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Crushing the Why Us College Essay 

Shaurya Sinha
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Hi everyone!! This video is an excerpt from my online course on College Essay Writing! You can check it out at www.sleepdepriveddreamers.com
The Why Us essay is a staple College Application Essay, and this video, I'm going to walk you through everything I did to answer it. From USC to Columbia, Yale to Northwestern, every college wants to know why you would choose to attend their university.
In the video, we're going to start off by understanding what NOT to do in a Why Us Essay. Don't talk about physical features and common rituals like location, climate, mascot, etc. They already know this. Your goal is to demonstrate your interest in the university by substantiating your claims with tangible opportunities. From Research facilities to Professors, Labs to student organisations, your Why Us essay should be multi-dimensional and specific to your interests.
Another important feature of the Why Us essay is the implicit Why You? Yes, this campus has opportunities that you would love to benefit from, but why should you receive them - out of every other applicant. This is a question you can answer only after linking your personal experiences and the campus's opportunities.
Finally, I take all of you through my Why Us template, how I used a Day in the Life approach to make this otherwise dry essay interesting, and the exact way I conducted my college research.
Thanks so much for watching!!

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@ShauryaSinha
@ShauryaSinha 3 года назад
Hey guys!! If you notice, I end up using words like 'episode' and onto the next part. If you haven't caught on yet, I'm about to release a FULLLLL online course on essay writing. Looking forward to launching it on the 16th of November!! See you there :) Till then, catch me upload a whole video every single day. Edit: Also Dominic Fike is just AAAAAHHH. Gotta love the guy
@upasnamehta
@upasnamehta 3 года назад
it is going to be one wholesome week. CANNOT WAIT. as always the best wishes and did i mention that subscribing to your channel was one the best decisions I've made so far xD
@rishitverma5075
@rishitverma5075 3 года назад
Will this be a paid course??
@leejaerim8972
@leejaerim8972 3 года назад
@@upasnamehta you just said everything that was on my mind when i clicked reply XD I can't wait for the course too!!
@AdityaKumar-hn9te
@AdityaKumar-hn9te 3 года назад
Can't wait for it 😍😍😍
@mrswaggypants14
@mrswaggypants14 3 года назад
tru that, Dominic fike is actually ausum
@upasnamehta
@upasnamehta 3 года назад
the fact that SO many people watch your videos religiously now and you still put "30%" at the end, brings immense joy and tears at the same time. Your videos are always the best time spent in my entire day.
@aanyasharma3269
@aanyasharma3269 3 года назад
One of the most systematic and amazing "Why Us" essay videos out there. Thanks a lot for the inspiration :)
@jahnavibali3642
@jahnavibali3642 3 года назад
This was really helpful and really different from the other writing college essays videos and articles. Thanks a lot for making this!
@akhileshnevatia995
@akhileshnevatia995 3 года назад
THIS is by far the most innovative approach I have seen! also THANK YOU, I will definitely try doing something similar
@simranpanda672
@simranpanda672 3 года назад
I love your take on this damn, I can't wait for the day the you post the moving in and day in a life vids!!!
@priyankasheokand1701
@priyankasheokand1701 3 года назад
Hi Shaurya! Thanks a LOT for putting your wisdom out here because honestly, it’s a boon to have an Indian student, that too someone like you, comment on the application process, makes it feel more “in reach” if y’know what I mean. I seriously could write a long appreciation for your work, especially the Khan Academy Junior Challenge and the “Nostalgic kicks”. On a side note, you be nailing the aesthetics!
@ShauryaSinha
@ShauryaSinha 3 года назад
Aw this is so sweet, thanks SO MUCH Priyanka
@UndralGanbaatar97
@UndralGanbaatar97 Год назад
Hey Shaurya, man I just feel beyond thankful for you. I am a senior this year and I am going to apply by early decision. And your videos are insanely helpful. Just wanted to let you know that your content is the most amazing! Thank you thank you so much for helping.
