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THE BEST PERSONAL STATEMENT CONCLUSIONS I’VE EVER READ (Cambridge University Examples) 

Doctor Shaene
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What's the point in starting strong, if you're just going to finish with a squeak. Over the years, I've noticed lots of students putting in hours crafting an amazing introduction, just to end their personal statement with a bland sentence. In this video, I'll teach you my most effective strategies that'll take your conclusion from average to amazing in just 3 steps. And we'll use examples from successful Oxbridge personal statements ranging across Medicine, Engineering, Economics, Maths, Languages & Geography. These examples and strategies will inspire your very own masterful conclusion. 😁
And if you’re swamped and just want a quick teaser, here are 3 things to absolutely end with:
1.Summarise key qualities
2.Show Projection about what you hope to achieve
3.Show Unwavering Passion
00:00 - Start
01:30 - Core Strategies
03:02 - Medicine Example
03:34 - Natural Sciences Example
04:13 - Geography Example
05:10 - Economics Example
05:56 - Maths Example
06:46 - Languages Example
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Комментарии : 31   
@stanleyclarke7444
@stanleyclarke7444 2 года назад
You really clutched up with the timing on this one.. thanks for the useful vid
@alishaneupane1692
@alishaneupane1692 2 года назад
So happy you made a video !!
@aawrnnc
@aawrnnc 7 месяцев назад
Some tips here are also good to apply when you are having a job interview! This helped me in several ways! Thank you!
@supernana7263
@supernana7263 2 года назад
Glad you finally included excerpts from distinct separate disciplines. As someone studying Accounting (and seeking continuing scholarship for) this makes the video much more relatable. Thanks again!
@amiram1256
@amiram1256 2 года назад
Hey Shaene, thank u for video, I hope that u can make one about how to write a personal statement for scholarships
@dominique7954
@dominique7954 5 месяцев назад
bless up thank you for this
@nikspanodimos
@nikspanodimos 2 года назад
Amazing video and very helpful conclusions. I am currently finishing my PS that is oriented to a degree in law and will for sure take advantage of the formulas you have provided!
@emilycarter8922
@emilycarter8922 2 года назад
You might want to check this out ru-vid.com/video/%D0%B2%D0%B8%D0%B4%D0%B5%D0%BE-5ZUgT5cgTg0.html
@AkkuSriv
@AkkuSriv 2 года назад
Loved the editing on this video!
@DoctorShaene
@DoctorShaene 2 года назад
Thanks bro 😅
@mrnauko5018
@mrnauko5018 2 года назад
Perfect 🤩🤩
@johnmission586
@johnmission586 2 года назад
Recency effect is always more memorable than Primary Effect!
@andrewjeyarajah6722
@andrewjeyarajah6722 2 года назад
The video sound is pretty good, beyond my imagination
@hikmahondong8421
@hikmahondong8421 2 года назад
Thank you doctor, it's so usefully for me
@DoctorShaene
@DoctorShaene 2 года назад
😁🤝
@mikewizkalifa5812
@mikewizkalifa5812 2 года назад
hi, do you have any tips for sociology personal statements?
@olivervincent3174
@olivervincent3174 Год назад
Thank you Doctor Shaene for sacrificing your time to make all these useful videos. I want to ask do we need to add our personal information (Name, Address, or contact number, etc) on the top of the personal statement? Or do you have any template of personal statement that you can recommend for Oxford grad school? Thank you 🙏
@olivervincent3174
@olivervincent3174 Год назад
I get a like without a reply, Sir?
@teddy1596
@teddy1596 Год назад
Please tell me HOW long does ur personal state ment have to be.?
@smokerx6291
@smokerx6291 2 года назад
Been a while since you made a real video
@DoctorShaene
@DoctorShaene 2 года назад
We backkk
@smokerx6291
@smokerx6291 2 года назад
@@DoctorShaene ♥️
@peertasi5458
@peertasi5458 2 года назад
Hello Doctor Shaene, thank you so much for uploading these, I have just started year 12 and I am certain I will find these useful later on the year!!! I just wanted to ask you as a person who studies at Cambridge how many 9s and 8s do u think a candidate should have as my GCSE grades concern me a bit. Thank you.
@hamdannaeem6224
@hamdannaeem6224 2 года назад
Having anything apart from perfect GCSEs (so, all 8s and 9s) might just reduce chances of admission when they look at your grades. But really, asking your teachers and admissions tutors by email is the best way to go about getting an answer to your question.
@zulkifal120
@zulkifal120 2 года назад
Kind give some suggestions about MSc Education
@aebinrawat5087
@aebinrawat5087 2 года назад
Sir i am first can i get a heart❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥 As you are great sir
@fariyaart5094
@fariyaart5094 2 года назад
Amazing video! Subscribed! I have a question about Work experience. I'm applying this year for Medicine Due to COVID is wasn't able to get work experience. But I have Online virtual work experiences such as ObserveGP, BSMS Virtual Work Experience, and I'm doing volunteering in Science at school this year. I might also apply for some leadership at school this year. Could you tell me if that's enough for work experience for a competitive application? Also I have played volleyball for 2 years ( from 2016 - 2018 ), so can I also put that into my application? And one last thing is that I can speak 5 languages fluently so does that benefit me for a boost in my application and selection?
@hannahsandhu4520
@hannahsandhu4520 Год назад
Hi Doctor Shaene. I was wondering if you have receieved my email, regarding personal statements? Thanks a lot. Hannah
@Toshu.17
@Toshu.17 2 года назад
I was the 1000th viewer 🤣
@sandraorokodo7108
@sandraorokodo7108 2 года назад
Hello Doctor Shaene, are you married?
@hindugamermann7959
@hindugamermann7959 2 года назад
Are you Indian?
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