Stuck at 6.5 in IELTS Writing Task 2? Try This!

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In this video, Ex-IELTS Writing Examiner and E2 IELTS Teacher Mark gives a lesson on how a simple change to your essays can improve your IELTS Writing scores. In particular, Mark focuses on the Task Achievement criteria for IELTS Writing and provides strategies and examples to getting a Band 7 or above in this criteria, by ensuring that you maintain a clear position throughout your entire essay. Watch this video to learn everything you need to know about writing a clear position in your IELTS Writing Task 2 Essay.
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00:00 Intro
00:50 Criteria
03:24 Today's Question
03:59 Note Taking Tips
05:32 Examples of Student's Introductions
07:51 Clear Body Paragraphs
11:55 Improving Unclear Body Paragraphs
25:21 IELTS Writing Feedback
25:58 Recap and Final Tips
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@E2IELTS 3 года назад

Thanks for watching everyone! Stay Tuned for some big surprises coming soon! 👀

@bongeatingpassport3463 3 года назад

It has explained beautifully.

@satveervirk 3 года назад

Thanks

@Queen-qn8fv 3 года назад

Please upload video how to solve reading passage 🙏🙏

@helmyseby3771 3 года назад

Thank you sir

@teddybear-mm1zv 3 года назад

Please upload more videos on writinh by mark..its humble request

@brownrover1827 2 года назад

Thank you e2 team. Got my 7,7,7,8 lately. Couldn’t happen without your teaching. Blessings

@jisoohusband99 3 года назад

I was taught many about techniques of writing impactful essays. As far as I know, your way of explantion to write high score essay is fantastic. GREAT JOB.

@azmauk3265 3 года назад

The most wonderful IELTS EXPERT I have ever watched and understood. Waiting for more videos!

@michelle1993624 Год назад

This is REALLY helpful. No beating around the bush. It totally hit the spot.

@user-ed6wz7dy7e 3 года назад

It was very helpful to achieve the score we wish to get from writing. The power of the introductory sentence is very great as it may play a big role while deciding to put the mark. Thank u a lot

@quarantinedota6873 3 года назад

This video is one of the main reasons i got 7 in writing. I cant express how valuable your videos were to me. I got 7.5 overall from my first attempt. Thank you so much for everything you’re doing. Im recommending e2language to everyone i see.

@MusanaShah 11 месяцев назад

Can u please give some guidences for reading🥹

@harmandeepsingh9805 10 месяцев назад

Can we add personal example and personal pronouns in writing task 2 ? im confuse about this.

@NewIndianguy 3 года назад

This video helped me soooo much... I scored 6 in writing and overall 6.5.... Thank so much E2 👌

@OhiSandhu 2 года назад

But this was not for u btw..chlo congrats bro fir bhi

@daisylebra 3 года назад

Love this video so. Much!! Hope you can post more videos concerning Writing. Making contrast between good ones and less good ones is the best way to illustrate what good is.

@samraiqbal3907 3 года назад

The videos from E2 are great to get the idea, it's been an education

@UdyBee 2 года назад

Thank you so much Mark for this lesson. I stumbled upon it a week to my IELTS exams and it helped me a whole lot in improving my writing skills. Thank you E2 for all you do. You guys are the best.

@shrutipandya2959 3 года назад

This was one of the most helpful videos for me personally! Thanks a ton E2 ❤️

@kinreshpatel2261 2 года назад

Thank you Mark. I got 7.0 band in writing for the first time using these techniques. Awesome tips. Thank you again.

@khushbushah3581 2 года назад

How u practice

@khushbushah3581 2 года назад

Can u please help

@khushbushah3581 2 года назад

Give me ur telegram id

@saeed577 Год назад

What a video, it amazingly covers the criteria that I had problems with. Now I think differently while writing. Thanks a lot.💙

@poojabhole9153 2 года назад

you explained all the concepts so beautifully and simply. thanks alot.