@gustavonascimento7838
@gustavonascimento7838 3 года назад
Thank you very much Shaurya for share this content with us. I am from Brazil and this is really helpful, since we don’t have many content like that in my country. And it is awesome to see international students in these institutions.
@ninalima4150
@ninalima4150 2 года назад
dude this video is so detailed and helpful, thank you so much for making it!!!
@asifahmedbr
@asifahmedbr 3 года назад
Man, that's 5 head. This channel is a vibe. Good luck mate!
@ShauryaSinha
@ShauryaSinha 3 года назад
THANK YOU man
@asifahmedbr
@asifahmedbr 3 года назад
@@anubhavsahu2808 Bangladesh
@DavidJohnson-pz3bk
@DavidJohnson-pz3bk 3 года назад
I’m a westerner... don’t understand the joke
@arcisvar4863
@arcisvar4863 3 года назад
@@DavidJohnson-pz3bk ok
@himanibelsare3739
@himanibelsare3739 3 года назад
Thank you so much for this! I really liked your 'Day in a Life/ Vlog' approach to this essay prompt. It's pretty unique.
@ShauryaSinha
@ShauryaSinha 3 года назад
Hhahaha thanks so much!
@lalitayadav3946
@lalitayadav3946 3 года назад
Even I want to see a day in a life video of shaurya sinha!!
@vidhi_bhatt
@vidhi_bhatt 3 года назад
This was so on point. Thank you !!
@hamnashafqat2096
@hamnashafqat2096 3 года назад
You have no idea how much u've helped me bro!! Thankyou so muchh
@sobhsaeed462
@sobhsaeed462 3 года назад
most helpful why us essay video I've seen!
@hamzakamil4303
@hamzakamil4303 3 года назад
You're an amazing guy; your personality is absolutely lively. This helped by a great deal!
@jonathankiles6148
@jonathankiles6148 2 года назад
ru-vid.com/video/%D0%B2%D0%B8%D0%B4%D0%B5%D0%BE-4BpagjxjapM.html
@shreyaambade6688
@shreyaambade6688 3 года назад
Aah yes! I literally love this channel aha can’t wait✨
@sarahkrogh6409
@sarahkrogh6409 3 года назад
Underrated channel. I’m rooting for you
@ShauryaSinha
@ShauryaSinha 3 года назад
Really appreciate it Sarah. IM ROOTING FOR ME TOOOO
@shreen6364
@shreen6364 3 года назад
Bruh, you're nailing it. With the editing, the content and the dad haircut 😂
@suhanashaikh186
@suhanashaikh186 3 года назад
THIS WAS SO GOOD AND VERY HELPFUL THANKS A LOT SHAURYA.
@vanshdeepsehrawat4703
@vanshdeepsehrawat4703 3 года назад
Ive been waitin for a vid for yrs But its worth it tbh
@gateekhenwar2860
@gateekhenwar2860 3 года назад
I wish I was this clear about my goals and views, when I was applying for colleges....still this gives a lot of useful information and helps me in choosing the correct path and organising my views...thanks for making this channel.
@ShauryaSinha
@ShauryaSinha 3 года назад
Always WELCOMEE
@AryanMaggo
@AryanMaggo 3 года назад
Each and every second of this video, makes sense!!
@MXNDI
@MXNDI 3 года назад
Can you please do a full video on how to fill the common app essay!! I love your Chanelle and great work!!💫
@lucassthazra94416
@lucassthazra94416 10 месяцев назад
Thank you so much for giving the advice. I also used a day-in-the-life approach for Why Us essay, but I edited the structure and wording a bit to suit my concept of intersection of CS and Music (2 class on CS + 1 CS/CS+Music Club + 1 Specific Music Program through class or club). I also added a portion where I will be answering a few QnA regarding my time at the College. Thank you for the spark of idea
@THAWNITS_
@THAWNITS_ 10 месяцев назад
Hey man I’m doing the same . I need a bit of help can i pls contact you 😢
@dollylakhmani603
@dollylakhmani603 3 года назад
You posted this video at the correct time. Like i was applying for intership today only and was wondering how to frame this ques. Thankyou for the video!
