Writing the Graduate Statement of Purpose 

I appreciate the information, however I found this to be extremely repetitive. Grammar is important... got it. Proof read... got it. I would like to hear more about formatting. Do you use a header or a title at the top? What style is best for the introduction paragraph? What exactly does "too dense" and "too tight" mean? Again, I appreciate what information was discussed, but hoped for much more.

Dr. Moreno, thank you so much for this video!

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Great presentation. A ton of useful information! Thanks.

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Thanks! for sharing these useful tips on how to write a successful graduate statement of purpose.

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Amazing explaination...thanks mam...

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Very good and thorough presentation.

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