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Write a Better Love Poem (or Anything) | The Power of Specificity 

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@Skummy123
@Skummy123 7 месяцев назад
I haven’t wrote a poem since elementary school… I really care for this person and she sent one i still hold onto. Horrible with conveying feelings to words when i have so much too say. so i’m trying to not make it feel generic. You helped a lot ❤
@WritingwithAndrew
@WritingwithAndrew 6 месяцев назад
I'm glad to hear it--no matter how you may think the final product turns out, just taking the time to write something unique and from the heart will count for a lot
@gavinmiller1998
@gavinmiller1998 23 часа назад
How did it go bro
@jeffstone5554
@jeffstone5554 3 года назад
Hey Andrew, good advice. I could have used it before I wrote my love poem. The aspie writes a love poem You got my heart beating at scouring velocity I bet The colors of your paint job would be Flambeau and desert sunset You got more juice than a Holley 650 double pump carburetor As kind and cool as the interior of a 68 continental coach door Your mouth was built with the precision of a go no go gauge Your voice the soothing hum of a well-bathed metal lath With a mind that’s as on point as a floor-mounted drill press The drafting baton that laid down your lines, curvaceous Another thing I noticed is you shine brighter than chrome With the simple yet complex beauty of a geodesic dome
@WritingwithAndrew
@WritingwithAndrew 3 года назад
Delightful--thanks for sharing! I like the mechanical images that put a new spin on the idea of love, and the sounds and images of the last two lines are especially nice (brighter than chrome/geodesic dome)!
@Camila-mk8ym
@Camila-mk8ym 10 месяцев назад
It reminded me of that scene in Pride and Prejudice where Mr. Darcy say “I thought the poetry was the food of love” and Elizabeth Bennet say “Of a fine stab that it may but if it is only a vague inclination and prevents one course on it will kill it stone dead” After all, we can’t really pretend to love and expect it to feel natural… Loved the video!
@WritingwithAndrew
@WritingwithAndrew 10 месяцев назад
Nice, I like that--and thanks!
@user-pr7ep8eg8o
@user-pr7ep8eg8o Месяц назад
Hey sir!!! I am going to keep it short an simple... But u truly Help me with my poem... Nobody taught poem better than u... I never wrote a poem before and when I did this and send to my gf... She legit cried and said it's the most beautiful poem she has ever read. Am gonna end this by saying... Thank may u love a long life!!!
@WritingwithAndrew
@WritingwithAndrew Месяц назад
That's awesome to hear--thanks for the kind words!
@bernadetteyelland3969
@bernadetteyelland3969 11 месяцев назад
Love your videos Andrew! I have only just recently found you. These are so helpful and fun. You have an engaging way of sleaking and the content is spot on.
@WritingwithAndrew
@WritingwithAndrew 11 месяцев назад
Thanks a bunch!
@omorfaruqakib965
@omorfaruqakib965 Год назад
8:50 that sudden break of eye contact 😅 Andrew I am really glad that you are continuing to upload these videos. Even though they might not be as 'successful' as they should have been, you are not discouraged, and I am glad for this. And, I really love the way you recite poems, would you be able to sometime upload episodes where you only recite poems?
@WritingwithAndrew
@WritingwithAndrew Год назад
Thanks for the kind words! I've thought about it--maybe I'll start thinking about it more seriously!
@da3855
@da3855 11 месяцев назад
Hi Andrew! I wish I had discovered your channel sooner; you have such a clear, eloquent manner of speaking that is both high brow and understandable. Thanks for these videos, they might not generate the viewership they deserve, but I’m confident that in time, fame will come! Also, I wasn’t going to mention this, but since this episode is about love poems (much to the chagrin of the clearly disgruntled Kaput), I just wanted to let you know that your good looks are quite distracting for the more romantically inclined of your subscribers.
@WritingwithAndrew
@WritingwithAndrew 11 месяцев назад
Thanks for the kind words!
@thenatureofsketching4622
@thenatureofsketching4622 10 месяцев назад
I appreciate your videos a lot Andrew but can’t see a playlist for poetry whereby I could find all your poetry videos specifically
@WritingwithAndrew
@WritingwithAndrew 10 месяцев назад
For now, there's just a creative writing playlist (which is mostly poetry). I may have to make it it's own playlist, though
@Jane-zp7hy
@Jane-zp7hy 3 месяца назад
Thank you!
@Moon-lt5bi
@Moon-lt5bi Месяц назад
What are your thoughts on quatrains? I am working on a series of them and think it’s hard to be specific in them though I can be concrete. I love your videos
@WritingwithAndrew
@WritingwithAndrew Месяц назад
Thanks! A quatrain is just a form, so you can put whatever you want in them. I do find it can be a little trickier to be specific when I'm writing in form because I'm worried about keeping the rules. Sometimes, it can be helpful to write out something specific first and then try working it back into a form
@petra_png
@petra_png 6 месяцев назад
Great advice!
@WritingwithAndrew
@WritingwithAndrew 6 месяцев назад
Thanks!
@billyalarie929
@billyalarie929 3 года назад
When you thought for a good min that this dude actually thought the word was pronounced “valentimes”
@WritingwithAndrew
@WritingwithAndrew 3 года назад
Ha! Nothing like writing a joke that pays off five months later--thanks for watching!
@billyalarie929
@billyalarie929 3 года назад
@@WritingwithAndrew you’re welcome!! Thanks for making this video
@user-sr3ze8tz7q
@user-sr3ze8tz7q 6 месяцев назад
This might sound generic but I love that skull laying besides you
@kaputmortuum
@kaputmortuum 6 месяцев назад
Your taste is not generic but exquisite
@SaimQ-yz2cl
@SaimQ-yz2cl Месяц назад
I have a short poem - Blueberry and raspberry, to my dearest and deepest love, every now and then , We’d meet and I’d bring a bowl, A bowl of blueberries and raspberries, raspberries are your favourite and blueberries are mine , but when I come , this time you can eat the blueberries and I , I’ll eat the raspberries, my dear sweet is the fruit , but sweeter it is when I get to witness sweet fruit being eaten by my darling. -
@WritingwithAndrew
@WritingwithAndrew 29 дней назад
Nice!
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