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Succession's Reframes: Sometimes More is More 

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Succession Season 3 is almost here!
In the meantime, let's talk about what makes Jesse Armstrong's delightful dramedy so damn fascinating - and we'll take a close look at an indispensable writing technique for adding clarity, depth, and texture to a story scene: the Reframe.
#succession #successionscene
Chapters
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0:00 Intro
2:29 Excess in Writing - Is Less Always More?
6:34 The Reframe Technique
11:21 Approaching the Unsayable
13:38 Adding Breadth
14:35 Adding Depth
18:15 Outro
Special thanks to G. Gordon Litty for permission to use the awesome Lo-Fi remix of the Succession Theme.
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You can't make a Tomlette without breaking a few Gregs...

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@rini6
@rini6 2 года назад
This is what you get when you have well read intelligent minds with historical perspective and knowledge of today’s trends writing the script. There is just so much depth. You can watch the show multiple times and not find everything. I love it.
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling 2 года назад
Agreed! That’s one high bar they’ve set for modern entertainment, and I hope there’s more than a few aspiring storytellers in Succession’s audience who feel up to the challenge. Thanks for the comment, Irene!
@Aranock
@Aranock 2 года назад
This is a phenomenal examination of one of the most interesting aspects of Succession's unique speech patterns. Glad youtube randomly reccomended this video, always looking for other video essayists.
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling 2 года назад
Very happy you enjoyed it! Thanks so much for the encouraging words.
@SteveJobbed
@SteveJobbed 2 года назад
My favorite example “You have ingested too much cocaine, trying to do what you thought was saving Kendall in order to please Logan Roy, giving you a false job. You underestimated the strength of the narcotics and now you are about to become overstimulated since you are probably new to this.” Summarized into: “BUCKLE UP FUCKLEHEAD!”
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling 2 года назад
“Whoa, whoa. That’s a chunk of chang you got there, buddy.” “It sure is, Greg.” 😆
@rachellynn7890
@rachellynn7890 2 года назад
now that you've explained it, I see this everywhere in the show and can see its merit. great work!
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling 2 года назад
The Baader-Meinhoff phenomenon strikes again! I notice reframes now in other tv shows and films - though many instances of them are not so subtle as in Succession. Thanks for checking out the video!
@angieingham3760
@angieingham3760 2 года назад
@@Scene-a-maticStorytelling Haha! Is your moniker a derivative of Spy Magazine's highly hilarious _____-O-Matic's flow chart 'splainers? Hollywood Script-O-Matic was my favorite. It made all those 90s movies LAMENESS so delicious 😋. Spy The spawn of snark.
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling 2 года назад
Ha! That almost makes me sound half-clever! :) I can’t say I was thinking of Spy Magazine specifically, but the name is definitely a nod to earlier cartoons and any of those imaginative [blank]-o-Matic inventions in popular media. The spawn of snark sounds like a good enough selling point for me to track down some old issues. Thanks, Angie!
@rebecca_stone
@rebecca_stone 2 года назад
I love the way your video walks us through this technique - you're a great teacher! As a professional writer (not screen), and general lover of language, to me the dialogue in Succession is champagne for the brain. I'm often hitting the 15-sec rewind arrow every few minutes when watching this show, just to re-listen and savour the delicious cleverness of a line. Can't help myself! The writers are disciplined virtuosos, but are also riffing playful and complex jazz solos (sometimes taking them to a limit that's borderline insane!). I recommend people in the comments watch The Thick Of It, one of Jesse Armstrong's older creations, the dialogue is also this sharp and wicked. It's British-centric, but will keep you going until we get Season 4! :)
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling 2 года назад
Thank you so much, Mia! Really appreciate it. I will definitely be looking into The Thick Of It. And I’m also probably going to steal that excellent metaphor :) 🎶 Champagne for the membrane!
@siriusthecat
@siriusthecat 2 года назад
I could listen to the opening theme forever omgomg Its so beautiful. Great video!! Gimme more succession content please!!
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling 2 года назад
Haha, you got it! I was nervous putting in even a fraction of the song might get the video copyright struck, so originally I made a (very poor) cover in GarageBand, but luckily in the last moments of editing, I got permission to use that awesome Lo-Fi cover, and no one had to hear my sub-par version :)
@camiedizon7401
@camiedizon7401 2 года назад
Never really noticed it before or maybe I just haven't been paying attention much but thanks for putting it out there, now i see it everywhere. Love watching videos like this, makes consuming content much more engaging :D
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling 2 года назад
What a fantastic comment! That’s great to hear. Really appreciate the feedback :)
@danreynolds4151
@danreynolds4151 2 года назад
I stumbled upon this video while I was bored scrolling through RU-vid and I’m so glad I did! I had never seen succession prior to watching this video and now it’s my favorite show! Great video! Thanks for your work!
