Quick summary of this creepypasta: This takes place in the dream world, Luigi is sleeping to activate access to this place. Out of nowhere, Luigi is killed, with Luigi's last thought being to save his brother from the dream world. Luigi's mind is slowly deteriorating, Mario is on a time limit. Dreamy Luigi is there to help Mario back to the real world. The luiginoids didnt get Luigi's message, so they indirectly turn against Mario, Trying to kill him, because that's what they think will Save Mario. Edit: Turns out Mario is also trying to see if Luigi can be save as well.
If Bowser isnt that much of a dick, and Antasma is killed, i could see Mario wishing Luigi back with the Dream Stone Not even Bowser would want to see Mario in that much pain
Some people think the name of this creepypasta is strange, but I think it’s fitting. Mario is the only one trapped here, Luigi’s fate is already sealed, and the last thing Luigi is thinking about in his last moments is his brother, it’s a pure selfless act of saving his brother that is keeping him alive, but you can only go on so long with adrenaline and emotions…
This creepypasta is my favourite,it doesn't talk about just strange entities with stupid bloody eyes and violence for no reason,where people get sucked into games or monsters break into reality. It talks about a tale of two brothers which bond fights against the odds one last time,making it more tragic as the Luiginoids try to end Mario to make Luigi finally rest as he refuses to let go to his dying wish. It is the only spooky spaghetti I truly respect.
This feels as though it walks the line between hope and despair, and honestly, I like that a lot. Perfectly captures Mario's hope that he might somehow, *SOMEHOW* save his brother, despite the fact that Luigi is basically on borrowed time and technically already gone.
@@davidherreragonzalez6145 honestly yeah. the little i do know of this, it's just barely too dark and permanent for something for Nintendo to do. like, majora's mask delved into some pretty dark themes, including actual straight up death (Darmani, Mikau, the scrub in the prologue area), but this is just a bit too far over the edge. otherwise? i'd genuinely be able to imagine nintendo doing something like this, i really like it. i feel like Mario could use a touch of darkness once in a while for the mature audiences. nothing dramatic, but y'know, Luigi "dying" in a not so extreme manner, but still /dying/, only to eventually be resurrected or something in the very end since.. permanently killing Luigi would not be good for continuity.
@@The_Lightning_Sparks of course, maybe after escaping Luigi's mind Mario could have another time limit to find a 1-up and bring back his brother, or maybe using this adventure's mcguffin, the dream and nightmare... rock things I forgot their name.
@@The_Lightning_Sparks I feel like it’d also have to be another game. While I don’t think it’s as dark as Nintendo’s darkest games, it definitely is a little far for the Mario franchise.
There can be an argument made for why the music is more alike the old games rather then dream team and it’s simply the thing of when people die they often relive their best moments hence luigi is likely in his own head trying to focus on the fight to protect Mario but also caught up in his own head blasting their past adventures at him
honestly i feel this is really fitting lore-wise, it's very realistic and appropriate situationally, i honestly think the retro instruments mixed with a modern styled drumkit is really good for this song overall.
@@tixium3471 his name is TrikiTroy sorry for not saying earlier I'd ya still could search up Mario dream team and it could show ya his work it class by the way
Its pretty good but it doesnt really have anything to do with dream team because the special Thing about dream team was that they werent so limited anymore with the music becuase of the 3ds so it was actually the first Mario & Luigi which didnt have a pixel vibe and this here is in the pixel style
Yeah, I would've done it in that style, but I couldn't find a Dream Team sf2 anywhere, only Superstar Saga. If you could link me to a Dream Team sf2, I might be able to remaster it in time.
Man I really like this creepy pasta. I hope there is a few different endings. It should be like Mario has a single 1-UP and the Luiginoids know this and are attacking him to try and take it to survive. Whenever True Luigi gets hit more memory’s are lost (visually represented by the world crumbling around you) so the best ending is if Mario tanks/blocks all the hits AND never dies. Good ending is if Mario never dies and escapes. Neutral ending is if Mario dies (using the only hope to revive Luigi) and escapes. Bad ending is if Mario can’t escape in time and gets trapped and worst is if Mario dies twice.
