bro try to not look drunk next time, had some extra vocabulary and search, and speed up a little. You do too many pauses, try to talk a little more. Just a critical comment, great video though!
also check out some of the other videos i tried to do something new in this one. i tried to kind of narrate really and let the visuals tell the story more so in this video. but i definitely will keep what you said in mind and work on it!