@failureoncommand
@failureoncommand Год назад
Thank you so much for this. Honestly can't express how valuable and informative this video has been. There are some core writing lessons in here delivered with clarity and fun. This is honestly one of the best video essays I've seen on RU-vid overall. Amazing work; I'm subscribed and eager to see more!
@jiminybilibob5205
@jiminybilibob5205 2 года назад
Nice mention of half hour sitcom Veep. Succession show runner Jesse Armstrong was one of the main writers of the British sitcom that was spun into Veep
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling 2 года назад
I did not know this! Just looked it up - The Thick of It. I’ll have to check this out very soon. Thanks for the recommendation!
@lachlanmclennan2188
@lachlanmclennan2188 2 года назад
@@Scene-a-maticStorytelling a thousand times better than veep
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling 2 года назад
And currently available on Hulu it looks like. I’ll be watching this soon. Thanks, Lachlan!
@francodalessio3927
@francodalessio3927 2 года назад
This is awesome, thanks for doing it
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling 2 года назад
Thank you, Franco! Glad you liked it.
@dianae4133
@dianae4133 2 года назад
Just discovered this channel, please don't stop your work. Amazing!!
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling 2 года назад
Thanks, Diana! New video will be out this month.
@TheH2ello
@TheH2ello 2 года назад
this was very well-made and the illustrations you used really helped me to understand the various points! great work
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling 2 года назад
Hey, thanks a bunch! Glad you enjoyed the format.
@TomEyeTheSFMguy
@TomEyeTheSFMguy Год назад
I just started watching Succession. I'm still on episode 2. I decided to come back to this video because to this day I was not able to wrap my head around this concept.
@nobunnyspecial
@nobunnyspecial 2 года назад
WOW! What a great analysis! I think this is reason enough for another rewatch now...
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling 2 года назад
That sounds like a fantastic idea! I need to watch again from the beginning now that Season 3 is finished. Thanks, Amelia!
@Ivy-ep1di
@Ivy-ep1di 2 года назад
Channel deserves wayyyy more subscribers 💯 this was such a good analysis!!
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling 2 года назад
Thank you kindly! 😊 Happy to hear you enjoyed it.
@iamatrader666
@iamatrader666 2 года назад
This is the first show every where I have the intro included in my work playlist. I don't think I've even pressed the Skip Intro button yet.
@alexandragarcia2524
@alexandragarcia2524 2 года назад
Wonderful video! Thank you for this
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling 2 года назад
Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for checking it out.
@jessica5497
@jessica5497 2 года назад
What a great video (all around)! Subscribed.
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling 2 года назад
Appreciate that, Jessica! :) Thanks for watching.
@AnnieKhurana
@AnnieKhurana 2 года назад
This is an excellent analysis. Even for the unfamiliar, reframing through multiple examples can give context to the conversation happening in the show and helps make the point clearer. Would love to see your take on other shows as well! Keep going!
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling 2 года назад
You got it, Annie! Working hard on new content as we speak. Thanks for checking out the video.
@lauraangelespada8297
@lauraangelespada8297 2 года назад
I have no idea how this video has such few views. Amazing work you put into it, everything is really well explained. And as like most videos I like to watch about my favorite media, it makes me appreciate even another aspect of the show. Succession is such a masterpiece.
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling 2 года назад
Thanks, Laura! Succession is a true masterwork worth studying. I may have to do some more videos in the future using examples from the show, because there are so many great storytelling fundamentals at play. The video may have low views for the time being, but we’ve all got to start somewhere! :) With extremely positive feedback like yours, I’m confident it’s on the right track. Thanks for watching!
@siriusthecat
@siriusthecat 2 года назад
agreed. I got this recommended to me rn and see you commented 10 hrs ago... I hope thats evidence a blow up is about to occur haha regardless, awesome video, i'm thirsty for succession content
@peppermint23
@peppermint23 Год назад
This is fantastic, thank you!!
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling Год назад
Thanks for checking it out! Happy you enjoyed it.
