"Demons" A Star Trek Fan Production: Segment 2 

That Vulcan doctor is more insightful than any Vulcan I've ever heard of save for Soval. She actually acknowledges human emotion and doesn't denigrate it. And for her to touch his hand like she did is almost unprecedented. Vulcans are touch telepaths. For her to open herself that way speaks of her quality as a physician. Of course she has to touch others in her day to day duties, but to do it as a show of emotional support? He could have done a lot worse for the position of Chief Surgeon; a whole hell of a lot worse.

"I know Mason was your friend too..." The way he said that was so powerful. Incredible acting by everyone 👏

I was not expected a fan film to have such a well acted and poingant ending.

I've been knocked down! I was sure Chief Engineer Archer would remain onboard a bit longer! I was expecting a trio, fool that I am. She upheld her family's honor and tradition. However I realize that the fans usually present a more realistic view of service aboard a Starship. People are lost and life continues on. I would like to see further adventures with this Captain. He is a sensitive soul, yet he is going to have to bite the bullet in order to protect his crew and the Federation. I like him. Was happy to see the physician reach out to him realizing what he needed, and not holding back. Crew is family. It would be lovely to see their adventures continue. I hope you all get to make more of these beautiful films in the future, as circumstances right now or so precarious. Do take care all and Thank You!

This 2 part production was really well written and produced! Excellent show!

If they had a Russian Crewman in that briefing room he would have said. " Of course Keptain you know that WD-40 was inwented by a Russian. It vas called WD-Corok.

Oh my God, you guys have a great show. I am literally crying over the loss of Jamie Archer. I loved the characters, Captain Ramirez breakdown, and the resolve of First Officer Amanda Beck. It's been too long without really good Gene Roddenberry style Star Trek. I salute you guys at Avalon Universe. Navigator maintain course, helmsman steady as she goes!

OMG you guys are killing me! First Captain Mason Killed Now ... JAMIE ARCHER Dead? I loved her! Check the asteroid field again, please !

I cannot believe that Lt. Archer is gone! I was really starting to enjoy her presence. Thank you for everything you put into this show; I think it's one of the best fan efforts out there. Excellent writing, good performances, and high production values. This is a true reflection of the heart and soul of Star Trek. Live long and prosper, Avalon Universe!

Nice to see some real Star Trek is still being made.

This made me feel the way I felt as a kid watching the original series. I think Gean would love what you all have made and would be proud to see his creation still lives in the harts of so many people. Thank you all so much for this it to will now live in my hart as well.

Okay, even though there has only been two, two-part episodes so far, this has been THE best and most enjoyable Star Trek experience I have had in neigh on a decade. Please keep doing exactly what you're doing! The blend of TOS feel and esthetic with the HD widescreen format and the sense of chemistry between the actors is really good. I want to see more of Hightower and Rook, they're great and the ship CG is gorgeous!

What I liked most was the ending to Dr. T'Mera even with Vulcan behavior trying to be empathic and comfort the Captain.

In the words of Capt Picard, "On the starship Enterprise, no one is alone! No one!" (ST TNG S3E05 The Bonding)

This is getting to be close to the next Star Trek Continues.

I missed STC after they wrapped up the series. This was a good production in the same way. Keep it coming.

Excellent work, Josh and Victoria!

what i really like about this is that you can see, especially in the captains behavior how much he is affected. he doesnt hide it as well as his first XO.

I know Victoria Fox wears many hats in the Avalon Universe. She wears them extremely well. My compliments to her and everyone for a well done show.

A very , hearty and deserved Bravo , to Ms. Victoria Fox and one Joshua Irwin..this episode and the previous before this one. Nicely crafted writing , spot on effects and some very, very excellent acting, that shall bring you more followers, fans and more to hopefully continue your mission and have even more adventures , as a longtime Trek fan, this is most assuredly in the vein of the classic series and some nice touches and sprinkles of the others as well, until next time, keep the wind at your backs and looking forward following the star guiding your way.....Engage and keep the hailing frequencies open.