@TramNguyen-to3pm 2 года назад

Thank you E2 IELTS for helping me improve my IELTS skills a lot. I just got my test result today and surprised with the result. Really love the materials.

@pratikchauhan8642 2 года назад

IF you stuck at 6 or 6.5 in writing and want a minimum 7. in general writing please watch the video with the title "IELTS GENERAL WRITING: SUREST WAY TO GO FROM BAND 6 TO 7"

@rheaalaveenacastelino3960 3 года назад

Thank you so much for your time and efforts. Sir, this session was truly helped me a lot 🙏🙏🙏

@MM-uj8fu 3 года назад

Really insightful and comprehensive. Thank you.

@zeezFPS 2 года назад

I've got 7.5 overall with writing being 6.5 and dragging the overall band score down. This video is helping me a lot to analyse my mistakes. Thank you a lot, hopefully I will get 8 using the resources you are providing! Cheers!

@sandybell6906 3 года назад

You re fabulous...Thanks a million Mark

@adesinaseyifunmi1218 3 года назад

Thanks mark This is really helpful I'm always stuck at 6 in my 2 sitting now I know what to work on..God bless

@soniajasmine7254 2 года назад

Try this method it really helps!

@sweetsandy4758 3 года назад

I rarely leave comments on RU-vid, but, this time, I had to do so. This is the one I have been looking for so long! I am looking forward to the other one, 'Coherence and cohesion' next time. I genuinely appreciate your efforts. Mark, you are the best!

@ahilm.p856 2 года назад

This class is just awesome!!.... uber easy.... professional... Thank u so much E2Language

@pratikchauhan8642 2 года назад

Watch this video with the title "IELTS GENERAL WRITING: SUREST WAY TO GO FROM BAND 6 TO 7"

@dheeru021181 3 года назад

Excellent video... I was looking for an end to end guidance on building ideas and their impact in IELTS. Thanks a lot.

@prawashasingh9242 3 года назад

Thanks a lot just clear and precise explanation about writing great job👍

@Kiddieshomefunplace 3 года назад

I just want to say thank you for your good work and clear purpose.👍

@simran1810 3 года назад

You all are the most brilliant tutors, i never got bored during session and love the way you all taught ❤️

@MostafaAlsayed1988 3 года назад

One of the best videos on the cannel 👌🏼

@sharmajii1563 3 года назад

Big fan sir!🙌🙌🙌.. I consider this video as a motivation because there are a number of teachers who choose a topic and make it clear to us and finish their work whereas the way you teach it's really motivated me😊...Thanks

@jjintovyy 3 года назад

watching this the night before my exam✌🏼😌

@hgsports3815 3 года назад

Oh my God, how you do that? For me, it's a very tense time before the night of the exam.

@mayazita6565 2 года назад

Me too and my exam is in few hours ☺️

@azainaldeen9834 2 года назад

Thank you very much indeed, sir. You're really much of a help🌺

@krishsri4854 2 года назад

Trust me guys, these are the essential tips to score 7+. I improved my score from band 6.5 to the desired 7 through e2 videos. Thanks a ton !!

@bayastantursaliev7142 Год назад

What level of English did you have when you passed IELTS?

@rumanadeemkhan 11 месяцев назад

This is so helpful & clear hehe thankie you💫

@sukhveerkaur5113 3 года назад

thank you mark now i understand my problem of my writing why i stuck .

@JasleenKaur-zz3mv 3 года назад

I usually do not comment on any of the videos but this is worth giving a like and a comment Thanks for such a superb video which helped me a lot to clear my doubts on writing task

@devjariwala2903 3 года назад

What a session, it gives more clear view Btw thanks for that sir 🙏

@azinkatiraee6684 3 года назад

Was perfect, I hope to be better in clarifying my essays ✅✔

@ploiproz 2 года назад

So helpful, thank you so much 😊

@thaonguyen012 Год назад

It helps me a lot. Thank you!