@ShauryaSinha
@ShauryaSinha 3 года назад
HEY DOLLYY, so glad this helped :)
@rupanshisharma5514
@rupanshisharma5514 3 года назад
Started watching Ur videos recently and they r such a vibe that I completed watching ur videos in a single take. Love the work u r doing and looking forward for such incredible informative stuff ✨
@ShauryaSinha
@ShauryaSinha 3 года назад
Hahahha aw thanks so much, will upload tomorrow!!
@rupanshisharma5514
@rupanshisharma5514 3 года назад
@@ShauryaSinha 👍🏼
@starocracy7620
@starocracy7620 3 года назад
Many things to learn from you man.... You are amazing♥️😀 EDIT : Also waiting for your next episode....
@kumarjitde9142
@kumarjitde9142 3 года назад
What are the odds that I was literally filling out my Columbia 'Why Us' Essay when I came across this video? . . . Aaah, so much food for thought! Thanks;)
@kumarjitde9142
@kumarjitde9142 2 года назад
@@samjosephrogers4909 unfortunately, no. got into Stanford though.
@mohamedirfank692
@mohamedirfank692 3 года назад
Very well-detailed video, Loved it!
@ShauryaSinha
@ShauryaSinha 3 года назад
Always welcomeee IRFAN
@chancheroni88
@chancheroni88 3 года назад
automatic thumbs up for the joe blazey in the intro 😩❤️
@abhigyanhazarika4219
@abhigyanhazarika4219 3 года назад
I see that my boy is back at making regular uploads. Yeee🙌🏽🔥🔥
@ShauryaSinha
@ShauryaSinha 3 года назад
SEE YOU TODAY AT 6 PM YEEWW
@abhigyanhazarika4219
@abhigyanhazarika4219 3 года назад
@@ShauryaSinha yesss!!!
@samyakbedmutha
@samyakbedmutha 3 года назад
Wait waa the conclusion part shot on projector?? And the video was just amazingg!!!
@vorfour
@vorfour Год назад
hands down, the best. You earned everything you did; I'm pretty sure your parents must have spent good on you, man. Im a senior at pws g'gaon, IB. My Counselor is just piece of s***t, can't help it.
@harshagrawal2336
@harshagrawal2336 3 года назад
Really helpful Shaurya and just in time when I was beginning to start writing a Why Us essay. Love your content. Keep up the good work!
@namanbhaskar6014
@namanbhaskar6014 3 года назад
While submitting my application for Yygs this was one of those questions which took me almost a week to write with proper facts ! Thanks bhaiya..would surely help in further applications ^_^
@asmaulhosna3815
@asmaulhosna3815 3 года назад
Hey! Congratulations on filing your application. I was wondering if I could ask you that in which class are you and when will you be in the programme. Would be really helpful if you could inform me about these! 😊
@jasmannsingh5341
@jasmannsingh5341 3 года назад
This is really great honestly, the amount of hard work you've put and how well researched you were. However, I do have a question, when you're mentioning all those very specific details about the professor, are we sure that it will have a impact or give the colleges an understanding how well researched we are, considering that "yes" an admission officer reviewing my essay would be aware of the department their colleague is teaching, but to know the classes or podcasts they're working on? What do you think about this?
@shanthikuppa4645
@shanthikuppa4645 3 года назад
Thank you so much!
@pardheev2137
@pardheev2137 3 года назад
Hey man please start a series on how to write an impressive essays
@soup712
@soup712 3 года назад
bruh this is gold
@imb422
@imb422 3 года назад
Waiting for the essay course. Bring it on asap
@hitchensrazor9538
@hitchensrazor9538 3 года назад
You’re awesome. Period.
@ShauryaSinha
@ShauryaSinha 3 года назад
You're too kind. Period.
