E2 IELTS Writing | 7 Steps to Achieve Band 7+

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Need to score 7+ in IELTS Writing? In this video, IELTS expert and ex-examiner, Alex, shares 7 steps to achieve band 7.
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@mintincanada 4 года назад

This channel is really helpful. I watched it a lot while preparing for IELTS. It helped me in getting a good score.

@premshah488 4 года назад

Mint n Cherry Ya true. I also saw the video that you shared about your IELTS journey. It’s really nice.

@mintincanada 4 года назад

Thanks a lot. I’m glad you liked it!

@paragshah1410 4 года назад

I also saw the video and liked it. How many months did you prepare?

@mintincanada 4 года назад

Parag Shah thanks! I prepare for about 2-3 weeks. Plus I saw a lot of RU-vid videos like I mentioned in my video. Also I gave a lot of mock tests.

@E2IELTS 4 года назад

Thanks! We enjoyed your video too - congrats 🌟

@Nino12x 4 года назад

My Test is on Saturday. Wish me luck guys, I’m going to put on a masterful display in there 😤

@hiitsamrit 4 года назад

you will do great!

@trendyzone9974 4 года назад

All the best

@estheribe8244 4 года назад

Good luck!

@smahmooud 4 года назад

Ninofootball same i didn’t prepare for it 😔

@Nino12x 4 года назад

Muhammad Al fear not bro. Remember it’s just English . We’ve been dealing with the language all our lives. Go in there with confidence

@syedaizazalam 3 года назад

I managed to clear my IELTS exam (6.5 overall) with only 4 days of preparation through this channel's videos. Thank you Jay and Alex for highlighting the keys points and strategies.

@iffatulwidad2395 Год назад

can i ask you, are you only depends on the videos or you also do some test in that short period

@MsSmj18 4 года назад

Thank you Alex. Through your videos I scored 7.5 in all the modules.

@jawadqazi6424 2 года назад

amit batra i appicrated u to getting 7.5 band in ielts . i requisted to u that give me some info about getting score 7. in ielts thank u so much

@ujjawalasharma539 2 года назад

I want to thank you for improving my writing skills. Your videos helped me alot and I scored 7.5. A big thanks to you all again.😊❤

@jawadqazi6424 2 года назад

ujjawala sharma i appicrated u to getting 7.5 band in ielts . i requisted to u that give me some info about getting score 7. in ielts thank u so much

@tanveerali834 4 года назад

E2 is by far the best channel for ielts training.Love to both Alex and Jay.U guys are amazing 😍😍

@guzalmirkhamidova5934 4 года назад

Many governments engage youth to take part in sport sections and one of the evidence of it can be seen in school, where sport is becoming obligatory. This essay will totally agree whith the given statement, and provide two reasons for this, namely improving health state of youngsters and better social life.

@samsunforev1846 3 года назад

Challenge #1: Sports are undoubtedly very important for people health and well-being. In particular, sports keep the students at school in good shape, which can help them thrive in their learning journey. Personally, I believe that sports need to be mandatory for primary schools, whereas available selective for higher levels.

@ayeshaakber3996 4 года назад

Thank you Alex, this video is quite helpful for me because I didn’t understand the information about scoring less because of missing structures of the essay before.

@vi683 4 года назад

You explain the criteria for different bands very clearly. Thanks!

@shivamrustagi3644 4 года назад

According to a latest research done on sports; it reveals that playing any sport helps you stay focus, build team player skills, de-stresses your life and provide new/alternate methods to solve a problem. I strongly believe that playing and indulging students in any sport of their choice will make the better version of themselves.

@E2IELTS 4 года назад

Thanks Shivan! *the latest research 👍

@nitinjaiswal7224 4 года назад

@@E2IELTS :)

@nitinjaiswal7224 4 года назад

@@E2IELTS *Shivam

@mnsrariff 4 года назад

Thanks for your wonderful videos which helped me secure the desired score, really appreciate the work you guys are doing.

@arjundave3362 4 года назад

In today's era, being fit and healthy is one of the prominent concerns for people of all ages. Hence, it is essential that early exposure to sports should be given to the children at an early age. I cannot deny with the given statement as games can prove to be resourceful in developing a sense self-confidence, team spirit, and stamina among kids which eventually can shape their life.

@jagratruparel9163 4 года назад

Physical activities plays a prominent role in an individual's life, so to include such education in extracurricular activities in school would be immensely beneficial to the students. I completely agree that sports must introduced to children right from early age. This essay will discuss about benefits associated with this concern.