*In the midst of one of their adventures in the dream world, Dreambert emerges as a foreboding rumble shakes the dream world. Mario and Dreamy Luigi both stop in confusion- though a question mark only appears over Mario’s head. The vibrant colors are quickly becoming more and more dull... something far from what the nightmare chunks did to the Pi'illo folk. Dreambert appears noticeably worried…* "...this... this cannot be..." "Mario... you need to flee from this place, fast." "This darkness... it is not that of a nightmare. This is something far, far worse." *Luigi is seen on the bottom screen. He appears weary and pained, much like he would at critical health in a battle. He has bags under his eyes, and Starlow isn’t seen. In fact, the area around is dark- there’s not enough of a connection for Dreambert to connect to the real world…* "Luigi- the REAL Luigi- has been defeated somehow. He barely holds on to the dreams." "Now, reviving him is simple. You both have bounced back from certain doom before, I've seen it with my own eyes." "But never once has there been records of one being in the dreams of someone as they fade away." "And that is for a reason. They never return." *Mario lets out a worried exclamation, as the area's colors continue to fade bit by bit. Dreamy Luigi… is unresponsive. The ground collapses beneath them, forcing Dreambert to float down to Mario, worried. Only Mario and Dreambert can be seen, surrounded by shadow.* “Mario! Are you well?!” *Mario gets up and nods. Dreambert looks around for a moment and returns to Mario.* “Thank goodness. That was quite a fall… though I suppose you’ve dealt with worse.” *Dreambert looks towards Luigi on the bottom screen.* "Luigi is trying his best to cling to focus, to life. Not for himself- for you, Mario." "Because if this dream ends, even if Luigi is revived afterwards... you'll be lost in the dream world, forever..." "Dreams sometimes shift. While you'll certainly exist in this realm, Luigi being revived will likely cause the dream to be changed." "And in the process, there's no telling where you'll find yourself." "Whether trapped within the dreamy earth, lost in a nightmarish labyrinth, or even thrown into Dream's Deep..." *Dreambert looks around a bit more, trying to figure out where they had ended up.* “And that’s if you’re in a normal dream when it ends. This… this isn’t a dream. Nor is it a nightmare.” “I truly do not know where we are in the dreamscape… or if this is something else entirely.” *The view of the area expands. The area is a mashed-together tapestry of locations, though all of which are next to monochromatic. Dreamy Luigi and a number of Luiginoids are spread about, all seemingly unconscious. Mario and Dreambert rush to Dreamy Luigi, whose face is seeming to dissolve. Some of the Luiginoids seem like pieces of them are missing, fading into nothing. Others look eerie and off-putting. As time passes, they start to fade more and more… but they seem to be getting up. For now, though, Mario and Dreambert don’t pay attention to this.* “That said, we need to hurry. The longer we spend here, the longer Luigi’s mind has to decay.” “And since time in the two worlds isn’t always the same, once we escape… if we escape…” “We need to give Luigi a 1-Up immediately. There isn’t enough time to get to a shop and purchase one- his mind will be long gone before we return.” “In addition, we need to make sure you don’t get defeated either… Check your inventory. Surely you have a few 1-Ups, right..?” *Mario searches through his bag, and much to his and Dreambert's dismay, only a single 1-Up is found. Putting it away, he explains the situation to Dreambert. Meanwhile, the Luiginoids, of which more are getting up, begin to approach them…* "...you only have one..?" "...I sense that saving you both will be difficult." "Wait... the Luiginoids. What... what are they doing?" *As Dreambert alerts Mario to this, the Luiginoids attempt to attack Mario, who falls down on his face. Normally a comical sight, this is much more worrying this time. Thankfully, this puts Mario and Dreambert far enough away from the Luiginoids so that they cannot be attacked, for now.* "MARIO! Are you well?" *Mario gets up slowly, checking his inventory for the 1-Up to confirm he still has it.