@sidakgill8195
@sidakgill8195 3 года назад
Any advice on how to write a " why this major essay"
@ShauryaSinha
@ShauryaSinha 3 года назад
Will be in the essay writing course!!
@edsradio5817
@edsradio5817 3 года назад
Can you review and edit my saqs for college, please (Preferably if your good with essay writing - leave an email please)6
@vedanttadkal8220
@vedanttadkal8220 3 года назад
Bro its amazing, so helpful ❤️
@ShauryaSinha
@ShauryaSinha 3 года назад
WELCOMEEE
@vedanttadkal8220
@vedanttadkal8220 3 года назад
@@ShauryaSinha pls reply me on discord
@vedanttadkal8220
@vedanttadkal8220 3 года назад
@@ShauryaSinha @ved027
@sidakgill8195
@sidakgill8195 3 года назад
I think this is legit fate I have to submit a Why us essay on Sunday. This video really came in as a saviour because I still haven't been able to write a final draft.
@sidakgill8195
@sidakgill8195 3 года назад
@@yashashwinkarthikeyan1701 thanks a lot
@ShauryaSinha
@ShauryaSinha 3 года назад
Hhahahaha IM HERE FOR YOU!!!
@sidakgill8195
@sidakgill8195 3 года назад
@@ShauryaSinha I wish you could see my essay and give your opinion but anyways thanks your video saved me
@sanskritibansall
@sanskritibansall 3 года назад
You're awesome! Please make one on how to crack a college interview
@ShauryaSinha
@ShauryaSinha 3 года назад
Sure!!
@aryanmisra4028
@aryanmisra4028 3 года назад
Awesome Video!!! P.S: Are phase 3 results for the Spectraverse applications out yet?
@ShauryaSinha
@ShauryaSinha 3 года назад
Today!
@zawadulhoque4511
@zawadulhoque4511 Год назад
Watching this 24 hours from deadline and all I have is vibes
@nomorepranav
@nomorepranav 3 года назад
the song is joe blazey by dominic
@simranpatel1332
@simranpatel1332 3 года назад
Really helped 👍👍👍
@sarahmitchell222
@sarahmitchell222 2 года назад
I love this video, I've been using it for all of my colleges! I modified it slightly to be a journal entry day in the life rather than a vlog because that's more my style. Thank you so much! Great video and amazing editing!
@emilycarter8922
@emilycarter8922 2 года назад
You might want to check this out ru-vid.com/video/%D0%B2%D0%B8%D0%B4%D0%B5%D0%BE-gNBrdE_CR80.html
@emmahan9160
@emmahan9160 3 года назад
Told myself I'd regret watching this video, and yep, now I feel completely defeated. This is so creative in comparison to my "Why USC" essay which I handed in just few days ago, before discovering this video.
@Batorgel
@Batorgel 2 года назад
OMG cant thank you enough
@vivaanbanerjee7765
@vivaanbanerjee7765 3 года назад
Hi Shaurya, I am in seventh grade at the moment and really like you videos. I just wanted to ask if you could recommend any EC's because I really want to start building them up so that it will be helpful in the future. Love you vids
@sl4896
@sl4896 3 года назад
It's bad luck for me that this video premiered the day before I submitted all my college applications:(
@aarav6228
@aarav6228 3 года назад
(Y) Same
@kavyashah1805
@kavyashah1805 3 года назад
Tysm
@mridula8216
@mridula8216 3 года назад
Hey Shaurya! I really like your idea of how to write the essay but how do you do it on a very small word count(200 words)? Not that I will be writing the same, but how do you shrink down the size of your quite descriptive and insightful 'Why us' essay ?
@kekeliy5520
@kekeliy5520 3 года назад
Hey!! So I have a question about how you went about introducing your writing. Did you go straight into doing the imaginary vlog or did you explain somewhere in your writing that if you were admitted this is how would vlog your day? Thanks!
@emilyc8262
@emilyc8262 Год назад
It’s such a tough question because the colleges are basically exactly the same
@ranjanasingh1243
@ranjanasingh1243 3 года назад
Finally!!!!!!!!!