@Jenhill_moments 2 года назад

Great session, Thank you Mark

@pratikchauhan8642 2 года назад

Watch this video with the title "IELTS GENERAL WRITING: SUREST WAY TO GO FROM BAND 6 TO 7"

@meenusahotau2445 3 года назад

Love your video.. First time i came across this idea... Thanks to u

@10yearsago84 2 года назад

This was very helpful. Thank you !

@pratikchauhan8642 2 года назад

IF you stuck at 6 or 6.5 in writing and want a minimum 7. in general writing please watch the video with the title "IELTS GENERAL WRITING: SUREST WAY TO GO FROM BAND 6 TO 7"

@satveervirk 3 года назад

Thanks for this most helpful video finally now all my doubts are clear

@dazzlingmichael6855 3 года назад

this is great... it says a lot how examiners grade our essay. In my last Ielts exam, I scored 6.5 only, Just like what he said in this video--- I could say that I have a strong grammar and vocabulary but my position, body paragraph structures is weak and vague as it was my first ever written essay. I have never practiced writing an essay before my exam. I was not able to add conclusion too. What he is saying here are all true.

@devikaweerakoon6901 2 года назад

Thank you so much for this precious lesson

@pratikchauhan8642 2 года назад

If you are stuck at band 6, please watch the video with the title "IELTS GENERAL WRITING: SUREST WAY TO GO FROM BAND 6 TO 7" Thank you!!!

@HBACPradeep 3 года назад

I received my desired result after struggling a few tries because of your reasoning system. Thank you very much !!!

@kimleilah545 2 года назад

Hello, I have had few tries i need your advice on how you managed .

@hashanchandrasekarakarasin2598 3 года назад

Well, a clearly pitched video, except the conclusion. Still trying to adapt to Jay 's way but Mark's way of conclusion is a bit complex; however, he is talking from an examiner's point of view and that could be the reason, people like us stuck at 6.5. I believe you will upload more videos to help us understand writing "conclusions". Thank you very much. "Stay home & Stay safe"

@Gurleen_brar 3 года назад

I also have same prblm 😑😑😣

@coachobispersonalworkoutti2223 3 года назад

Following These IELTs lectures on different platforms has helped me a lot in my PhD thesis. I have been faulted many times for not being clear and that's because I state a point and don't give any reason.( no justification)

@kabalsinghsandhu6389 3 года назад

Really appreciated e2 language team

@jashanpreetkaur1535 2 года назад

Thanks for this awesome explaination. You made it very clear.

@pratikchauhan8642 2 года назад

IF you stuck at 6 or 6.5 in writing and want a minimum 7. in general writing please watch the video with the title "IELTS GENERAL WRITING: SUREST WAY TO GO FROM BAND 6 TO 7"

@sziahussain 3 года назад

I really accept the benefits of this learning is not limited to ielts while in content writing , blogging and business writing will also improve.

@pheno_1 2 года назад

Amazing, everything is satisfying. You make methods easy and apparent,. thank you for your lesson, i appreciate😁😁

@pratikchauhan8642 2 года назад

IF you stuck at 6 or 6.5 in writing and want a minimum 7. in general writing please watch the video with the title "IELTS GENERAL WRITING: SUREST WAY TO GO FROM BAND 6 TO 7"

@siamakalaei1148 Год назад

Thanks for the tips. Best wishes 😍😍😍😍

@RavinderSingh-nh6th 2 года назад

i love you from bottom of my heart. I really loved the way you taught

@pratikchauhan8642 2 года назад

If you are stuck at band 6, please watch the video with the title "IELTS GENERAL WRITING: SUREST WAY TO GO FROM BAND 6 TO 7" Thank you!!!

@j4jenna527 3 года назад

You have given a meticulous idea about essay writing,,, thank you somch,, I am. Still hang on 6 5 in writing,, I hope it ur xplnations will help me

@redhot4976 2 года назад

Mark thanks for this video . It is indeed a lot of helpful writing tips for most of us

@pratikchauhan8642 2 года назад

If you are stuck at band 6, please watch the video with the title "IELTS GENERAL WRITING: SUREST WAY TO GO FROM BAND 6 TO 7" Thank you!!!