@kimdahyun2893 4 года назад

alex i wish you were my examiner...you look very kind and have your way with words to not make us feel nervous

@cynthiandungu5277 3 года назад

I got 7.5 in writing(first attempt) thanks to you guys and your tips🥺thank you sm

@samisharma7187 3 года назад

Please suggest me how I can get 7in writing because I feel to tense about my writing module and my exam will be going 23january

@reenakhosla6446 3 года назад

@@samisharma7187 share your experience

@user-nu7xl6er4l 3 года назад

@@samisharma7187 Yeah please

@694manya Год назад

Hi, my IELTS-GT is in 3 days. Can you please reply with the most important links from this channel?? Pretty please🙏

@mariyamjunaidi8199 Год назад

Thank you E2 and team for your generosity 🥺❤️

@michaeloezil 4 года назад

Just got my IELTS Academic result today and I got an overall band 8.5 . This channel was really helpful especially in writing. Many thanks to you guys! You rock!

@shimasafaee7929 4 года назад

hello, oh congrats. Would you please tell me how you studied? which books did you study?

@nasimullahkhan6761 3 года назад

That's Great.Kindly guided me about ilets. If you get free also share helping materials with me on email.Thanks ( nasimuetpeshawar@gmail.com)

@jcat5100 4 года назад

Thank you E2 IELTS *Alex and Jay* 🧡 I prepared 2 weeks for my exam and your channel was super helpful!!! I got overall band score of 8.0 ✨🧡 also wanna thank *Jay* for his lectures on the writing tasks 🎉

@aminujamiu758 3 года назад

Which plan did you subscribe to

@wonderwander34256 3 года назад

Schools generally include introducing a series of extracurricular activities in their students, aside from the standard academic aspects. With this in mind, sports is a good activity to boost students' agility, as well as socialization skills with their peers. This essay tackles about the advantages of making sports compulsary in a school setting.

@itsjustfaith 4 года назад

Just coming from a test.... Want to thank E2 IELTS team for such helpful and easy to remember tips and tutoring... I will be back in 2 weeks with my band 9 results. Special thanks to Jay for the writing and Reading tips. Today was a breeze. I could hear his voice especially during the Writing task 2 essay...

@kubersingh5956 3 года назад

and she never came back

@mahiyajahanjeni1925 3 года назад

@@kubersingh5956 🤣

@muhammadharuna7067 2 года назад

Exactly.... overconfidence is not particularly good

@blissfulvibes1163 3 года назад

Sports and physical fitness, around the world, have become a part and parcel of student's life in majority of the schools. Even though some people debate over its negative aspects, but as the saying goes "All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy", one should never neglect the key areas where it actually allows students to shine to their utmost potential. In my view, making sports compulsory can prove to be a positive step towards not only their physical, but also mental and social wellbeing.

@dairaitbayev7853 4 года назад

Done! Thanks!

@KawaiRonin 3 года назад

Research has shown that sporting activities have contributed significantly to the well being and development of children and their education. While this is clearly an important aspect of a child’s upbringing, some people believe this should be made compulsory in the educational syllabus of schools. I personally believe this is a good idea and will be supporting my opinion in the following paragraphs with valid points and examples

@jobinthomas4520 4 года назад

I'm not that good in English, but if anyone can help me with this introduction....... Thank you E2 IELTS for this platform In todays era, engaging in sport activities help children in overall development. Some people suggest that, sports ought to be mandatory in schools and I completely agree with the statement suggested as it helps children to be physically fit and avoid ailments in the long run. This essay discusses why sports should be compulsory in schools.

@Karina-nd8xw 4 года назад

In today's era sport is playing a significant role in people's life with several reasons. But an argument has been put forward that sport should be mandatory in school. I think this statement holds a valid ground. This essay will discuss why it should be compulsory and how it could prove beneficial for pupils. Is this type of introduction is good?

@pmaulik25 4 года назад

First of all, it's perfect and nicely written but the first sentance. I am not an expert, but I think, first sentance suggests your idea that it has benefits which is why it has to be compulsary. So I believe that line should be first sentance of your first body paragraph. Instead, also u can just get rid of few words - In todays era, playing sport has significant role in one's life. (This is just what I believe)

@ramankaur8000 3 года назад

U guys are amazing 🙏🙏 i hope in my upcoming exam got 7 in writing

@mabdulhamid8669 4 года назад

Physical education has been incorporated in school programs for centuries. Despite its significance, there are among those who still believe that incorporating sports programmes in schools as an expensive endeavor that only serve to bring a positive image of the institution. As a regular practitioner of sports myself, I will present in this essay why I support the inclusion of sports facilities and programs in every able school.