@ShauryaSinha
@ShauryaSinha 3 года назад
FINAALLLYYYYYY
@pritaljariwala8172
@pritaljariwala8172 3 года назад
Your tips are incredibly helpful!
@ShauryaSinha
@ShauryaSinha 3 года назад
Always welcomede
@kimkadam4660
@kimkadam4660 3 года назад
legend
@priteshdubey4972
@priteshdubey4972 2 года назад
You are truly a gem...I will love to meet you someday.
@stephaniecortez5833
@stephaniecortez5833 3 года назад
Who the heck are the 8 people who disliked this masterpiece???
@siddhjain987
@siddhjain987 3 года назад
Please make a video on good summer programs and EC's please
@medhavipandit5135
@medhavipandit5135 3 года назад
god o needde this. if i get into georia tech I'll put up a huge picture of yours in my room, and yes this is a manifestation
@sthv777
@sthv777 Год назад
The uni I am applying to has 5 different options to choose from for these supplemental essays. "Why us ?" is one of them but there is also another option to write about my strategy to solve an issue and i think i can do better on later but i don't have much idea on HOW to write that whereas for the "why us" essay, well your vid is so helpful. So, I am confused. Which one do you think is a better choice ? Plus, do uni prefer "why us" essay to other essays ?
@pornessianparpio1320
@pornessianparpio1320 3 года назад
I did my essay, I already submitted it, people reviewed it, but none of us were able to catch one grammatical mistake. Am I doomed? and it was so obvious idk how we didn't catch it.
@raghureddy7380
@raghureddy7380 3 года назад
Hey shaurya did u use any college admissions consultancy please reply. U re the best!!
@satyavardhan1326
@satyavardhan1326 3 года назад
Hey Shaurya! Do make a video for transfer applicants. As there are no proper videos on RU-vid on this Make sure to make a detailed video about it...
@arcee7425
@arcee7425 3 года назад
I have been bringing your videos, and was legit thinking "when will he post again" And then Boooom You posted I wish this kinda luck applies in my college admissions to 😂😂
@ShauryaSinha
@ShauryaSinha 3 года назад
Boom is correct.
@anshulshankhdhar8610
@anshulshankhdhar8610 3 года назад
I applied to USC yesterday :'(. Should have waited xD
@anubhabroychowdhury8023
@anubhabroychowdhury8023 3 года назад
your course and this video in general will be applicable to every student in general who want to pursue a PhD or Masters or bachelors right? or is this strictly for bachelor seekers?
@aarushibhatnagar9465
@aarushibhatnagar9465 Год назад
Could you please upload a picture of your template. Its really helpful and i want to see how you end your 'why us?' essay.
@who9873
@who9873 3 года назад
I know this might seem too much mainstream but I was literally thinking bout when Shaurya will upload this morning...... And now I see his vid notification (although I gt notified late😶).....I am like sooketh
@vivekmalik5541
@vivekmalik5541 3 года назад
Bro if we did ATC with writing do the universities still recommend us to take sat subject tests... And what did you took.. Act, sat , sat subjects test ... pls answer
@natasharay3556
@natasharay3556 3 года назад
Do you have any advice for finding other templates?
@aarjavgohel1792
@aarjavgohel1792 3 года назад
Finally a video came after 792 hours. To be slightly precise😂😊
@ShauryaSinha
@ShauryaSinha 3 года назад
Oof, that's a bad look for me
@lalitayadav3946
@lalitayadav3946 3 года назад
Can u pls make a day in ur life video
@himanshus4588
@himanshus4588 3 года назад
Absolutely love it One query pls answer Can I get into USC business school after graduation for my master's degree in management and business development?
@abhiroopreddy1948
@abhiroopreddy1948 3 года назад
Wow awesome thumbnail!!! I bet shaurya will blow up on youtube if he continues with this!! But honestly i'd prefer the previous thumbnail, at the end of the day its shaurya's channel and i his fan so I've gotta what he does, Wish him great success on his college youtube journey!!!