Star Trek Continues ( ended in our reality) an excellent production that closed the original Star Trek series. I look forward to this universe ( far better, than the great deal of money mismanaged on other current productions).

We needed this to keep this generation alive

Just when I thought part 1 couldn't have gotten any better.... This shows up! Love the 21st century pop cultural references like WD-40, they just show the amount of

Really seeing improvement in story-telling, production etc. Nicely done. I especially appreciate this was not merely a shoot-em-up show. There was some heart to this one. In my opinion, too many fan films just want space battles. Real Star Trek told stories. You’re on the right path...keep it up!!

This is one of the best Star Trek Fan film I have ever seen/watched. Excellent production, acting and story-line. 100 times better than the garbage ST:D from CBS and a 1000 times better than its shorts.

Once again, I really love how the Connie looks with the blue glow behind the deflector. It makes such a difference. Really modernises the design. Samuel, you're a very talented fella. Love it😁

That Vulcan doctor has humans pegged. She doesn't experience emotions in the same manner as humans, She wouldn't be Vulcan if she did, But she does understand that emotions cannot be dismissed or denied, And she comes to this conclusion by observation. She would make an excellent instructor of Vulcan cadets on understanding humans. Fortunately for the Excalibur's crew Starfleet doesn't seem to be aware of this. That was a fine piece of work, even with Archer's death. Thanks so much of sharing.

OMG! This made me cry but with good tears! I love how emotional and deep which is AMAZING considering how short it was. Congratulations on this and looking forward to more in the future.

There is more quality, in terms of acting, writing, and range of emotion in both in these sixteen short minutes than there is in all of the new iterations of what they dare to call "Star Trek"! Keep up the good work!

Wow, that last scene! The Vulcan writing and acting is straight out of TOS.

These are truly some of the best fan films I've ever seen. Keep up the good work!

This is a Beautifully Designed and Crafted Set! I recognize It, and appreciate it's positive purpose! lol. It's Amazing content your show, Victoria Fox, thank you! We are enjoying your vision and Congratulations!! It is a awesome view from where I'm sitting 5 star! (Go Girl!)I sure loved Star Trek Continues, your story is very moving well articulated and totally appreciated thanks some new people that enjoy your work!! 1Sean&family.peace. 🙂✌👍⚘

Very enjoyable. I'm always amazed how Paramiunt/CBS with millions of dollars per episode can't even approach the quality of many fan productions.

OMG...this is the Trek I experienced as a kid in the 70's. This is quality work - thank you!

Breathtaking! It was completely unexpected to for the starship Excalibur to loose her. But it was still amazing to see the ship survive.

Archer: “Jeez, I hope someone comes out here to get me. Floating in space is a pain in the ass.”

Keeps on getting better and better

Well done I love see the Constitution class ships, The battle was well played out, acting is very good. Hope TO SEE MORE bring in the Gorn or the Tholions.

Wow!!! This is the best thing I've seen in a looong time after stumbling across Ghost Ship and I just binge watched all 5 of the episodes. When can we see more? I really hope none of the other main characters die...was really liking Mason and Archer 🤯 Excellent writing, acting, production. This has been a real treat. This is what "Discovery" should have been.

Again, absolutely perfect! 10 stars! Very moving! Acting, costumes, sets, SFX as good as any ST I’ve seen!

I love it when a plan comes together

Very well written and carried out. Well done to all involved. One of the hazards and the most feared of having command is the idea that one may have to send someone, even a close friend to their demise. It's never an easy thing to do, and it's hard to accept. If it ever got easy, that person should not be in command.

This series is simply getting better and better,the storyline is riveting,becoming intensely emotional,something which could never be established in the main line Startrek films and TV. Somehow,this series is drawing viewers into a personal relationship with the characters,so that reactions to occurrences,good and bad,joyful and sad,are going to be genuine. This is an incredible achievement,given the scope,time,and budget available. Long live the Federation,and long live,and prosper,this series!

