this.

@@ronjon7942 Well, I must say, you indeed ARE quite a thinker! And a great conveyer of thought and deep, heartfelt emotion! Your final, wrap- up humor also bears mentioning 😅 On some level, I think you’ve almost persuaded me of the necessity of such a crass tool in light of his circumstances - and I can understand that now. I might even go as far as to say I agree - with just one reservation. I completely agree with you that the word “fuck” IS powerful. But that particular word is such a violent emotional trigger for many women, such as myself, who must daily contend with horrifically painful memories. I certainly don’t want to join the ranks of “the offended”, but it’s difficult in this world to go ten minutes without hearing “fuck” or “mf”. I believe the ubiquitousness of this particular word(s) directly contributes to the reality of the ideas and behavior that is so harmful in our society. I know it genuinely hurts many of us. I really do appreciate your insightful feedback. I just wish the world were a little kinder and gentler. Perhaps a different word would suffice.

As in the real-world, so in imagined futures the word "fuck" exists. See if YT has some Christian shorts for you of a world where it doesn't (such imagined worlds after all religion's stock-in-trade). One can only imagine what you would say if there were titties in it too...

I'm sorry you think that way! but thank you for giving it a watch anyway😊

Emotional pygmy

A fine effort at critical film review. We’re grateful of your esteemed critique, michelle. I see a bright future for you.