I actually REALLY enjoyed this one!! The colors contrast each other, how stuff doesn't get too crowded or hard to see. The sheer amount of sadness lunar has when he sees sun is broken is just astounding, the expressions I all of the scenes are well drawn out, nothing looks odd or off at all. As for transitions they are surprisingly smooth!! And may I ask, what colour do you shade with? The kill code part of this is georgeous honestly I LOVE creepy things and it's hard for me to make art look terrifying, what do you suggest? And I enjoy how eclipse rays retract when he is in fear. And those hands look strikingly real! The backgrounds near the end are detailed and you added the light source AND the shading, that makes it look very appealing actually. And it's very creative that eclipse has orange tears. For the constructive criticism I suggest for lipsync maybe add a bit more of fluid- ( gtg )
Thank you! Also thank you for mentioning the lip sync. It's not actually an animation. This ones just an animatic so I didn't have frames, I was just drawing on Ibis paint X instead of my animating app. And to answer about the shading, I use bright yellow and dark purple to shade. But I use it on a layer with an overlay filter. So it contrasts the colors they go over. I use an airbrush to do it. Like I would glow. And to make art look scary, maybe try dull colors and wide thin smiles.
@@TaffiBreadGremlin well.. I feel like I-.. I don't need it lol I can function pretty well at low capacity, I mean it makes me less hyper so it's a win win :D and won't worry I have gotten food and water recently, I am fine.. but for the sleep part.. I dont know how I can get rest, I have so much to do
This is absolutely heartbreaking. I can only imagine what must’ve happened the moment after eclipse was separated from sun. Moon would’ve been so outraged, I fear to think of all the horrible things he must’ve said to eclipse, blaming it all on him, literally telling him that he would rather have eclipse die than sun be like this, that he wishes eclipse was never born. Internally, moon would also be blaming himself, because Sun trusted him to do the procedure correctly, and look what happened. And what makes it even more sad is thinking of the first time sun got up to do a routine performance. Moon must’ve been working day and night to try and fix him, and then sun gets up, and he thinks that it worked, he thinks his brother is back. I wonder how long it would’ve taken for it to sink in that sun isn’t reacting to anything that’s not a scripted part of the act. It must’ve been horrible to have that hope snatched away. Most of the alternate universes they visited were tragic, but this one is probably the most upsetting of all.
This animation did such a good job portraying the sad story we only got hinted at so far! I really hope we get some dedicated videos that deep dive into the nice Eclipse's tale, or that he becomes a permanent character in the show!
I hope so to! I saw that it was only hinted at in the one video and I wanted to explore it and if you think about it. Eclipse is far more sad there then he allows himself to appear. I hope hes happier with lunar coming in sometimes to play with him. He won't be as lonely.
@@TaffiBreadGremlin Deffinitely! The few times he mentioned what was going on, he sounded heartbroken, like he felt like it was all his fault, like our Moon does! I hope he starts to show how it's affecting him more in future episodes after Lunar starts to feel safe again, there's so much opportunity with his story!
This was so sad but so beautiful when it comes to the animation!! Since that Moon isnt their OG Moon, and their Sun is pretty much dead. The fact Eclipse is still nice to Lunar is so sweet I think them playing together is just as much therapy for Eclipse then it is Lunar
This was really heartbreaking!!! I hated hearing what happened to Sun and Moon!! This was a very beautiful and heart wrenching video that you made, and nailed everything perfectly!! The tone, the emotions are 100% nailed!! It's pretty much how I imagined it to be!! Thank you sooo much for making this!!! This video truly is a great work of art!!!
They are the mistakes that ours didn't make. THEY took out Eclipse and while Suns base AI is working his sentience, the things that MADE him Moons brother, are gone. He's practically dead. Then they tried to do the same thing with Kill Code, but like everyone's said it killed Moon. Backups are nice, but to a certain extent its not MOON. It's a copy that simply can't have all his intelligence. And so Eclipse is able to be reasoned with and loved, but his world is what OUR Sun and Moon avoided, just by making one decision. Scary how close we seem to be to losing our favorite celestial, or having the WRONG celestial win. They suffered so ours didn't, and that's really fucking rough.
I realized that this Au is also a way of portraying what might happen if Sun was not there, or at least the way Moon would react and what would become of the daycare🤔 though this nice eclipse Au is it’s own Au and Sun being gone is definitely not the only thing that has caused it to be this way- they still had Eclipse appear but tore him out, making Sun basically just a normal functioning animatronic without any self awareness, Moon still had kill code but ripped the code out causing his emotional problems and Sun behaving as a robot and shutting down the rest of the time sure doesn’t help that, so no it’s not just because of Sun that the Au is that way, it’s still from what I can see shows how important Sun is to running the daycare and being Moon’s brother😌
This is really sad but it’s a good video. I cried that episode because sun’s basically dead which is really sad I hope that we do get another look at that universe. And I also hope that that moon can fix sunny.
This is so emotional it makes me want to cry. i feel sorry for those three sunny didnt deserve to go through this niether moon and eclips. No one deserves to go through this...
Oh my god- this was so heart wrenching to watch 😢 The way you captured this is incredible, you can really tell what the characters are feeling and I love that✨👍🏻 It really shows up much Sun means to Moon because of the way he was affected by Sun's.. “changes” and it sadly affected Nice Eclipse too. I feel so bad for Nice Eclipse and what he has gone through in life along with his Sun and Moon, I hope things get better like if Sun recovers and hopefully Moon will feel better over time because of that. :C
My mom sung me this song when I was little and we always said it was my song now seeing it hear I feel like I’m going to cry thank you for this and helping me remember my past.
In the past God spoke to our ancestors through the prophets at many times and in various ways,but in these last days he has spoken to us by his Son, whom he appointed heir of all things, and through whom also he made the universe.The Son is the radiance of God’s glory and the exact representation of his being, sustaining all things by his powerful word. After he had provided purification for sins, he sat down at the right hand of the Majesty in heaven.So he became as much superior to the angels as the name he has inherited is superior to theirs. - Hebrews 1:1-4
This actually almost made me cry legit, I also think maybe the other moon with Lunar can actually try and help. I would actually love to see that an episode moon trying to help Nice eclipse Fix his Sun.
@@TaffiBreadGremlin but at the same time you can't really blame anyone for it- eclipse didn't know this would happen, moon tried his best. And sun also didn't know this would happen TwT
Why am I here at this point?just to suffer?as if I needed to watch more angst in my lifetime😭😭 Now time to feed ur ego,this is awesome!honestly makes me wanna cry bc of the beauty of this and the angst :')
I can't be the only one who notices that the song sounds like 🎶 you were my sunshine 🎶 instead of the og. 🎶You are my sunshine🎶 and like " you MADE me happy" like in a past tense way (0:16)__(0:23)__(0:26)__(0:33)
This was an absolute amazing animation, and I love everything you do but one question who made this song please so I can listen to it over and over again.😊 Love what you make and what you do keep it up please!
OMG I NEEDED THIS- This is a beautiful piece of artwork, you did an AMAZING job on this. Also- if you could, whats the actual name title of the song you used? Like what remix version?
Bro we are doing sunshine at our program😂😂😂😂😂 why did miss curins have to!!!hehehe but.. Kinda different not yelling okay so it's still the same but kinda different cuz we don't yell cuz there are going to be 288 students singing including me I am a crest ridge elementary student for reals I'm not kidding and our school is cougar kind and if your wondering it's because cougars rule in our school