* "...Phew. That is… relieving. It seems the Luiginoids aren’t acting normally… far from it." “It’s as if the dreamy foes of this world have merged with them in the instability, causing them to act strangely…” “I would feel more comforted if you could use that 1-Up to remain safe…” "But... you cannot... not if you want to save Luigi." *Mario sighs, before both he and Dreambert look to Dreamy Luigi, who has gotten up and has moved over to the two. At first, both brace for an attack, but Dreamy Luigi jumps a couple times- noticeably less powerful jumps compared to usual- to show he means well. Dreambert sighs.* "At the least, Dreamy Luigi seems to be well enough to know you are not a foe." "I fear you may not be able to use Luiginary Attacks currently. And the usual dreamy power of Dreamy Luigi himself is all but gone." "But perhaps there is something else." *Various items and scenarios depicting previous adventures between the Bros. are seen floating around, much like the Luigi outlines would in Dream’s Deep.* "...What are these..?" "...Ah. I see. These are... memories… this must be Luigi’s mind, rather than his dreams." *Dreambert begins to take a closer look at the memories…* "No… these are not just any memories. These are memories of what you and Luigi have done together..." *He notices something in one of the memories, reaching in and pulling out a familiar blue pipe- the Spin Pipe, from the Bros.’ previous adventure.* "...Aha! And within those memories, there are attacks! Attacks you and Luigi have performed in the past!" *He moves back to Mario and Dreamy Luigi, handing them the Spin Pipe.* "While Luiginary Attacks may be out of the question, perhaps we can make use of these memories with Dreamy Luigi's help!" "However... do be cautious. Luigi's mind is in a fragile state already." "Dreamy Luigi, being what is essentially a culmination of those dreams- of his mind… is thus also in peril." "Since Luigi’s mind is weak, if Dreamy Luigi is hurt… the memories might be as well.” “And if he were to fall… I can barely stand to think of it…” “But not only would Luigi lose everything that makes him, well, Luigi…” “You’d be gone with all of it, too.” “You must not let Dreamy Luigi be hurt, under ANY circumstances.” *Mario nods in understanding.* “I will do my best to assist by gathering the powers you and Luigi have used in the past. I do not know how well they may work, but they will be far better than basic attacks at the least.” “Remember- do not let Dreamy Luigi be hurt, and be sure to keep that 1-Up safe.” *Another tremor in the dreamscape… or rather, mindscape… alerts the group that they need to move. And a large number of Luiginoids can be seen in the way of them and the dream portal.* “This is bad. We must make haste. I do not know how long we have- but it certainly isn’t long.” “We must be at one with victory- for Luigi’s sake.”
Side note: this is not the actual creepypasta's plot or story. This is a fanmade variation on it I made that fits more into the actual game, without foregoing the permanent death the creepypasta implies. If you want to see the actual creepypasta, and not this fan-story version, then go look for *Mario Dream Team*. I'm well aware there are some inaccuracies compared to the real deal. They're intentional, since this isn't the real deal. Consider this an alternate take on the concept, I suppose.
@@sunmoonfx8251Oh my god the feels it hurts Would you write a "conclusion" bit that probably align with the normal game? Where they narrowly avoid the long term consequences and such?
I like to think that the Luiginary attacks would flat out be unusable, and here’s why So you know how Luiginary attacks all involve summoning a bunch of Luiginoids? And you know how Luiginoids in this spooky spaghetti are aggressive? I’m pretty sure if they used any kind of Luiginary attack, Mario would just die But Bros Attacks would be usable in their place. You gotta be careful of the noise though or it may attract more Luiginoids into the fray
or the luiginary attacks are used against mario, although strangely different as theyre just confused and thinking taking mario out will somehow save him
The concept of the story reminds me of a game named The Endless Empty. Long story short, it takes place in the brain of a singer who just...added some lead to his brain, the express way. You are his identity, and explore his dying brain to face and ally with various facets of his psyche even as everything breaks down around you. You can't save him or anything, but you can give a meaning to the entire tragedy by finding out more about him and his story.