@CEFR_LESSONS_OFF_ON_e_c 9 месяцев назад

A huge thanks !!!!

@sanjaywankhade1259 3 года назад

Dear Mark, You have made quite smoother and easier..

@pratikchauhan8642 2 года назад

If you are stuck at band 6, please watch the video with the title "IELTS GENERAL WRITING: SUREST WAY TO GO FROM BAND 6 TO 7" Thank you!!!

@Simran_kaur990 2 года назад

Marvelous information 🔥🙌🙌🌹

@Adnan-ss1ol 3 года назад

Great session well explained

@Nori-kc1oc 3 года назад

I’m actually stuck at 6.5. I shared my ideas a little more detail in introduction. I should briefly mention my ideas in introduction💡 I see.

@pratikchauhan8642 2 года назад

Watch this video with the title "IELTS GENERAL WRITING: SUREST WAY TO GO FROM BAND 6 TO 7"

@darkdemise02 2 года назад

That's a very much clear concept abt writing task.Thanks a lot.

@pratikchauhan8642 2 года назад

If you are stuck at band 6, please watch the video with the title "IELTS GENERAL WRITING: SUREST WAY TO GO FROM BAND 6 TO 7" Thank you!!!

@doctorrain54 3 года назад

This is so useful!!!!!!!!

@physicswithtony3102 3 года назад

Thank you for your efforts

@nnr.6131 Год назад

I got a 7.5 for writing because of this video. Thank u so much 💕

@alanbaskaev3907 2 года назад

Damn! I am a fan of this dude. He's a great teacher

@archanas3628 3 года назад

Hi Jay, I would like to thank you for your selfless help and extensive study material. I want to know if I upgrade to Express, will I get access to toolkit material. Regards

@smilinglass1556 8 месяцев назад

Thank you so much Mark I scored 7.5 in writing because of you, Jay and Alex Trust me guys, if you stick to E2 IELTS VIDEOS you dont need any other material for your IELTS prep. Dont get overwhelmed by watching thousands of viddeos from several channels.

@jessicamurilloc92 3 года назад

Thank you for this amazing video! As usual, it has helped me a lot in my study process for IELTS I have a question. In the case of the final paragraph, the conclusion and the "opinion" paragraph would be the same or are they different? Thank you very much :)

@poojabhole9153 2 года назад

hey IELTS test taker, conclusion should reinstate your thesis statement which includes your opinion if asked, the topic sentences of paragraphs should be summed up. you can also give a prediction, suggestion or outcome.

@Rekha-xl8co 3 года назад

Very informative

@prawashasingh9242 3 года назад

I stuck at 6 in ielts writing always but this will surely help me thanks a ton

@thinkingfast6648 3 года назад

Pls make more videos like this especially on WR t2

@rahmanrzayev797 3 года назад

Thank you

@ranonumonova6522 Год назад

Thank you very much. İt would be better if the conclusion was added

@mandeepkaur1758 2 года назад

Thanku so much sir its really baneficial for me

@nehadave7773 3 года назад

Worth watching

@anushuyaadhikari7536 2 года назад

Thank you for sharing such an information video

@pratikchauhan8642 2 года назад

If you are stuck at band 6, please watch the video with the title "IELTS GENERAL WRITING: SUREST WAY TO GO FROM BAND 6 TO 7" Thank you!!!

@pratikchauhan8642 2 года назад

Watch this video with the title "IELTS GENERAL WRITING: SUREST WAY TO GO FROM BAND 6 TO 7"

@zahramanafi4793 Год назад

It's bad that I can't hit the like bottom more than once. This video is definitely life-changing!

@afastars 3 года назад

good lesson..make more video like this..

@E2IELTS 3 года назад

We'll try! 😅

@syedimtiyaz2853 3 года назад

Thank you for the wonderful explanation..I would like to opt your classes especially in writing, please let me know where we can connect on this.