Love it! Never seen a Klingon BoP on TOS. It looked good. And the nod to "good shooting Mr Scott" was cool.

Thank You for Another Well Told Star Trek Tale, I Salute Your Wonderful Storytelling & Well Acted by All Involved. And to Absent Friends, Mason & Archer, Godspeed & God Bless. CDR. Chad Hinshaw, USS Bulldog NCC-55460

This is what science fiction is about. Avalon gave us the space action we crave for. The dramatic background was a plus. The story was well balanced with the crew's personal issues. Not overkill like the other Star Trek shows that had a soap opera feel to the point of boredom. Please give us more! Thank you.

Wow one of the best treks ever. Thank you. Really moved me.

Awesome story :) Great writing Joshua Irwin and Victoria Fox :) CONGRATS!!!!!!!

Real Trek! Fantastic folks!

Awesome obvious labor of Love production! So says this 50 yr+ Trek fan. If more folks realized you would certainly have 5 million views. Thank you Oh, AND Great Job sticking with The Classic Style. Even The mini skirts! Well done.

Quality work!!!! I love the Vulcan ship’s Doctor. She embodies the logic of Mr. Spock and the empathy of Dr. McCoy. I’m only seeing this is 2023, and I’m highly impressed.

Opinion: The segment of Ramirez and Beck's heart-to-heart after he left the bridge was a little lengthy, especially when the chips were down and an enemy ship could destroy them at any moment. The final battle was too brief and lacked excitement. No drama, stirring music or urgency. I base my opinions on the few battle scenes that we saw in TOS. In fact, I compare any Star Trek I see to the original series because that is what started it all. Those are my only ''cons.'' The ''pros" - This is really, really well done. Everything from the visuals to the sets to the costumes and to the acting (although I would've preferred the same intensity in other scenes as there was in the highly-emotional ones). And these actors are very good looking! The camera likes all of them! If I were a kid, like I was when TOS aired, I would want to grow up and look like any of the guys on this ship. And the ladies are absolutely stunning.

Awesome work....Great job people...We all really appreciate this wonderful content

The exchanges between the Captain, First Officer and Surgeon are amazing, easily on par with the best of TOS.

Nice job guys! So stoked to be a part of this!

I just gotta say it...the Vulcan doctor is just...gorgeous :D

Star Trek lives. Thank you.

You guys are severely under-rated! You should have a million views by Trekies that crave the good Trek that you give us.

am I the only one to notice that the old mining outpost look Iconian in design. getting some STO Flashback.

Trek fan for as long as I can remember....this goes to show that you can have a series set in the TOS timeline with a different ship and crew and still have a great story and interesting characters.....please keep up the good work...

Excellent.... One of the very best Fan Productions.

You gius really are killing this. By far the best star trek fan fiction made.

Thank You, Avalon. An hour episode distilled to 16 minutes! ST 'Whiskey' for the soul! Please keep going.

Wow. I'm not sure what I expected from a fan production, but you guys blew me away! The acting was pretty good, but I love that you stayed faithful to The Original Series aesthetics. Star Trek Discovery should have done that, but didn't. And the CGI is top notch. Great job guys!

Captain, you do not have the luxury of appearing weak in front of your crew sir. Now put on your big boy pants and do what needs to be done.

Thank you. Thank you for this wonderful creation. Please continue to make more. Live long and prosper. 🖖

Okay that gave me chills. Thank you Avalon folks for keeping that crazy beautiful Great Bird of the Galaxy up in the sky. This may not be an exact replica, and may not be exactly what Gene Roddenberry had in mind, but this goes one better. It's a fresh new take at what makes Roddenberry's vision so appealing after all these years without being overburdened by nostalgia. Perhaps a little ham fisted and melodramatic, but TOS was that too and a bag of chips. Nicely done. Looking forward to future endeavors. Thank you. LLAP.