@zaidlacksalastname4905
@zaidlacksalastname4905 Год назад
Instead of overstaying your welcome with too much deviation from the main idea, you covered it from many angles to get your ideas across perfectly. You're a great teacher. Great video. Subbed.
@J.Millhouse
@J.Millhouse 2 года назад
Really really well-explained! Will definitely help my writing going forward
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling 2 года назад
That’s great to hear! Thanks, John. Are you writing a screenplay or novel?
@augustomorgan
@augustomorgan 2 года назад
Never been happier I clicked a RU-vid recommendation. Great video!
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling 2 года назад
Augusto! This comment made my night. Thank you so much for watching!
@theofficialshed3690
@theofficialshed3690 Год назад
Love this
@Glitterblossom
@Glitterblossom 4 месяца назад
Thank you so much for an amazing analysis. As a teacher of literary analysis, myself, I’m impressed by your pedagogical approach!
@HeyJuuude-05
@HeyJuuude-05 2 года назад
Connor Roy was interested in politics from a very young age.
@nidyateran8477
@nidyateran8477 2 года назад
Yes! Watching this show I realized how much I liked these different writing techniques but never knew the name of them until now! I always talk about how writing is one of my favorite things I look out for and enjoy from a show, yet can never explain the terms, they leave me feeling some kind of way and I know they’re something special. Thank you! Will see if you have one for Gossip Girl, haha
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling 2 года назад
Thank you, Nidya! Glad to hear you’re enjoying the content. No Gossip Girl so far, haha! But I hope to cover a wide range of movies and tv shows in future videos depending on the writing topic, so maybe one day :)
@Danothebaldyheid
@Danothebaldyheid 2 года назад
Really interesting - thanks!
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling 2 года назад
Thanks for watching, Dan!
@biandito
@biandito 2 года назад
amazing video!
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling 2 года назад
Thanks!
@Newhighversion2024
@Newhighversion2024 2 года назад
Great work , plz we want more ❤️
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling 2 года назад
Working on it! Thank you for watching.
@sharontalbot8037
@sharontalbot8037 Год назад
Brilliant!
@viharim8513
@viharim8513 2 года назад
Great work.
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling 2 года назад
Thanks, Vihari!
@ryanknight199
@ryanknight199 2 года назад
Actually quite well crafted. Do more on Succession.
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling 2 года назад
Thank you! Definitely lots to discuss after that third season. If you have anything specific you want to see covered, let me know!
@saraamiri3123
@saraamiri3123 2 года назад
Great video 😍👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling 2 года назад
Thank you, Sara! 🙏🏻
@mirajundi7216
@mirajundi7216 2 года назад
Well done 👌
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling 2 года назад
Thanks so much, Mira!
@ellissmith8160
@ellissmith8160 Год назад
Wow one of the best shows 👏🏿 👌 ❤ ❤❤❤🥂🍾
@mothmangotango
@mothmangotango 2 года назад
Truly an exception that proves the rule - more is more because it emphasizes the absurdity of how much fits into the roy's understanding of "more," and it only works bc it is used with remarkable precision.
@jewman4
@jewman4 Год назад
I’ve been wondering why it seems every line has an analogy it. This is great thank you
@whedonobsessed
@whedonobsessed 2 года назад
Wow I can't believe how many references I missed. This show is a masterpiece
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling 2 года назад
Sounds like it’s time for a rewatch then :) Thanks for checking out the video!
@queeeeericuraaaaaaaa
@queeeeericuraaaaaaaa 2 года назад
You started the vid with Connor :))))) automatic like, automatic follow
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling 2 года назад
Of course! He’s the eldest son. He must be considered! He must be taken into account! 😆 Thanks for watching.
@nikhilvishnoi100
@nikhilvishnoi100 2 года назад
great video man, never would have thought that knowing the basics of show writing would deepen my experience of this great work of art. i love the show too but i think i have probably missed a thousand reframing references to popular works or real instances. if you want to, could you make a video exploring these references? especially season 3.
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling 2 года назад
Thank you, Nikhil! I agree seeing how the magic trick is done with some writing techniques never detracts from my enjoyment of a work; it only enhances my appreciation of it. I’m definitely interested in using Succession again as a lens through which to explore more story principles - especially after that last season! I’ll keep this in mind going forward.