@syednuman4598 4 года назад

I always find trouble in brainstorming ideas for task 2.

@shadanmariam 3 года назад

Thanks Alex. I was stuck at 6.5 and was considering coaching as I needed 7 for my admission. This video changed my life. I got over all 8 (L9R9W7.5S7) Some how I paused in task 2 speaking and hence scored 7. All credit to your team You taught me how to write an essay from scratch and pulled me up to 7.5. Love from Oxford

@shadanmariam 3 года назад

BTW did i mention that the task 2 I got was from the list provided by E2 ielts for free. It saved 5 min of brainstorming during exam

@rafiaasif6099 2 года назад

@@shadanmariam can you give me the link of essay list. I am also struck on 6.5 in writing. I have given 3 times. Going to give again on Monday 🥺

@syedamir2246 4 года назад

Yes, i do agree about the essentially of sports at school as it encourages the kids to aknowledge themselfs and also it helps them to get refreshed from there daily routine. Sports also gives them the impactful confidence in every part of there life.

@romaissabrt1669 4 года назад

Alex thank you a lot for your vedeos are so helpful , when we will solve the challenge ? Thanks.

@yatinsuri185 3 года назад

Sports and physical activities play a vital role in the life of children. While academic education is incredibly important in the school curriculum, the sports equally adds value to the overall development of the children. This is simply because children not only remain physically fit by participating in sports, but it also fosters interpersonal skills in children for instance teamwork and planning. I strongly believe that sport can be an excellent value-addition in school, especially for primary kids.

@sergeyshestakov4936 4 года назад

Thanks!

@NikhilKumarr1122 4 года назад

My score : L:9, S:8, R:8 and W:7.5 This channel is truly helpful. Just by watching some videos a day before exam and with no other preparation, I was able to get a band 8 in academic test. The PPF method for speaking helped a lot . I would definitely recommend these videos to anyone appearing for the exam.

@hayksargsian1725 4 года назад

What is the PPF method?

@shivanisharma2572 4 года назад

Hi nikhil pls suggest me how to improve in listening coz its so confusing as answers r not direct

@SuhagChowdhury-lz7zj Год назад

Thanks a lot.

@user-tx7mh9zm7d 2 года назад

Physical activities and movement have been always linked with health and well-being. Some people argued that sports must be mandatory in school curriculum. In my view, it is without doubt a great opportunity to give children the space to be active and to make good use of their time. Your corrections are valuable 🙏🏼

@pankajsuman7602 Год назад

I got 8.0 in writing(first attempt) thanks to you guys and your tips🥺thank you sm

@hasonraja4650 Год назад

Can u help me, brother??

@shahzodaxolmuminova Год назад

Wow great

@pankajsuman7602 10 месяцев назад

@@vimanbatth6516 yeah why not

@joelyohannan 4 года назад

Hi I'm from India, and I wanted to say I'm grateful for all the videos on writing which helped score an overall 7.5 band score with 7 in writing 😊😊 for academic

@amritrandhawa709 4 года назад

Hi bro I m also from india could u Help me in ielts please kya aap meri writing mai help kr skte ooo apna bhut sukriya hoga

@masoomiat6966 4 года назад

Thanks mam👏👏 seriously you are so amazing 👏👏👏

@cryptotechnicals5908 3 года назад

Sport plays a pivotal role in keeping pysical and mental fitness. Personally i think sports should be a mandatory subject in every school.

@bajwa122 4 года назад

Hi I took my General Training IELTS on computer from IDP Lahore. Thanks guys for your help i can crack test. Especially in writing I was able to write 267 words in essay and got time to review also. All due to your fabulous strategies. Task 1 writing, You ordered something from website, but it didnt arrived yet. Task 2: Modern inventions problems and benefits. Do you agree or disagree

@user-zb2if1ht6r 3 года назад

Thanks a lot for your videos. I just have one question and I can't find an anwer as the questions seems to be quite controversial. What kind of conclusion/overview is required in Part 1 Writing task Academic IELTS?

@Parthpatel-ep5vh 4 года назад

Challenge 1:- school is an important part of students life so the school sport as it grows students extra curricular activities. I do personally agree that their should be sports in school.

@Amandeepsingh-zd3kz 4 года назад

i am preparing for IELTS-GT..Sports can play great role in developing and shaping character of the students, so i strongly support the idea that sports must be mandatory part of the school curriculum.