…you think this is something a 1-UP can’t fix? Jokes aside, knowing the story and all, this music really fits well with a feeling of both hope and dread, and it really got me in the feels (Well done)
this is the music track that wont stop playing. it keeps playing between battles. when the song ends, GAME OVER. while there is no way to see how much time you have left in the hud, the world slowly starts to go grayscale and deteriorate. Luigi cant be targeted. bros attacks dont work.
imagine the concept in which when Mario of Luigi dies there body remains and in this instance Luigi dies and respawns but he freaks out as nothing he does will open a dream world portal to the dream world of his dead body causing extreme stress as he realizes the more his old body decays the less of a chance of Mario escaping as if he gets smeared into nothingness he wont respawn and will be gone for good
Okay, normally I don't comment multiple times, but I came up with an idea if you ever decide to remaster (also fyi there *should* be a converter for .RSD into mp3 or sf2): Extending the song would also help with the idea. My idea for the track is to make the song degrade. By this, I mean making the song change soundfonts into earlier games, preferably starting with Dream Team, and ending at a mixture of Game N Watch and a Luigi's Mansion soundfont mix.
I literally cannot sleep now that i know about the story. Since i do have a little brother (not affiliated with Undertale™ or any joke) this keeps me up at night. And i start to cry when i hear this and think of my little brother. If he gets killed, i do it to myself and if he dies of old age... I will stay alive until he dies. No fucking matter what. I know nobody gives a shit but some dont know how it is to have something as valuable as that.
Y'know, I can honestly imagine this happening either after the giant battle with Bower, or the Final Fight with Antasima, leading to a timed event where you need to escape the dream world quickly, or else you'll get a game over, similarly to the timed bomb event in TTYD, since Antasima and their magic could be reaking havok on Luigi and his mental state
Thinking about it, itd be cool if a mario dream team fangame were to give vives similar to an ai generated video, where the landscapes morph into different shapes, the different luigi creatures morphing into things, etc.
....i just thpught something crazy about the fight...The reasin the playee would be able to easily counter the luiginary attacks is because the "main" luigi is missing ,so the attack is a wonky version of the original same with your bros moved,they are kinda wonky
Yeah i have to agree with what people are saying...like not even dream team...it just doesnt even really seem like a Mario & Luigi song its not bad but if the image wasnt here or the title i would not associate it with Mario
so what i like to assume regarding bros attacks, Mario has the normal ones since realistically, mario would still have them and dreamy luigi(or real luigi, whatever ye want to call em) has weaker and higher costing bros attacks from previous games, like for example the copy flower not being infinite, snack basket only giving half the snacks and luigi does not do a flip at the end, the magic window also not going infinite and Mario not being able to participate, so on
man cool concept im just questioning why mario has his low hp animation when he is not at the low hp which is red and pink instead of yellow (still really like the creepypasta)
Mario and Luigi were fighting Antasma in the Dream World, something happened (I think the stress of the magic or something was too much for Luigi's mind?), mortally injuring Luigi in the real world, and now the Dream World, along with the Luigi clones, are rotting along with Luigi's corpse in the real world. The real Luigi, with what little life he has left (he refuses to die, essentially becoming a living corpse) does his best to help Mario escape from the dying dream world, all while the Luigi clones become ultra violent due to what happened to the real Luigi.
@@Thebroadcaster759yep and while Mario and Luigi have to Fight against corrupted clones and enemies (Cackletta, Fawful, Princess Shroob, Elder Princess shroob and Dark Star). I genuinely hope Triki Tr0y decides to make a Good ending and/or True ending that’s actually canon
this battle Mario can't flee and can't use bro's attacks or dreamy attacks. the damage he deals does nothing to dreamy Luigi. dreamy Luigi starts dealing 1 damage but as the battle progresses, they deal more and more damage until Mario is reduced to 1 hp, Mario gets a last-ditch attack but can't land it do to being too heavily damaged thus drops to the ground ending the battler. Mario lays on the ground of the dreamy world beaten and out of time and breath. (Just an idea.)
@zvsaba Hey to be honest after listening to this for like the 20th time possibly this week there is an odd calmness too it I don't know if it's making since due to losing a Loved One "Rest in Peace Grandma" Or the fact that listening to this reminds of those times where when everything just can't seem to go your way you just want to zone out Vibe even just get all of the Negative and Depressing Emotions out of your Symbols Don't know if anyone else would see this but I do hope that they get what I'm saying 🥲
hey, i gotchu, english can be hard sometimes. and thank you, i'm really glad that something i made can evoke such strong emotions in someone, it's what i strive for as an artist!
Mario I know you're in there I still miss you and I wish some day you will wake up I love you brother ps peach said hi From Luigi love you brother your my number one bro