@robertbowser328
@robertbowser328 2 года назад
I’m just here waiting for season 4
@judeannethecandorchannel2153
Very good! So glad someone understands that Polonious says dumb sh*t. Renaissance writers studied D'Coppia, which taught them how to say the same thing in many different ways, some rather elaborate and of many words. Cuz sometimes More Is More, baby! 🤭🤗🤭
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling Год назад
Never heard of D’Coppia before! I’ll have to look it up. Sounds interesting. Thanks for the awesome comment 🤘🏻
@albertmailyan9680
@albertmailyan9680 2 года назад
gorgeous
@denizasli
@denizasli 2 года назад
Impressed with the level of detail.
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling 2 года назад
Thank you, Deniz! :)
@denizasli
@denizasli 2 года назад
@@Scene-a-maticStorytelling are you on twitter? I would like to tag you.
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling 2 года назад
I’m not currently on there! (But I probably should be in order to help the channel.)
@denizasli
@denizasli 2 года назад
@@Scene-a-maticStorytelling good idea. Strong content. People will find you.
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling 2 года назад
I will definitely remedy that soon! Appreciate your kind words.
@jamessahni6475
@jamessahni6475 2 года назад
How do you only have 600 subscribers? I can’t wait to brag to internet strangers I knew about Scene-a-Matic before almost anyone
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling 2 года назад
Haha, thank you, James! Full bragging rights… you were in on the ground floor!
@therealbrappuccino
@therealbrappuccino 2 года назад
My only complaint with this video is the fact that it doesn’t have more views
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling 2 года назад
Haha, well I appreciate your contributing to fixing that slight annoyance! Thanks, Benjamin.
@sebasarriola568
@sebasarriola568 2 года назад
Amazing video, surprised that you have so few subscribers, just gained another one with me though...
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling 2 года назад
Sounds like I’m on the right track then! Thank you for checking out the video.
@MsDefectiveToaster
@MsDefectiveToaster Год назад
Makes me think of "You're Spam. You're vapor. A waste of perfectly good yearbook space"
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling Год назад
💯%! Great catch. (And good timing, too. I’m actually going through a lot of rom-coms this week, trying to understand the genre better. I hope to make a video on it in the future.)
@yackzilonsaperritana6135
@yackzilonsaperritana6135 2 года назад
The only thing I don't understand here is why you don't have 100k followers already
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling 2 года назад
Haha, I truly appreciate that! It’s probably the lack of more videos, but I’m working on that. Good things take time!
@ohno5559
@ohno5559 Год назад
This is a wildly different example but throughout the video all I could think of was the line, "You've got to remember that these are just simple farmers. These are people of the land. The common clay of the new West. You know... morons" where the initial phrase is reframed twice in ways that don't add anything, then one more time, much more dramatically, for comedic effect.
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling Год назад
That’s a wildly great example! There’s some rapid fire ones in the previous lines too. All to reframe unrealistic ways how the town might welcome Bart: “What did you expect? Welcome, sonny? Make yourself at home? Marry my daughter?” Good, serviceable writing that communicates more than the sum of its words, but the end bit you point out is what it’s all leading to: the line TURN to the punchline. All the reframes are the stepping stones that lead us to that rhetorical twist. Thanks for sharing! Hadn’t watched that scene in some time.
@bmorehou
@bmorehou 2 года назад
Great video! Thanks for your effort. The references in Succession are Goldilocks. Not too much. Not too little. Unlike Billions who uses references like Michael Jordan playing golf. They got in over their head. They're like Sisyphus' fucking Boulder.
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling 2 года назад
Thanks, Bridgette! I haven’t dived deep into Billions, though it looked like it had a good cast and all the makings for an engaging story. It might be interesting to do a case study to examine why that show never took off the way Succession did.
@preacherman303
@preacherman303 2 года назад
Flanders is not in France... damn
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling
@Scene-a-maticStorytelling 2 года назад
D’oh! I think the source I used might have referenced French Flanders and I mixed them up as Flanders Fields generally. My apologies to the Flemish!
@tomcotter4299
@tomcotter4299 2 года назад
Moar vidos plz!
@codyallen43
@codyallen43 2 года назад
Just stopped by to say Connor Roy was interested in politics at a very young age.
@JenLight
@JenLight 2 года назад
Just in case anyone comes across this and hasn't seen it, please disregard the comparison to House of Cards because Succession is actually good.
@billbaggins1688
@billbaggins1688 Год назад
lol, House of Cards. Not in the same league.
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