@sagargoswami5874 3 года назад

Yes, sports is a 1 of thing which help to grow up child physically , emotionally, and mentally, so agree it should be a part of the school.

@harisshah5521 4 года назад

Hi Alex! I always face difficulty while writing an introduction nd I can't paraphrase the statement of "Task 2" ,how can I overcome this problem?

@xander_9812 2 года назад

In today's sedentary and highly stressful lifestyle, chronic diseases among school going children are common. The necessity of sports and athletic events in educational institutions is gaining spotlight. I agree with this and the following paragraphs will cast light on the importance of such measures and justify my opinion.

@toobahashmi7353 4 года назад

Hey Alex, How can we get registered to get my essays check by you guys?

@gurleen54 4 года назад

Throughout human History, sports have helped us reach newer heights. Some believe that sports activity should be made permanent in school curriculum. In this essay, I will reason on why it is a good idea to include sports in school curriculum

@linguaphile1872 4 года назад

As we all know that shaping talents in early ages can benefit the children precisely and the community in general, in this essay I am going to elaborate my point of view, since I completely agree with the idea.

@ShafinVlogs 4 года назад

Sport is a great source of physical activity which helps children to be active and healthy. It boosts us to overcome monotony life. Every school certainly should make sports obligatory. I totally agree with the statement, sports not just entertaining but also assist the children to reveal their hidden talent.

@lucamarini8342 4 года назад

Thank you for all Alex and Jay, today I did my exam and your help was essential!! After 2 weeks I'll know you my result!! :)

@kavya9803 4 года назад

Several studies have shown that playing sports regularly maintains the physical health and in turn regulates the psychological wellbeing of studies. I completely agree that sports should be compulsory in schools because in my experience, playing sports has always added to my wellbeing. I have also read substantial scientific evidence to support the aforementioned claim.

@SHKBSS Год назад

Hi mrs. i`ve been in the Conversation and read the article about the value differncies. Aside from misunderstanding huge amount of sentences i noted some essential vocabularies that i could use in my writing task such as Individualism, Collectivism, High and Low power. Thanks to your challenges i force myself in such activities like READing!!)

@navpreetsandhu5971 4 года назад

Extra curricular activities, especially the sports should be a mandatory part of the curriculum in the schools. I strongly agree with this notion because it is vital for the overall development of the children as well as it gives an opportunity to students to showcase their hidden talents. Can anyone give the feedback on this paraphrase.

@LekeMadeIt 4 года назад

In schools, sporting activities are not just about fitness, but they are a great way to foster social bonding among students. To this end, while I agree that school sports are essential, making them compulsory takes away the joy and the sense of team spirit that comes from participating in sports. As such, I recommend that sporting activities be tailored to meet each student's specific physical needs and abilities.

@advocateh.khundal9378 4 года назад

Mam how we can make sentence in academic task 1 please?

@damnableuniverse7668 4 года назад

Thanks

@devarshpatel6063 2 года назад

In recent decades, Our lifestyle has become quite mechanical and unhealthy. The importance of sports for mental and physical well-being cannot be overstated. Many people around the world support the idea of sports being mandatory in school. I strongly agree with the people who want to make sports compulsory in schools, and will explain my reasons further in this text.

@MoMoGammerOfficial 2 года назад

I like your last sentence. I will definitely add it and rephrased to fit in my text. Thanks.

@mrnobody4967 Год назад

Wow,thats a band 8

@anilkumar-pt7zf 4 года назад

Playing games is very important specially for children that makes them fit and healthy.Many people say that outdoor and indoor sports to be indulge in schools.I completely agree to the statement and this essay explains the significance of including sports in schools. '

@smartshib 4 года назад

Dear Alex and Jay, A plethora of tutors are available on RU-vid about how you can go with your IELTS preparation. Following some of them, I appeared in IELTS examination 2 times before I finally found you people. I followed all your videos and carefully considered each and every tip you gave during the exercise. Even after scoring low bands in previous attempts I decided to give it a try for one last time, and here are my scores - L-8.5 R-9 S-7 W-7.5 I just want to let you know that you guys are doing a great job. I would have not been able to score this high if it wasn't for you guys. Thank you very much. Keep doing the great job.

@E2IELTS 4 года назад

Way to go! 🌟🥳🙌

@puneesh2 3 года назад

please tell me how you get 7.5 in writing

@smartshib 3 года назад

@@puneesh2 Follow their videos. They have separate series for writing task 1 and 2.

