Im taking a look at every single sonic game ever. Starting with the very first one! This videos experimental, so tell me what you think! leave your thoughts in the comments below, id love to hear your thoughts! My Twitter: / brenden060
Hey, I saw that you wanted feedback, and from one "struggling Sonic creator trying to review everything" to another, here's my thoughts: + You've got a good sense of pacing and timing, which is important since I'm constantly struggling to keep things moving well and it often feels like some creators overcommit to a joke + The editing and use of different mediums like Gmod skits keep things visually engaging, another thing I'm jealous of tbh + Referencing Sonic's Gameworld has my respect in any context. - Other people have mentioned the audio balancing, so I won't dwell on that. What I will say is that the format of "kinda scripted but sounds like its unscripted" seems to hold you back from either delivering opinions or jokes. It doesn't lead to as much umming and erring and stammering as it does in my case, but I know that vibe. - Maybe this is just me, or just for this video, but the intro is about as long as the review itself, and I find that tends to take away from both. I think a snappy intro to catch the audience's attention before swinging into the content proper tends to work better. I am definitely biased against youtube skits though, which is why I tend to steal 3-second clips from other videos ;) - SONIC ON THE DIDJ IS NOT A VERSION OF SONIC 1
Thanks for the feedback! honestly I think the reason why the video kinda sounded scripted was because i didnt really have much confidence in my voice, I think in my next video it will hopefully sound more improved compared to this video. so far im on the editing process of part 2 (Sonic CD and sonic 2), and I think so far its much better then this one, but im glad you still liked the video! im excited to show whats coming next! also yes i cant wait to have a 11 hour review of sonics game world
Thank you! Im really glad to hear it! Personally im not a big fan of my sonic 1 video. I think my sonic CD and sonic 2 video are better. But im really glad you liked this!
This video is actually a work of art, good job! I have three critiques however, the background music can be a bit too loud at times, sometimes you sound like you're mumbling, and the ear rape is too much imo But pushing that aside I actually really enjoyed this video, good job bro ❤️
Thanks! My attempt was to make a sonic 1 video that didn't feel like the hundreds of sonic 1 videos already out there, im planning to hopefully improve with the next videos but im glad you liked it!