@bdemir837 2 года назад

ı just thought tutor mark how always being a positive also smile every second and ı learn while 24.55 secont:) he is a canadian :) and this is the reason why ı loved canadian society

@harigamer7 Год назад

Thank you sir

@awsumblossom4652 6 месяцев назад

Sucha top notch teacher mark is.

@kennastaffi6072 2 года назад

Thank you sir. Your explanation sinks indicating your passion for teaching.👌🏼👌🏼opinion essay has how many paragraphs? how I wish I get a complete combined answer for this lecture.

@jyoti137 3 года назад

This video actually helped me to get band 7 at my first attempt. Thanks a lot:)

@pawandeep1606 3 года назад

Have u followed exact structure

@jyoti137 3 года назад

@@pawandeep1606 yes. and I saw a significant improvement in my writing. This video is actually helpful.

@kamrankhan-dr3fi 2 года назад

this stuff really helps those struked in 6 or 6.5

@pratikchauhan8642 2 года назад

IF you stuck at 6 or 6.5 in writing and want a minimum 7. in general writing please watch the video with the title "IELTS GENERAL WRITING: SUREST WAY TO GO FROM BAND 6 TO 7"

@user-xi1to4ph6s 3 года назад

This guy knows what is he doing.

@nepcad9935 2 года назад

I got it. Now what I need to do is knuckle down more and achieve the band I am dreaming for whole day and night😁

@inese7272 3 года назад

Hi there. Should I use "we" in my IELTS essays? F.e. We should focus more on rehabilitation. Thanks for the quality videos.

@lareineviktoriya6157 3 года назад

Thanks a lot for the video. Please, what should be the maximum number of words for task 2? They generally say 250 words.. ; what do you advice?

@faisalalkhedhrawi7311 2 года назад

I like this guy.

@fatmaahmed857 2 года назад

My test is tomorrow I'm kinda panicking!! thank you for this video though 💕

@pratikchauhan8642 2 года назад

If you are stuck at band 6, please watch the video with the title "IELTS GENERAL WRITING: SUREST WAY TO GO FROM BAND 6 TO 7" Thank you!!!

@fatmaahmed857 2 года назад

@@pratikchauhan8642 oh thank you but I already took my test and got an 8 ❤

@pratikchauhan8642 2 года назад

@@fatmaahmed857 congratulations 🎊🎉

@toothdiaries2280 2 года назад

@@fatmaahmed857 how you practiced? Please share your experience/tips. My test is on 23rd October I'm not good at writing/reading. Thank you

@nadz1015 2 года назад

@@fatmaahmed857 What is your question

@satveerkaur6771 2 года назад

very nice and good cleared

@pratikchauhan8642 2 года назад

IF you stuck at 6 or 6.5 in writing and want a minimum 7. in general writing please watch the video with the title "IELTS GENERAL WRITING: SUREST WAY TO GO FROM BAND 6 TO 7"

@kulwinderkaur4320 3 года назад

Very good

@edenhuang819 3 месяца назад

you are amazing

@sdsachin24 3 года назад

Hey, thank you for this informative video, but I have a doubt with respect to the question in this video. Can my opinion be the same as what other people are believing?

@sezinmumcu 2 года назад

you guys are the best. I’m retaking ielts tomorrow and its 23.30 right now, so I’m gonna sleep after a few more videos. wish me luck ^^

@swetharajkumar282 2 года назад

Hey, what was your score?

@piyushdaryanani8045 Год назад

heyyy what's your result?

@monamina20 2 года назад

I’ll have my test on 23rd of October, whoever sees this comment, please wish me luck. This will be my first attempt, I have been preparing myself just by watching these videos. I hope I can make it. I’m in London, from 🇮🇷

@anigerianabroad6952 2 года назад

Me too😂😂

@monamina20 2 года назад

@@anigerianabroad6952 how was ur test?

@nadz1015 2 года назад

@@monamina20 What is your question?

@kazizahidhasan2679 5 месяцев назад

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