@yukhei99 Год назад

Welldone🔥

@muhy9247 4 года назад

My test in 7 days do you have any intensive course for 7 days , For your information I have stop everything just dedicated all this mount of time 24/7 for IELTS , ANY ADVICE PLEASE

@E2IELTS 4 года назад

Yes! Check out our course packages here... Academic: www.e2language.com/Course/IELTS/Academic General: www.e2language.com/Course/IELTS/General

@ibukunoluwataiwo4487 3 года назад

In recent times, studies has shown that learning for young people goes beyond subjects being taught within the classroom, hence there's a need for curricular activities like sport to help in their overall development

@Chhedenghising25 3 года назад

U are one mine Ilets best teacher ever and ever♥️🇳🇵

@meenakumari-yk9lz Год назад

Sports helps in the overall development of the child. In this modern era, there is a lot of competition in students regarding their studies. Due to which, sports often get neglected by many schools .Therefore compulsory classes should be conducted in schools for childrens. This essay agrees largely with the above notion and will discuss my ideas in the upcoming paragraphs.

@meenakumari-yk9lz Год назад

Is this right????

@moshaheedshaikh7865 10 месяцев назад

In this contemporary era, sports play a vital role in development of children so it must be taught in school. This essay will elucidate my complete agreement with this notion in subsequent paragraphs, followed by the conclusion.

@bizhanhejazi8174 2 года назад

From the very first days of public schooling, physical education has always been a major part of a normal schedule. The majority of parents believe that their children should be engaged in various sports. On the contrary, some people think that students should not be forced to spend their time on sports if they don't show any interest in them. This article explains why it is important that a teenager participates in physical activities.

@lyrichives7859 Год назад

The following essay touches on the subject of the inclusion of sports in school as a compalsury subject and ends with a reasonable conclusion.

@sanakirmani 3 года назад

Physical activity in any form has always been regarded as an important way to keep both mind and body active. Making sports part of the school curriculum should be taken into serious consideration because of their potential to have a positive impact on a student’s mental and physical health.

@rominasepehry8611 2 года назад

Thank you. It was very helpful.

@khalidhussain4792 4 года назад

So nice

@pratikshyapriyadarshini3870 3 года назад

Inclusion of sports in ecademic institutions is pivotal for allowing refreshment of students.

@mantyclassicstudio1907 2 года назад

Past few decades have seen an unprecedented growth in the incidences of health ailments among individuals especially children.Considering this, many argue that it is prudent to have a mandatory period for games at schools. Bearing in mind several benefits of sports, I completely adhere to this notion.

@fatimakhalid1866 2 года назад

Sport brings people from all different walks of life together. Even though we can gain so much by participating in any sport that interests us, many people don’t. In this essay I am going to discuss the few perceived disadvantages that people might think making sport compulsory in schools might have compared to the many advantages that it will result in.

@advocateh.khundal9378 4 года назад

Wooooww god bless you

@anamikaverma7029 3 года назад

Hello Folks, I can't access the link for the sports toolkit. It would be very helpful if someone can share a working link or a downloaded copy. Please help. Thank you.

@gadleravi 4 года назад

Sports plays a very important key role in an individual growth as they can be of any nature and format. Inculcating the importance and love for any game can promote not only well-being but also the help in developing a character and approach taken towards various aspects of life. I am of very strong opinion to include sports and make it mandatory in academic curriculum of every student.

@bluelenspictures6750 3 года назад

Sport plays a crucial role in the physical and mental development of children. In my opinion, i completely agree that it should be a compulsory part of the school curriculum because a lack of physical activity correlates with poor academic achievement and also leads to reduced confidence levels.

@muhammadhassankhan4210 Год назад

Physical fitness always has a lot of positive advantages on a person's life. Be it a student in school or completing a univeristy degree, physcial health should be mandaotry to be considered. One way is to introduce sports in academic curriculum is often discussed and I do agree with the same idea. In this I will be discussing a few points in the favour of this topic.

@ramezalimansour 4 года назад

thank you guys i got 7.5

@bibekchhetri3329 4 года назад

I have a IELTS date on march 13 I only have 15 days Do u have any 15 days class?

@palakpatel4498 2 года назад

In this contemporary world, sports play a very significant role in development of our nation. Although it is said that in educational institutions physical education should be mandatory for children.i am Fully agreed with this notion and will discuss some agreement points in forthcoming paragraphs and try to draw conclusion on it.