@zeusgaming4954
@zeusgaming4954 3 года назад
Shaurya's new video yay. But I have a question, why did you take so long to post? Nevermind. Enjoy🤗🤗
@rupanshisharma5514
@rupanshisharma5514 3 года назад
Could u please try to make a video on how to get research assistantship from the professors of Canada or US during one's undergraduate engineering especially Indian students.
@anshulshankhdhar8610
@anshulshankhdhar8610 3 года назад
I wish you uploaded this video 3 days back :'(
@annsusan8765
@annsusan8765 3 года назад
This gives a lot of good advice but I think if people follow your template word for word it may be flagged for plagiarism. Not entirely sure but your approach is very user-friendly and I'll make sure to use some of your tips and things that I should mention in my essay. Thank you so much! 💜
@ShauryaSinha
@ShauryaSinha 3 года назад
HAHAHAHAH PLEASE DONT FOLLOW THE TEMPLATE
@annsusan8765
@annsusan8765 3 года назад
@@ShauryaSinha ahaha I won't, I'm just sayin' there are people who will :)
@ShauryaSinha
@ShauryaSinha 3 года назад
Universities will catch on since I applied to tonssss but yeah I get what you're saying
@anirudhiyer6599
@anirudhiyer6599 2 года назад
I spent 5 months perfecting my common app essay, now i am in writer's block and need to write a 650 word supplemental essay before deadline on November 1. TIPS PLEASE
@utkarshchaudhary756
@utkarshchaudhary756 3 года назад
Hey i am 15.....so i wanna do some extracurriculars .....how and where i can do my internships in this pandamic ......can anyone suggest......hope you answer.....love your channel and thank you for your content .....best channel on youtube
@shantanu925
@shantanu925 3 года назад
Dude, Why are you so smart?
@ibacstudio
@ibacstudio 3 года назад
Mr. Shaurya, I have one query after looking at all your videos...did you work with any oversees abroad admission consulting company for guiding you through the whole process or was 100% of the work, research, essay writing, and submission done by you? If you did take help from any company can you pls name it?
@facecheck3589
@facecheck3589 Год назад
Full on full stalker mode for this essay😎
@iamlisabangs6616
@iamlisabangs6616 3 года назад
nicr bro
@asmigayanb-91arts50
@asmigayanb-91arts50 2 года назад
Where do you edit your videos?
@siddhjain987
@siddhjain987 3 года назад
After so long
@ShauryaSinha
@ShauryaSinha 3 года назад
Too long. NEW VIDEO UP TOMORROW
@vanshshah8352
@vanshshah8352 2 года назад
Colleges: Chilla Chilla ke sabko scheme bata de
@mrswaggypants14
@mrswaggypants14 3 года назад
waoooo
@hamsinisharma9222
@hamsinisharma9222 2 года назад
can we get a link to that document?
@deadly.desai2
@deadly.desai2 3 года назад
and now you got your own coffee machine next to your pc... stop making me jealous, Shaurya! Please...
@srilaasyamoka
@srilaasyamoka 3 года назад
someone promised us weekly videos 🤨
@ShauryaSinha
@ShauryaSinha 3 года назад
New video tomorrow :))
@srilaasyamoka
@srilaasyamoka 3 года назад
Shaurya Sinha yaaaas 🤗😇
@satvikvarun6386
@satvikvarun6386 3 года назад
@@ShauryaSinha no thx
@agrimabhatnagar5756
@agrimabhatnagar5756 3 года назад
Why did you delete the Yale essay video!?
@raghulakshai7307
@raghulakshai7307 3 года назад
Brother u r saying these kinda stuff in public, so if I write "WHY US" essay to any top universities in US or CANADA they might thing that I'm copying someone. But my way is a unique way and I will get a lot of things from u
@ShauryaSinha
@ShauryaSinha 3 года назад
You're always running the risk of copying an "idea". Mine might just get more popular now, but I can almost guarantee this is a very standard template everyone uses!
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