Great execution, though if I may. Try and tighten up the distance in which you perform this. Both uke are too far from one another, thus the punches and kicks wouldn't be effective in a combative situation. So the movements are innocuous, and don't give a proper sense of urgency to commit to the technique. Also, both uke are not visually engaged with one another, no mitsuke. "First hit is with your eyes". Overall the kumite looks crisp and correct. I wonder, did your dojo train with Hanshi Yamashita? It's a pretty unique set as far as yakusoku kumite goes.