@rommelmenguito4024 4 года назад

Physical activities contribute to general physic and wellness. Schools are one of the great venues to develop these activities such as sport especially for the children. This topic will discuss some of the advantages as well as the disadvantages of sport in school as a compulsory requirement.

@harmanbajwa3858 2 года назад

In this cutting edge era, sports play a crucial role in every citizens life which help them to stay fit and active as well.Therefore,some individuals believe that schools should arrange some game’s activities in schools for youngsters which aid them to live a healthy life. I fully endorse with the given statement which i will discuss in the forthcoming paragraphs before reaching to a relevant conclusion.

@SovonHalder 3 года назад

Physical exercise irrespective of form or medium is crucial at the early stage of life. Whereas most people would acknowledge this, and agree that there are obvious merits to making sports compulsory in school, some would argue otherwise. This essay will discuss why I think sports should be among the mandatory curriculums at school.

@timash9155 4 года назад

Hi Alex. Could you please answer my questions I gave related to your previous video about Speaking part 2?

@E2IELTS 4 года назад

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@timash9155 4 года назад

I hope you are not gonna stop there and make a video with part 3 questions... It would easier to decide who is an ultimate winner )))

@E2IELTS 4 года назад

We will. Need to rebuild my confidence first! 🤣🤣

@timash9155 4 года назад

You did a great job there and like I already said I also prefer a traditional method))) go go Alex team 😁😁😁

@abdullahhelkafikafi127 3 года назад

It is argued that physical exercise is obvious in school. In my opinion, I completely agree with this idea because sport guides the students to stay fit and helps to be successful in study.

@amarwalia3644 3 года назад

Challenge#1 As sports play a vital role in one's health. Definitely sports should be there at school level. Basic sports and general fitness can be made prerequisite but advance sports should depend on one's will who wants to enroll in.

@gauravbedse3884 2 года назад

Being physically active in school is as important as being mentally or we can say academically active. So by my thinking i totally agree that sports plays a crucial role in schools for students to maintain their physical helath.

@niveditabalyan1269 3 года назад

Sports and physical activities keep students active and help them to focus better on studies. It should be compulsory at school and this essay will discuss about the positive impacts it could have.

@greeshmaantony5974 3 года назад

Challenge #1 Sports are undoubtedly important in children's life as it not only improves their physical health, but also helps to develop self-esteem and improve skills like coordination and team-play. I wholeheartedly agree with making sports compulsory in school so that students would be able to achieve the benefit of sports in early days itself.

@aaishah5541 3 года назад

The school curriculum these days is being modified and developed, including co-curricular activities as a part of the syllabus. One of them is sports, which is thought to be a compulsory subject. I agree with the statement and perceive that sports must collaborate with other subjects because it will have a positive physical development and is also good for mental health.

@JaskaranTavleen 3 года назад

Sporting activities not only play a vital role in a social life of human being but also keep ourselves physically and mentally fit. It is always beneficial to indulge children in the games and other sporting events. I believe that, as children spend most of their times in school, sporting events must be included in school syllabus. Research shows that youth engaged in sports, not only stayed away from taking drugs and participating in other bad activities but also turned out to be successful in achieving their goals.

@nuldori Год назад

All types of sports from soccer to rock climbing is commonly chosen to fill the free time. Not rarely do we find schools include various sports activity in their timetables. In this essay I would like to point out the benefit of sport as a mandatory activity of school.

@bananalaraj6727 Год назад

OMG!! I had the question prompt which is in min 7:51 on the IELTS test on Dec 3, 2022!!

@amalhassoun6384 3 года назад

This is my introduction, what do you think guys? 🤔 As sport has several benefits regarding wellness, physical education has become mandatory in some schools, whereas several schools suppose that there are more essential subject, therefore they either make it optional or they do not have sport lessons at all.

@Lovepreett 3 года назад

Playing sports is one of the crucial tasks which is important for the juvenile minds as it helps in overall growth ; physically , mentally, emotionally.

@azraalimein644 3 года назад

Physical activity since early age has lots of benefits later on in life. Some people believe sports should be made mandatory for children as a part of their extra curriculum. I completely agree with this statement as this might be the best way to tackle the issue of deteriorating mental and physical health among people of all age groups.

@yashanaulakh6569 3 года назад

In today's technical world , health and fitness bacome major concern topic . Because sports include numerous physcial activities so it can leave postive impact on health. Thus it should be essential in schools , by which students also get fit and healthy body. 'Sound mind always stay in sound body'.