Hi, I just wanted to let you and your team know that I loved these videos. I just watched all of the episodes and particularly the last episode really struck me emotionally. I like the mix of humour and the genuine original trek series feel to the whole thing. The special effects are pretty darn good too. I am looking forward to seeing how this story continues. I can't understand why they haven't had more views, a real hidden treasure. Thanks so much for making them.

I love the camera angles, the music, the sets, the actors....EVERYTHING! So good!

SIMPLY AMAZING!.. Avalon Universe continues to excel and push the envelope for Fan Films. MANY KUDOS to Joshua, Victoria, and CREW!!

All the fan productions out there this is the best.

being a captain is like being Spiderman, Come great power, come great Responsibility.

The commander number one is exceptionally gifted as an actor and has good range. The captain and rest are fairly good too. The ship design is very accurate with some good updates on bridge for monitor screens better than original. The exterior space battles, fire bursts, and ship design is very well done in production. Overall very good production!

I don`t know how many times I`ve saw this Interlude made me watch this again

WOW!! Well done Avalon cast and crew -- these episodes are very impressive!! 🌎💫⭐

This is really not bad at all...as avid star trek fan I have really enjoyed these shorts

Captain Keanu Reeves takes a little getting used too but I am loving Lt.Commander Beck, her acting and back story are getting better and better

A simple yet touchy feely plot. Not your typical star trek plot.

I loved the way they snookered the Klingon.

Excellent two part show. Loved it. Keep them coming.

Your videos are super cool. The acting is great and the fx add to the realism that makes a perfect fit into canon

Live long and prosper.

Love your interpretation of star trek love to see more of it if possible.

Wow, this is AMAZING writing. Both parts 1 and 2 gave me goosebumps, something I don't think Star Trek has made me feel in like forever. THIS is the series that should have succeeded Star Trek: Enterprise as the next live action series. Do NOT dishonor the fans by Not continuing this series. I really want to see more episodes and missions of the USS Excalibur with THIS crew, Chuck Mere as Captain Ramirez and especially Victoria Fox as Commander Beck. Sad to see Archer die, I really like her too from previous episodes. Avalon Universe is my new favorite timeline in the Star Trek multiverse. I really love the Star Trek Beyond uniforms too 🤓

I love fan films for the stories. Always Heartwarming, professional colleagues. But the production values here are top quality. I am so enjoying this. 👍👍

Wow, the actor playing the captain is as inspiring and believable as my high school principal. Apparently in the Avalon universe, humanity never invented acting.

"What would Kirk do? What would Picard do? What would Janeway do?" What I love about this? "what would YOU do?" Avalon makes the audience the characters.

Excellent and thank you. Keep on keepin; on. PLEASE!!!! And Happy Eggnog Holidays!!!!! Love you folks!!!!

Wow, this has a great script! Especially the doctor is writtern shockingly good!

Hooked me in about 10 seconds, unlike some of the other fan films. Great Job!!

Wow! Great sets and awesome acting. WELL DONE!! Thank you!

Well done! Hope there are more to come! I have subscribed!

This is an excellent production. Really feels like this was happening just offscreen in the original series. The updated tech is just the right approach in my opinion. And the characters are people we can care about. This production displays remarkable attention to detail. It must be a tremendous amount of work but I look forward to more!

Wow. The Vulcan doctor might be my favorite character excellent work from Courtney Jensen.

Great CGI/effects and the acting is good as well.

Those actors are 'Beyond' the normal Star Trek actors (pun intended).!

A good story well written and performed. Bravo Zulu (Navy speak for Well Done!) The Doctor is incorrect about one thing, there is ONE person who is truly alone in any ship … the Commanding Officer, the Captain. Both TOS and TNG touched on this more than once. In TNG Troy was taking the exams to qualify for command and had to learn to set emotion aside, to set friendship aside and make the 'logical choice.' Beck touched on it also, 'This is YOUR ship and YOUR crew' (paraphrased.)

Excellent video folks. Touching scenes they know the risks when putting on the uniform. Keep making these videos

Excellent job, well-written... excellent "message", much in line with TOS.

Loving these films