hi I do not wish to seem harsh because I enjoy your music and I like your playing, but in this video you have some mistakes and it feels like you are lost in many sections and maybe it would be better if you practice the notes/scales that the song uses on the different chords before you decide to press record...I think that this is a more complex song with interesting changes and so it's hard to do it in one go with improv, keep up the playing I did subscribe. I would even be happy if you decide to do a video on one of my songs...lookup synthwave "Vosto"
No harm done! Maybe it's not really clear what I mean by improvisation? For me it really is about jumping in without knowing the original song. When I record these tracks, I've maybe listened to a few seconds of the original and think "I'll give it a try and see what happens". So there are always places where I'm caught by surprise, which results in errors. That's the whole purpose for me - no practice, just hop in, no place to hide. If I take 2-3 more takes, things will probably start to be more coherent, yes. So thanks for taking the time for your feedback and sorry for the lack of refinement!