Thanks a lot, man! Yes, the whole track sounds very unfinished and it's the way it is! I have very mixed thoughts about it and can't say that i'm even satisfied with the way it turned out, but it definitely needs help of more or less professional producer-dude who could help to turn this into something better! I agree!
Yes, that's a good advice as well, but sometimes we get into some sort of dead end in terms of particular music tracks and don't know how to find a way out! Honestly, considering that we spent so much time in music production and often without any good results i would prefer to give this music idea to someone else in order to develop it in a right way! It's listeners who decide whether a song deserves to live or not in the end! hahaha!